大作文高分模板英語一

1、2016 考研英語“圖畫類”高分作文模板（英語一）一、歷年作文主題分類縱觀歷年考研英語一圖畫作文，可將其分為兩類：人生態(tài)度類（?？挤e極方面），社會現(xiàn)象類（常考消極方面）。人生態(tài)度類：2014 年（孝敬父母），2013 年（正確選擇），2012 年（樂觀態(tài)度），2010（文化交流），2008 年（合作精神），2007 年（自信態(tài)度），2006 年（偶像崇拜，），2005 年（道德教育，尊敬老人），2004 年（終點(diǎn)即是起點(diǎn)，人生沒有終點(diǎn)，要不斷進(jìn)?。?，2003 年（挫折教育）社會現(xiàn)象類：2015 年（科技副作用），2011 年（環(huán)境污染），2009 年（網(wǎng)絡(luò)導(dǎo)致人際交流缺少）二、關(guān)于考研英語一大

2、作文幾點(diǎn)建議1，沒有要求一定要寫標(biāo)題的話，建議不要寫，因為寫對了不加分也不扣分，但是寫錯了會扣分，務(wù)必注意。2，考研英語大綱要求大作文字?jǐn)?shù)為 160-200 字（不包括標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號），建議寫到 220 字左右，太多了也不好，不要超過 240 字，歷年考研英語高分作文都在 220 字左右。3，大作文開頭必須描述圖畫，并揭示主題詞，主題詞要貫穿全文，反復(fù)出現(xiàn)，否則容易被視為偏題作文。4，作文采用三段式，不建議標(biāo)新立異，標(biāo)的不好的話會摔很疼。5，書寫方面，建議 0.5mm 黑色簽字筆，字跡工整的同學(xué)比字跡潦草的同學(xué)作文平均分?jǐn)?shù)高出 5 分左右。三、人生態(tài)度類作文模板第一段第一句：Sobered feel

3、ing flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above,圖片描述.翻譯：當(dāng)我看到這幅圖片的時候腦海中瞬間充斥著一種醍醐灌頂?shù)母杏X！如圖所示，圖片描述.【備注 1】：Sobered（醍醐灌頂?shù)模┛梢愿鶕?jù)不同的語境作相應(yīng)的替換，如：Refreshed（神清氣爽的）、Enlightened（豁然開朗的）、inspired（倍受鼓舞的）等?！緜渥?2】：instantly（立即地）可替換為：immediately（立即地）、instantaneously（瞬間地，突如其來地）第二句（這一句可要可不要）：Simpl

4、y as the above illustration appears at first glance, the symbolic meaning the picture conveys is rather deep and profound.翻譯：上面這幅圖畫乍看起來很簡單，但它的象征意義是非常的深刻的?！緜渥?1】：這句話大家可以根據(jù)文章字?jǐn)?shù)來確定是否需要添加，字?jǐn)?shù)控制在 220 字左右。【備注 2】：illustration（圖畫）可替換為簡單點(diǎn)的：picture、image、cartoon.第三句：Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointe

5、d out that 主題詞 exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course翻譯：毫無疑問，這幅圖片旗幟鮮明地指出了主題詞在我們?nèi)松砷L過程中的比較現(xiàn)實(shí)的積極力量?！緜渥?1】：Beyond doubt（毫無疑問）可替換為：Undoubtedly、There is no doubt that.【備注 2】： explicitly（鮮明地）可替換為：incisively and vividly（淋漓盡致地）、conspicuously（顯著地）。【備注 3】： pointed ou（t 指出）可替換為：illustra

6、ted、featured、portrayed、presented、depicted、described，這些單詞都是表示“描述，描繪”的意思?！緜渥?4】：existsas：作為而存在，以形式存在。第二段第一句：The author wants to convey that 主題詞 is omnipresent in the inspiring drawing above.翻譯：正如上面這幅充滿哲理性的圖片，作者想要表達(dá)主題詞在生活中無處不在?！緜渥?1】：【備注 2】：【備注 3】：omnipresent（無處不在的）可替換為：prevalent（流行的，普遍的）主題詞 is omnipre

7、sent 可替換為：主題詞 can be found in nearly all walks of life. inspiring（充滿哲理的）可替換為： instructive（有教育意義的）、symbolic（象征性的）、philosophic（富有哲理的）、illuminating（有啟發(fā)性的）、stimulatory（鼓舞人心的）。第二句（這一句可要可不要）：Every word you say, every action you take is probably labeled by 主題詞 if you area person with the spirit of it.翻譯：如果

8、你身上具備這種品質(zhì)，那么你說的每一句話，做出的每一個動作都被打上了主題詞標(biāo)簽。第三句：Indeed, the function of 主題詞 has been elevated to a relatively high height as thesociety marches forward andes more competitive.翻譯：事實(shí)上，隨著現(xiàn)代社會的進(jìn)步，競爭的激烈，主題詞的作用逐漸被提到了一個相對較高的高度?！緜渥?1】：Indeed（的確，實(shí)際上）可替換為：In fact、Actually第四句： When speaking of success, (no matter f

9、or individual development or the team/society,)主題詞 plays a crucial role.翻譯：當(dāng)提及成功，（無論是對個人發(fā)展還是團(tuán)隊/社會發(fā)展，）主題詞都扮演著舉足輕重的角色。【備注 1】：括號內(nèi)的內(nèi)容可要可不要，視自己作文字?jǐn)?shù)而定?！緜渥?2】：When speaking of 可替換為：When it comes to【備注 3】：crucia（l 關(guān)鍵的）可替換為：vita（l 關(guān)鍵的）、indispensable（不可缺少的）、momentous（重要的）、significant（有重要意義的）第五句：As can best be

10、 illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/Li Na/Liu Xiang/Yi Jian lian, anoutstanding sportsman, who can not achieve success and respects from all over theworld without the personality of 主題詞.翻譯：最能說明這一點(diǎn)的莫過于杰出運(yùn)動員姚明/李娜/劉翔/易建聯(lián)的例子，如果他沒有主題詞，就不會獲得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬?！緜渥?1】：此句為從正面來進(jìn)行說明主題詞的重要性。第六句（這一句可要可不要）：The success o

11、f Yao Ming / Li Na / Liu Xiang / Yi Jian lian tells us that what 主題詞 offers you is not the solution to a specific problem, but a kind of belief, which makes yourself believe that you can harness it and make it.翻譯：姚明/李娜/劉翔/易建聯(lián)的成功告訴我們主題詞給予你的，不是解決某個具體問題的方法，而是傳達(dá)給你一種信念，一種我能行的自我暗示和把事情做成功的信念。第七句（這一句可要可不要）：

12、However, it is exactly the overwhelming effect in this competitive society.翻譯：而這些恰恰是在現(xiàn)代社會競爭體制中具有壓倒性成效的因素?！緜渥?1】：overwhelming：勢不可擋的，壓倒性的第八句：Once lack of 主題詞, people wille ignorant and muddle-headed, swim withthe tide and probablye the defective products of the cruel society.翻譯：在現(xiàn)代社會中人們一旦缺少了主題詞，就會逐漸變成

13、渾渾噩噩、隨波逐流的群體，很有可能終將成為這個殘酷社會的淘汰品?！緜渥?1】：此句為從反面來進(jìn)行說明主題詞的重要性。【備注 2】：ignorant：愚昧無知的muddle-headed：糊涂的，渾渾噩噩的第三段第一句：Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of 主題詞rests in both vital and trivial issues.翻譯：從以上我們的討論來看，主題詞的積極作用體現(xiàn)在生活中的大事小事上?！緜渥?1】：Given all above arguments 可替

14、換為：From what have been discussed above、Judging from what have been discussed above【備注 2】：it admits of no doubt that 可替換為：we may safely draw the conclusion that.【備注 3】：vital and trivial：重要的和瑣碎的第二句：Therefore, we should enhance our sense of social responsibility.翻譯：因而，我們要提高社會責(zé)任感。第三句：At the same time, t

15、he authority should strengthen the imperfect social system.翻譯：同時，政府也要不斷完善社會體制?！緜渥?1】：At the same time 可替換成：Meanwhile第四句：Only by being fully aware of the significance of 主題詞, can we hope to witness theideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.翻譯：只有我們對主題詞的重要性的足夠重視，我們才能見證這樣一種理想生

16、活，在那里，人們才能享受他們的生活直到永遠(yuǎn)。四、社會現(xiàn)象類作文模板第一段第一句：Embarrassed feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this drawing!圖片描述.翻譯：當(dāng)我看到這幅圖片的時候羞愧的感覺瞬間充斥了我的腦海！圖片描述?！緜渥?1】：Embarrassed 可替換為：、punctious(慚愧的,內(nèi)疚的)、Shameful?！緜渥?2】：instantly（立即地）可替換為：immediately（立即地）、instantaneously（瞬間地，突如其來地）第二句（這一句可要可不要）：Simply as the a

17、bove illustration appears at first glance, the symbolic meaning the picture converys is rather deep and profound.翻譯：上面這幅圖畫乍看起來很簡單，但它的象征意義是非常的深刻的?！緜渥?1】：這句話大家可以根據(jù)文章字?jǐn)?shù)來確定是否需要添加，字?jǐn)?shù)控制在 220 字左右?！緜渥?2】：illustration（圖畫）可替換為簡單點(diǎn)的：picture、image、cartoon.第三句：Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out tha

18、t 主題詞 exists as quite realistic negative power in our growing course翻譯：毫無疑問，這幅圖片旗幟鮮明地指出了主題詞在我們?nèi)松砷L過程中的比較現(xiàn)實(shí)的消極影響。【備注 1】：Beyond doubt（毫無疑問）可替換為：Undoubtedly、There is no doubt that.【備注 2】： explicitly（鮮明地）可替換為：incisively and vividly（淋漓盡致地）、conspicuously（顯著地）?！緜渥?3】： pointed ou（t 指出）可替換為：illustrated、featu

19、red、portrayed、presented、depicted、described，這些單詞都是表示“描述，描繪”的意思?！緜渥?4】：existsas：作為而存在，以形式存在。第二段第一句：As is incisively depicted in the realistic drawing above, the appearance of 主題詞 is the corresponding social problem caused by excessively rapid development of modern society (which improved the living st

20、andard ofpeople at the same time).翻譯：正如上面這幅現(xiàn)實(shí)性的圖片所描述的那樣，我認(rèn)為主題詞是現(xiàn)代社會過快發(fā)展（帶給人們生活水平提高的同時）出現(xiàn)的相應(yīng)的社會問題?！緜渥?1】：括號內(nèi)的內(nèi)容可根據(jù)字?jǐn)?shù)要求進(jìn)行刪減，這句話不影響整個句子的表達(dá)。【備注 2】：explicitly（鮮明地）可替換為：incisively and vividly（淋漓盡致地）、conspicuously（顯著地）?！緜渥?3】：As is incisively depicted in 可替換為：According to what is incisively depicted in第二句：

21、Indeed, 主題詞 hasof people.)e a heated topic, (however, it is contradict with the nature翻譯：事實(shí)上，主題詞已經(jīng)成為社會熱議話題，（不過它與我們的人性的本質(zhì)是背道而馳的）。第三句：According to recent survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, three-fifths of the youngsters suffer from 主題詞.翻譯：根據(jù)中國社科院最近發(fā)布的一項調(diào)查，五分之三的年輕人因主題詞而受到傷害?！緜渥?1】：

22、Chinese Academy of Social Science（s 中國社科院）可替換為其他機(jī)構(gòu)，如：TsinghuaUniversity（清華大學(xué)）、China Youth Daily（中國青年報）、Peoples Daily（人民日報）、Xinhua News Agency（新華社）第四句：Who is to blame for the existence of 主題詞?In my opinion, the following three factors should definitely be counted in.翻譯：誰應(yīng)該為主題詞的社會現(xiàn)象買單？在我看來，下列三個因素難咎其責(zé)。

23、【備注 1】：In my opinion 可替換為：From my perspective（在我看來），On my personal level（在我看來）第五句：On the top of the causes might come the drive of interests. People always prefer things that benefit them.翻譯：首要因素的是由于利益的驅(qū)動，人們經(jīng)常傾向于對自己有利的事情。第六句：Then comes the absence of responsibility. Some self-concentrated people jus

24、t focus on individual interest(regardless of the existence of social responsibilities, resulting in the appearance of 主題詞).翻譯：其次是責(zé)任的缺失?，F(xiàn)代社會中那些習(xí)慣凡事以自我為中心的人只關(guān)注個人得失（從而忽視了社會責(zé)任感的存在，導(dǎo)致了主題詞的出現(xiàn)。）【備注 1】：括號內(nèi)的內(nèi)容可根據(jù)字?jǐn)?shù)要求進(jìn)行刪減，這句話不影響整個句子的表達(dá)?！緜渥?2】：Then 可替換為：Furthermore/Moreover（除此之外）第七句：Last but not the least, the

25、 defective legal system is also one of the reasons that make the phenomenon of 主題詞 exist.翻譯：最后，法律系統(tǒng)的不完善也是導(dǎo)致社會上出現(xiàn)了一些主題詞現(xiàn)象的一個原因。第三段第一句：Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the negative function of 主題 詞 rests in both vital and trivial issues.翻譯：從以上我們的討論來看，主題詞的消極影響出現(xiàn)在生活中的大事小事上?！緜渥?1】：Gi

26、ven all above arguments 可替換為：From what have been discussed above、Judging from what have been discussed above【備注 2】：it admits of no doubt that 可替換為：we may safely draw the conclusion that.【備注 3】：vital and trivial：重要的和瑣碎的第二句：Therefore, we should enhance our sense of social responsibility.翻譯：因而，我們要努力提高社

27、會責(zé)任感。第三句：At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system.翻譯：同時，政府也要不斷完善社會體制。【備注 1】：At the same time 可替換成：Meanwhile第四句：With a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before theproblem of 主題詞es things of the past翻譯：伴隨著一個恰當(dāng)?shù)姆珊途X的民眾，主題詞這個問題遲早可以被解決。五

28、、模板套用示范示范一：2007 年真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練主題類型：人生態(tài)度類主題詞：自信主題詞表達(dá)形式：self-confidence，self-belief，believe in yourself，be confident圖畫描述句：The goalkeeper saw himself as a failure while in the eye of his opponent, he is invincible.【備注】：對于基礎(chǔ)一般的同學(xué)，以防句子出錯，建議用簡單句型。例如：Therebe 句型+定語從句。There is a goalkeeper and a striker who are bot

29、h lack of self-confidence in the picture.文章內(nèi)容：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above，the goalkeeper saw himself as a failure while in the eye of his opponent, he is invincible. Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that self-confidence exists

30、 as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.The author wants to convey that believing in oneself is omnipresent in the inspiring drawingabove. Indeed, the function of self-belief has been elevated to a relatively high height as thesociety marches forward andes more competitive. When spe

31、aking of success, no matter forindividual development or the team, being confident plays a crucial role. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/ Li Na/ Liu Xiang/ Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, who can notachieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality

32、 of self-confidence.Once lack of self-belief, people wille ignorant and muddle-headed, swim with the tide andprobablye the defective products of the cruel society.Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of self-belief rests in both vital and trivial issues. Theref

33、ore, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of self-confidence. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of self-confidence, can we hope towitness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their li

34、fe to the uttermost.譯文：當(dāng)我看到這幅圖片的時候醍醐灌頂?shù)母杏X瞬間充斥了我的腦海。如圖所示，守門員看自 己像一個失敗者，殊不知在對手的眼中，他是不可戰(zhàn)勝的。毫無疑問，這幅圖片旗幟鮮明地指出了自信在我們?nèi)松砷L過程中的比較現(xiàn)實(shí)的積極力量。正如上面這幅充滿哲理性的圖片，作者想要表達(dá)相信自己在生活中無處不在。事實(shí)上，隨著現(xiàn)代社會的進(jìn)步，競爭的激烈，自信的作用逐漸被提到了一個相對較高的高度。當(dāng)提及成功，無論是對于個人還是團(tuán)隊的發(fā)展，自信都扮演著舉足輕重的角色。最能說明這一點(diǎn)的莫過于杰出運(yùn)動員姚明/李娜/劉翔/易建聯(lián)的例子，如果他/她沒有自信，就不會獲得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。在

35、現(xiàn)代社會中人一旦缺少了自信，就會逐漸變成渾渾噩噩、隨波逐流的群體，很有可能終將成為這個殘酷社會的淘汰品。從以上我們的討論來看，自信的積極作用體現(xiàn)在生活中的大事小事上。因而，大眾要提高他們關(guān)于自信的意識。同時，政府也要不斷完善社會體制。只有我們對自信的重要性的足夠重視，我們才能見證這樣一種理想生活，在那里，人們才能享受他們的生活直到永遠(yuǎn)。示范二：2008 年真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練主題類型：人生態(tài)度類主題詞：合作精神主題詞表達(dá)形式：spirit of cooperation，teamwork，being cooperative，help each other圖畫描述句：The man without rig

36、ht leg ties himself with another man who has no left leg, so both of them can go fast and far.【備注】：對于基礎(chǔ)一般的同學(xué)，以防句子出錯，建議用簡單句型。例如：Therebe 句型+定語從句。There are two disable men going forward with each others help in the picture.文章內(nèi)容：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is sh

37、own above，The man without right leg ties himself with another man who has no left leg, so both of them can go fast and far . Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that the spirit of cooperation exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.The author wants to convey that

38、 working together is omnipresent in the inspiring drawingabove. Indeed, the function of teamwork has been elevated to a relatively high height as thesociety marches forward andes more competitive. When speaking of success, no matter forindividual development or the team, helping each other plays a c

39、rucial role. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/ Li Na/ Liu Xiang/ Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, whocan not achieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality ofcooperation. Once lack of the spirit of cooperation, people wille ignorant andmuddle-head

40、ed, swim with the tide and probablysociety.e the defective products of the cruelGiven all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of teamwork rests in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of cooperation. At the

41、same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of being cooperative, can we hope towitness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.譯文：當(dāng)我看到這幅圖片的時候醍醐灌頂?shù)母杏X瞬間充斥了我的腦海。如圖所示，一個沒了右 腿的人把自己和一個沒了左腿的人綁在一起，這樣他們就都

42、可以走得又快又遠(yuǎn)了。毫無疑問，這幅圖片旗幟鮮明地指出了合作精神在我們?nèi)松砷L過程中的比較現(xiàn)實(shí)的積極力量。正如上面這幅充滿哲理性的圖片，作者想要表達(dá)合作在生活中無處不在。事實(shí)上，隨著現(xiàn)代社會的進(jìn)步，競爭的激烈，合作的作用逐漸被提到了一個相對較高的高度。當(dāng)提及成功，無論是對于個人還是團(tuán)隊的發(fā)展，合作都扮演著舉足輕重的角色。最能說明這一點(diǎn)的莫過于杰出運(yùn)動員姚明/李娜/劉翔/易建聯(lián)的例子，如果他/她沒有合作，就不會獲得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。在現(xiàn)代社會中人一旦缺少了合作精神，就會逐漸變成渾渾噩噩、隨波逐流的群體，很有可能終將成為這個殘酷社會的淘汰品。從以上我們的討論來看，合作的積極作用體現(xiàn)在生活中

43、的大事小事上。因而，大眾要提高他們關(guān)于合作的意識。同時，政府也要不斷完善社會體制。只有我們對合作的重要性的足夠重視，我們才能見證這樣一種理想生活，在那里，人們才能享受他們的生活直到永遠(yuǎn)。示范三：2012 年真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練主題類型：人生態(tài)度類 主題詞：樂觀，積極態(tài)度主題詞表達(dá)形式： optimism(n.) / optimistic(adj.) ， being optimistic ， being positive/optimistic attitude toward lifepositive ，圖畫描述句：Seeing the bottle fell to the ground, one thi

44、nks that its lucky to have a little left, while the other sights that its all gone.【備注】：對于基礎(chǔ)一般的同學(xué)，以防句子出錯，建議用簡單句型。例如：Therebe 句型+定語從句。There are two people who have different attitudes when their bottle falls down in thepicture.文章內(nèi)容：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As

45、is shown above， Seeing the bottle fell to the ground, one thinks that its lucky to have a little left, while the other sights that its all gone .Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that optimism exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.The author wants to convey t

46、hat positive attitude toward life is omnipresent in the inspiringdrawing above. Indeed, the function of being optimistic has been elevated to a relatively highheight as the society marches forward andes more competitive. When speaking of success,no matter for individual development or the team, opti

47、mistic attitude toward life plays a crucialrole. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/ Li Na/ Liu Xiang/ Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, who can not achieve success and respects from all over the world with outthe personality of being positive. Once lack of optimism, people wille

48、ignorant andmuddle-headed, swim with the tide and probablysociety.e the defective products of the cruelGiven all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of optimism restsin both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance theirawareness of

49、 being optimistic. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of optimism, can we hope to witnessthe ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.譯文：當(dāng)我看到這幅圖片的時候醍醐灌頂?shù)母杏X瞬間充斥了我的腦海。如圖所示，看到倒在地 上的瓶子，一個人慶

50、幸還剩下一點(diǎn)，而另一個人卻篤定的認(rèn)為全完了。毫無疑問，這幅圖片旗幟鮮明地指出了樂觀在我們?nèi)松砷L過程中的比較現(xiàn)實(shí)的積極力量。正如上面這幅充滿哲理性的圖片，作者想要表達(dá)樂觀在生活中無處不在。事實(shí)上，隨著現(xiàn)代社會的進(jìn)步，競爭的激烈，樂觀的作用逐漸被提到了一個相對較高的高度。當(dāng)提及成功，無論是對于個人還是團(tuán)隊的發(fā)展，樂觀都扮演著舉足輕重的角色。最能說明這一點(diǎn)的莫過于杰出運(yùn)動員姚明/李娜/劉翔/易建聯(lián)的例子，如果他/她沒有樂觀，就不會獲得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。在現(xiàn)代社會中人一旦缺少了樂觀，就會逐漸變成渾渾噩噩、隨波逐流的群體，很有可能終將成為這個殘酷社會的淘汰品。從以上我們的討論來看，樂觀的積極

51、作用體現(xiàn)在生活中的大事小事上。因而，大眾要提高他們關(guān)于樂觀的意識。同時，政府也要不斷完善社會體制。只有我們對樂觀的重要性的足夠重視，我們才能見證這樣一種理想生活，在那里，人們才能享受他們的生活直到永遠(yuǎn)。示范四：2014 年真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練主題類型：人生態(tài)度類主題詞：孝敬父母，孝順，孝心主題詞表達(dá)形式：filial piety, mutual support，caring for the elderly，honoring our parents， respecting our parents圖畫描述句：Three decades ago, along the road walked a young

52、and vigorous mother, leading her girl hand in hand with smile on her face, while nowadays the daughter in the prime of her life guided her aged mother through the road arm in arm.【備注】：對于基礎(chǔ)一般的同學(xué)，以防句子出錯，建議用簡單句型。例如：Therebe 句型+定語從句。There are two people, a mother and a daughter, who show love with each o

53、ther in thepicture.文章內(nèi)容：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above，Three decades ago, along the road walked a young and vigorous mother, leading her girl hand in hand with smile on her face, while nowadays the daughter in the prime of her life guided her age

54、d mother through the road arm in arm. Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that filial piety exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.The author wants to convey that honoring our parents is omnipresent in the inspiring drawingabove. Indeed, the function of respecti

55、ng our parents has been elevated to a relatively high heightas the society marches forward andes more competitive. When speaking of success, nomatter for individual development or the team, caring for our parents plays a crucial role. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/ Li Na/ Liu Xiang

56、/ Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman,who can not achieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality ofhonoring the elderly. Once lack of honoring the elderly, people wille ignorant andmuddle-headed, swim with the tide and probablysociety.e the defective products of the

57、 cruelGiven all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of honoring our parents rests in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of respecting our parents. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the impe

58、rfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of filial piety, can we hopeto witness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.譯文：當(dāng)我看到這幅圖片的時候醍醐灌頂?shù)母杏X瞬間充斥了我的腦海。如圖所示，三十年前， 沿著那條路走著一位年輕的母親，她臉上帶著笑容攙扶著女兒往前走，而現(xiàn)在在處于生命中的黃金時間的女兒肩靠肩地帶著年邁的母親往前走。毫無疑問，這幅圖片旗幟鮮明地指出了孝敬

59、父母在我們?nèi)松砷L過程中的比較現(xiàn)實(shí)的積極力量。正如上面這幅充滿哲理性的圖片，作者想要表達(dá)孝順在生活中無處不在。事實(shí)上，隨著現(xiàn)代社會的進(jìn)步，競爭的激烈，孝順的作用逐漸被提到了一個相對較高的高度。當(dāng)提及成功，無論是對于個人還是團(tuán)隊的發(fā)展，孝順都扮演著舉足輕重的角色。最能說明這一點(diǎn)的莫過于杰出運(yùn)動員姚明/李娜/劉翔/易建聯(lián)的例子，如果他/她沒有孝心，就不會獲得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。在現(xiàn)代社會中人一旦缺少了孝心，就會逐漸變成渾渾噩噩、隨波逐流的群體，很有可能終將成為這個殘酷社會的淘汰品。從以上我們的討論來看，孝順的積極作用體現(xiàn)在生活中的大事小事上。因而，大眾要提高他們關(guān)于孝順的意識。同時，政府也

60、要不斷完善社會體制。只有我們對孝敬父母的重要性的足夠重視，我們才能見證這樣一種理想生活，在那里，人們才能享受他們的生活直到永遠(yuǎn)。示范五：2011 年真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練旅程之“余”主題類型：社會現(xiàn)象類主題詞：環(huán)境污染主題詞表達(dá)形式：environmental disruption, polluting the environment，environmental pollution， environmental contamination，respecting our parents圖畫描述句：sitting on the boat and enjoying their sightseeing, a c