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1、WORD36/36新CET-4寫作講義新學(xué)校：王江濤歡迎使用新在線電子教材前言開場(chǎng)白推薦兩本書： 圣經(jīng)古希臘羅馬神話一共分為四節(jié)課，每節(jié)課大概2.5小時(shí)左右第一節(jié)課： 1）考試題型；2）考試要求；3）評(píng)卷實(shí)例第 一 節(jié)一、考試題型應(yīng)用文（7考）：口頭作文（2考）、書信作文（5考）論說文（25考）：提綱作文（23考）、圖表作文（2考）段首句作文：4考課程安排：考試題型、考試要求、評(píng)卷實(shí)例口頭作文、書信總論書信詳解論說文、翻譯學(xué)習(xí)方法：實(shí)力（高分策略）技巧（萬(wàn)能框架）二、考試要求大學(xué)英語(yǔ)考試大綱中明確規(guī)定：四級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)寫作考試時(shí)間為30分鐘。要求應(yīng)試者寫出一篇不少于120個(gè)詞的短文；寫作命題源于日

2、常生活和有關(guān)科技、社會(huì)文化等方面的一般常識(shí)，不涉與知識(shí)面過廣、專業(yè)性太強(qiáng)的容。其命題方式有：給出題目、或規(guī)定情景、或給出段首句續(xù)寫、或給出關(guān)鍵詞寫短文、或看圖作文。要求容切題，文理通順，表達(dá)正確，語(yǔ)義連貫，無重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。時(shí)間要求：30分鐘審題（3分鐘）：寫作（25分鐘）：檢查（2分鐘）：語(yǔ)法（時(shí)態(tài)、冠詞、主謂一致）、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)2005.06For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay IN honour of teachers on the occasion of Teachers Day. You shou

3、ld write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 向老師表達(dá)節(jié)日祝賀2. 從一件小事來回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻(xiàn)3. 我如何回報(bào)老師的關(guān)愛字?jǐn)?shù)要求：120150詞寫作主題：大學(xué)校園生活（學(xué)習(xí)、生活、工作）命題方式：段首句、提綱、命題、關(guān)鍵詞、情景、圖表作文具體要求：語(yǔ)言第一位：表達(dá)通順、無重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤基礎(chǔ)一般：簡(jiǎn)單原則、安全第一基礎(chǔ)較好：句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變結(jié)構(gòu)第二位：邏輯性：并列：and/or/but因果：because/in that, since/as, for轉(zhuǎn)折：but/however關(guān)聯(lián)詞： 容第三位：切題

4、Last night, I was kicked by my girl friend. She ran away with a small white face. She is my green plum and bamboo horse. Now I know that love is blind. Beauty is but skin-deep. Money is the root of evil. However, I only regret that I have but one life to lose for my country. Could you please tell my

5、 why the injured is always me. It is high time that you teachers devoted your love to me. If you do not give me full mark, I will commit suicide immediately.三、評(píng)卷實(shí)例教材第5頁(yè)第1篇：中英思維差異中式思維：情感分段、讀者領(lǐng)會(huì)、迂回模式、歸納式思維英式思維：邏輯分段、作者交代、直線模式、演繹式思維1999年1月真題 例文（1） 講解Most people thought that read books should have been s

6、electived. But others belived reading extentively was correction. Selective books or reading extensively? Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas, on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us. on another hand. Someones

7、 intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldnt reading at only one level. I confirmed all of these ideas were good but werent wise. As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Dont trea

8、t these books with rackless abandon. The best technology of reading is connect. 教材第4頁(yè)第2篇：1999年1月真題 例文（2） 講解 I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be in

9、terested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours

10、not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.教材第5頁(yè)第3篇：1999年1月真題 例文（3） 講解Some people think reading shall be choosed. Because some books

11、 are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people. Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some

12、 books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. we must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading t

13、hem is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.教材第5頁(yè)第2篇：1999年1月真題 例文（4） 講解How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern scien

14、ce and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively. But others m

15、ay not agree. They emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge hell have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.W

16、hos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.教材第4頁(yè)第1篇：1999年1月真題 例文（5） 講解 When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other pe

17、ople do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better. Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So,

18、they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books. But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they

19、 can easily come to the conclusion that to know more, to read more. So they believe that reading extensively is better. To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.實(shí)例演練 評(píng)析題目： Bicycles An Im

20、portant Means of Transport in China.提綱： （1）為什么自行車在中國(guó)這樣普與（2）和汽車的比較（3）自行車在中國(guó)的前途Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -man and woman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work a

21、nd study. That is why China is calledthe kingdom of bicycles. Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortab

22、le, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents. In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large

23、population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.Score: 11 There millions of bicycles in todays China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in peoples daily lives. Because to ride a bicyc

24、le is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the riders strength, biycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable

25、for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the countary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of Chinas bicycle will be kept for the long run. Becuse it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some d

26、eveloped areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that its quality will be improved.第 二 節(jié)一、口頭作文真題回顧：2004年6月真題作文：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition

27、 entitledA Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guideline:Your role: a tour guideYour audience: a group of foreign touristsYour introduction should include:Some welcoming wordsThe schedule for the dayA description of the place the

28、 tourists will be visiting(e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.2005年1月真題作文：Directions: For this part, you are allowed to writeA Campaign Speech in support of your election to the post of chairm

29、an of the student union. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件（能力、性格、愛好等）可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席的工作，如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么？經(jīng)典文：2004年6月真題 文 講解：Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome toBeijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself.

30、I am your guide from China Travel Agency. Today Im very glad to be your guide. Its great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day. Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”. I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is the

31、 time schedule. First, the Great Wall is the major attraction in this morning. Second, having lunch nearby, we will go to visit the SummerPalace in the afternoon. This is a must! Last, after dining at Night in Beijing, its time to watch traditional Chinese performances. At 10 p.m., we will go back t

32、o Beijing Hotel.Next, I would like to introduce the Great Wall to you. It is called the Eighth Wonder in the world. Built 2000 years ago, the present relics are constructed in the Ming Dynasty. Hope you enjoy yourselves.2005年1月真題 文 講解：Today I am very glad to run for the chairperson of the Student Un

33、ion. I am junior in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature. I am sure that I am qualified for this position. First, I am good at communicating and organizing. By the way, with my outstanding leadership, Ihave been elected president of our department several times. Second, I am warm-hearte

34、d and easygoing. Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate, my cheerful personality is well suited for the position. Last, my hobbies include sports and music. If I am elected, I will exert all my efforts. Firstly, I will organize suitable activities. Secondly, I

35、will try to reach your demands as well. Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend myself as an ideal candidate. I am sure you will make a wise decision in voting forme. I hope the above information will help you to know about myself. If any of you have any question/advice/recommendation for me/ need

36、 any further information, please feel free/do not hesitate to ask at any time. Thanks for your listening/attention.祝酒辭文 講解：Mr. Vice President, our American friends, my colleagues, ladies and gentlemen,On behalf of all the members of our mission/delegation, I would like to express our sincere thanks

37、to you for inviting us to such amarvelous Christmas party.We really enjoyed the delicious food and excellent wine. Also, the music was perfect. I enjoyed meeting and talking to you, and sharing the time together. As we say, well begun is half done. I hope we will be able to maintain this good relati

38、onship and make next year another great one together.Thank you again for the wonderful party. We had a great time. In closing, I would like to invite you to join me in a toast. To the health of Mr. Vice President, to all the ladies and gentlemen present here, cheers!兩大原則：句子寫作：句子原則：長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合、以短句為主基本句型：主謂：

39、I succeed.主謂賓：I like Caicai.主系表：ZY is smart.主謂雙賓：Wei Xiaobao gave Ake an English dictionary.主謂賓賓補(bǔ)：Tulongdao makes many people selfish.長(zhǎng)句寫法：并列句：and/or/but/while/whereas從句：定語(yǔ)從句：who/that/which/when/where狀語(yǔ)從句：when/where/if/because/though名詞性從句：主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)從句The fact that a great many teachers are respect

40、ed shows/indicates/suggests that we should repay them.What they fail to understand is that we should reciprocate out teachers.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：動(dòng)名詞：分詞：過去分詞、現(xiàn)在分詞不定式：獨(dú)立主格：Time permitting, I will go to Beijing tomorrow.段落寫作：Introduction：引言/起始/淘金段，3句Thesis statement：中心思想，1句Background information：背景信息，2句Background背景

41、Facts事實(shí)Others opinions反方觀點(diǎn)Body：主體/拓展段，4句Topic sentence：主題句，1句Argument：論證，2句Classification：分類Exemplification：舉例Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).This story tells us that.Cause and effect：因果Comparison and contras

42、t：比較和對(duì)比Definition and explanation：定義和事實(shí)Statistics and facts：統(tǒng)計(jì)和事實(shí)According to the recent survey/data/figure/statistics/study by the ChineseAcademy of Social Science, %(percent).Summary：小結(jié)，1句Conclusion：結(jié)論段，3句Topic sentence：主題句，1句Argument：論證，1句Summary：小結(jié)，1句二、高分策略背誦：精彩詞匯、精彩句型、精彩句子、萬(wàn)能框架、整篇文。口頭作文：051、祝酒辭

43、書信作文：求學(xué)信、投訴信、求職信、感信、個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷論說文：口語(yǔ)考試、財(cái)富、畢業(yè)生找工作默寫：互譯：中譯英寫作：三、書信總論1、真題回顧：5考016：教材36頁(yè)題目2001年6月真題作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of your who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday.

44、 You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese. 1表示歡迎 2提出對(duì)度假安排的建議3提醒應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)Dear Xiao Wang,Words fail to express my excitement when I learned that you would like to spend your holiday together with me. I miss you so much that I even cant wait to see you. I am

45、sure that your journey will be exciting, rewarding and full of a lot of fun.Ive made a rough plan for this holiday as follows. On the first day you arrive here, I will show you around our new campus. During the second five days, we can visit some scenic spots and historical sites around Beijing, suc

46、h as SummerPalace, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Beijing Zoo, etc. On the last day, we can do some shopping. By the way, please take care of your luggage on the train. And dont forget to tell me when you will arrive.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Zhang Ying021：教材36頁(yè)題目2002年1月真題作文Directions: Fo

47、r this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on:假設(shè)你是明，請(qǐng)你就本校食堂的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫出一封信，容應(yīng)涉與食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價(jià)格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等，可以是表?yè)P(yáng)，可以是批評(píng)建議，也可以兼而有之。January 12

48、th, 2002Dear Mr. President,_Li MingDear Mr. President,I am sophomore from the Department of Law. I am writing the letter in purpose of complaining about the food and service in the canteen on campus.To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen. First, t

49、he dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same. Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them. Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.To solve the problem, I su

50、ggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new. Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students supervision.Dining is an everyday issue for students. It may affect their academic performance. Therefore, I sincerely hope this

51、letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above be solved as soon as possible.Li Ming3）036：教材35頁(yè)題目2003年6月真題作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words accor

52、ding to the outline given below in Chinese:假設(shè)你在某日某時(shí)某地目擊一起車禍，就此寫一份見證書。見證書須包括以下幾點(diǎn)： 1車禍發(fā)生的時(shí)間與地點(diǎn) 2你所見到的車禍情況 3你對(duì)車禍原因的分析An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident4）041：2004年1月真題作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friends inquiry about applying for admi

53、ssion to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:1. 建議報(bào)考的專業(yè)與理由；2. 報(bào)考該專業(yè)的基本條件；3. 應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考Dear Xiaoqiang:Im glad to know that you are going to apply for admission to our university. With regard to major, I advise you to apply for th

54、e English major, becauseofits modern teaching equipments and prestigious professors. Some requirements are essential for applying for the major. Firstly, you should be good at English grammar and have considerable vocabulary. Secondly, you should be adept in spoken English for oral test is followed

55、after normal examination. Therefore, when making the preparation you should pay attention to enlarging your vocabulary and practicing grammar. At the same time, of course, to reach the goal, lots of exercises are necessary. Yours sincerely, Li Ming5）056：2005年6月真題作文Directions: For this part, you are

56、allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teachers Day. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 向老師表達(dá)節(jié)日祝賀，從一件小事來回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻(xiàn)，我如何回報(bào)老師的關(guān)愛。September 10th is the day that every student should bear in mind. It is the time to express

57、our congratulations to our teachers, who have devoted most of their time and energy to us.I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for my teachers timely assistance in givin

58、g me first aid,I fear that the consequences might have been much serious. Everyone agrees that it was his quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.I will repay my teachers kindness with my unselfish help to others. Although nowadays people in mounting numbers

59、 talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like my teacher, this world would be a much nicer place.（1）Once in front of me, stood an outstanding teacher. Yet, I did not value him. Not until the moment I lost him, did I realize how

60、regretful I was. If God gave me another chance, I would repay him.（2）I sat outside in the hall. Everything inside me has gone away. I didnt think. I could not think. I knew she was leaving me, but I prayed she not.（Ernest Hemingway: The Sun also Rises）2、寫作格式：齊頭式：Dear Sir or Madam:As I am planning to