考研寫作后的修改潤色

1、寫作后的修改潤色有道備戰(zhàn)團整理關(guān)注，獲得最新資訊：有道備戰(zhàn)團 ，YouKaoyan寫作完成后不要急于放松休息，以下的語言文字潤飾工作可以讓你的作品錦上添花，不留遺憾。Taking everyo consideration,讓精心設(shè)計的文章突破 16 分也就有希望了。瀏覽檢查不可能全部內(nèi)容，因為時間有限，也為了保持卷面整潔，修改工作要以糾正明顯的語法拼寫錯誤為主。為了避免用語單調(diào)重復(fù)，也可將若干機械平淡的語言替換掉，實現(xiàn)語言的豐富多變?？傊挥?40 分鐘完成寫作。少些即興，多些理性沉穩(wěn)，把握寫作流程，突破自己的一般水準(zhǔn)。希望考生們能超常發(fā)揮，把自己的語言知識精華展現(xiàn)在試卷上。一、再現(xiàn)2001

2、 年英語入學(xué)作文Section WritingDirections:Among all the worthy feelings of m/her own understanding of it.ind, love is probably the noblest, but ever yone has hisThere has been a discusr torecently on the ie in a newspr. Write an essay to the newsp1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of thcture

3、 below,2) give a specific example, and3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love.You should write about 200 words on Answer Sheet 2.破題本篇作文在提出文中必須要具備的三點提示前還有一段對揭示很有幫助的引文。學(xué)生如果仔細閱讀并分析此段引文就會對給出的圖畫含義有一個正確的理解。雖然引文中第一句話的后半部分不同的人有自己獨特的對愛的理解,但這些理解在本篇中都是基于對愛的正面的理解，因為前半部分已經(jīng)給本篇要的愛定下了一個范圍，就是愛是最高尚的。這

4、樣一來學(xué)生的作文的范圍就一下子縮小了。不是泛泛而談,而是分析愛相對于其他種類的感情而言的價值和重要性。雖然提示引文中提到有基于此的熱烈,但是從接下來的三點具體提示來看還是以表明作者本人立場為主。因此在考慮寫本篇開頭時也可以稍微提及一下不同人群的不同的觀念,但應(yīng)點到即止,因為這只是作為引出自己獨特觀點的一個,來吸引讀者的注意力,通過對比,給讀者留下鮮明印象。接下來就要看一下文章的結(jié)構(gòu)了。因為雖然三點提示非常清楚,但這畢竟還是一篇看圖作文，因此一切觀點要從圖的內(nèi)容與隱含的意義出發(fā)。先讓來分析一下三點的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系：這三點內(nèi)部是有一個層層遞進的關(guān)系,必須由一點才能引出下一點而順理成章。如果要使文章層次更

5、為分明,那roduction, body, and可以將三點安排成三個不同的部分。即。第一點可作為開頭引出全文的論點(thesis sement)。突出其象征性的含義,而不是簡單地描述畫面的表面內(nèi)容,畫的布局只要略微提到即可,重要的是畫上的那句話和畫中的物品之間的抽象與實物的聯(lián)系，可作為文中的論點。要突出愛在來的重要性?；蛴械牡胤斤@現(xiàn)出第二點作為正文部分。用現(xiàn)實的例子來論證在什么樣的令人感到前路暗淡的情況下愛發(fā)揮了巨大的作用。但是因為時間和字?jǐn)?shù)的限制,舉例部分不能太過冗長。第三點作為結(jié)論部分。雖然向他人顯示愛的力量可以無時無刻無處不在,各種各樣，但是這篇文章最好是介紹一種或幾種向他人伸出之手的

6、方法，即要緊扣圖畫表現(xiàn)的含義和論點確定的范圍來寫。因為這畢竟是一篇看圖作文,不能離開圖畫而天馬行空。但要注意的是:如果作者在寫第二點時，就已舉例如何幫助他人,那么切記在寫第三點時不要再重復(fù)了,幾筆帶過即可。因為并不是給出的三點提示每一點都要給予同等的篇幅，應(yīng)該有側(cè)重點。二、19 pos 樣卷What a lively and accuratcture it is when describing the meaning of lovehe dark. As isvividly portrayedhcture, love is comparable to an oil lamphat an oil

7、 lamp may seem rather insignificant in a magnificent ese whilehe dark it turns out to be the focus of light. In other words, the darker the place is, the more valuable the light will be. As win oil lamp, it is also true of love, whid of assistance.ay amount to more significance to those in great dif

8、ficulty or in urgent neeTo illustrate this poof view, I will take Tao Xingzhi, one of the greatest educators in China, for example. He was only too willing to impart love to whoever needed it most.he past, an awful lot of students who were eager to go to school could not afford to do so. To reverse

9、this situat ion, Mr.Tao committed himself to establishing a school for the poor. Although most of the students merely studied in his school for a short period, what they learned at school changed their life. Even after Mr.Taos death, they still borefishness.ind his kindness, his generosity and above

10、 all, his unselMr.Tao set up an excellent example of showing our love to those who need help most, which,for my part, iped to be the best way to show love. Love is needed everywhere, some notable, others minor, which is the golden threadt ties the hearts all over the world. When you donateyour old c

11、lothes to the victims in a disaster,ts called love; when you give anyonerouble, thats called love; when you simply pass a glass of water to a thirsty,ts also called love. As long as we keep room for love in our heart, love will be a source of treasure, and the world will b ecome more beautiful. Lets do as a famous saying goes: Ask not what others can do for you; askwhat you can do for others.點評：這篇文章在第一段中清晰明白地寫出了對畫面的象征意義的準(zhǔn)確理解，