應(yīng)用文寫作學(xué)案 專題16 投訴信 2022屆高三英語寫作

1、專題16應(yīng)用文寫作之投訴信寫作指導(dǎo)第一段：表明來信所要投訴的問題，盡可能做到客觀、禮貌，給讀信人留下好印象。應(yīng)該記 住讀信人不一定就是錯(cuò)誤的責(zé)任人，他的合作對(duì)事情的最終圓滿解決有著非常重要的作用O 第二段：寫明投訴的原因、問題的經(jīng)過及產(chǎn)生的后果。可以說具體的理由，也可以說問題的 具體體現(xiàn)方式。第三段:提出解決方案，不需展開。這段應(yīng)體現(xiàn)書信的禮貌原則，可以用類似“如果你能 我將十分感激”這樣的表達(dá)方式，還要注意做到公平、公正。1.段首常用語:(1)1 am writing to make a complaint about,(2)1 am most reluctant to complain,

2、but*(3)One annoying aspect of your service is*(4)1 have been pleased with your service for years, but now I feel very disappointed.(5)1 would like to draw your attention to the problem/fault-(6)1 am writing to inform you that I find unsatisfactory.(7)1 wish to express my dissatisfaction/disappointme

3、nt about,2.段尾常用語：(l)It would be highly appreciated if you could, (2)1 believe you will take my complaints seriously and* (3)1 hope you will give due attention to this matter.(4)1 would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.(5)1 could not be more satisfied if you can kindly*(6)1 wo

4、uld appreciate it very much if you could-*【英語應(yīng)用文投訴信1Dear Headmaster,I am a student in Class One Grade Two and I am Li Hua.(自我介紹)Recently, I have found that the waste in our school is very serious. If you go around the school, you will find the lights are burning day and night. In addition, you will

5、also find taps running all the time. In the dining room, food is thrown away everywhere and there are a lot of useful things in the litter bins.(投訴內(nèi)容)Faced with these phenomena, I feel worried. Although our country is becoming richer and richer now, we still need to save everything because saving is

6、 one of virtues of the Chinese.(投訴原因)Do you agree with what I said? Would you like to ask all the students to promote saving and oppose waste? I am expecting your answer. (期待解決方案)Best wishes!Notes:【英語應(yīng)用文投訴信2】假設(shè)你是李華，最近跟父母去國外旅行時(shí)所居住的旅館服務(wù)不好。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要 點(diǎn)提示給旅館老板寫一封英文投訴信，信中應(yīng)包括下列內(nèi)容：1.空調(diào)不能正常運(yùn)行；2.浴室不干凈；3.晚上周圍噪聲很大

7、，且不給更換房間；4.服務(wù)員態(tài)度隨意，漫不經(jīng)心。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文須包括所給要點(diǎn)，但不必逐句翻譯；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；4.文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to complain about your hotel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in Room 512. Firstly, the air conditioner wouldnt work. When I asked the staff for help, they sai

8、d OK. But eventually no one came.Secondly, I found the bathroom rather dirty to bathe in. What was worse, the noise outside at night was so loud that we found it hard to fall asleep. I asked to change rooms, but was refused for the reason that the hotel was full. It was surprising that the waiters t

9、reated us in a very casual and indifferent manner.I would like you to refund my money. Unless I get a satisfactory reply, Ill write to the Consumer Association.Looking forward to hearing from you.Notes:y【英語應(yīng)用文投訴信3假如你叫李華，你們的英文校報(bào)向你約稿。請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下提示，就圖書館的情況給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，說明新建的圖書館很漂亮，但存在一些問題。問題包括：1 .閱覽室的座位少；2.星期六、日不開

10、放；3.無法知道有什么新書可以看；4.對(duì)反映的問 題提出自己的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文須包括所給要點(diǎn)，但不必逐句翻譯；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;Dear headmaster,Im writing to tell you that all of us are nice to see our newMbuilt library open. It is so beautiful and welLequipped that we all like to spend most of our spare time here. But there is something we

11、should deal with as soon as possible.First of allz there arent plenty of seats in the reading room, so we have to sta/d read防q and thus cant take notes. Besides, the library is closed at weekends, but in fact, we students have more spare time only at weekends to enjoy reading. Whats more, we dont kn

12、ow what new books are available.I suggest that our school library provide more seats and be kept open at weekends. Also, a notice should be put up if there are new books available.I would appreciate it a lot if you could take that into consideration and take some steps to solve them.Thats all. Thank

13、 you!【英語應(yīng)用文投訴信4】假如你是李華，是英國某所學(xué)校的交換生，你于2016年10月14日在商店購買的電腦壞了，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示給商店客服寫一封信。主要內(nèi)容:1 .寫信目的；2.描述具體情況（黑屏，無法使用）；3.建議解決辦法（更換或退錢）注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文須包括所給要點(diǎn)，但不必逐句翻譯；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua, an exchange student from China. writing Ie conwlain about the quality of the computer whi

14、ch / Durchased from store on October 14, 2016.It unexpectedly went wrong a few clays after I bought it. The monitor turned out to be a black screen while I was preparing an important report. I tried to restart it according to the instnictions, hut it still failed tn work. （彳艮有價(jià)值的句）Therefore, Im sure

15、 there is something wrong with the computer. I am hoping that you direct me to a store where I may return the faulty item for a new one within the next 3 days. Since your store has gained a good reputation customer satisfaction, / am confident yon will process my complaint at earlier convenience.Loo

16、king forward to your early reply.【英語應(yīng)用文投訴信5】假如你是李華，幾天前你從國外某網(wǎng)站購買了一個(gè)擴(kuò)音器，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你發(fā)一封電子 郵件給該網(wǎng)站的管理員反映一下問題：1 .音質(zhì)不清；2.操作不簡(jiǎn)便；3.經(jīng)常出問題； 期待的解決辦法：1 ,退貨退款；2.修理或調(diào)換；注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文須包括所給要點(diǎn)，但不必逐句翻譯；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文 連貫；Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua, a customer who bought a loudspeaker from your website several days ago. There seems to be something wrong with it. So, Im writing to you, hoping for your help.To begin with, the voice isnt so clear as you describe it in the website. Besides, its not easy to operate, causing me much inconvenience. Whats worse, it often breaks down for no reason, which shows its poor qua