【北京市特級教師二輪精講】2014屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)課后訓(xùn)練：第17講-書面表達一經(jīng)典精講(上)

1、第 17 講 書面表達一經(jīng)典精講 上 題一： 假設(shè)你是李華，你的新西蘭筆友 Nick 將于八月來四川旅游，特來信詢問有關(guān)旅游景點 情況。請根據(jù)下表所提供的要點，寫一封回信，并表示盼望他的到來。旅游資源 許多世界著名的風(fēng)景名勝，如： 九寨溝海子；清澈見底；色彩斑斕 都江堰水利工程 2， 000 多年歷史；仍在發(fā)揮作用相關(guān)信息 氣候適宜，交通方便1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右，信的格式及開頭以為你寫好不記入總詞數(shù)。2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3. 參考詞匯： 省份 province 海子 lake 都江堰水利工程 Dujiangyan Irrigation Project Dear

2、Nick,I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 題二：假設(shè)你是李曉華，住在江城。你的加拿大筆友 Bob 來信談到他所居住的城市，并希望 了解你家鄉(xiāng)江城的情況。請你用英語寫一封回信。回信須包括表中的內(nèi)容： 自然情況 位于長江邊、風(fēng)景優(yōu)美、適合居住成就 經(jīng)濟開展迅速，新建了不少工廠、住房、道路存在問題 水、空氣污染，交通擁擠 對江城開展的看法 內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定 1. 回信中不能使用 “江城 以外的地名。2. 詞數(shù) 120 左右。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計

3、入總詞數(shù)。3. 參考詞匯 : 經(jīng)濟 economy題三： 假定你是李華，你的美國朋友 Jack 將要來中國游覽黃鶴樓，請根據(jù)下面的提示給Jack寫一封信介紹有關(guān)黃鶴樓的情況。提示如下： 黃鶴樓位于湖北省武漢市，高 54.1米；始建于 1600多年前，在 1981-1985 年間政府曾 重修，起初用于戰(zhàn)爭，現(xiàn)在對公眾開放；曾有很多詩人登樓望遠，寫下了優(yōu)秀詩篇；吸引眾 多中外游客，得到很高評價。題四： 假定你是李華，你的英國朋友 Alice 將要來中國游覽你的家鄉(xiāng)青島，請根據(jù)下面的提示 給 Alice 寫一封信介紹有青島的情況。提示如下：1. 位于山東省東部。2. 以藍色的大海，美麗的海濱而聞名，

4、是避暑勝地。3. 每年夏天來自全國各地成千上萬的人們到這里沿海漫步、游泳、購物、欣賞秀麗景色。4. 近年來城市發(fā)生巨大變化，對開展我國對外貿(mào)易起重要作用，成為國際港口城市。Alice 將要來中國游覽你的家鄉(xiāng)安徽，請給 Alice 寫一封題五： 假定你是李華，你的英國朋友 信介紹有安徽的情況。題六： 假定你是李華，你的英國朋友 Alice 將要來中國游覽杭州的西湖，請給 Alice 寫一封信 介紹有西湖的情況。題七： 假設(shè)你是李華， 是北京師范大學(xué)的學(xué)生， 明年夏天即將畢業(yè)。 請你用英語寫一篇短文， 介紹一下自己的根本情況。要點如下：1. 年齡 23；2. 喜歡上網(wǎng)，愛學(xué)習(xí)，對英語最感興趣，口語

5、非常流利。3. 性格開朗，自信，喜歡與人交往，有較強的組織能力和團隊協(xié)作精神；4. 喜歡教師這個職業(yè)，希望能成為一名人民教師，實現(xiàn)自己的夢想。 注意：詞數(shù) 100 左右；參考詞匯：專業(yè) major題八:請根據(jù)下面的表格提示用英語寫一篇短文介紹一下姚明。詞數(shù)：100左右出生日期1980912身高2.26 米體重134公斤最喜歡的食品肉最喜歡的顏色藍色出生地上海座右銘相信自己個人經(jīng)歷1997 :進入上海籃球隊1998:入選國家隊2000：入選亞洲全明星隊2002：加盟休斯頓火箭隊Houston Rockets2007 :于葉莉結(jié)婚題九:World Youth (monthly)有一人物"

6、專欄，刊登各國青年人物的圖片。你校校友王小平的 照片被采用。請根據(jù)以下資料寫一段說明，以便隨圖發(fā)表。100詞左右王小平國籍中國出生年月1966年2月職業(yè)電腦咼級工程師簡歷1984年7月畢業(yè)于西安四中，冋年進入西安交通大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。1989年起在西安的一家電腦公司工作。主要事跡1、93年獲電腦博士學(xué)位；2、一家美國公司欲高薪聘用，但被他拒絕；3、1998年因特殊奉獻獲金獎。題十:安在旭Ahn Jae Wook年齡29性別男職業(yè)歌手、演員國籍韓國South Korean簡歷1.1994年，畢業(yè)于漢城藝術(shù)大學(xué)(Seoul Arts University)2.1994年， 在電視劇“ Song of Bl

7、ind Bird 中扮演了韓國的第一位盲人醫(yī)生KangYou ng Woo3.1997年，出版了第一張專楫 “ Forever 4.2000 年，出版了一張Foreve的中文版(Chinese Version)5.2001年4月22 日,在中華世紀壇(the Ch ina Mille nn ium Monu me nt)為支持北京申奧(Beiji ng Olympic Bid)與中國歌手同臺演出。6.2001年5月18日，在北京的音樂會演中參加韓國演唱組演出。今年他已經(jīng)方案到中國的其它的城市演出。備注一位深受中國青少年喜愛的歌手1. 1001202. 用文段形式做人物介紹第17講書面表達一經(jīng)典

8、精講(上)題一：Dear Nick,I ' nglad to hear that you' rooming to Sichuan in August. You' vemade the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.Jiuzhaigou is well

9、 known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors ' imagination. Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and c

10、onvenient transportation here can make your trop more enjoyable. I' m sure you ' ll have a good time.I ' m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua點評：本文要點齊全、語法正確；本文使用了一些好的句式、定語從句和過渡詞，提高的文章的檔次。題二：Dear Bob,It 'vsery kind of you to write to me and let me know about your bea

11、utiful city. Now I ' ldike to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More s

12、chools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under

13、 control so that we' ll have a better hom.etown in futureYours, Xiao Hua 點評：本文要點齊全、語法正確；本文使用了一些好的句式、賓語從句、精彩的短語和過渡詞，提高 的文章的檔次。題三： Dear Jack,I'm glad that you will come to China to visit the Yellow Crane Tower. Let me introduce it to you. The Yellow Crane Tower is one of the well-known places

14、of interest in China.It lies in Wuhan, Hubei Province, and is about 51.t meters high. It was built more than 1,600 years ago and rebuilt from 1981 to 1985 by the government. At the beginning, it was only used for wars, but now it is open to the public.If you climb up the tower, you' ll see a bea

15、utiful view. Many famous poets wrote good poems about it. In fact,the scenery around the tower is really a model. As a result, it has attracted lots of tourists from home and abroad, most of whom think highly of Yellow Crane Tower.In construction, it' s one of the b-mesatdmeapnrojects in China.

16、Why not come here to enjoy yourself as soonas possible?Looking forward to seeing you very soon.Yours, Li Hua 點評：本文簡潔明快地介紹了黃鶴樓，層次清楚，用詞得當；復(fù)合句的適當運用給文章增添了幾分生 動。題四： Dear Alice,I'm glad that you will come to China to visit my hometown Qingdao . Let me introduce it to you.The city of Qingdao is in the

17、east of Shangdong Province. It is famous for the blue sea and beautiful beaches. It is a wonderful place for summer holidays. Tens of thousands of people from all parts of the country visit Qingdao every summer. They walk along the beach, go swimming or do some shopping. They can see fine view of th

18、e city.Great changes have taken place in Qingdao in the recent years. It has played an important part in the development of the foreign trade of our country. It has become an international port cityLooking forward to seeing you very soon.Yours, Li Hua 點評：本文簡潔明了地介紹了青島這個海濱城市；本文使用了一些精彩的短語，提高的文章的檔次。題五：O

19、ur Province Anhui Province is located in the southeast of China. It is an area rich in natural resources. Mount Huangshan is the most beautiful sight in China as well as in the world. The weather in Anhui is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. Anhui is famous for its tea and wine. Its

20、capital city Hefei is a city of Hi-tech. There are more than ten universities in Hefei. The college graduates make up a strong force of labour. The USTC University of Science and Technology of China sends hundreds of students to study in the USA each year. An American professor interprets USTC as th

21、e United States Training Center, Isn 't it interesting?點評： 本文首先介紹了安徽省的位置，然后抓住了安徽省的一些鮮明特點： 如有全國著名的旅游勝地 黃山、著名中國的茶葉和酒以及著名的中國科技大學(xué)等一一進行了描述，使讀者在短時間內(nèi)獲得了大量的 信息。題六：The City I Like BestI have been to several other cities . Hangzhou is the one that I like best.Hangzhou is a beautiful city. The West Lake wi

22、th mountains all around is the prettiest part. It takes on a different look with the change of seasons. In spring, the path around the lake is lined with green trees and pink peach flowers. It fills me with strength and energy. In summer, sitting by the quiet and peaceful lake with green lotus leave

23、s and white or pink lotus flowers everywhere helps me to forget all my worries. When I step on the golden leaves in autumn, it gives me a feeling of good harvest. In winter, the trees and paths covered with white snow bring me a pure and noble feeling. The whole city is just like a big garden. No wo

24、nder it ' s compared to th paradise on the earth. In addition , there are many places of interest worth visiting.Therefore, I like Hangzhou better than any other city. 點評：1. 這是一篇描寫西湖的短文。西湖文明于世。作者抓住杭州的西湖這一主要景點，通過對春、夏、秋、冬 西湖多變的景致的詳盡描述，為讀者展示了一副人間仙境，喚起了讀者心中對西湖的贊嘆。2. 為了增強文章的表達力，作者多處使用了復(fù)雜句式。如： When I

25、step on the golden leaves in autumn, it gives me a feeling of good harvest. 含有 when 引導(dǎo)的時間狀 語從句的復(fù)合句 Hangzhou is the one that I like best. 含有 that 引導(dǎo)的定語從句 The West Lake with mountains all around is the prettiest part. 含有 with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作定語 3. 使用非謂語動詞：In winter, the trees and paths covered with white snow br

26、ing me a pure and noble feeling.含 有過去分詞作定語 ；sitting by the quiet and peaceful lake with green lotus leaves and white or pink lotus flowers everywhere helps me to forget all my worry. 含有動名詞作主語 4. 使用了一些高級短語：take on呈現(xiàn)；be lined with 兩邊排列著；step on采在上;a feeling of 一種的感覺；be covered with被覆蓋著；of interest有趣的，

27、etc.5. 為了使上下文連接緊密而使用了過度詞： in addition, therefore, etc. 題七：I, a 23-yea-old student, studying in Beijing Normal University, will graduate next summer.I have wide and various interests, of which s urfing the Internet is my favorite. I think it's fun to study mylessons. My major is English, and I ha

28、ve great interest in it. So I' m always doing well in English exams. Besides,my oral English is quite fluent. What' s more, as an outgoing and coenrfsidoenn, tI plove to communicate withothers, so I 'm easy to get along with. Therefore, I have developed good organizational skills as well

29、 as team spirit.What is most important for me is that I like teaching very much, which is the most glorious under the sun. I ' m looking forward to becoming a teacher to realize my childhood dream.點評：本文思路清晰、結(jié)構(gòu)合理。作者在介紹時，多處使用了復(fù)合句，這就增加了文章的表達力同時 也表達的作者深厚的語言功底；此外，為了使下文銜接緊密，作者還使用了besides, therefore, w

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