高三寫作課件

1、英語備課組1 書面表達(dá)的要求2 精準(zhǔn)審題3 巧組段，善謀篇4 扮靚文章有啥能力要求？咋評分呢？根據(jù)新課標(biāo)的要求 ，考生應(yīng)通過獲得“整理思路、組織素材、規(guī)劃文章結(jié)構(gòu)、列出提綱、起草文章、組織語言、遣詞造句，修改文章、正確使用標(biāo)點符號和字母大小寫“等方面的基本寫作技能，達(dá)到”表述事實、觀點、情感、想像力，交流信息，培養(yǎng)規(guī)范的寫作習(xí)慣”的目的。根據(jù)考試大綱的要求，考生應(yīng)能準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯、清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想。該部分試題的設(shè)置目的就是要測試考生準(zhǔn)該部分試題的設(shè)置目的就是要測試考生準(zhǔn)確使用英語語法、詞匯進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的能確使用英語語法、詞匯進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的能力。在具體表達(dá)時，

2、考生要根據(jù)圖畫、表力。在具體表達(dá)時，考生要根據(jù)圖畫、表格、提綱等各種形式的提示信息，按照包格、提綱等各種形式的提示信息，按照包括目的、對象、時間、地點、內(nèi)容等在內(nèi)括目的、對象、時間、地點、內(nèi)容等在內(nèi)的要求，用英語寫一篇的要求，用英語寫一篇 100 個單詞左右個單詞左右的短的短文。文。 以以2013年作文為例（滿分年作文為例（滿分30分）分）假定你是李華。請根據(jù)寫作要點用英語寫一篇假定你是李華。請根據(jù)寫作要點用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務(wù)的一次經(jīng)歷。周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務(wù)的一次經(jīng)歷。寫作要點：寫作要點：1.做家務(wù)的理由；做家務(wù)的理由；2.做家務(wù)的過程；做家務(wù)的過程；3.你的感

3、受。你的感受。注意：注意：1.短文詞數(shù)短文詞數(shù)不少于不少于100；2.開頭部分已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；開頭部分已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。高考英語作文的判卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)高考英語作文的判卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（一）Iisenglishbad.老師，求求你了，隨便給幾分吧。就幾分！高考不容易，一人也許一輩子只有一次機(jī)會。求求你了，我考完試一定好好學(xué)習(xí)英語！我發(fā)誓！高考英語作文的判卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（一）0分卷分卷 空白卷 僅有幾個單詞，而且意思不連接 與作文要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)總結(jié)：閱卷老師最喜歡看到的卷子！總結(jié)：閱卷老師最喜歡看到的卷子！高考英語作文的判卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（二）1-6分卷分卷 明顯遺

4、漏主要內(nèi)容，明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，內(nèi)容完全內(nèi)容完全/部分無關(guān)部分無關(guān) 較多嚴(yán)重的語法結(jié)構(gòu)較多嚴(yán)重的語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤或詞匯方面的錯誤 缺乏語句間的連接成缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。分，內(nèi)容不連貫。 信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者總結(jié)：總結(jié)： 一塌糊涂一塌糊涂 I think do homework good.Mom busy and tired everyday. So, I do homework. Sunday, I free, so I do it. It make me happy.高考英語作文的判卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（三）7-12分卷分卷 漏掉或未描述清楚一漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)

5、容些主要內(nèi)容 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限項目有限 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤匯方面的錯誤 較少使用語句間的連較少使用語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。貫性。 總結(jié)：稀里糊涂總結(jié)：稀里糊涂 I think do housework is good. Parents are busy all day, we help them do some work. Last Saturday, I say to my parents, “ go sit, I will cook.” Mom is happy when she heard me. So

6、, I cooked, and parents are happy. At last, we had a good day.高考英語作文的判卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（四）13-18分卷分卷 基本完成了試題規(guī)定基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，但覆蓋所有的任務(wù)，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容主要內(nèi)容 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解影響理解 應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫容連貫總結(jié)：馬馬虎虎總結(jié)：馬馬虎虎 Parents always busy with their jobs. Though I am busy, too, but I w

7、ant to help them do some work. Last Sunday, I have some spare time and I said to my mom, “ Mom, can I help you with some housework?” My mom was surprised when she hear me, but she is happy. I helped her cook and mop the floor. At night, I lay on my bed, though I am tired, but I am happy.高考英語作文的判卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（

8、五）19-24分卷分卷 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)務(wù) 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯誤主要基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致或詞匯所致 應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 總結(jié)：清清爽爽總結(jié)：清清爽爽 I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeli

9、ng quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping. suddenly got an idea: why not giving the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I w

10、iped the dust (off) all the furnitures. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.

11、Im a 18 years old high school student. Because my homework is always heavily loaded and I have always been busy with it, I fail to help my parents with housework. Also, doing housework can not only relax myself but also enhance my sense of responsibility. Therefore, I plan to start doing some housew

12、ork this week. In the morning, I got up very early. After my breakfast with my parents, I firstly sorted out and washed all my clothes having to be washed. Then I tried to get my room organized, which used to be a mass. After all the things were done, I began to clean all the windows in house. First

13、 I found some old newspaper and then I stepped on a chair to reach the window. I deliberately wiped the dust and dirt off the windows for fear of falling or breaking the glass. After a while, the windows look as transparent as clean water, and the sunshine brightened my face. Even though I got tired

14、 after I have finished all the housework, I was very happy and thought it was one of the most successful things in my life. Also, doing housework is a good way for me to thank my parents for what they have been done for me, and I should bear more burden for them.高考英語作文的判卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（六）25-30分卷分卷 完全完成了試題完全完成了試

15、題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有少量錯誤，方面有少量錯誤，但為使用較復(fù)雜但為使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力的語言運(yùn)用能力 有效地使用了語有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊總結(jié)：漂漂亮亮總結(jié)：漂漂亮亮1 按檔給分。閱卷老師會先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定書面表達(dá)所屬的檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量。2 依據(jù)“內(nèi)容和語言”劃檔。內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。3 書寫如果很潦草，以至影響到交際，分?jǐn)?shù)降一個檔次。1.審題是關(guān)鍵審題是關(guān)鍵2

16、. 組段，謀篇布局組段，謀篇布局3.應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯4.檢查至關(guān)重要檢查至關(guān)重要 Tips for writing如何審題（如何審題（1）提綱類提綱類開放類開放類圖畫類圖畫類圖表類（表格類）圖表類（表格類）提綱類開放類圖畫類圖表類記敘文說明文 應(yīng)用文陜西5124（2009-2014）年陜西高考）年陜西高考作作 文的文的 考查形式和文體分布考查形式和文體分布如何審題（如何審題（2）假定你是李華，計劃暑假間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）第一步：定體裁應(yīng)用文類的書信第二步：定人稱和時態(tài)第一人稱 一般將來

17、時兼顧情態(tài)動詞第三步：定內(nèi)容要點plan to do sth attend a summer school learn about a six-week English course When will the course start? Not too many students pay for host family university dormitory第四步：定寫作方法應(yīng)該按照書信的格式和特點：信頭、正文、祝愿語或客套語、署名。第五步：定段落Part 1 書信正文：詢問有關(guān)情況。Part 2 結(jié)尾句：表達(dá)愿望。Dear Sir/ Madam ， I am a student in C

18、hina and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students

19、in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully,Li, Hua如何審題（如何審題（3）假如你是我市一名高三學(xué)生李華，你打算報考一所外語學(xué)院。你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上看到上海外國語學(xué)院的招生信息(admission inf

20、ormation)，并對此非常感興趣。根據(jù)招生要求，你需要用英語撰寫一份個人申請報告，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括： 1記述自己的個性特長及取得的成果； 2說明進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想等。注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于120；開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。 2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to apply to study in your university. I read about the admission information while surfing the net the other day. Im really interested i

21、n it.On the one hand, Im an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates. On the other hand, I do well in most of my subjects, especially in English. I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies. Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther. King, President Bush and

22、so on, are also my favorite. Whats more, I once won the first prize for English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellence performances. As we all know, English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people, so I intend to major in En

23、glish if I am admitted into your university. I want to have a job relating with languages in the future and I believe I can help promote cultural communication between China and the world. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua如何組段，謀篇布局如何組段，謀篇布局1 文章前后的要照應(yīng)，即文章前后語氣要一致，前后內(nèi)容能自圓其說。2 注

24、意段落展開，巧妙設(shè)計開頭，努力寫好主題句，概括深化結(jié)尾句。使文章生動活潑的開頭，循序漸進(jìn)地開展，自然而然地結(jié)尾。3 要下確使用過渡性詞語能承上啟下，使句子的邏輯關(guān)系更清楚，從而使整段文字銜接自然、流暢。 段落段落(設(shè)計好一個段落設(shè)計好一個段落) 一般說來一般說來, 一個段落由三部分組成一個段落由三部分組成: 主題句主題句,擴(kuò)展句和結(jié)論句擴(kuò)展句和結(jié)論句.主題句提出所說的主題主題句提出所說的主題, 擴(kuò)擴(kuò)展句利用必要的細(xì)節(jié)對主題加以說明展句利用必要的細(xì)節(jié)對主題加以說明,結(jié)論結(jié)論句總結(jié)全文句總結(jié)全文,在論證的基礎(chǔ)上得出結(jié)論在論證的基礎(chǔ)上得出結(jié)論. 這三這三者是段落的必要成分者是段落的必要成分,他們相輔

25、相成他們相輔相成,構(gòu)成一構(gòu)成一個完整的段落個完整的段落. 另外段落之間的過渡句另外段落之間的過渡句,它使它使段與段之間的順利過渡，而且使文章渾然段與段之間的順利過渡，而且使文章渾然一體一體. 1.主題句主題句 1) 主題句的位置 : 請找出段落的主題句 Smoking is harmful to your health. Experiment show that smoking can cause cancer. Besides the most serious disease cancer, smoking can also cause other health problems. For

26、example, it gives one a “smokers cough”. Finally, studies have shown it is easy for smokers to catch colds. Whether you get an unimportant cold or the terrible killer, cancer, smoking is harmful. Is it worth it? Albert Einstein, one of the worlds greatest scientists, failed in his university entranc

27、e exam on his first attempt. William Faulkner, one of Americas famous writers, never finished college because he could not pass his English courses. Sir Winston Churchill, who is considered one of the masters of the English language, was very poor in English during middle school. These few examples

28、show that school does not always predict failure in life. Karaok, which was invented by a Japanese, one of the greatest wonders of modern technology. Needless to say, Karaok is a good way of rest. You can learn a new song easily. Its also a good way to make your friends happy. Nearly every body has

29、a chance to be a singing star. However, everything has two sides, so does Karaok. Its noisy to your neighbors. Besides, if you sing badly, they will feel uncomfortable. In fact, you are sure to make a sound pollution. 單一性單一性: 一個段落只說明一個問題一個段落只說明一個問題, 講述一件事講述一件事, 擴(kuò)擴(kuò)展句必須緊緊地圍繞著主題句展句必須緊緊地圍繞著主題句, 不偏離中心思想不

30、偏離中心思想. 通常對擴(kuò)展句的要求有兩個通常對擴(kuò)展句的要求有兩個 : 單一性和連貫性單一性和連貫性 找出一個違背單一性的句子找出一個違背單一性的句子. China has made great progress in reducing its population growth. China has already cut its rate of population growth by about one half since 1970. It is wrong of the western governments to find fault with its policies of eli

31、mination of poverty. China now urges each family to have no more than one child. And it hopes to reach zero population growth, the number of birth equaling the number of death, by the year 2000. 結(jié)論句結(jié)論句結(jié)論句并非必不可少結(jié)論句并非必不可少, 但它能起到以下的作用但它能起到以下的作用:(1) 表示段落的結(jié)束表示段落的結(jié)束(2) 總結(jié)要點總結(jié)要點,與與主題句主題句相呼應(yīng)相呼應(yīng)(3) 對對內(nèi)容或見解有深

32、刻的印象或進(jìn)行思考內(nèi)容或見解有深刻的印象或進(jìn)行思考 1 In this way,2 Therefore,3 In a word, In short, In conclusion, To sum up4 Only can we5 I hope句子的分類句子的分類簡單句簡單句: 只包含一個主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子只包含一個主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子. （五種基本的簡單句）（五種基本的簡單句）并列句并列句: 句子句子1+ 連詞連詞(and, but, so, or) +句子句子2 (或更多或更多)復(fù)合句復(fù)合句: 引導(dǎo)詞引導(dǎo)詞+主謂結(jié)構(gòu)主謂結(jié)構(gòu), 主謂結(jié)構(gòu)主謂結(jié)構(gòu) (從句從句) (主句主句) 主語從句主語從句, , 賓語從

33、句賓語從句, , 表語從句表語從句, , 同位語從同位語從句句, , 定語從句定語從句, , 狀語從句等狀語從句等.句式結(jié)構(gòu)句式結(jié)構(gòu)句子句子1 and but so or 句子句子2.句子句子1. 句子句子2.句子句子1 ；句子；句子2.主句主句 +從從句句.從句，主句從句，主句.主句的一部分，從句，主句的一部分，從句， 主句的另外一部分主句的另外一部分.句子，句子，+修飾語修飾語.修飾語，修飾語，+ 句子句子.句子句子1，句子，句子2. The professor walked into the classroom, he carried a bag of books with him. 1

34、. The professor walked into the classroom and he carried a bag of books with him.2. The professor walked into the classroom ; he carried a bag of books with him.3. The professor, who carried a bag of books, walked into the classroom .4. The professor walked into the classroom, carrying a bag of book

35、s with him.5. The professor walked into the classroom with a bag of books .（句子，句子（句子，句子2）（wrong）Let me try! 恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 1. 表示遞進(jìn)表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 (另外，還有另外，還有) what is more; besides;also; moreover; in addition;2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系， 一般后面才是作者觀點一般后面才是作者觀點 但是，但是， 然而，然而， 相反相反however， ontheotherhand de

36、spite ，inspiteof ，though ，although ， but ， onthe contrary，otherwise， yet ， insteadof ， rather ，whereas ，nonetheless， incontrast如何讓句子“靚”起來強(qiáng)調(diào)句使用倒裝句With 結(jié)構(gòu)非謂語動詞使用被動句使用感嘆句巧妙使復(fù)合句插入語獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)名言諺語修辭（比喻、擬人、排比）Let me try!.1比喻The children were as busy as bees, making preparations for the festival. Reading is to

37、the mind what exercise is to the body.2 擬人There goes the bell.His name escaped me .Happiness is raining down on me .The year 2014 saw great events.My watch says five.3 排比The higher you stand, the farther you can see.如何讓句子如何讓句子“靚靚”起起來來Without the health, you cant enjoy the happy life; without the hea

38、lth, your dream cant be true; without the health, wealth is useless for you. 4委婉He passed away yesterday.I am not quite myself today.5 地道用語She is a stranger in the dark about how this machine works.You cant be too careful in your work.It has been 4 years since I smoked.All his friends did no turn up. My life flashes before my eyes. 6 連詞+分詞They read while walking or riding on a bus.7 同位語Meimei, a girl of seven, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.8 雙重否定表肯定In our global village , we can see that its not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages.檢查檢查1.時態(tài)