公開課短文改錯解題技巧-全國卷

1、2021/3/91Proof ReadingProof Reading 短文改錯短文改錯2021/3/92Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?1. 看不出句子有錯?？床怀鼍渥佑绣e。2. 看出句子出錯的地方看出句子出錯的地方,但答案不正確?；驘o法但答案不正確?；驘o法改正。改正。 “改錯改錯，越改越錯改錯改錯，越改越錯”。因此了解改錯的。因此了解改錯的題型特點，并在此基礎上加以一定分項訓練，題型特點，并在此基礎上加以一定分項訓練，掌握一些解題技巧就非常有必要。掌握一些解題技巧就非常有必要。2021/3/93Procedures

2、of the lesson2021/3/94Right or Wrong?增加增加 been I have offered a scholarship at a university. I have offered a scholarship at a university. been I have offered a scholarship at a university. beenXX2021/3/95XXXI have got a good news to tell you.I have got a good news to tell you.I have got a good news

3、 to tell you.Right or Wrong?刪除刪除2021/3/96XXRight or Wrong?修改修改 Three weeks ago I bought the electronic andictionary at a shop. Three weeks ago I bought the electronic andictionary at a shop. Three weeks ago I bought the electronic andictionary at a shop.2021/3/97以以上上為不規(guī)范答題為不規(guī)范答題,均不給分，均不給分，E.g.: What

4、s more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day,he posted the message on the poster-board When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the drivewaytoa for2021/3/98I can return to home now.thein3.Unnecessary word3.Unnecessary word I like playing piano. I major at English.2.

5、Missing word2.Missing word1.Wrong word1.Wrong word2021/3/99假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。 文中文中共有共有1010處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（) )，并在其，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 劃掉

6、。劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。修改后的詞。 注意：注意：1. 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；一詞； 2.2.只允許修改只允許修改1010處，多者（從第處，多者（從第11 11處起）處起）不計分。不計分。2021/3/910年度年度介介詞詞動動詞詞形或形或容副容副詞詞詞詞代代詞詞名名詞詞連連詞詞冠冠詞詞關關系系詞詞201421311110201312211111201223121001201123102110測試點測試點2021/3/911三、新高考短文改錯三、新高考短文改錯應試應試策略策略及及答

7、題原則答題原則1. 1. 通讀全文通讀全文, , 理解文章理解文章. . 2. 2. 先易后難先易后難, , 找出明錯找出明錯. .3. 3. 對照考點對照考點, , 深入審讀深入審讀. .1.以改變實詞形式為原則.2.以單詞形式變化最小為原則.3.以添刪或更換虛詞為原則.4.以多“改正”少“添刪”為原則5.以保持原意不變?yōu)樵瓌t1. 1.標點符號不改。標點符號不改。2.2.大小寫不改。大小寫不改。3.3.詞序錯誤不改。詞序錯誤不改。4.4.單詞拼寫不改單詞拼寫不改 。 文中出現(xiàn)帶漢語注釋的詞，文中出現(xiàn)帶漢語注釋的詞，在句中不可能用錯。在句中不可能用錯。Next2021/3/912It was

8、a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day. One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted, but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief. Whats more, he w

9、anted the thief know he was forgiven. andrunningdrovethatreallyto2021/3/913So the next day, he posted the message on the poster-board and put it in the before yard. To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feelings. But I am a Christian and I forgive him! When he left for home the next morning,

10、at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brakesfrontyouaBack2021/3/914如何突破高分瓶頸？得法者，事半功倍得法者，事半功倍 2021/3/915I 從詞法和邏輯錯誤分析從詞法和邏輯錯誤分析:II從句法的角度去分析從句法的角度去分析:2021/3/916I 詞法和邏輯錯誤詞法和邏輯錯誤:2021/3/9171. For all these years, we had been allowing tomatoes to 1. For all these years, we had been allowi

11、ng tomatoes to selfself seed where they please.(2014 seed where they please.(2014年新課標年新課標I) I)2. My father took me out camping for the first time .2. My father took me out camping for the first time .My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for

12、hunting.hunting.( (陜西卷陜西卷) ) 3. Share with others makes me feel happy.3. Share with others makes me feel happy.havecame 1.動詞的動詞的時態(tài)時態(tài)和和語態(tài)語態(tài)錯誤錯誤. 2. 主、謂不一致主、謂不一致的錯誤。的錯誤。 3.非謂語動詞形式非謂語動詞形式的誤用的誤用 Sharing2021/3/9184. One evening at sunset, 4. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our we sat by t

13、he fire, have our barbecue. barbecue. ( (陜西卷陜西卷) )5. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the 5. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky. (sky. (陜西卷陜西卷) ) 6. Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined 6. Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just

14、 as good. to be just as good. 7. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every 7. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. minute shes outside. （遼寧卷）（遼寧卷）wereAmazedunderstandhaving2021/3/9198. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are 8. The

15、early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. often up all night with the baby. 9. Not only it provide the students with basic courses, but also it 9. Not only it provide the students with basic courses, but also it manages to encourage them to participate

16、 in colourful campus manages to encourage them to participate in colourful campus activities and social practice. activities and social practice. 10. Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and 10. Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calm. calm. 11. Many r

17、ules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially 11. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. for the ones involved in the pedestrians. doestrybeenhas2021/3/9201. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class.1. Last Saturda

18、y, as usual, he went to several class.2. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive 2. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.and sometimes death around me.deadclasses 1.1.可數(shù)可數(shù)與與不可數(shù)不可數(shù)名詞的混用。名詞的混用。 2. 2.可數(shù)可數(shù)名詞的名詞的單復數(shù)單復數(shù)的錯用。的錯用。 3. 3.名詞的名詞的格格的誤

19、用的誤用 4. 4.詞性的轉換詞性的轉換2021/3/9213. The man said, “my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on 3. The man said, “my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on the floor.”the floor.”4. Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking. 4. Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking. 5.

20、 Im deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more 5. Im deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English. attentions to practising my spoken English. 6. The police soon tracked the calls to a barber shop.6. The police soon tracked the calls t

21、o a barber shop.attentionbarbersteethtimes2021/3/9221. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! 1. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! ( (新課標新課標I) I)2. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows 2. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. (on the b

22、ird. (陜西卷陜西卷) )3. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with 3. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.people.（浙江卷）（浙江卷）immdiatelynoisywonderful1.1.形容詞形容詞、副詞、名詞等、副詞、名詞等詞性詞性的誤用。的誤用。2.2.原級，比較級和最高級原級，比較級和最高級的誤用。的誤用。2021/3/9234. Li 4. Li MingMing enjoyed himself,

23、 competing and chatting enjoyed himself, competing and chatting with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air. with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air. 5. I really take proud in this experience.5. I really take proud in this experience.6. There are more than 200 excellent teachers an

24、d 56. There are more than 200 excellent teachers and 5，000 lovely students studying hardly in our school.000 lovely students studying hardly in our school.7. I hope I can practise my spoken English there as 7. I hope I can practise my spoken English there as more as possible. more as possible. pride

25、hardmuchrelaxed2021/3/9241. The survey also shows that libraries are where 1. The survey also shows that libraries are where students get most of his books. students get most of his books. 2. My uncles immediately jumped up and shot 2. My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows on the bir

26、d. Neither of the arrows hit their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. the target. nonetheir1.1.前后人稱不一致。前后人稱不一致。2.2.人稱代詞人稱代詞，物主代詞物主代詞, ,反身代詞反身代詞的誤用。的誤用。3.3.不定代詞不定代詞的誤用及混用。的誤用及混用。 2021/3/9253. Though situations are tough today, a lot of we post80s are 3. Though situations are to

27、ugh today, a lot of we post80s are making great efforts to live a good life. making great efforts to live a good life. 4. It has been repaired and strengthened several times over its 4. It has been repaired and strengthened several times over its past one hundred years history.past one hundred years

28、 history.5. I think important to learn the computer well.5. I think important to learn the computer well.6. Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for 6. Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for me.me.itsitus2021/3/9261. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the

29、 door and wait 1. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.(your teacher to lead you outside.(四川卷四川卷) )2. Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth 2. Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way. After the boy came to himself, we se

30、nt him hospital way. After the boy came to himself, we sent him hospital at once and telephoned his parents.at once and telephoned his parents.tofor主要考查主要考查介詞短語介詞短語和和習慣用法習慣用法的搭配的搭配。2021/3/9273. Nearly five years ago, with the help by our father, 3. Nearly five years ago, with the help by our father,

31、 my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果圣女果) ) in our back garden. (in our back garden. (新課標新課標I I卷卷) )4. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him. 4. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him. 5. Soon they came up a good i

32、dea.5. Soon they came up a good idea.6. The woman was angry and said the man, “What 6. The woman was angry and said the man, “What are you doing, sir? What are you looking for?are you doing, sir? What are you looking for?fromwithtoof2021/3/9281. Today I can still remember how I became good table 1.

33、Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.tennis player.2. But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat. 2. But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat. 3. Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. 3. Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of

34、six hours a day. theaan. . 冠詞冠詞a,ana,an和和thethe的錯用或少用的錯用或少用 連詞連詞but,andbut,and，or, so,because, although,or, so,because, although,therefore, howevertherefore, however的錯用的錯用2021/3/9294. Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house and a 4. Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house

35、 and a car. Therefore, I dont think love built on houses and cars is true love, car. Therefore, I dont think love built on houses and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.and I doubt how long it will last.5. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic but active in class. 5. On Monday, Li Ming

36、was energetic but active in class. 6.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?6.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?7. They had expected to find a free place to live in, so they 7. They had expected to find a free place to live in, so they experienced a hard winter. experi

37、enced a hard winter. andorbutHowever2021/3/930Our English teacher begin to teach us in 2012.She had been teaching English for more than two year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully, but we consider her as our friend. She is really go

38、od teacher. We are love her very much. Were sure well get in well with each other.began hasyearsuswithbeautifulaon動詞形動詞形名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)代詞格，細領悟代詞格，細領悟介詞短語要牢記介詞短語要牢記還要注意形和副還要注意形和副冠詞連詞常光顧冠詞連詞常光顧Passage12021/3/931 My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning an

39、d two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees

40、 around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. Passage 22021/3/932 My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons i

41、n the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. dontmuchforhoursthere2021/3/933 My dream school look like a big garden

42、. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. lookssithelpfulto2021/3/934Summary名詞單復數(shù)名詞單復數(shù)/ /形容詞副詞形容

43、詞副詞/ /動詞時態(tài)動詞時態(tài)/ /代詞代詞. .1. 做題時應注意：做題時應注意：敘事性敘事性文章首抓文章首抓_，以免理解有誤；，以免理解有誤；論述性論述性文章首抓文章首抓名詞形容詞冠詞代詞名詞形容詞冠詞代詞錯誤錯誤全文時態(tài)全文時態(tài)2021/3/9353.短文改錯口訣代詞格，細領悟代詞格，細領悟介詞短語要牢記介詞短語要牢記冠詞連詞常光顧冠詞連詞常光顧邏輯錯誤須關注邏輯錯誤須關注動詞形，名詞數(shù)；動詞形，名詞數(shù)；還要注意形和副；還要注意形和副；非謂語，細辨別；非謂語，細辨別；句子成份多分析句子成份多分析2021/3/936II從句法的角度去分析從句法的角度去分析:2021/3/9371.He pu

44、t it in a secret place where I couldnt find.which2.The house which Lu Xun once lived is being repaired now.where3. Ill never forget the day which I first went to school.when關系代詞和關系副詞的誤用關系代詞和關系副詞的誤用2021/3/9381.We would return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day.what2.But it

45、didnt matter that I would win or not.whether 3.When people are playing games,they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities for their health. why連接代詞和連接副詞及從屬連詞的混用連接代詞和連接副詞及從屬連詞的混用2021/3/9391.He got up early in order to he could catch the first.that2. Make a mark which you have any doubts or questions.where引導詞的誤用引導詞的誤用2021/3/940As we climbed the mountains, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told