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1、 -書面通知 福州民族中學福州民族中學 林林 芽芽Notice WritingMr. White, please inform all the students of an English lecture at our school. All right？OK An English Lecture In order to develop the interest in English, our school hold a lecture in the lecture hall at 4 p.m. on Saturday, June 10,2015.purpose+ activity + pla

2、ce+timeparticipantsTitleAll are welcome to be there on time. The Students UnionThursday, June 8 A famous professor from USA will make the lecture on how to learn English . After the lecture, you can ask any questions.details of the activityOrganizer DatebodyAn English Drama Show 福州外國語學校在福州外國語學校在1111

3、月舉辦一個為期一個月的英語文月舉辦一個為期一個月的英語文化節(jié)。你校學生會將在本周五舉辦英語話劇表演，請根據(jù)化節(jié)。你校學生會將在本周五舉辦英語話劇表演，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一則書面通知。要點如下：以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一則書面通知。要點如下： 時間：時間： 20152015年年1111月月2020日，周五晚日，周五晚7:307:30 地點：學校報告廳地點：學校報告廳(lecture hall)(lecture hall)二層樓二層樓 目的：目的：. 內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容：a. a. 校長和學生代表校長和學生代表(delegate)(delegate)發(fā)言發(fā)言 b. b. 節(jié)目節(jié)目: :神話故事神話故事( fa

4、iry tales)( fairy tales)和原創(chuàng)作品和原創(chuàng)作品 c. c. 外教外教Mr. SmithMr. Smith點評、提建議點評、提建議 要求：要提早要求：要提早2020分鐘入場；分鐘入場；注意：注意： 1.1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100100左右；左右； 2.2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，并使行文連貫、通順。可以適當增加細節(jié)，并使行文連貫、通順。審題1. Personal Pronoun:2. Tense (時態(tài)時態(tài)):3. structure(結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)) :4. Points: title, body, organizer, date常用第二和第三人稱代詞常用第二和第三人稱代詞the prese

5、nt tense一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時; the present future tense一般將來時一般將來時Cover all the points.(內(nèi)容要完整內(nèi)容要完整,充實充實)three or four paragraphsStyle of the writingpractical writing (notice)BrainstormWhat are they doing?enrich after-class school lifehold an English drama showimprove English（ In order to, .）give/make/deliver a

6、speechnot onlybut alsocomment on; give some advicecivilized audiencebehave wellleave litter / throw litter about/throw litter here and therePhrases1. 為了為了2. 豐富校園課外生活豐富校園課外生活2. 舉辦英語話劇表演舉辦英語話劇表演3. 發(fā)言發(fā)言4. 作出點評作出點評5. 提出建議提出建議6. 文明觀眾文明觀眾7. 亂扔垃圾亂扔垃圾enrich after-class school lifehold an English drama showg

7、ive/make/deliver a speechcomment oncivilized audienceleave litter / throw litter about/throw litter here and thereReading aloudgive some advicein order tobetter expressionsThere will be an English drama show held byso as to.In order to enrich the after-school activity, our school will hold an Englis

8、h drama show on the second floor of our school lecture hall. 1) Please get there twenty minutes earlier. 2) Please get there 20 minutes earlier before the drama show begins. 3) Those who are interested in English are required to get there 20 minutes earlier.Which is the best ?內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容：要提早要提早20分鐘入場分鐘入場在

9、寫作中應盡量使句在寫作中應盡量使句型結(jié)構(gòu)多樣化，如狀型結(jié)構(gòu)多樣化，如狀語從句、被動語態(tài)、語從句、被動語態(tài)、定語從句、并列句等。定語從句、并列句等。 1) Dont throw rubbish. 2) Make sure that you dont leave rubbish behind. 3) Be sure to behave yourself and keep the hall clean.Which is the best?內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容：不亂扔垃圾不亂扔垃圾 1. 1. 語言語言的準確性；的準確性； -無誤的表達無誤的表達2. 2. 語言的豐富性；語言的豐富性； -豐富的表達豐富的表達3

10、. 3. 行文的連貫性；行文的連貫性； -流暢的表達流暢的表達4. 4. 內(nèi)容的相關(guān)性；內(nèi)容的相關(guān)性； -相關(guān)的表達相關(guān)的表達5. 5. 書寫的美觀性；書寫的美觀性； -增加得分點增加得分點 What is a good writing?correctnessdiversitysmoothnessrelevanceSum Upattraction Assessment(評價評價) Content: *Cover all the points.(內(nèi)容要完整內(nèi)容要完整,充實充實) Structure: * Good beginning and ending.(好的開頭結(jié)尾好的開頭結(jié)尾) * Wel

11、l organized and smoothly developed. (結(jié)構(gòu)合理結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢行文流暢) Language： * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯誤沒有語法錯誤)* With correctly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (詞語的準確運用和句式的富于變化詞語的準確運用和句式的富于變化) Handwriting： * Excellent handwriting is attractive. (漂亮的書寫是寫作

12、得分的亮點漂亮的書寫是寫作得分的亮點) What is a good writing？Homework 1. Finish your writing and exchange it with your peers and make assessment according to the standard given.Thanksgiving Day is coming soon!November 26, 2015gamescranberry game 蔓越桔競賽蔓越桔競賽 pumpkin run with a teaspoon南瓜賽跑南瓜賽跑 （用小勺推著南瓜跑）（用小勺推著南瓜跑） turk

13、eyfeastWithout a turkey or pumpkins, it shouldnt be a good Thanksgiving Day.Thanksgiving Day is a time to celebrate, a time for giving, a time for sharing,a time to give thanks to your parents, teachers and friends.It is a time to remember everything we are thankful for.Homework2.Write another notic

14、e about Thanksgiving Day. 福州外國語學校在福州外國語學校在11月舉辦一個為期一個月的英月舉辦一個為期一個月的英語文化節(jié)。假設你是該校學生會主席李華。語文化節(jié)。假設你是該校學生會主席李華。11月月26日日恰好是感恩節(jié)，學生會將在感恩節(jié)當天邀請所有外教恰好是感恩節(jié)，學生會將在感恩節(jié)當天邀請所有外教參加感恩節(jié)活動，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一則書面參加感恩節(jié)活動，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一則書面通知。要點如下：通知。要點如下： 要點如下：要點如下：時間：時間：2015年年11月月26日日(星期四星期四) 下午下午4點點30分分地點：操場地點：操場目的：目的：.對象：全體高中同學對

15、象：全體高中同學內(nèi)容：外教內(nèi)容：外教Mike介紹介紹“感恩節(jié)感恩節(jié)”的由來的由來 要求：文明舉止要求：文明舉止 注意：注意： 1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，并使行文連貫、通順?？梢赃m當增加細節(jié)，并使行文連貫、通順。Thank you for Thank you for attendance!attendance!Happy Happy study,study,Healthy Healthy life !life !An English Drama Show In order to enrich the students school life after class, o

16、ur school will hold an English drama show on the second floor of the school lecture hall at 7:30 p.m. on Friday, November 20,2015. All the students are welcome to the show 20 minutes earlier before the show begins. Not only will our president give a speech but also a student delegate will do. The show includes English Fairy Tales and original plays. After the show, Mr. Smith, our foreig