How_to_get_happiness寫作課件(定稿)

1、 what is Happiness Happiness is_, With joy, sweetness, and excitement as its fruits.Happiness is_, With gentleness, comfort and love as its furniture(家具家具). Happiness is _, Who teaches us to love, to sacrifice and ownOn happinessa treeEnjoy a poem Brainstorming:Look at the pictures and figure out wh

2、at happiness means to them?Happiness means being creative.Happiness means doing exciting things.roller coasterBungee jumpingHappiness means readingHappiness means playing sportspending time with family.Happiness means Happiness means learning new thingsTo conclude :People will be happy when they-Whe

3、n we are unhappy, my suggestion is that :do some creative thingsdo some exciting thingsplay sportLearn new thingsForget the worries and be happy every day.read a good bookSpend time with familyDiscussion: What is happiness to you? -I will feel happy when-Happiness means-Happiness lies in(在于在于) 對(duì)于一些人

4、而言，他們認(rèn)為幸福的秘訣在于事業(yè)的成功。當(dāng)他們變得富有成功時(shí)，幸福便會(huì)隨之而來(lái)。 To some people,they think that the secret to happiness lies in their successful work. when they become rich and successful,happiness will naturally follow.Wealth brings happinesslie in follow As the saying goes: ”Money is not everything, but without money, ev

5、erything is nothing.”錢不是萬(wàn)能的，但是沒(méi)有錢是萬(wàn)萬(wàn)不能的錢不是萬(wàn)能的，但是沒(méi)有錢是萬(wàn)萬(wàn)不能的 .the secret to sth Sang LanTai LihuaDo you know these disabled people?What is happiness to them?健康是幸福的關(guān)鍵。健康對(duì)于人而言就像是鳥(niǎo)的翅膀。如果那些健康是幸福的關(guān)鍵。健康對(duì)于人而言就像是鳥(niǎo)的翅膀。如果那些殘疾人和正常人一樣擁有健康的身體，他們的生活將會(huì)更幸福殘疾人和正常人一樣擁有健康的身體，他們的生活將會(huì)更幸福.Health is the key to happiness. Hea

6、lth is certainly more valuable than money because it is by health that money is procured.-Samuel Johnson. British writer英國(guó)作家約翰.S. healthIf 引導(dǎo)的虛擬條件句，與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相引導(dǎo)的虛擬條件句，與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反，條件句用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，主句用情反，條件句用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，主句用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞加動(dòng)詞原形態(tài)動(dòng)詞加動(dòng)詞原形健康比金錢更重要，因?yàn)橹挥薪】滴覀儾拍塬@得金錢。健康比金錢更重要，因?yàn)橹挥薪】滴覀儾拍塬@得金錢。The disabledthe key to sthHealth to

7、 a person is just wings to a bird!If the disabled people had healthy bodies ,they would live a happier life. Friendship plays an important part in our life. Friendship not only brings us a lot of happiness,but also help us when we are in trouble.A life without a friend is a life without a sun.友誼在我們的

8、生活中起著重要的作用。它不僅給我們友誼在我們的生活中起著重要的作用。它不僅給我們帶來(lái)幸福，而且在我們有麻煩時(shí)幫助我們。帶來(lái)幸福，而且在我們有麻煩時(shí)幫助我們。Play an important part in Not onlybut also 人生沒(méi)有朋友猶如人生沒(méi)有太陽(yáng)人生沒(méi)有朋友猶如人生沒(méi)有太陽(yáng)Without a home, man, alone in the world, tremble with the cold. Being together with our family makes us happy. 一個(gè)人沒(méi)有了家庭，獨(dú)自一人在世界上會(huì)冷的發(fā)抖。一個(gè)人沒(méi)有了家庭，獨(dú)自一人在世界上

9、會(huì)冷的發(fā)抖。和家人在一起讓我們開(kāi)心。只有和家人待在一起的時(shí)候，我們才和家人在一起讓我們開(kāi)心。只有和家人待在一起的時(shí)候，我們才能感到更幸福，對(duì)生活更滿意。能感到更幸福，對(duì)生活更滿意。Be satisfied with Only +when引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)從句放句首，主句用部分倒裝放句首，主句用部分倒裝 Only when the family stay together，can we feel happier and more satisfied with our lives。快樂(lè)快樂(lè)/幸福是所有人都渴望的。有的人認(rèn)為擁有很多錢就是幸福是所有人都渴望的。有的人認(rèn)為擁有很多錢就是快樂(lè)，有的人認(rèn)

10、為擁有健康，朋友就是幸福，還有的人認(rèn)為快樂(lè)，有的人認(rèn)為擁有健康，朋友就是幸福，還有的人認(rèn)為擁有幸福的家庭就是快樂(lè)。其實(shí)快樂(lè)擁有幸福的家庭就是快樂(lè)。其實(shí)快樂(lè)/幸福就在我們的身邊。幸福就在我們的身邊。請(qǐng)以請(qǐng)以what is happiness? 為主題，為主題，根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容來(lái)談一談來(lái)談一談幸福是什么？幸福是什么？ what is happiness?金錢論金錢論有錢就可以擁有一切有錢就可以擁有一切健康論健康論健康是快樂(lè)的關(guān)鍵（健康是快樂(lè)的關(guān)鍵（key）友誼論友誼論朋友多了就是快樂(lè)朋友多了就是快樂(lè)家庭論家庭論一家人其樂(lè)融融一家人其樂(lè)融融你的觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn) As we all know, a

11、ll people are eager(渴望) for happiness. But different people have different understanding of happiness . Your opinions:in my opinion/ in my viewfrom my point of viewas far as I am concerned personally (speaking)If you ask me,. I believe/feel. How to express ones opinion? 如何如何使文章使文章 起來(lái)起來(lái)“靚靚”a nice hea

12、da nice taila nice bodyA good compositionAs we all know, all people are eager for happiness. But different people have different understanding of happiness Money/wealthHealthFriends/friendshipfamilyYour opinions2-3points 技技 巧巧1. 1. 覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)3. 3. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞2. 2. 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)使文

13、章“靚”起來(lái)的技巧Conjunctions ,transitional words, phrases and sentences連接（過(guò)渡）詞、短語(yǔ)和句子連接（過(guò)渡）詞、短語(yǔ)和句子 （1）表示遞進(jìn)的過(guò)渡詞：）表示遞進(jìn)的過(guò)渡詞：FirstSecondThirdFinally/ Firstly.SecondlyThirdlylastly/Finally Firstthen next等。等。（2）表示）表示“此外，還有此外，還有”的過(guò)渡詞：的過(guò)渡詞：in addition，furthermore，moreover， whats more , besides（3）表示前后呼應(yīng)）表示前后呼應(yīng),對(duì)比的過(guò)渡

14、詞對(duì)比的過(guò)渡詞On the one hand, on the other hand/ for one thing for another/ whats worse/To make matters worse/等。等。（4）表示結(jié)）表示結(jié) 果果 和和 原原 因因 的的 過(guò)過(guò) 渡渡 詞：詞：because，since，so，as a result， therefore等。等。（5）表示目的的過(guò)渡詞：）表示目的的過(guò)渡詞：for this reason，so that, in order to.（6）表示個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的過(guò)渡詞：）表示個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的過(guò)渡詞： in my opinion/from the poin

15、t of my view/ as far as I am concerned 等。等。（7）表示總結(jié)的過(guò)渡詞：）表示總結(jié)的過(guò)渡詞：generally speaking，in a word(總之總之)，in brief， in short，in general等。等。 請(qǐng)注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)和書寫請(qǐng)注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)和書寫show time 1.To some people,they think that the secret to happiness lies in their successful work. when they become rich and successful,happiness will

16、naturally follow. 2.Health is the key to happiness. Health to a person is just wings to a bird! If the disabled people had healthy bodies ,they would live a happier life. 3.Friendship plays an important part in our life. It not only brings us a lot of happiness, but also reduces the sense of lonelin

17、ess. 4. Being together with our family makes us happy. only when the family stay together，can we feel happier and more satisfied with our lives。 5. Your opinions FirstSecondThirdFinally/Firstly.SecondlyThirdlylastly/Finally/ Firstthen next /in addition，furthermore，moreover, whats more , besidesOn the one hand, on the other hand/ for one thing for another/ whats worse/To make matters worse/ because，since，so，as a result，therefore /for this reason，so that, in order to. /in my opinion/from the point of my view/as far as I am concerned, generally speakin