八年級上冊書面表達訓(xùn)練(下)

1、八年級上冊書面表達訓(xùn)練作文指導(dǎo)加范例點評與練習(xí)( 下)Unit 6I'm going to study computer science.寫作指南本單元的寫作是介紹自己或他人的理想中的工作。在寫這樣的文章時，首先要寫出自己或他人的理想是什么，即希望成為什么人，為什么希望成為那樣的人；其次寫出應(yīng)該怎樣朝著理想去努力奮斗，即怎樣做來實現(xiàn)理想；最后點題。因為是理想中的工作，所以常用be going to 表示的將來時態(tài)來描述。假設(shè)你是韓明(15歲)，請根據(jù)下面的提示詞，以My future job為題寫一篇短文，60詞左右。提示詞：like，play sports，write article

2、s，school magazine，sports reporter，grow up，newspaper，work for，CCTVMy future jobI'm Han Ming. I am fifteen years old. I like playing sports and writing articles. I play football and basketball every day. And I often write articles for our school magazine. I want to be a sports reporter when I grow

3、 up. I am going to write articles for newspapers. And I want to work for CCTV as a sports reporter. Now I work very hard. I think my dream will come true.點評：本文是談?wù)搶泶蛩愕囊黄恼?。作者根?jù)所給提示，運用be going to 結(jié)構(gòu)，說明了自己為實現(xiàn)愿望所要做出的努力，使文章活潑生動，主題鮮明。寫作練習(xí)：請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文，介紹一下這四位同學(xué)的夢想以及他們實現(xiàn)夢想的方式。要求不少于70詞。NameDreamH

4、ow to do thatFranka computer programmerstudy hard to learn computer scienceSaraha cooklearn from her uncle who is good at cookingMikea writerkeep on writing articlesLindaa pianistuse free time to take piano lessons and practice playing it 參考范文：Everyone has different dreams. Frank is going to be a co

5、mputer programmer. He is going to study computer science hard. Sarah is going to be a good cook. Her uncle is good at cooking and she is going to learn it from him. Mike is going to keep on writing articles and send them to magazines and newspapers. Linda is going to going to be a pianist. She is go

6、ing to take piano lessons in her free time and spend more time practicing playing the piano.Unit 7Will people have robots?寫作指南本單元的寫作要求是對未來生活的變化進行描述。寫此類文章需要注意以下事項：1要在“變化上下工夫，什么樣的變化、變化的程度等；且時態(tài)多為一般將來時。如果與以前作比較，還可用過去時；如果與現(xiàn)在作比較，可用現(xiàn)在時。2注意根本功的訓(xùn)練，力求語法正確、用詞得當(dāng)、語言地道。單詞拼寫、標點符號以及書寫也是不容無視的。劉英是一個12歲的女孩，她經(jīng)常夢想她未來的生活

7、?？聪旅娴谋砀?，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。NowFutureJobstudentdancerHairshort，straightlong，curlyPlace to liveGuangzhouBeijingTransportationsubwayher own carSportstennisgolfPetstortoisedalmatian(斑點狗)Liu Ying is a twelve-year old girl. She is a student with short straight hair. She lives in Guangzhou and goes to school by s

8、ubway. She likes playing tennis. She has a pet tortoise. In the future，she wants to be a dancer with long curly hair. She wants to live in Beijing. She will have her own car. She will play golf twice or three times a week. She will have a pet dalmatian.點評：根據(jù)要求和提示，作者以第三人稱的口氣描寫了劉英未來的生活夢想。全文恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧艘话銓頃r

9、態(tài)。同時，作者用語通順簡練。例如，“She is a student with short straight hair.和“She wants to be a dancer with long curly hair.等，都證實了作者的語言功底。寫作練習(xí)： 請根據(jù)下面的提示，以My hometown in 20 years 為題寫一篇70詞左右的作文. 提示：1. better environment , bluer sky ,cleaner water, fresher air.2. more people , bigger houses3. happier life 參考范文： My hom

10、etown in 20 years I think my hometown will be very different in 20 years . My hometown will become cleaner and more beautiful in 20 years . There will be less pollution and we will see blue sky more often . The water will be cleaner and the air will be fresher . There will be more people in my homet

11、own and people will be able to live in bigger houses . It will also be easier for them to go around. People will become richer and happier. I love my hometown . I hope it will become more and more beautiful . Unit 8How do you make a banana milk shake?寫作指南本單元的寫作是寫某食物制作的過程。在寫食物制作過程的文章時，要寫清楚所用的各種原料；運用表

12、示先后順序的first，next，then，finally等詞，將各種原料按照先后順序合理地搭配，寫成一篇連貫的食物制作的短文?？蛇\用祈使句，配以恰當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z。你知道怎樣制作蘋果奶昔嗎？根據(jù)下面的圖畫提示寫一篇60詞左右的短文，簡單介紹一下蘋果奶昔的做法。短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。The apple milk shake is healthy and delicious. Do you like it？Now let me teach you how to make it._.The apple milk shake is healthy and delicious. Do you lik

13、e it？Now let me teach you how to make it.You need three apples，some ice­cream and a bottle of milk. First，peel the apples and cut them up. Next，put the apple pieces and ice­cream into the blender. Then pour the milk into the blender. Turn on the blender and have it work for about one minut

14、e. Finally，pour the milk shake into a glass. Now it's time to enjoy it!點評：作者按照先后順序用簡潔的語言，根據(jù)圖畫提示將過程描述得恰到好處。作者恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用了表示順序的詞：first，next，then，finally，抓住了重點。同時用了一些詞語：cut up，put into，turn on等，使文章充實飽滿。寫作練習(xí)： 假設(shè)你是Frank，上周日你媽媽給你做了一份牛肉三明治，你覺得特別好吃。請你根據(jù)下面的圖表，寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文，簡要的向大家介紹一下你媽媽制作牛肉三明治的過程。 Ingredients:

15、 *2 pieces of bread *1spoon of butter *1 onion and 1 tomato (cut up ) *some lettuce *4 pieces of beef *2 spoons of relish(調(diào)味品 參考答案： Last Sunday, my mother mae a beef sandwich for me. It was very delicious and I loved it very much. Now let me tell you how to make a beef sandwich.First, put a spoon of

16、 butter on a piece of bread. After that, cut up an onion and a tomato and add then to the bread. Next, put some lettuce and four pieces of beef on the bread. Then put two spoons of relish on the beef. Finally, put another piece of bread on the top. Unit 9Can you come to my party？ 寫作指南本單元的寫作主要是寫關(guān)于邀請及

17、回復(fù)邀請的文章。在寫這樣的文章時，不免會用到電子郵件。E­mail 有正規(guī)的格式，但是我們在寫作時常用非正式的文體。正文前的稱呼通常較為隨便，一般不使用如“Dear Mr. Wang之類的表達。在同輩的親朋好友或同事間可以直呼其名，但對長輩或上級最好使用頭銜加上姓。信尾客套語通常很簡明，只須一詞像“Thanks，Best，Love等，不需要一般信函中的“Sincerely yours或“Best regards。稱呼和正文之間，段落之間，正文和信尾客套話之間一般空一行，開頭無須空格。在寫正文時，要先對別人的邀請進行感謝。然后表達不能接受邀請的理由。最后祝他人過得快樂。假設(shè)你叫邁克，你

18、的朋友Tom邀請你下周某一天和他一起去參觀一個攝影展。請根據(jù)你的日程安排給Tom回一封e­mail，說明你不去的理由。Sundaydo the shopping with my motherMondayfinish the math homeworkTuesdayfootball match at 4：00 on TVWednesdaygo to the doctorThursdayhelp my brother with his mathFridayhave a piano lessonSaturdayhelp my parents with the housework the w

19、hole dayDear Tom，_Dear Tom，Thanks a lot for the invitation. I'm sorry I can't go with you next week. I have a really busy week. On Sunday，I'm doing the shopping with my mother. On Monday，I have to finish my math homework. On Tuesday，I'm watching the football match at 4：00 on TV. And

20、I'm going to the doctor on Wednesday. On Thursday I'm helping my brother with his math. On Friday，I have to have a piano lesson. On Saturday I'm going to help my parents with the housework the whole day.Yours，Mike點評：首先對別人的邀請表示感謝，對不能接受邀請而表示歉意，并詳細陳述理由。對理由的陳述條理而清晰，詳細而不啰嗦。寫作練習(xí)： 假設(shè)你是趙凱，你的朋友Fr

21、ank 邀請你明天參加他的生日聚會。但你的父母在外地出差，奶奶又臥病在床，需要人照顧。并且英語考試即將來臨，因此，你無法去參加他的生日聚會。請你給Frank 寫封信說明情況，表達歉意，并祝他生日快樂，玩的開心。70詞左右信的格式及開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Frank,Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party tomorrow._ Yours, Zhao Kai 參考答案：Dear Frank,Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party

22、tomorrow. Id love to go but I am afraid I cant. My parents are away on business. They wont come back until next week, so I have to look after my grandma at home because she is ill in bed. And I also need to prepare for the coming English exam. Is very sorry I cant go to your party . Thank you for in

23、viting me. I hope you can have a good time. Yours, Zhao Kai Unit 10If you go to the party，you'll have a great time!寫作指南本單元的寫作是描寫假設(shè)情況的文章。寫這樣的文章時要注意：1正確使用好if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。在條件狀語從句中，一般使用一般現(xiàn)在時表示將來，主句常用一般將來時。2使用生動的語言，把自己的觀點、看法描述出來。讓讀者能感受到顏色、聲音、氣味等。3在描寫的過程中，要運用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞語，使文章銜接自然。你將來可能會有很多錢，請你以 If I have a lot

24、 of money，I will .為題，寫一篇短文，表述自己擁有財富后將如何幫助他人。If I have a lot of money，I will ._If I have a lot of money，I will .If I have a lot of money，I will buy what I need and do what I want，such as traveling around the world，studying abroad and buying my parents a big house. I hope my dream will come true. Of c

25、ourse，I will do something helpful to others. I will give away money to charities. I will help those kids who are too poor to go to school. In a word，if I have a lot of money，I can do a lot of wonderful things and make a contribution to our country.點評：作者開篇點題，“如果我有很多錢，我就買我需要的，做我想做的。進而列舉了很多想做的事情。作者運用了許多連接詞，如：