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1、圖畫闡釋型第一段 圖畫描述Physically challengeddelicateintegration 2012.6 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication第一段 圖畫描述 第一句：導入+描述主體1 第二句：導入+描述主體2或細節(jié) 第三句：字幕 第四句：過渡（湊字數(shù)）第一句：導入+描述主體1導入：o As is explicitly depicted in the drawing above, o The drawing, explicit and clear, unfolds a scene to us, in

2、whicho 以兩個形容詞開頭, 句子（描述主體）， as is explicitly depicted in the drawing above.o The passions, simple but overwhelmingly strong, have governed my life; the longing for love, the search for knowledge, and unbearable pity for the suffering of mankind.Delicious and tasty, 描述主體，as is explicitly depicted in t

3、he drawing above. 積極：vigorous/energetic/strong-minded/hard-working/optimistic charming/attractive/sweet/graceful/elegant/delicate/tender 消極：cruel/ruthless/immoral/irresponsible rude/impolite/indifferent/ignorant greedy/pitiful/miserable helpless/hopeless/desperate描述主體1 （分情況）1.沒有動作there be 句型2：一個動作sb

4、/sth is doing sth. 3.兩個動作sb/sth, doing sth, is doing sth. Strong-minded and vigorous, two physically challenged men, supporting each other, are running forward, their crutches left behind, as is explicitly.語法專題3：分詞作狀語V-ing or V-ed？見到見到貓，老鼠就跑了跑了。Seeing the cat, the mouse ran off. 老師走進走進教室，后面跟著跟著幾個學生T

5、he teacher came into the lab, followed by some students. Strong-minded and optimistic, two physically challenged men, supporting and helping each other, are running forward, leaving their crutches behind. 終點又是新起點 Energetic and optimistic, a young boy, sweating heavily, is rushing to the end, as is 高

6、分：令人驚艷的獨立主格 (伴隨） Sb/sth主 is doing sth, sth次 doing sth Delicious and tasty, there is a hotpot, the steam rising from it. The flower withers, its petals falling on the ground. Sordid and wretched, tang siyu, our English teacher, sitting under the dim light in his office, is reading a book named JPM, h

7、is saliva drooling from his mouth.2012-6 CET-6 ： The father, sitting in a sofa and reading the newspaper, asks his daughter，“how was your school today？” 第二句：導入+ 描述主體2 或 細節(jié)導入：（主體2）At his/her side, in front of him/her,（細節(jié)）oScrutiny of the drawing reveals thatoOn closer inspection, though, we find that

8、Ignorant and immoral, two tourists are chatting delightedly on the boat, throwing rubbish into the lake, as is explicitly depicted in the drawing. On closer inspection, though, we find that not far from the boat, a mass of rubbish is floating on the lake, including plastic bottles, tins, watermelon

9、rind, fish bones and disposable lunch-boxes. 2012.6 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication “You can read all about it on my blog，Dad. ” The daughter answers quite concisely and impatiently，leaving her father sitting there with embarrassment. 第三句：字幕 The caption reads/indicates that

10、 Were informed by the caption that 終點又是新起點 網(wǎng)絡(luò)的近與遠第四句：過渡 It goes without saying that the symbolic message of the drawing has gone beyond the drawing itself. Simple as the drawing(s) is/are, the connotation subtly conveyed should be taken into consideration with more insight.第二段 分析 hardly can Teens wi

11、thstand any hardships in their life. 第五句:導入+主題詞/句 第六句：過渡 第七句：原因1 第八句：原因2第五句:導入+主題詞/句 導入：o Inferred in this drawing is virtually a joyous/disturbing/controversial social phenomenon : 1. the picture has revealed, as is known to us all, a current social phenomenon that : 2012.6 The Impact of the Intern

12、et on Interpersonal Communication The internet has a tremendous impact on interpersonal communication. 主題句： 主題句的擴展：加定語從句語法專題4：定語從句1）概念Tang Siyu is a ( 萌, 卡哇伊 and Q ) teacher.唐思宇是個打醬油的老師。Tang Siyu is a teacher who 打s 醬油. Tang Siyu is a teacher 打ing 醬油.2）形式： 從句：名詞+that/which/who引導的從句 +when/where/why引導

13、的從句 分詞：名詞+V-ing/V-ed 3) 滿分表達1. 用于描述圖畫： 比如： Ruthless and cruel, the eldest son wearing decent suit is kicking his aged father who is dressed in shabby clothes. The eldest son wearing a decent suit is kicking his aged father who is dressed in shabby clothes. 2.擴充主題句： Hardly can teens who are spoiled a

14、nd over-protected by their parents withstand any hardships in their life. 2012.6 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication The internet which is widely used all over the globe exerts a tremendous impact on interpersonal3.非限制性定語從句擴充主題句1) 中心句，which provokes the publics widespread conce

15、rns2) 中心句，which gives rise to dreadful consequences.3) 中心句，which may lead to disasters/tragedies.第6-12句：同問題解決型等補充： Sb is doing sth, doing sth Sb/sth主 is doing sth, sth次 doing sth There is a hotpot, the steam rising from it. The flower withers, its petals falling on the ground. ., their crutches left

16、 behind Sordid and wretched, Tang siyu, our English teacher, sitting under the dim light, is reading a book called JMP which is a traditional classic book with a mysterious smile, his saliva drooling from his mouth.圖表分析型如何看圖圖表作文1、近十年來某城市越來越多人選擇出去旅游2、出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因3、這種現(xiàn)象可能產(chǎn)生的影響Number of people in City X t

17、raveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China1.根據(jù)上圖描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)的變化；2.分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因；3.說明這些變化對個人和社會產(chǎn)生的影響。Ownership of Houses in a Big City Ownership of Houses in a Big City in Chinain China020406080100199019952000(75:25) (60:40) (20:80)state-ownedprivate20082008、20092009國內(nèi)

18、轎車市場部分品牌市場份額示意圖國內(nèi)轎車市場部分品牌市場份額示意圖某公司員工工作滿意度調(diào)查某公司員工工作滿意度調(diào)查年齡/滿意度滿意不清楚不滿意小于等于40歲16.7%50.0%33.3%41-50歲0.0%36.0%64.0%大于50歲40.050.0%10.0%描述圖表核心詞匯1 1、表示上升、表示上升: :基本詞匯：基本詞匯：increaseincreasegrowgrowriserise亮點詞匯亮點詞匯soar soar boomboomclimbclimbJumpJumpsurgesurge2.2.表示下降表示下降基本詞匯：基本詞匯：decreasedecreasedeclinedecl

19、inefall fall dropdrop亮點詞匯亮點詞匯slump slump plunge plunge plummet plummet shrink shrink 3. 達到最高/最低值（線形圖常用）最高：reach a peak of 數(shù)字最低：reach a bottom of 數(shù)字4. 4. 表示表示“平穩(wěn)發(fā)展平穩(wěn)發(fā)展”的動詞詞組的動詞詞組remain steady/stable/constant 5. 5. 波動（常用于線形圖）波動（常用于線形圖）fluctuate betweenand6. 6. 表示表示“占占”（常用于餅圖）（常用于餅圖）occupytake up accou

20、nt forconstitute 7. 7. 表程度表程度a. a. 表程度小的形容詞和副詞表程度小的形容詞和副詞 slight / slightly slight / slightly mild / mildly mild / mildlyb. b. 表程度大的形容詞和副詞表程度大的形容詞和副詞 dramatic / dramaticallydramatic / dramatically sharp / sharply sharp / sharply enormous / enormously enormous / enormously remarkable / remarkably rem

21、arkable / remarkablyc. c. 表穩(wěn)定、逐漸、適度形容詞和副詞表穩(wěn)定、逐漸、適度形容詞和副詞 steady / steadily steady / steadily gradual / gradually gradual / gradually8. 8. 其它其它表格：table線形圖：line chart / curve chart餅圖：pie chart柱狀圖：bar chart比例：proportion / percentage數(shù)字：figure / number差不多：around / approximately第一段：描述圖表第1句：總的描述第2句：描述主體第3句

22、：描述次主體第4句：描述次主體第一段 第1句：總的描述1. The_chart explicitly indicatesthe statistics of 主題 in 地點 from 時間 to 時間圖表作文1、近十年來某城市越來越多人選擇出去旅游2、出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因3、這種現(xiàn)象可能產(chǎn)生的影響Number of people in City X traveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China1.根據(jù)上圖描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)的變化；2.分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因；3.說明這些變化對個人和

23、社會產(chǎn)生的影響。Ownership of Houses in a Big City Ownership of Houses in a Big City in Chinain China020406080100199019952000(75:25) (60:40) (20:80)state-ownedprivate2. From the information given in the above _ chart, we can see a striking contrast in 主題 between 主體1 and 主體2 (among 主體1，主體2 and 主體3）from 時間 to

24、時間. Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China1.根據(jù)上圖描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)的變化；2.分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因；3.說明這些變化對個人和社會產(chǎn)生的影響。Ownership of Houses in a Big City Ownership of Houses in a Big City in Chinain China020406080100199019952000(75:25) (60:40) (20:80)state-ownedprivate第2、3、4句 As can be seen from the chart, 第2句. By contra

25、st, 第3句. Meanwhile,第4句.上升、下降的說法 1）主謂： The number/percentage/share/sales of 主體 increased dramatically fromto圖表作文1、近十年來某城市越來越多人選擇出去旅游2、出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因3、這種現(xiàn)象可能產(chǎn)生的影響Number of people in City X traveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China1.根據(jù)上圖描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)的變化；2.分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因；3.說明這

26、些變化對個人和社會產(chǎn)生的影響。Ownership of Houses in a Big City Ownership of Houses in a Big City in Chinain China020406080100199019952000(75:25) (60:40) (20:80)state-ownedprivate2) there be 句型： There was a sharp decline in the number/percentage/share/sales of 主體, fromto Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China1.根據(jù)上圖描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)的變化；2.分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因；3.說明這些變化對個人和社會產(chǎn)生的影響。Ownership of Houses in a Big City Ownership of Houses in a Big City in Chinain China020406080100199019952000(75:25) (60:40) (20:80)state-ownedprivate2. 占據(jù)的說法 （在餅圖中使用）1) 部分 acc