雅思A類圖表作文各個(gè)擊破(流程圖、柱圖、曲線、表格)

1、A類圖表作文各個(gè)擊破（流程圖、柱圖、曲線圖、表格）.5.2表格 解題關(guān)鍵F1表格與餅圖一樣，都是靜態(tài)圖。切入點(diǎn)在描述分配；F2表格題考查列舉數(shù)字的能力和方法。通過(guò)舉一些有代表性的數(shù)據(jù)來(lái)說(shuō)明問(wèn)題；F3橫向比較。介紹橫向各個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)的區(qū)別、變化和趨勢(shì)；F4縱向比較。介紹縱向各個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)的區(qū)別、變化和趨勢(shì)；F5不需要將每一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)分別說(shuō)明，突出強(qiáng)調(diào)數(shù)據(jù)最大值和最小值；F6對(duì)比時(shí)要總結(jié)出數(shù)據(jù)對(duì)比最懸殊的和最小的。 表格舉例Topic4-4：ThetablebelowshowscarbondioxideemissionsfromtransportinthreeEuropeancount

2、riesin1994and2004Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant.（表格貼不上，大家看附件吧A_A）范文Thegiventableprovidesanoverviewofcarbondioxideemissionsfromfourmaintransportsources（namely，roadtransport，railways，civilaviationandshipping）intheUnitedKingdom，F(xiàn)ranceandGerm

3、anyin1994and2004Germany，althoughhavinghigheremissionsthaneithertheUnitedKingdomorFrancedid，sawtheamountdecreaseslightlyfrom47.2to46.7milliontonnesBycomparison，F(xiàn)rancerecordedanincreaseoffourmilliontonnesfrom34.7millionin1994，whiletheUnitedKingdomhadasmallergrowth,2.5milliontonnesoverthesameperiod（縱向比

4、較三個(gè)國(guó)家1994到2004年間二氧化碳釋放量的整體趨勢(shì)變化。）Inallthethreecountries,roadtransportwasresponsibleforthemajorityofemissions.（橫向?qū)λ膫€(gè)二氧化碳釋放源進(jìn)行比較，點(diǎn)明最大釋放源）IntheUnitedKingdom，roadtransportproducedemissionsupto32.6milliontonnesin2004，2millionmorethantenyearsearlier，whileotherthreetransportsourcesdidnotshowanyremarkablegro

5、wth.（接著對(duì)三個(gè)國(guó)家的釋放源進(jìn)行描述說(shuō)明，說(shuō)明從1994年到2004年間的變化）AsimilarpatternwasseeninFrance，whereroadtransportadded3.6milliontonnestothetotalemissionswithintenyearsGermany，bycontrast，wastheonlycountryofthethreetoexperienceadropinroadtransportemissions（比較德國(guó)和英國(guó)法國(guó)的區(qū)別）Otherthreetransportsourceshadaloweremissionvolumeasw，e

6、llexceptcivilaviation，withtheamountrisingto1.2million（對(duì)其它二氧化碳釋放源進(jìn)行描述，比較10年間的變化）Asshowninthetable，bothUKandFrancefailedtoreducecarbondioxideemissionsfromtransportsourcesduringtheperiod1994to200，4incontrasttothedecreaseinGermanyRoadtransportcontinuedtoaccountforthebiggestsourceofemissions（237words）Top

7、ic4-5：Writeareportforauniversitylecturer，describingtheinformationshownbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast150words（表格貼不上，大家看附件吧A_A）范文：ThetableprovidesinformationaboutthefavoredtouristdestinationsinthecityofLlorenteofdifferentagegroupsEachfigurefordestinationsshowsthepercentageoftouristswhovisitedthedestinati

8、onsontheirlastholidayTherearefouragegroupstwenties，thirties，forties，andover50-year-oldgroup（點(diǎn)明表格提供不同年齡段所喜歡的旅游地點(diǎn)的信息。）ThemostfavoreddestinationforallagegroupswasshoppingcentresThepercentageoftouristswhovisitedtherewasmorethan80,and95oftouristsofthefortiesgroupvisitedthere.Thepercentagesoftouristswhovi

9、sltedartgalleries，zoos，andmuseumsincreasedasthetheageoftouristsincreased.Forexampl，eonly21ofpeopleinthetwentiesvisitedartgalleries，however，81oftheoldestagegroupvisitedthereOntheotherhand，thepercentagesoftouristswhovisitednightclubs，discotheques，andcinemastheatresdecreasedastheageincreasedForexample，

10、87oftouristsintwentiesvisiteddiscotheques，however，only5oftheoldestagegroupdidso.（按大家都喜歡的地點(diǎn)老年人喜歡的地點(diǎn)年輕人喜歡的地點(diǎn)這個(gè)邏輯順序進(jìn)行描述；用ontheotherhand,forexample等連接詞來(lái)串聯(lián)句子。）Tosumup，favoreddestinationsweredifferentforeachagegrou，phowever，almostalltouristsvisitedshoppingcenters(176words)(總結(jié)得出結(jié)論。) 表格常用詞匯noticeable

11、trend明顯趨勢(shì)pronouncedadj.明顯的significantchanges一些較大變化rankn.vt.vi.列為，排列，等級(jí)distributevt.分布，區(qū)別unequallyadv.不相等地averagen.vt.vi.adj.平均correspondingadj.相應(yīng)的，通訊的representvt.闡述，表現(xiàn)overalladj.總體上講inthecaseofadv.在.的情況下intermsof/inrespectof/regarding在.方面 表格常用表達(dá)開頭概述1) Thetableshows(reveals，illustrates，demonst

12、rates，depicts，describes，indicates).2) Accordingtothetable,.3) As(is)showninthetable,.4) Ascanbeseenfromthetable,.5) Figuresstatisticsshow(that).6) Itcanbeseenfromthefiguresstatisticsthat.7) Itisclearfromthefiguresstatisticsthat.8) Itisapparentfromthefiguresstatisticsthat.描述比例1) accountsfor(takesup)2

13、0ofall.占總數(shù)的20。2) Onthetopofthelistis,whichaccountsfor70比例最高的是，占70。3) Atthebottomofthelistis，whichtakesup20only比例最低的是，僅占20。4) Aranksfirst，followedbyBat20andCat15A占比例最大，其次是B占20及C占15。5) Thefigurereachedthehighestlowestpointin.數(shù)據(jù)在時(shí)候達(dá)到最高點(diǎn)(最低點(diǎn))。描述對(duì)比1) Ahasalmost(nearlyabout)overaquarter(halftwiceonethird)

14、asmanystudentsas(asmuchmoneyas)B.A的學(xué)生數(shù)錢(差不多)是B的四分之一一半兩倍三分之一一樣。2) Ahasabout(approximatelyexactlyprecisely)thesamenumber(proportionamount)ofstudents(money)asBA和B的學(xué)生錢數(shù)量比例差不多正好一樣。3) AhassomethingincommonwithB.A與B有一些共同點(diǎn)。4) ThedifferencebetweenAandBliesin.A與B的不同之處在于。描述趨勢(shì)1) Thenumberincreased(/rose)suddenl

15、y(dramatically/rapidly/substantially/considerably/sharply)fromto.數(shù)量從激tf到。2) During1990to2000,therewasasudden(rapid/dramatic/substantial/sharp/considerable)rise(boom)inthenumberofprivatecarsfromto.1990年到2000年間，私人汽車的數(shù)量從急劇增長(zhǎng)到。3) Thetenyearsfrom1990to2000witnessed(/saw)asteadygrowthofprivatecarsfromto.1

16、990年到2000年10年間，私人汽車的數(shù)量從穩(wěn)步增長(zhǎng)到O4) Thenumberofprivatecarsincreased(rose/fell/dropped/declined/decreased)by2%.私人汽車數(shù)量增長(zhǎng)了(或：降低了)20%。5) Thenumberofprivatecarsin2000was5timesmorethanthatin19902000年私人汽車數(shù)量是1990年的5倍。6) Thenumberofprivatecarsroughly(/approximately)doubled(tripled)between1990and20001990年到2000年間，

17、私人汽車數(shù)量大約是原來(lái)的2倍(3倍)。結(jié)尾1) Wecanconcludefromthetablethat.2) Inshort(Inbrief),.3) Inconclusion,.4) Toconclude,itseemsclearthat.5) Fromthetablediagram,wecansee.6) Ascanbeseenfromthecharttablediagram,.7) Itisclear(/apparent)fromthechart(/graphtable)that.表格模板Thetableshows.（簡(jiǎn)要介紹表中呈現(xiàn)的信息。）Accordingtoth

18、efigures，aspeopleageinSomeland,theirsociallivesreduceTeenagersandpeopleintheirtwenties.Peopleintheir30s，40s，50sand60s.（generalstatement點(diǎn)明從數(shù)據(jù)中概括得出的一種趨勢(shì)。）GroupandindividualexercisefollowasimilarpatternPeopleofallagesspendagoodpartoftheirleisuretimeonentertainment.Teenagersandretiredpeople.Foreverybody

19、else,.（generalstatement點(diǎn)明從數(shù)據(jù)中概括得出的另一種趨勢(shì)。）Consequently，itcanbeconcludedthatthereisasignificanttrendtowards.4.5.3曲線圖 解題關(guān)鍵1曲線圖和柱狀圖都是動(dòng)態(tài)圖，解題的切入點(diǎn)在于描述趨勢(shì)。F2在第二段的開頭部分對(duì)整個(gè)曲線進(jìn)行一個(gè)階段式的總分類，使寫作層次清晰，同時(shí)也方便考官閱卷。接下來(lái)再分類描述每個(gè)階段的specifictrend,同時(shí)導(dǎo)入數(shù)據(jù)作為分類的依據(jù)。F3趨勢(shì)說(shuō)明。即，對(duì)曲線的連續(xù)變化進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，如上升、下降、波動(dòng)、持平。以時(shí)間為比較基礎(chǔ)的應(yīng)抓住“變化”：上升、下降、或是

20、波動(dòng)。題中對(duì)兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上的變量進(jìn)行描述時(shí)應(yīng)在此基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行比較，如變量多于兩個(gè)應(yīng)進(jìn)行分類或有側(cè)重的比較。F4極點(diǎn)說(shuō)明。即對(duì)圖表中最高的、最低的點(diǎn)單獨(dú)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明。不以時(shí)間為比較基礎(chǔ)的應(yīng)注意對(duì)極點(diǎn)的描述。F5交點(diǎn)說(shuō)明。即對(duì)圖表當(dāng)中多根曲線的交點(diǎn)進(jìn)行對(duì)比說(shuō)明。F6不要不做任何說(shuō)明就機(jī)械地導(dǎo)入數(shù)據(jù)，這不符合雅思的考試目的。 曲線圖舉例Topic4-6：ThegraphshowstherateofsmokingofmanandwomeninScotlandfrom1960to2000.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainf

21、eaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Youshouldwriteatleast150words（圖貼不上，大家下載附件吧）范文ThelinechartcomparestherateofsmokingofmenandwomeninScotlandfrom1960to2000.Itcanbeclearlyseenthattherateofsmokingforbothmenandwomenwasdecliningandthatfewerwomensmokedduringtheperiod.（點(diǎn)明圖表主要趨勢(shì)，用compare這個(gè)詞揭示下面的文章結(jié)構(gòu)。）In1

22、960,600menineveryl,000smoked.Thisnumberdecreasedgraduallyto500by1974andcontinuedtodecreasesteeplyto250by2000Incontrast,thesmokingrateforwomenwasverylow,only80inevery1,000in1960By1968thisincreasedto170androseagainmoresteeplyto320in1977Therateoffemalesmokersthenremainedstableat320untilin1984，atwhichpo

23、intthefiguresbegantodeclineanddroppedto200by2000（按時(shí)間先后順序描述男性吸煙者的發(fā)展趨勢(shì)，用incontrast連接女性吸煙者，承上啟下，并形成對(duì)比。）Inconclusion，wecanseethattherateofsmokingofmendroppedthroughoutthewholeperiodbutwasalwayshigherthanthatofwomenTherateoffemalesmokersincreaseduntil197，7butthendecreasedfortherestoftheperiod.（176words）（

24、結(jié)尾段中換一種方式描述結(jié)論，與開頭段相互呼應(yīng)。）Topic4-7：Thelinechartbellowshowsseriousviolentcrimelevelsfrom1978to2000intheUSSeriousviolentcrimesincluderape，robbery，aggravatedassaultandhomicide.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant.（圖貼不上，大家下載附件吧）范文Themultiple-linegrap

25、hdemonstratestrendsinviolentcrimelevelsintheUSduringtheperiod1978to2000.Inthefirsttenyears，therewerefluctuationsinthetotalcrimelevel，buttheoveralltrendwasupbeatByabout1989，itrosetoarecordhigh，around4.5offencesperthousandAmerican，shalfthefigurein1980(slightlyover3offences)，thelowesteverrecordedduring

26、thegivenperiodVictimisationsroseandfellatalowerlevelbetween2and2.5offencesoverthesameperio，dwhilecrimesrecordedbypoliceshowedasteadyincrease，reachingitshighestintheyear1994，over1.5offencesinathousandThearrestratewasthelowest，levellingoffbelow0.5offencesper1,000From1988onwards，thetotalviolentcrimelev

27、eldeclinedgradually，sodidvictimisationsreportedtopoliceIn2000，3outofathousandAmericanscommittedviolentcrime，whilehalfasmanyvictimswerereportedtothepoliceAstocrimesrecordedbypoliceandarrestsforviolentcrime，bothdroppedslightlyinthelastfiveyearsandthefigureswere1.5and0.5offencesrespectivelyin2000Overal

28、l，theviolentcrimerate，aswellasvictimisationsreportedtopolice，crimesrecordedandarrestsforviolentcrime，wasnotsubjecttostrongfluctuationsinthefinaltwodecadesofthelastcentur，yalthoughbytheendofthecentury，therewasatrendtowardlowerviolentcrimelevels.（240words） 曲線圖常用詞匯動(dòng)詞九大運(yùn)動(dòng)趨勢(shì)一：表示向上：increase，rise，im

29、prove，grow，ascend，mount，aggrandize，goup,climb,takeoff,jump,shootup暴漲，soar,rocket,skyrocket舉例：人口上升：thenumberofpopulationincreased/ascended/mounted等等。二：表示上升后保持平穩(wěn)：flattenout（下降或升高后變平），leveloff舉例：人口上升后保持平穩(wěn)：thenumberofpopulationmountedandleveledoff.三：表示復(fù)蘇（下降后再上升）：recover，bounceback舉例：人口下降后復(fù)蘇：thenumberofp

30、opulationdecreasedandrecovered.四：表示下降：decrease，decline，descend，drop，fall，godown，comedown，collapse，crash，falloff，slump，plummet，plunge，slide，shrink,dwindle,diminish舉例：人口減少：thenumberofpopulationdecreased/declined.五：表示下降后保持平穩(wěn)：bottomout,flattenout（下降或升高后變平）舉例：人口下降后保持平穩(wěn)：thenumberofpopulationdecreasedandbo

31、ttomedout.六：表示穩(wěn)定或水平：remainsteady/constan，tstaystable,stabilize，stagnateflattenout（下降或升高后變平），leveloff,stayatthesamelevel，besimilarto，thereislittlehardlyanynochange舉例：表示人口數(shù)量保持平穩(wěn)的時(shí)候可以寫:thenumberofpopulationstayedstable./thenumberofpopulationremainedsteady.七：表示波動(dòng)：fluctuate舉例：人口波動(dòng)：thenumberofpopulationfl

32、uctuated.八：表示在底部：reachalowpoint，bottomout，reachthebottom，reachtherock，hitatrough九：表示在頂部：reachapeak，peak，topout，reachthehighestpoint/thetop/thesummit/themos，tpeakin/at，reachthezenith舉例：人口到達(dá)了頂峰：thenumberofpopulationpeaked/reacheditssummit/reacheditszenith.形容詞和副詞變化程度abrupt（ly）（突然），sudden（ly）（突然），dramat

33、ic（ally）（急居U）,drastic（ally）（急居ij）,sharp（ly）（急?。琿uick（ly）（迅速），rapid（ly）（迅速），marked（ly）（顯著），significant（ly）（顯著），considerable（considerably）相當(dāng)），substantial（ly）（相當(dāng)）moderate（ly）（適當(dāng)），gradual（ly）（逐漸），slight（ly）（輕微），slow（ly）（緩慢），steady（steadily）件緩）名詞linechart線圖，curvediagram曲線圖，horizontalaxis橫軸，verticalaxis縱

34、軸，plateau（±升后的穩(wěn)定期），recordhigh歷史高度，recordlow歷史低點(diǎn)，trough（曲線上的）最小值，zenith（最高值），generaltrend,upward/downwardtend增加：anincrease，arise，agrowth，animprovement，anupturn，asurge，anupsurge，anupwardtrend下降：afall，adecrease，adecline，adrop，adownturn，adownturntrend，lowpoint，reduction波動(dòng)：fluctuation介詞一.remainstead

35、y/staystable/leveloff/bottomout/peak/reachitspeak/reachitszenith后面需要使用的是at.舉例:1.人口在500萬(wàn)上保持平穩(wěn):Thenumberofpopulationremainedsteadyat5million.2. 人口在800萬(wàn)時(shí)到達(dá)了頂峰:Thenumberofpopulationpeakedat8million.3. 下降后，人口在400萬(wàn)保持平穩(wěn):Afterdecreasing,thenumberofpopulationbottomedoutat4million.4. 上升后，人口在700萬(wàn)保持平穩(wěn):Aftermoun

36、ting,thenumberofpopulationleveledoffat7million.二.上升/下降后面使用to（到）和by（了）舉例:1. 人口下降到200萬(wàn):numberofpopulationdecreasedto2million.2. 人口下降了200萬(wàn):numberofpopulationdecreasedby2million.3. 人口上升到1000萬(wàn):numberofpopulationincreasedto10million.4. 人口上升了500萬(wàn):numberofpopulationincreasedby5million.三.recover的后面大家需要使用的是fr

37、om舉例:人口在200萬(wàn)時(shí)開始復(fù)蘇:Thenumberofpopulationrecoveredfrom2million.四.fluctuate的后面大家需要連接betweenand舉例:人口在20和100億之間波動(dòng):Thenumberofpopulationfluctuatedbetween2and10billion.曲線圖常用表達(dá)開頭概述常用表達(dá)1) Thelinechartdepictsthechangesinthenumberofovertheperiodfrom2000to2004該曲線圖描述了從2000年到2004年數(shù)量的變化。2) Thechartprovidess

38、omedataregardingthefluctuationsoffrom2000to2004該曲線圖描述了從2000年到2004年的變動(dòng)。3) Thegraph，presentedinthecurvediagram，showsthegeneraltrendin該圖以曲線圖的形式描述了總的趨勢(shì)。4) Thisisalinechartshowing.這是一個(gè)曲線圖，描述了。5) Ascanbeseenfromthegrap，hthetwocurvesshowthefluctuationsof.如圖所示，兩條曲線描述了波動(dòng)的情況。描述曲線常用表達(dá)1)Theinthegraphismeasuredi

39、nunit，seachofwhichisequivalentto.圖表中的以為單位，每單位等于。2) Thehorizontalaxisstandsfor.橫軸代表了。3) Theverticalaxisstandsfor.縱軸代表了。4)Therewasarapid(/dramaticdrasticsharpgreatremarkableslightlittleslow)increase(/risedecreasedropfalldecline)ofAovertheperiodfromto.從到期間A有快速/劇烈急速很大明顯很小幾乎沒(méi)有緩慢地增長(zhǎng)下降。5) Thecurveappearedt

40、oleveloffin1988曲線似乎在1988年穩(wěn)定下來(lái)。6) Thesituationreachedapeak(/highpoint)atin2000.這種情況在2000年到達(dá)一個(gè)頂點(diǎn)，為。7) Thesituationfelldownto(/reached)thebottomin2000這種情況在2000年降到低谷。8) Thefigureshitatroughin2000這些數(shù)字2000年降到最低點(diǎn)。曲線圖模板ThelinechartcomparestherateofAandB.Itcanbeclearlyseenthat.A.Incontrast,B.Inconclus

41、ion,wecanseefromthechartthat.4.5.4 柱圖 解題關(guān)鍵1柱狀圖是動(dòng)態(tài)圖表，切入點(diǎn)是描述趨勢(shì)。2柱狀圖寫作注重比較”找出similarity)和對(duì)比”找出difference),也就是說(shuō)需要橫向總結(jié)所有柱狀圖表的共性特征，也要分別描寫各個(gè)柱子的個(gè)性特征。3有兩種寫作方式：其一是對(duì)不同時(shí)間段內(nèi)的數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行比較，適合于數(shù)據(jù)代表的物體較少且時(shí)間界限明確的情況。另外是對(duì)單獨(dú)數(shù)據(jù)的全程描述，適合于描述數(shù)據(jù)對(duì)象很多且時(shí)間劃定不清晰的情況。 柱圖舉例Topic4-8:Thegraphshowstheincreasinguseofconsumergoods

42、(TVs,washingmachines,etc.)intheUK.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant.(圖貼不上，大家下載附件吧范文：ThebarchartindicatesthepercentageofhouseholdconsumerdurablessoldintheUKfrom1972to1983.Thegoodscanbedividedintothreegroups.（首先介紹了圖表的內(nèi)容，然后點(diǎn)明從圖表中總結(jié)出的大致傾向，為下文展開做

43、好鋪墊。）Firstly，anumberofapplianceswereinahighpercentageofhomesfortheentireperiodTheseincludedTVs，vacuumcleanersandwashingmachinesTVownershipwasthehighest，growingfrom93to98overtheeleven-yearperiod,whilewashingmachineownership，thelowestofthisgroup，increasedfrom66to80（開頭句為中心句。第二句用these來(lái)作承接，下面用最突出的數(shù)據(jù)來(lái)做例子，

44、即highest和lowest。）Thesecondgroupincludedthecentralheatingandtelephoneswhichshowedthemostdramaticrisewithincreasesof27forcentralheatingand35fortelephonesAtthebeginningoftheperiod,theseapplianceshadbeenboughtby37and42ofhomesrespectivelyThefinalgroupwasappliancesthatwereonlyintroducedintothemarketduring

45、theperiodshownVideorecorderwasquicklyacceptedintohouseholds,achieving18ownershipby1983Thedishwasherhadlessimpact,withitsownershipslowlyrisingfrom3to5between1978and1983（第二類、第三類電器現(xiàn)在的情況與以前相比較。比較是寫文章時(shí)常用的修辭手段。videorecorder和thedishwasher之間進(jìn)行比較，用less連接兩個(gè)句子。）Inall，itcanbeseenfromthegraphthatBritishhousehold

46、senjoyedallever-increasingownershipofconsumerdurablesfrom1972to1983（4.5.5 流程圖 解題關(guān)鍵流程圖flowcharts是一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。流程圖的題目基本不會(huì)重復(fù)；流程圖的詞匯隨著圖表不同而變化，很少出現(xiàn)重復(fù)的詞匯。幸運(yùn)的是，流程一年大概三到五次，主要集中在年初年末三個(gè)月。流程圖特點(diǎn)：21流程圖基本不會(huì)出現(xiàn)數(shù)據(jù)，文字信息占主要地位；22流程圖以描述為主，比較的機(jī)會(huì)比圖表題少；23流程圖中出現(xiàn)的信息都需要描述，而普通圖表則不需要描述每一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)；24流程圖的時(shí)態(tài)多比較單一，主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；25流程圖的分段比較靈活，只要

47、不同階段之間的差距很明顯，就可以另起一段。描述流程五大步F1首先說(shuō)明該過(guò)程是做什么工作的，目的是什么。F2準(zhǔn)備工作。F3按時(shí)間過(guò)程先后描述。F4結(jié)果。F5簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)（可有可無(wú)）。描述一個(gè)實(shí)物器具的工作過(guò)程F1實(shí)物是什么，做什么用的。F2基本結(jié)構(gòu)。F3工作過(guò)程。F4簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)。擴(kuò)充內(nèi)容的關(guān)鍵：階段間進(jìn)行比較很多烤鴨們?cè)诹鞒虉D寫作中經(jīng)常遇到字?jǐn)?shù)不夠的問(wèn)題，這是由于描述過(guò)程太平鋪直敘。此時(shí)要注意各個(gè)階段的比較。例4-33：Intwoweeks，thefrywillgrowuptotwoincheslong解析：原句過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，可以增加魚苗和前一階段的比較。改正：Intwoweeks,thefrywillgrowuptotwoincheslong,morethantwicelongerthanitwaswhenhatched大意：在兩周的時(shí)間內(nèi)，魚苗長(zhǎng)到了兩英寸，比剛孵化的時(shí)候長(zhǎng)兩倍還要多。例4-34：Inthesecondstep，workerswillrinsebottleglassofanycolour解析：原句過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，可以增加一點(diǎn)說(shuō)明，譬如說(shuō)關(guān)于第二階段產(chǎn)生的變化和結(jié)果。改正：Inthesecondstep，workerswillrinsebottleglassofanycolourWhiletheglassinthefirstphaseispossiblylife-