廣州市中考英語作文專題復習(一)

1、廣州市中考英語作文專題復習（ 一 ）1、 與專題相關的話題項目：Personal information/ Daily routines/ personal interests/ feelings and moods2、 與話題相關的知識準備：1. 相關單元：七上Unit 2 Daily life, Unit8 Collecting things七下 Unit 8 From hobby to career八下 unit 8 Life in the future2. 語法相關：一般現在時，一般過去時和一般將來時3. 詞語相關：描寫人物外貌特征的形容詞有：tall， short, old, you

2、ng, thin/slim, strong, heavy, beautiful, attractive, handsome, fat/plump, well built 等描寫人物性格特征的形容詞：kind, friendly, smart, outgoing， funny, cute, serious, clever, quiet, lovely, honest, shy,lovely , hard-working, generous, careful, confident, active。描寫興趣愛好時可能用到的單詞或短語有：hobby, favorite , be interested

3、in, be fond of, enjoy /like doing, be keen on ,be friendlyto ,prefert等。4. 經典句型：? I study at Middle School.? I'm in Class Grade .? I am good at? My best subject is? I am keen on? I am interested in? My hobby is doing? I enjoy doing very much.? I think it is to .? I study very hard at school.? I w

4、ant to be in the future.7 / 6? I used to be ? I m interested in ? I often ? I practice very hard.? I am glad ? I want to when I grow up.? My favourite subject is ? You are the candle lighting my future. （你就像一支蠟燭，照亮我的前程）二、經典例題：（2009年廣州市中考考題）你叫李華，你校將開展一個題為“All aboutme的英文寫作活動。請按要求寫一篇英語短文。內容包括：1、你的愛好；2、

5、你的優(yōu)點和缺點；3、用具體事例說明你的某個優(yōu)點或缺點。注意：1、詞數80左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計入詞數）；2、不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。All about meMy name is Li Hua and I ' m from Class 2, Junior 3.解題思路：1 .審題：a.本文共有3個要點b.時態(tài)主要采用一般現在時c.人稱是 I2.可能用到的短語和句型a.你的愛好enjoy /like doing, be friendly to ,prefer 等。 to ? My hobby is doing .? I am keen on .b.你的優(yōu)點ha

6、rd-working, generous, careful, confident, active? My best subject is .? I am good at? My favourite subject isc.你的缺點? My weakest subject is? I am poor at .3 .成文：I like playing football and basketball. I am always playing basketball on P.E. lesson. At my free times, I often play football with my frien

7、ds. We are enjoy ourself. At study, I good at maths, but I poor in English. I can ' t get high grade at my English. I can' t get high gradeam my Englishdo more English exectrise so that I can improve my English. I should do more in my study.點評：整篇文章對要點的把握基本到位，但是拼寫和簡單的語法錯誤較多。部分句子的表達過于 中式4 .檢查思

8、路：完成作文自查表：1 .如果沒有問題的，請在項目后打 M2 .如果有問題，請在項目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改。項目第一次自查第二次自查布局與內容要點人稱時態(tài)、主ilFTt動詞搭配、介詞搭配拼寫錯誤好詞好句分項分檔評分表項目要素給分表內容6分切合題意, 體現要點65. 554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510有所發(fā)揮準確 性語法6-5.554.54-3.53-2.521.510詞匯6分機械性：大 小寫，拼寫 和格式等錯 誤4流暢 性3分結構3-2.52-1.5210.50000自評總分：10.55.參考例文：My name is Li Hua and I ' m from Cl

9、ass 2, Junior 3. I like pop musico Ilected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I ' m not a ve-workrdg student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends, sometimes I watch TV late at

10、 night and play sports a lot even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school. Maybe I should study harder, then I can learn better.（曾力口正能量，給老師好印象0三、練習：假如你叫李芳，昨天從報紙上看到海珠區(qū)要組織一次全民學英語”活動，在暑假要招聘一批英語志愿者的廣告，你想應聘。請你用英語寫一封簡短的書信，根據表格提供信息，表示愿 意為廣州市民服務姓名年齡15身高160cm健康

11、狀況良好性格外向（outgoing）愛好體育運動英語，唱歌，跳舞其他情況E-mail address： lifang1521cn.Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you I volunteer for the Haizhu district.注意：1.詞數80-100個2 .文中不得出現真實的地址和姓名3 .可適當發(fā)揮。解題思路：1 .審題：a.本文共有一個要點b.時態(tài)主要采用c.人稱是2 .可能用到的詞語（寫在要點旁邊）3 .可能用到的句型4 .成文:檢查思

12、路：完成作文自查表：1 .如果沒有問題的，請在項目后打 M2 .如果有問題，請在項目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改項目第一次自查第二次自查布局與內容要點人稱時態(tài)、主ilFTt動詞搭配、介詞搭配拼寫錯誤好詞好句參考例文：Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you I' d likvolunteer for the Haizhu district.My name is Li Fang. I am fifteen, and I am 160 cm. I am an outgoing girl,so I wouldlike to make friends with others . In my free time , I like doing some sports,such as running, swimming, playing table tennis and so on. I think it is good for ourhealth