考研英語寫作——何凱文版09925

1、一、 個(gè)人成功品質(zhì)類話題 第一段： As is vividly depicted above , 完全倒裝，非謂語動(dòng)詞，定語從句，獨(dú)立主格. The topic reflected in the picture has gone a trending topic on some social media, with many users sharing and commenting recently. This picture conceals a deeper and far-reaching meaning than it appears to be. 第二段： Nothing can b

2、e compared with creation or innovation for the personal growth , especially in the times of globalization and knowledge explosion. Put it another way , the spirit of innovation is a key ingredient of the modern recipe to success, either for individuals or for a nation. Due attention to this quality

3、is attached by individuals and even the whole society. People with the spirit of innovation can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status. No one would deny that, creation is truly the fundamental attribute of top performers, wh

4、ich separates the high achievers from the rest of the pack. (112字) 第三段 For example, Jack Ma, capturing the world focuses with initial public offering of Alibaba, ascending to the richest man of China, perfectly illustrates the importance of innovation in realizing personal ambition and generating va

5、lue for the society. Accordingly, we should bear in mind that creation is of great significance to both ourselves and our society. In other words, were there no the spirit of creation, we would never taste the real happiness of the successful life. (75字)二、社會(huì)話題（正面展開) 第二段: The picture tells us that vo

6、lunteer spirit remains to be an integral part in this ever rapid changing modern society. These time-honored virtues sustain the continued social progress and support us to better ourselves in life while the rapid economic growth is starting to upset the old balance and generate new challenges. This

7、 human quality is part and parcel to the social development of our nation and its absence will inevitably inflict great loss on us. There is no doubt that, volunteer spirit, kindling the good nature within us and firing our enthusiasm to create happiness and beauty for the community, is bound to acc

8、elerate the growth of the society. 第三段： To make the world a better place, the positive examples of this kind shall be made known and followed by people in every profession and in every corner. We should bear in mind that volunteer spirit, is of great significance to both ourselves and our society. O

9、nly in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost，I argue. (73字) 二、 社會(huì)話題（負(fù)面展開) 第二段： The picture does reveal that lack of credibility is in large measure detrimental not only to the personal life ,but to

10、 the further development of the whole society. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the lack of credibility being the foremost. Whats more, the public fails to attach due attention to the imp

11、ortance of honesty. It is not hard to notice that without honesty, hardly can individuals or organizations make money, take profits, let alone obtain wealth in the long term, especially in this fiercely competitive modern world. In summary, were there no credibility , we would never taste the real h

12、appiness of the success in the long run. 第三段： Confronting with such an intimidating reality, we are expected to enhance the awareness of consequent damaging effects of ignoring honesty. It is imperative that this negative/unfavorable/evil trend should be harnessed and curbed by the corresponding law

13、s and regulations. It is exaggeration to claim that the world will become a big loving family if good-willing deeds like this become a common practice that happens on a daily. Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the awareness of honesty in our society. We should bea

14、r in mind that honesty is of great significance to both ourselves and our society. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost，I argue. 三、 環(huán)境問題 第二段： The author of this picture is trying to reveal

15、 a well-known but little acted-upon crisis that our environment is gradually destroyed by air pollution and other damaging human activities. Behind the scene presented above, there lurks a host of problem of some higher level. Smog , acid rain , global warming possibly changes climate pattern, affec

16、ts crop production and disrupts wildlife distributions, and leads to the extinction of wild species.Industrial sewage dumped into rivers or lakes pollutes water. People living by the river will probably develop strange diseases. were there no environmental protection, we would never taste the real h

17、appiness of the life. 第三段： Situation being so serious, its high time that the whole society took some effective measures to tackle the problem. To begin with, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of damaging effects that environmental disruption.In addition, it is imperative tha

18、t corresponding laws and regulations be carried out to severely punish those who destroy the environment intentionally. Last but not least,the local government should take more steps, such as closing the factories which produced too much industrial exhaust, planting more trees and develop more high-

19、tech products. Only by taking these concrete and practical steps can we enjoy better health and live a more comfortable life.考研英語寫作三段論：第一段-描述圖畫或圖表 第二段-解釋寓意 第三段-給出評(píng)論第一段：第一句1、As is shown above , 描述圖畫（倒裝）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.報(bào)紙上有一張圖畫引起人們廣泛的關(guān)注。描述圖畫注意： 第一步：

20、尋找圖畫的中心事物，并確定中心事物的位置。 第二部：描述中心事物，可以從動(dòng)作和狀態(tài)兩個(gè)方面來描述。 第三部; 尋找中心事物周圍相關(guān)的事物，并進(jìn)行簡單的描述。模式： 在圖畫中央有-(倒裝)，它-（主謂一致、現(xiàn)在分詞、非限定性定語從句），周圍有-（獨(dú)立主格作狀語）第二句-總結(jié) The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.這幅畫初看好像很簡單，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其膚淺的含義。

21、The authors real purpose is not the fact itself , but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真實(shí)目的不是圖畫本身，而是要引導(dǎo)我們?nèi)ヌ角笤趫D畫背后究竟隱藏著什么。第二段第一句-觀點(diǎn)的提出 (1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主題 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more

22、 obvious .(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有害主題 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主題 is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and open

23、ing-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在過去的十年間，由于改革開放政策的執(zhí)行，我國的經(jīng)濟(jì)有了巨大的發(fā)展，但同時(shí)帶來了一些問題，上面的問題是最嚴(yán)重的。（或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ）萬能觀點(diǎn)： 圖畫主題的重要性Nothing can be compared with·

24、83;····is not only necessary , but also indispensable ······remains to be an integral part in··· 圖畫主題的有害性Nothing is more harmful or damaging.···is not only harmful , but also damaging.···in large measure d

25、etrimental.第二句-進(jìn)一步講解人們的態(tài)度（重視/不重視） (1) The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主題 . (2) The public attach due attention to 重要主題 .give priority to···優(yōu)先考慮··· attach attention to···對(duì)··注意 emphasize the importance of··· 強(qiáng)調(diào)·&#

26、183;·的重要性 stress the fundamental role of··· 強(qiáng)調(diào)···的根本作用第三句-對(duì)主題進(jìn)行展開 （3-4句） By doing so , 十一個(gè)角度平行展開···（也可用科學(xué)論據(jù)法或舉例法）(一)、十一個(gè)萬能理由（角度）物質(zhì)回報(bào)： 主題 can provide (offer) people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable

27、dwellings and handsome automobiles. The industrious and insightful people will never fail to profits from (benefit from) doing 主題.時(shí)間角度 節(jié)約時(shí)間 It can make the most of ones time , chance and technology. 主題(e.g. Learning more western culture) , occupying spare time so constructively , makes a person cont

28、ented , with no time for boredom/wondering and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間As all known , the days of youth should not be friend/idled away and time should be cherished , but (主題 e.g. star worship) wastes hours , lavishes days and even squanders years , which leads us to say kills

29、 an even murders youngsters prime time.效率角度 主題（e .g. Star worship/Addiction to the Internet）makes people weary of other important things , discourages him to learn more , and finally lose their interest to learn , and lead to low grades / low efficiency / underachievement . Ones energy gradually wea

30、rs off and ones thought , creative thinking and exploration has been stifled by doing 主題 .方便和快捷 主題 （e.g. Wide World Web）provides people with up-to-date , concrete and accurate and vivid information . 主題 （e.g. MSN and other instant messengers）can shrink the distance between cities and even continents

31、 ; smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people .安全角度 主題 can secure his food and shelter. 主題 can shield people from various kinds of hazards ranging from injury , robbery , assaults to traffic accidents .身心健康 （主題）can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and

32、such problems , stress , isolation and solitude . By doing (主題) people stay healthy , and therefore prevent heart diseases , hypertension , diabetes or fattiness . (主題) can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge and giving us a new perspective of the outside world .生活?yuàn)蕵?Its a major mea

33、ns of entertainment that relieves ones pressure , boredom , stress and burden .表“受益”的詞組：Broaden ones mind Enrich ones experienceEnhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to ones work It is well received as an instructive mode of entertainment that provides people with not only a bulk of information , bu

34、t a source of imagination as well. It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy , enthusiasm and charm . It adds a special means of entertainment to you seemingly tedious , routine and monotonous life .有助成長和成功（自己和他人） People can obtain financial aids , material support , menta

35、l comfort , or spiritual back from your support . They can draw on experience from you . Through your speeches , instructions or assistance , they can broaden their minds , increase their income . Through your encouragement , they cultivate the spirit of competition , participation and cooperation a

36、nd finally find their own ways to fulfill their pursuit of happiness . Though your assistance , not only can they accumulate wealth , but will also establish their career , fit into society , and even attain social status . People who treat others with love , sincerity , sympathy , enthusiasm , hosp

37、itality or generosity always win respect from others . It dose / doesnt necessarily cultivate talent , confidence , selfworth ,selfreliance and dignity .文化價(jià)值觀 It cannot help people treat the world with benevolence , confidence and tolerance . It can sometimes intensify conflicts and tensions between

38、 nations . It put harmonious human relationship in danger . It cannot promote mutual understanding . It can breach the friendly ties , and widen the gap between people .環(huán)境保護(hù) It means that central authority can set aside more funds to eliminate air pollution , noise pollution , reduce soil erosion or

39、 desertification , prevent the thinness of ozone layers , reduce industrial sewage , and rescue the dwindling tropical jungles . It government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation , thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment .社會(huì)宏觀角度 I

40、t can minimize inflation , economic stagnation , economic recession , unemployment rate . It can maintain social order and reduce crime rate . It means that revolutionize the scientific level of a country , means of co communication and quality of life . It means that the authorities can allocate mo

41、re funds to the construction and quality of infrastructure ranging from kindergartens , hospitals , medical center , museums , school libraries , trains to highways and express ways . It means that people can have equal opportunity to college education , employments , selfrealization and pursuit of

42、material wealth .（二）、科學(xué)論據(jù)法According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Science （CAS），··· According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science (CASS) , ···China Daily interviewed for people from four professions a surgeon , a while collar worker , a carpenter and a farmer . The survey discovers that all of them are of the idea that 主題重要或有害. （三）、舉例子 Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of ··· , with the following one being the foremost . 我們?nèi)祟悮v史