錘煉句子---提高英語寫作能力的基本之路

1、句子不要一味都用主語開頭，接著是句子不要一味都用主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個(gè)狀語。謂語、賓語，最后再加一個(gè)狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首，可以把狀語置于句首，或用分詞作狀語等。或用分詞作狀語等。試比較：試比較：The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day.Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying. 2.The young

2、man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news. 2 2、在整篇文章中、在整篇文章中, ,避免只使用一兩避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式個(gè)句式。在一篇文章中在一篇文章中, ,要靈活運(yùn)用諸如要靈活運(yùn)用諸如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞短語、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞短語、倒裝句、省略句等。倒裝句、省略句等。It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely. A.強(qiáng)調(diào)句強(qiáng)調(diào)句 The dog has saved my Little sister bravely. What we had to do was

3、to stand there，trying to catch the offender. B.主從復(fù)合句主從復(fù)合句 We had to stand there to catch the offender. The driver escaped without stopping，leaving the old man lying on the road. C.分詞短語，由分詞短語，由with或或without引導(dǎo)的短語引導(dǎo)的短語The driver escaped and didnt stop，he left the old man lying on the road. Not until 11

4、：30 did I go to bed . D.倒裝句倒裝句 I went to bed at 11：30. While crossing the street， you should be careful. E.省略句省略句 While you are crossing the street，you should be careful. He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. F.通過分句和合句通過分句和合句 ，增強(qiáng)句子，增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力 1.He stop us an hour a

5、go .He made us catch the next offfender. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing. We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.Early in themorning, we met . 試改變下列句子試改變下列句子,使之變化多樣使之變化多樣,生動(dòng)有力生動(dòng)有力 We met at the school gate and went there together early in the

6、morning . Weak as I am , I will make the effort . Although I am weak, I will make the effort. Singing and laughing, They went back to school. They sang and laughed as they went back to school. He left without saying goodbye. e left and didnt say good-bye. Open , and you.病句病句:Open the door, you can s

7、ee a bed on your left. If you open , you.Hearing the news, I was shocked.病句病句:Hear the news, I was shocked. I was shocked at the news.視聽的時(shí)候,只聽其音量,不要試圖聽明白其內(nèi)容.About on-line friendsMore and more people make on-line friends on the internet. Different people have different Opinions. Some people agree to

8、make on-line friends. It make us can make more friends. They can express their ideas to others. Moreover, it helps them to study foreign language. But some peopleDont think is good to make on-line friends. Because they think it is waste of time and it effects our study. Maybe some people to be cheat

9、ed. We cant know any on-line friends clearly, so not any of them is good.I think make some on-line friends is good for us. But we shouldnt spend too much time on it. Study is more important than it.More and more people make on-line friends on the internet. Nowadays, More and more people make on-line

10、 friends on the internet. Different people have different However, Some people agree to make on-line friends.Some people think it Ok / all right to make on-line friends.It make us can make more friends.It makes it possible for us to make more friends. /It enables us to make more friends.Moreover, it

11、 helps them to study foreign language.Moreover, it helps them study foreign languages. dont think is good to make on-line friendsdont think it good to make on-line friends./ But some people dont agree/ dont think so.We cant know any on-line friends clearly,We are unable to know any on-line friends w

12、ell. so not any of them is good.So be careful! A mans meat may be another mans poison!I think make some on-line friends is good for us.I think making some on-line friends is good for us.Study is more important than it.As a student, study is the most important thing. Rember, study always comes first.

13、q 完成句子完成句子1. She bought a big sofa,_(serve)(它也可以當(dāng)床用它也可以當(dāng)床用).which could also be served as a bed.2.It takes about two hours to get to their office building,_ (allow)(考慮到路上可能遇到交通耽擱考慮到路上可能遇到交通耽擱).allowing for possible traffic delays.3.Though it looked like rain this morning,_ (turn out)(結(jié)果卻是晴天結(jié)果卻是晴天).I

14、t has turned out to be a fine day.4.The audiences _ (get)(變得慌亂起來變得慌亂起來) about the fire in the theatre.got into a panic.5 He_ (witness)(作證說看作證說看見見) the man enter the shop.witnessed to have seen.6.He drove his car slowly _(avoid)(以免撞著行人或被撞以免撞著行人或被撞).to avoid hitting passengers or being hit.7. _(give)(多給我們一點(diǎn)時(shí)多給我們一點(diǎn)時(shí)間間), we could do much better.given more time8._ (difference)(無所謂無所謂) whether he comes or not.It makes no difference.9.Do y