2020年12月英語六級(jí)寫作ppt課件

1、2019年12月份英語六級(jí)考試真題writingThe Way to SuccessDirection:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe. you should wri

2、te at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.v此次作文操作和以前一樣，緣由景象類文章，以前的老套路也能套上。但不同在于，考生必需事先看懂考卷中的文字，林肯的那一段話?！肮び破涫?，必先利其器。簡言之，良好的預(yù)備是勝利的根底。假設(shè)能在文中表達(dá)preparation和success這兩個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞，要點(diǎn)就根本表達(dá)完好了。v從上午四級(jí)到下午六級(jí)，我們可以明確的發(fā)現(xiàn)，作文寫作方法用老的套路和步驟完全可行。第一段，表述勝利和預(yù)備的重要性；第二段，分析緣由第一、第二、第三；第三段，總結(jié)。但假設(shè)考生讀不懂提綱所示，那么就費(fèi)事了。v所以，重點(diǎn)是看懂標(biāo)題，并且能

3、把標(biāo)題解釋成一到兩個(gè)簡單的關(guān)鍵詞。中文了解力很重要。能了解，行文就是模板。不能了解，模板就是廢物。就這次作文來看，四六級(jí)作文在借用國際知名考試的出題方式。也再次驗(yàn)證了其科學(xué)性。 Everyone tries to achieve success in his career. However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails. Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other i

4、s easily disappointed or stops halfway. 對(duì)比提出問題范文范文1 Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success (中心觀念). A man of solid preparation and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a

5、 man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty(簡練的言語概括舉例). Diligence means steadiness in ones work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Li

6、fe is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything. I believe that where there is a preparation there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts (照應(yīng)上文).范文范文2 Success is something everyone looks for,

7、 longs for and dies for (排比句). But have you ever considered what success is? (提出問題) Some may hold that success means one has beautiful life, like pretty house, cool cars and great power. Its indeed one way to define success. But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing (主旨句). To

8、 achieve this kind of success, one has to bear in mind three essential prerequisites, namely knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream (主旨句，新穎). In other words, they are “what “why and “how of success

9、. Its really luckily good for one, especially for the younger generation of today to find their dreams, follow them and in the end, make them come true and become successful (論據(jù)). Although its never easy to succeed, progressing with the strong will and diligence towards the right direction, youll be

10、 the one (總結(jié)).【作文解析】【作文解析】這是一篇議論文。作者首先提出問題“what is success?，但并沒有在這個(gè)問題上著更多的筆墨，而是直接引出了本人的觀念：success is doing something one really feels like doing. 立意較為新穎的地方。隨后在第二段對(duì)這種勝利背后的三種必要條件做出了論述。整體看，行文流暢，用語規(guī)范地道。本篇亮點(diǎn)：1. 排比詞組或句子的運(yùn)用： Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for. namely, knowing w

11、here your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream.2. bear in mind3. lie in4. strong will to pursue your interest 本文有待提高之處：1. 文中人稱有些混亂。有些運(yùn)用第二人稱代指讀者，有些又以第三人稱指代，建議一致。2. 構(gòu)造上，普通情況下我們建議考生運(yùn)用典型的“三段式，即，提出問題、分析問題、處理問題。該作者根本上遵照了

12、這個(gè)原那么，但第三段更多的卻是反復(fù)了第二段的中心思想，并沒有起到很好的總結(jié)作用。假設(shè)第三段，作者可以與第一段的“勝利定義相呼應(yīng)，例如：即使沒有這些身外之物，但心靈上的滿足，夢(mèng)想的實(shí)現(xiàn)，才是我心中勝利的本質(zhì)。整體看，文章在言語表達(dá)和立意上還不錯(cuò)。但在文章構(gòu)造上有些松散，有待提高。范文范文3 The famous American inventor Thomas Edison once said, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. (名言) And here comes our ques

13、tion, what is the way to success? (問題) A strong will and great efforts are the most essential two keys to the door of success (主旨句-中心觀念). Why do people fail to achieve their goal? The reason is that most of them give up halfway due to their lack of a strong will once they encounter any difficulty (反

14、面論述). A man of a strong will always sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be (正面論述). Would Thomas Edison be such a great man in history if he had done nothing but possessing a strong will? We are all familiar with his story that he had tried one thousand kinds of materials before he final

15、ly made his great bulb light up. Without hard effort, Edison might have been a nobody. Without efforts, no one can succeed(排比句). To sum up, a strong will and great efforts can help one open up the way to success(總結(jié)全文,與第一段中心觀念呼應(yīng)). Where there is a will with efforts, there is a way (名言改動(dòng)-亮點(diǎn)).【作文解析】 此次

16、六級(jí)考試作文的話題依然是老生常談，即通往勝利的道路，置信很多考生對(duì)此并不陌生，背過范文的同窗寫起來一定也是得心應(yīng)手。 該范文段落構(gòu)造明晰，闡釋說理也足以讓人服氣，是一篇不錯(cuò)的作文。開篇作者經(jīng)過援用愛迪生關(guān)于天才的一句名言來引出問題，吸引讀者留意，引起讀者的思索。緊隨其后，作者就開門見山地亮出了本人的觀念：只需堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志和不懈的努力才干翻開勝利的大門。 第二段，作者同樣以一個(gè)問題來引領(lǐng)全段，引發(fā)思索。然后經(jīng)過對(duì)比不勝利和最終勝利的人的不同表現(xiàn)，來闡釋堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志對(duì)獲得勝利的重要作用。 第三段，作者進(jìn)一步闡釋“僅有堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志，沒有真實(shí)的努力，也能勝利嗎？同樣是先發(fā)問，然后舉了愛迪生的事例，來證明答案

17、能否認(rèn)的。舉名人的例子，而非個(gè)人的實(shí)例來作為文章的論據(jù)才更有壓服力，這也是這篇作文的高明之處。 最后一段，作者先以第一句話進(jìn)展了總結(jié)，然后為了加強(qiáng)作文結(jié)尾的力度，作者還對(duì)名言“Where there is a will, there is way進(jìn)展了改編，換成了本人的觀念，為我所用，這也是本篇范文的一個(gè)兩點(diǎn)之處。留意，寫作文時(shí)對(duì)名言進(jìn)展恰當(dāng)?shù)馗木?，不僅能表達(dá)幽默創(chuàng)新的一面，同樣也表達(dá)了作者不錯(cuò)的文字駕馭技巧，考官也是很歡迎這樣的文章的。2019年12月大學(xué)英語4級(jí)作文n本次四級(jí)作文討論的話題是勝利與毅力之間的關(guān)系，話題不算新，普通考生對(duì)此都比較熟習(xí)，所以對(duì)考生來說難度不大。寫好這篇作文，需求

18、抓住兩點(diǎn)，一是緊跟標(biāo)題要求，即對(duì)上述幽默性的話語做出評(píng)論，二是在評(píng)論的根底上要亮出本人的觀念。 范文開頭第一句即一針見血地對(duì)上述幽默性話語做出總結(jié)性概括，即戒煙看似簡單實(shí)那么很難，隨后指出該話語本質(zhì)上是一個(gè)悖論，并且以一個(gè)“水滴石穿的俗語來指出困難所在，這句也是本文的一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，表達(dá)作者在西方俗語方面豐富的知識(shí)貯藏。第二段作者那么進(jìn)一步深化分析該話語，指出做某事在短期看來很容易，長期來看，恰恰相反，人們做事的結(jié)果也因此總是失敗，緣由那么在最后一句點(diǎn)出：缺乏毅力。第三段作者進(jìn)一步給出了本人的觀念，通知大家如何防止墮入這種兩難境地：首要條件即需求堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志和長期的堅(jiān)持。最后再以艾默生的一句名言 “沒

19、人可以騙他遠(yuǎn)離他最終的勝利，除非他本人成認(rèn)失敗來總結(jié)全文，切中主題，鏗鏘有力。Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillAs we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. There is something provoking and interesting in this paradox, just because sword does not wear the stone as dripping water does.The ab