話題寫作04 旅行交通篇ppt課件

1、書面表達話題寫作四 游覽交通篇;【話題點睛】 旅游交通包含兩個方面的話題:旅游和交通。旅游話題通常涉及景點引見、旅游方案、行程安排、游記等;交通話題通常涉及個人出行方式、各種交通方式的比較、交通平安、交通與環(huán)保的關(guān)系等。有的中考作文會同時涉及這兩個話題。;典例分析;留意(1)短文必需包含記錄表中的信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揚;(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名、姓名等信息;(3)詞數(shù): 80100,所給的文章開頭僅供選擇,不計入總詞數(shù)。In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countrysi

2、de or to the city. 【思緒點撥】1.要點提煉:文章主要圍繞對“A trip to the countryside or to the city展開,引見兩者的不同特點,并寫出小組的選擇與理由。表中要點已列出,詳細如下:(1)開門見山:交代小組討論的話題; (2)分開論述:城市或鄉(xiāng)村各自的優(yōu)缺陷;(3)最后點題:權(quán)衡利弊,做出選擇。2.確定時態(tài):普通如今時;【寫作架構(gòu)】;【根底寫作】.寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補全以下各句。)1.到鄉(xiāng)村郊游他可以經(jīng)過釣魚或游泳來放松他本人。(relax oneself)Taking a trip to the countryside can by

3、or . 2.在大商廈里來回走也是很激動人心的。 (Its+adj. to do sth.)Its very back and forth in large malls. 3.我以為,我喜歡到鄉(xiāng)村旅游勝于到城市旅游。(prefer to)In my opinion, I a trip to the countryside a trip to the city. relax yourselffishingswimmingexciting to travelpreferto;.句子升格(按括號中的要求完成句子。)1.Youre from the countryside. A trip to the

4、 city is better. (用if 改為復(fù)合句)2.You can lie under the stars, enjoying the quiet night. (改為用and 銜接的簡單句) 3.Traveling can not only help us see the best sights. Traveling can broaden our mind. (用not onlybut also改寫句子)If youre from the countryside, a trip to the city is better.You can lie under the stars an

5、d enjoy the quiet night.Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also broaden our mind. ;【連句成文】In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city. Taking a trip to the countryside can relax you by fishing or swimming. And the fresh

6、 air might be your favourite. Yet, you might not have many choices in transportation. Of course, a trip to the city also has its advantages and disadvantages. If you like shopping, its very exciting to travel back and forth in large malls. You can visit museums to broaden your mind. Nevertheless suc

7、h a trip might cost much. And the traffic jam might let you down. If youre from the countryside, a trip to the city is better. There, youll learn what youve never thought of. In my opinion, a trip to the countryside is better. There, you can lie under the stars, enjoying the quiet night.;拓展積累【相關(guān)短語】e

8、njoy the sunshine 享用陽光; one of the biggest mountains 最大的山之一; have a picnic 野餐; as everyone knows 眾所周知; be famous for 因出名; have a good trip 旅途愉快; have fun doing sth. 做某事很有趣; have a good time 玩得愉快【參考諺語】1.Travel broadens the mind.旅游開闊思想。2.He who travels far knows more.遠行者見識廣。3.Read ten thousand books a

9、nd travel ten thousand miles.讀萬卷書,行萬里路。;【旅途閱歷】1.Yangzhou dishes may be one of the reasons why so many people are attracted by the city.2.When we stayed there, we got lots of help from local people. They were very friendly to us.3.Only in this way can you enjoy your summer holiday happily.4.It is sai

10、d that Hawaii is more beautiful than any other place in the world.【旅途收獲】1.Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also broaden our eyes to the outside world.2.Traveling is like a story. We can make friends with others and get help and love from others.3.Traveling is like a war.;實戰(zhàn)演練A假

11、設(shè)他是Lingling, 學(xué)校根據(jù)下表中新西蘭來溫暑期交流師生的志愿,決議安排他們?nèi)?00公里外的許村玩耍一天。但自行車來回路程需求8-9小時, 權(quán)衡利弊,需調(diào)整這項內(nèi)容,請他發(fā)郵件給對方帶隊教師 Mr. Black 做好闡明、溝通任務(wù)。;要求(1)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息;(2)詞數(shù):110 左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。Dear Mr. Black,Im Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your pre

12、ferences, but Im afraid well have to make some changes._Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes.Lingling;One possible version:Dear Mr. Black, Im Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preferences, but Im afraid well have to make s

13、ome changes. Well visit a mountain village called Xucun, which is very famous for its old houses, fantastic sights and delicious food. Im sure you will like it. However, it will take us about 8 to 9 hours to go and come back by bike. Even if we set out at 7:00 a.m., well get there at about 11:30. Go

14、ing around the beautiful, cultural places, including some old houses all with a history of over 500 years, will take us at least 2 to 3 hours. Having lunch (local food and drinks) takes another hour. Whats more, its very hot here in summer. So we think taking a bus there will be a much better choice

15、. Im looking forward to your reply. Best wishes.Lingling;B2021揚州 為了進一步提升揚州國際文化旅游名城新籠統(tǒng),我市正在舉行中學(xué)生英語導(dǎo)游大賽。請根據(jù)以下流程圖提示完成一篇參賽導(dǎo)游詞。參考詞匯Slender West Lake瘦西湖Five-pavilion Bridge五亭橋He Garden何園double-path corridor復(fù)道回廊要求(1)必需包括提示中的一切信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揚;(2)詞數(shù):100左右(開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));(3)不得運用真實姓名、校名和地名等。;Ladies and gentlemen

16、, Welcome to Yangzhou! Im your tour guide. Yangzhou, my hometown, lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River._I hope youll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.;One possible version:Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to Yangzhou! Im your tour guide. Yangzhou, my hometown, lies between the Huai River

17、and the Yangtze River. Yangzhou has a history of over 2,500 years. There are many interesting places to visit, such as Slender West Lake, Five-pavilion Bridge, He Garden, double-path corridor and China Paper-cutting Museum. Slender West Lake is a national park in Yangzhou City. The Five-pavilion Bridge is the symbol of the Slender West Lake. He Garden is the best-known private garden of the late Qing Dynasty. China Paper-cutti