英文作文寫作常見錯誤分析

1、附錄 寫作練習答案、寫作常見錯誤分析一、語法錯誤(一)句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤1 主從句疊置1)There are more and more students who like to use the computer. / More and more students like to use thecomputer.2)There are still many problems that should be noted and resolved. / Many problems still should be noted andresolved.2 簡單句疊置I like chatting on lin

2、e very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much.I go to the net bar almost every weekend.3 從句疊置It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, computersplay an important role in many fields of ou

3、r life.4 句子成分缺失If we work hard, we will surely be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.5 語序錯誤1)Why do college students spend more and more time on the computer?1)I often wonder where they have got their money.(二)動詞形式錯誤1時態(tài)錯誤Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in

4、 the future.2語態(tài)形式錯誤1)I have been excited several days at the news that you will come here.2)Most of the students are satisfied with the service in the dining hall.3單復數(shù)形式錯誤1) Wise men seek opportunities rather than wait for them. / A wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait forthem.2)Some people

5、 are afraid that computers may control men in the future.1 / 154非謂語動詞形式錯誤1) Let me say“hello”tonyboeuhalf of everyone.2)Doing exercise in the morning is good for ones health.3)Having studied in our school for 3 years, I find that the canteen service has changed a lot.(三) 代詞錯誤1) We can use computers

6、in doing everything we like.2) A college student should be able to do his washing on his own.(四) 冠詞錯誤1) A/The horse is a useful animal.2) The exam will be held in December, 2004.(五) 詞性錯誤1)I wish you can consider my suggestions.2)If a person wants to succeed, he must learn to endure sufferings and se

7、tbacks.二、用詞錯誤1)Students must know how to operate a computer. / Students must know how to work on a computer.2)People can be exposed to many new things on the Internet. / People can learn many new things onthe Internet.3)The purpose of this letter is to express some opinions on the service in the din

8、ing hall. / The purpose ofthis letter is to make some complaints about the service in the dining hall.三、表達習慣錯誤1)What generated so large a change? / Why is there so large a change?2)Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 computer. / Now you can buy a P4 computer for6000 yuan.3)In a room often li

9、ve 6-8 students.4)I think there are three reasons for this great change.5)The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.6)The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / Thisis because some people want to earn plenty of money without wo

10、rking hard.四、標點符號及大小寫錯誤1)However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among alluniversities.2)The man was racing down the street because he was late for the class.3)At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much.4)My favorite sports are

11、 swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis.5)The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.五、冠詞用法講練EXERCISE 1A. 1. a2. an3. an4. an2 / 152. The (steam-engine); the4. x; the; x; a6. a; the; x; x5. an6. an7. aB. 1. a new office building3. an American scientist5. an Indian stamp7. a

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