怎樣給作文潤(rùn)色2014

1、高考英語(yǔ)科考試說(shuō)明中第五檔（2125分）的給分范圍和要求 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯； 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡量使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力； 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。 全、準(zhǔn)、順 、雅怎樣給作文潤(rùn)色 合理的想象和發(fā)揮 選詞特色 句式的多樣 關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用 1. 多實(shí)少虛多實(shí)少虛 :A A nicenice person person2. 短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先：短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先：I cannot bearbear it.We wantwant peace. generous, humorous, smart,

2、 gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable, considerate,promisingI cannot put up with it.We are looking forward to peace. 棄舊取新棄舊取新:There are many trees in the street.There are many trees in the street. There is a clean river in the city1. 1. 較高級(jí)詞匯較高級(jí)詞匯Many trees line the street.A clean river winds through th

3、e city.復(fù)雜多樣的句式 復(fù)合句 倒裝句 強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu) 非謂語(yǔ) 感嘆句 虛擬語(yǔ)氣 獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)、反意問(wèn)句、并列句、名言、警句等 豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises 1)(Exercises 1)1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用（使用V-ingV-ing形式）形式）. .2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.2. To his surprise, the

4、little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）（使用名詞性從句）3. 3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用用withwith結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)) ) , please give me an e-mail. is that the little girl knows so many things.On his arrivingWhat surprises himHe came in , with a baby in

5、 his arms.4.(4.(由于不知道他的電話，他沒(méi)法跟由于不知道他的電話，他沒(méi)法跟MaryMary聯(lián)系聯(lián)系)( )(用用非謂語(yǔ)）非謂語(yǔ)） 5. 5. He did not know what had happened until he had He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) ) 6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 6. Tom and

6、Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒裝）使用倒裝）It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that ，he cant get in touch with Tom Not knowing his telephone number he knew what had happened.豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises 2)(Exercises 2)Tom likes singing songs, Mary.so does7. She walked out of the lab and many

7、 students 7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (followed her. (使用過(guò)去分詞使用過(guò)去分詞) )8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使（使用句型結(jié)構(gòu)）用句型結(jié)構(gòu)）9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to 9. Because the weather is fine, ma

8、ny people went to climb the Western Hills. climb the Western Hills. （使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）（使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)） by many students, she walked out of the lab. , a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. he spoke, excited he felt.豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises 3)(Exercises 3)FollowedThe more the moreThe weather bei

9、ng fine關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用（1）表時(shí)間的. （2）表順序及過(guò)程的：first(ly), first of all, second(ly), at first, then, next, at last, finally, etc. （3）表轉(zhuǎn)折的：but, yet, and yet, instead, however, although, though, otherwise, or else, in spite of, etc.（4）表結(jié)果的：thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, (un)fortunately, etc.

10、（5）表強(qiáng)調(diào)的：first of all, above all. indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, at least, at most, etc. 6) 表遞進(jìn)的：besides, whats more, in addition, even, once more, what was worse, to make things worse, etc.（7）表解釋或說(shuō)明的：in other words, that is, that is to say, namely, for example, actually, and so on, such as, personally, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, according to this, for this reason, etc.（8）表比較的：just like, just as, in the same way, more or less, on the contrary, on o