2016年12月份四級作文真題解析及范文

1、【題目一】Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You

2、 should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.【題目一參考范文】For undergraduates college students, deciding what to do upon graduation can be a tough decision to say the least. From my point of view, I prefer to pursuing postgraduate students. My choice can be attributed to the following two

3、driving forces.For one thing, I want to continue my studies for their own sake because I love what I am doing. In fact, having a passion for my subject is possibly the best reason to go into postgraduate education. For another thing, entering into a postgraduate school, I can improve my job prospect

4、s. Specializing at postgraduate level can make you a stronger job applicant.Actually, when in comes time for university graduates to decide their next step in life, there is no on right or wrong choice for everyone. Rather, each students must reach his or her own conclusion.【參考譯文】對于本科生來說，決定畢業(yè)工作之后做什么

5、毫不夸張的說是一個(gè)艱難的決定。從我個(gè)人而言，我更喜歡讀研。以下兩點(diǎn)原因可以解釋我的選擇。一方面， 我是為了想學(xué)習(xí)而打算繼續(xù)學(xué)業(yè)因?yàn)槲覠釔壅谧龅氖虑?。事?shí)上，熱愛學(xué)科可能是讀研最好的理由。另一方面，通過讀研，我們可以提高就業(yè)前景。研究生層次的專業(yè)學(xué)習(xí)可以增強(qiáng)你的技能，使你成為強(qiáng)有力的求職者。事實(shí)上，大學(xué)畢業(yè)之際，每個(gè)人在決定人生中的下一步時(shí)無所謂對和錯。更恰當(dāng)?shù)恼f，每個(gè)學(xué)生都必須做出自己的選擇。【范文解析】一、寫作思路：這次的四級作文再次考了和大學(xué)生生活極為緊密的話題大學(xué)畢業(yè)后的選擇：工作還是讀研，這是每個(gè)大學(xué)畢業(yè)生都會面臨的選擇題。構(gòu)思本題可以從以下思路入手，首先開篇明確自己的選擇；中間段落

6、具體闡述自己做出這樣選擇的原因，例如參考范文做出的選擇是讀研，中間短路具體闡釋之所以做出讀研選擇的原因是由于興趣和未來的工作前景。結(jié)尾段說明無論哪一種選擇本身并無對錯之分。二、亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)：1. upon graduation 在畢業(yè)之時(shí)，upon后面加有動態(tài)含義的名詞，表示在的時(shí)候；類似用法還有on，例如on my arrival 當(dāng)我到達(dá)的時(shí)候2. a tough decision 艱難的決定3. A can be attributed to B A可以被歸因于B4. driving forces 動因5. continue my studies for their own sake 為了學(xué)習(xí)

7、而學(xué)習(xí)6. a stronger job applicant 強(qiáng)有力的求職者7. reach ones own conclusion 做出自己的決定【題目二】Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. You are to make a choice be

8、tween the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.【題目二參考范文】Facing the two options, I will choose to take a job in a company. There are mainly two reasons for my choice.On one hand, I am eager to apply what Ive learned

9、 to practice since I have got so many years schooling. Moreover, I am somewhat tired of the “ivory tower” life and ready for the “real world” life, for I assume that I can learn more from getting in touch with society. On the other hand, my family needs my financial support, because my parents are g

10、etting older and older and making less and less. Though it doesnt take much to pursue my further study, I cannot support my parents financially if I choose to go to a graduate school.To sum up, to take a job in a company meets my desire of learning from practice and support my parents financially, w

11、hich is a better choice for me.【題目二參考譯文】面對兩個(gè)選擇，我會選擇去公司工作。作出這個(gè)選擇，主要有兩個(gè)原因。一方面，因?yàn)榻邮芰诉@么多年的學(xué)校教育，我急于把自己的所學(xué)運(yùn)用到實(shí)踐中。另外，我有些厭倦象牙塔生活了，準(zhǔn)備迎接現(xiàn)實(shí)生活，因?yàn)槲艺J(rèn)為從接觸社會中會學(xué)到更多。另一方面，我的家庭需要我的經(jīng)濟(jì)支持嗎，因?yàn)槲业母改缸兊迷絹碓嚼?，掙得越來越少。雖然繼續(xù)學(xué)業(yè)并不會花多少錢，但是如果我去讀研究生我就不能從經(jīng)濟(jì)上支持我的父母?？傊?，在公司工作，既滿足我從實(shí)踐中學(xué)習(xí)的愿望，也滿足我從經(jīng)濟(jì)上支持我的父母的愿望，對我來說是一個(gè)更好的選擇。【題目二真題解析】這道作文題目，是一道很好寫的題目，跟大學(xué)生息息相關(guān)。在寫作時(shí)，我們只需要選擇其中