2015年高考英語書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及各檔次作文示例

1、2015年高考英語書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及各檔次作文示例2015年高考英語全國I卷寫作閱卷評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及各檔次作文示例領(lǐng)會(huì)高考閱卷要求，有效指導(dǎo)學(xué)生高考寫作備考    【作文題】假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國文化”欄目擬刊登美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點(diǎn)如下：    1.欄目介紹;     2. 稿件內(nèi)容;     3. 稿件長度：約 400 詞;    4. 交稿日期：6 月 28 日前。   

2、; 注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Peter,     Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper._2015年普通高考評卷英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分總則：    1、本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。    2、評分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定是否達(dá)到及格線（15分），然后確定其所屬的具體檔次，以該檔次的要求來衡量，最后給分

3、。其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。    3、詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。    4、評分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。    5、若缺少要點(diǎn)，分?jǐn)?shù)降一檔處理。    6、拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。    7、書寫較差以至于影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。評分細(xì)則：

4、    優(yōu)秀（22-25）：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富，行文流暢，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力，允許有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。    良好（18-21）：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容較充實(shí)，行文較流暢，語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，但基本不影響意思表達(dá)。    一般（15-17）：緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤已影響了部分意思的表達(dá)，但多數(shù)句子基本正確；基本達(dá)到預(yù)期寫作目的。    較差（11-14）：要點(diǎn)不全，內(nèi)容不完整，行文不夠連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤較多

5、，半數(shù)句子基本正確。    差（6-10）：內(nèi)容混亂，或主要內(nèi)容偏離主題，尚能夠?qū)懗錾贁?shù)與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的可讀句。    極差（0-5）：只能寫出與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的詞語，沒有有效信息；抄寫其他文章，或只是寫出與作文無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。高考命題組提供的參考范文：Dear Peter,     Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.     The “Foreign Cultures” sec

6、tion in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend

7、 their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?     Im looking forward to hearing from you. （95words）  

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12、;          Li Hua    【點(diǎn)評】該參考范文語言簡練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，但從高考考場作文考慮應(yīng)提示學(xué)生詞數(shù)再增加一些，句式可再豐富一些，這樣才更有利于得高分。各檔次打分參考范文示例： 1.閱卷組確定的24分作文范例Dear Peter,     Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.   &#

13、160; Recently a refreshing program has been established in our schools English newspaper which is named “The Foreign Culture”. Im inclined to invite you to write an article. The importance concerning this issue is listed as follows.    This program is aiming to introduce the festivals

14、 and habits in America, especially including the life of students in high school. Consequently, I intend to inquest you to write some matters. Such as what the individuals tend to do when significant events are forthcoming. Additionally, its universally acknowledged that American students have extre

15、mely active thoughts. Considering that how they study in school is what we indeed intend to attain.    Whats more, it must be beared in mind that the articles are supposed to be around 400 words. Meanwhile, I anticipate you can finish it before 28th, June.    Im looking

16、 forward to your conclusive reply. (140 words) 2. 閱卷組確定的22分作文范例Dear Peter,     Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.     It will be put on the part of Foreign Culture, which aims to introduce many other countries culture. Th

17、is article needs to be concerned with America festival custom and middle school students life. As you are American student, its certain that you can teach us a large amount of knowledge about it. As is known to all, only if we learn American Culture well, can we truly understand the country. Therefo

18、re, Id appreciate it if you write article.    There are some requirements below. The essay is around 400 words. Besides, it has to be sent before June, the 28th. If you have other questions, please write to me as soon as possible.(112 words)3. 閱卷組確定的18分作文范例Dear Peter,   

19、0; Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.     We have an area named “Foreign Culture”. Its used to introduce Americas customs and students daily life. Could you write an essay for me.Initially please write some traditional festivals to enlarge our ho

20、rizons. Some interesting things in your school life is also fine. Moreover, please write more than 400 words. So we can edidate is better. Eventually, the deadline is 6,28 because our work must be finished in these days. Dont be late please？    Here are my words. Thanks for attention.

21、 Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(92 words)4. 閱卷組確定的15分作文范例Dear Peter,     Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.     The English newspaper have a “foreign culture” program. If your article is written well, i

22、t will be select in newspaper. The article is about American festivals and customs, besides inclouded media school students life. There is no doubt that you can make it. Because you is familiar with them. In opinion, you can also increase students how to study. Most importantly, your article can hel

23、p us broaden horizon and let us know more American culture.    You need to write about 400 words. Last but not least, you must hand in it before June, 28th.    Im looking forward to your early reply.(101 words)5. 閱卷組確定的12分作文范例Dear Peter,     Id like to as

24、k you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.     The English newspaper has a show which is made describes for American Traditional Day Culture and middle school students school life.    I think you had much knowledge about them. Therefore, I want to that

25、 you could write a paragraph for them. You can write about 400 words. In addition, the paragraph should finished and put on before June, 28th.    I believe you are able to do well.    Im looking forward to your information.    Thanks about your favour.(77 words)6. 閱卷組確定的9分作文范例Dear Peter,     Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.     The newspapers “Foreign Culture” part plan add an article of product the USAs festival and students life. Then, I tell some about it.