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1、.1 說明文說明文地點(diǎn)介紹地點(diǎn)介紹.2How tointroduce a place?.3 Placeocationrea opulation istorylimatelocal pr scenery地方介紹類寫作包含：地方介紹類寫作包含：laphc&ulturecoductsconomyetransportation.4 地方介紹地方介紹:內(nèi)容包括內(nèi)容包括介紹某個(gè)地方的位置、人口、介紹某個(gè)地方的位置、人口、面積、歷史與文化、交通、經(jīng)濟(jì)、氣候、面積、歷史與文化、交通、經(jīng)濟(jì)、氣候、特產(chǎn)、風(fēng)景等。特產(chǎn)、風(fēng)景等。時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)：人稱：人稱：一般用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。一般用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第三人稱。第三人稱。.5 介

2、紹介紹地理位置地理位置常用的短語和句型：常用的短語和句型： 1) Sp. is located in the east/west/south/north/ center/southeast/northwest of 2) Sp. lies in the east/west/south/north/center/ southeast/northwest of 3) Sp. stands at the foot of/on the top of Located in the east/west/south/north/ southeast/northwest of , Sp.6介紹介紹面積面積常用

3、的短語和句型：常用的短語和句型： 1)The area of + Sp. is square kilometers. 2) Sp. covers/has an area of.square kilometers 3) Sp. is a city/country with an area ofsquare kilometers 4) Sp. consists of/is made up of.7 1) Sp. has a population of 2) Sp. is a city/country with a population of介紹介紹人口人口常用的短語和句型：常用的短語和句型：.8_

4、 the east of Asia, China _ 9.6 million squarekilometers _1.3 billion.Location: in the east of AsiaArea: 9.6 million KPopulation: 1.3 billionLocated/Lying incovers/has an area ofwith a population of.9Location + area + populationLocated in , Sp. covers an area of with apopulation of .10介紹介紹歷史歷史常用的短語和句

5、型：常用的短語和句型：1) Sp. has/owns a long history of 2) Sp. is a city/country with a long history ofHistory + symbol + cultureWith a history of , Sp. , whose symbol is , is famous for/as .11History: over 4,000 yearsSymbol: Five GoatsCulture: Lingnan CultureGuangzhou_over 4,000 years, Guangzhou, _ is the “Fi

6、ve Goats”, _ Lingnan Culture.With a history ofwhose symbolis famous for.12介紹介紹氣候氣候常用的短語和句型：常用的短語和句型：1) It is very/quite cold (hot)all the year round.3) It is neither too cold nor too hot.2) Sp. has a warm/cold climate with plenty of rainfall and sunshine, whose average temperature of is .13 Climate:

7、 warm, plenty of sunshine The average temperature: 25.5 Located in Hainan Province, Sanya has _climate _sunshine and _ is 25.5.Sanya a warmwith plenty ofthe average temperature .14介紹介紹風(fēng)景風(fēng)景常用的短語和句型：常用的短語和句型： 2）Sp. is a famous summer resort.1）Sp. has many famous/well-known places of interest, particul

8、arly/such as . and so on, which attract a large number of visitors/ tourists all over the world.15Feisha Beachhot springs Taishan has many _, _ Feisha Beach in Shuangchuan Island, hot springs and _.places of interestsuch asso on.16介紹介紹特產(chǎn)特產(chǎn)常用的短語和句型：常用的短語和句型： 1) Sp. is rich/abundant in 盛產(chǎn)盛產(chǎn) 2) Sp. is

9、famous/well-known for 3) Sp. is home to 是是之鄉(xiāng)之鄉(xiāng)/發(fā)源地發(fā)源地 4) Sp. enjoys the reputation of 享有享有的美譽(yù)的美譽(yù).17seafoodTaishan _ rice and seafood. riceis rich inLocal products:.18介紹介紹經(jīng)濟(jì)經(jīng)濟(jì)常用的短語和句型：常用的短語和句型： 1) Sp. is a prosperous city/country 是一個(gè)繁榮的是一個(gè)繁榮的 2) Sp. has been listed among the top ten strongest cities

10、in economy several times. 3) Its economy has developed rapidly.19介紹介紹交通交通常用的短語和句型：常用的短語和句型： 1) Thanks to its convenient transportation and rich mineral resources, it has developed very rapidly./it has attracted plenty of foreign businessmen to invest. 2) Sp. is a city/country with convenient transpo

11、rtation both on land and water.20Useful Expressions.21寫作組合寫作組合建議運(yùn)用句型建議運(yùn)用句型位置位置 + 面面積積+人口人口歷史文化歷史文化或特色或特色氣候特征氣候特征名勝景觀名勝景觀物產(chǎn)物產(chǎn)Located in (to/on), Sp. covers an area of with a population of Sp. is a city with a long history. With a history of , Sp. , whose symbol is , is famous for Sp. has a climate wi

12、th plenty of The average temperature is Sp. has many places of interest, particularly/ such as . and so on, which attract a large number of visitors all over the world. Sp. is rich in(natural resources) Sp. is famous for/ be home to.22地點(diǎn)介紹寫作模板：地點(diǎn)介紹寫作模板： Located/Situated/Lying in , Shenzhen is a city

13、 with a history of years. It has a population of , covering an area of square kilometers. The climate here is , as it is . Being a , Shenzhen is rich/abundant in . The city, known as , attracts millions of visitors from all over the world every year.23基礎(chǔ)寫作基礎(chǔ)寫作.24Step 1: 審題審題 （內(nèi)容、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱）（內(nèi)容、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱）Step

14、 2: 理清要點(diǎn)，理清要點(diǎn)， 整理成整理成5個(gè)句子個(gè)句子Step 3 :句子翻譯句子翻譯Step 4 : 檢查、潤飾檢查、潤飾, 添加適當(dāng)過渡詞語添加適當(dāng)過渡詞語The steps of Basic Writing.251.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的情景說明請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的情景說明,使用五個(gè)規(guī)范的英語句子描述全部所使用五個(gè)規(guī)范的英語句子描述全部所 給信息給信息:澳大利亞位于最小的大洲澳大利亞位于最小的大洲大洋洲（大洋洲（Oceania）,是世界第六大國是世界第六大國家。它是一個(gè)干旱氣候?yàn)橹鞯膰?，只有少部分沿海地區(qū)家。它是一個(gè)干旱氣候?yàn)橹鞯膰遥挥猩俨糠盅睾５貐^(qū)(coastal areas)有充足的雨量有充足

15、的雨量adequate rainfall 。它由六個(gè)洲組成，。它由六個(gè)洲組成，其中墨爾本和悉尼其中墨爾本和悉尼Melbourne and Sydney是最大的兩個(gè)城市。它以明是最大的兩個(gè)城市。它以明媚的陽光，數(shù)不清的牛羊和奇特的野生動(dòng)植物而著名，世界各地媚的陽光，數(shù)不清的牛羊和奇特的野生動(dòng)植物而著名，世界各地的游客來到這里體驗(yàn)它獨(dú)特的美景。的游客來到這里體驗(yàn)它獨(dú)特的美景。總面積：總面積：7，686，850km2 人口約：人口約：2，000萬萬注意：注意：1）介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條譯成英語。）介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條譯成英語。寫作要求寫作要求只能使用只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)

16、全部的內(nèi)容。個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。2. 題解：這是一篇介紹地理位置的說明文，根據(jù)所提供的材料組題解：這是一篇介紹地理位置的說明文，根據(jù)所提供的材料組織文章。首先應(yīng)確定標(biāo)題。如：織文章。首先應(yīng)確定標(biāo)題。如：Australia 其次應(yīng)介紹這個(gè)國家其次應(yīng)介紹這個(gè)國家的地（地理位置），面（面積，人口），氣（氣候狀況），城的地（地理位置），面（面積，人口），氣（氣候狀況），城（兩個(gè)著名城市），著（與眾不同之處）如下文：注意畫線框架（兩個(gè)著名城市），著（與眾不同之處）如下文：注意畫線框架.26 Loca

17、ted in the smallest continentOceania, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequate rainfall. It is made up of 6 states, in

18、which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities. Because it is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.27【寫作內(nèi)容】根據(jù)下面所給信息，簡要介紹英國：【寫作內(nèi)容】根據(jù)下面所給信息，簡要介紹英國：大不列顛及北愛爾蘭聯(lián)合王國通常稱作聯(lián)合王國，大不列顛及北愛爾蘭聯(lián)合王國通常稱作聯(lián)合王

19、國，UK UK 或英國，由英格蘭、蘇格蘭、威爾士和北愛爾蘭組成，或英國，由英格蘭、蘇格蘭、威爾士和北愛爾蘭組成，聯(lián)合王國位于歐洲大陸西北方向的北大西洋沿岸；聯(lián)合王國位于歐洲大陸西北方向的北大西洋沿岸；面積：面積：244820244820平方公里；平方公里；人口：人口：161110000161110000；首都：倫敦；首都：倫敦；氣候：溫暖的冬天涼爽的夏天，全年降雨量大；氣候：溫暖的冬天涼爽的夏天，全年降雨量大；景點(diǎn)：歷史悠久，有許多名勝如大本鐘、倫敦塔、格林景點(diǎn)：歷史悠久，有許多名勝如大本鐘、倫敦塔、格林 威治。威治。英國是世界上高度工業(yè)化的國家之一英國是世界上高度工業(yè)化的國家之一, ,對(duì)人類

20、工業(yè)化作對(duì)人類工業(yè)化作 出了很大貢獻(xiàn)。出了很大貢獻(xiàn)?！緦懽饕蟆勘仨毷褂谩緦懽饕蟆勘仨毷褂? 5個(gè)句子描述所有內(nèi)容。個(gè)句子描述所有內(nèi)容。.28【寫作步驟】【寫作步驟】一、用漢語寫出五個(gè)句子一、用漢語寫出五個(gè)句子 大不列顛及北愛爾蘭聯(lián)合王國通常稱作聯(lián)合王國，大不列顛及北愛爾蘭聯(lián)合王國通常稱作聯(lián)合王國，UK UK 或英國，由英格蘭、蘇格蘭、威爾士和北愛爾蘭或英國，由英格蘭、蘇格蘭、威爾士和北愛爾蘭組成，占地面積組成，占地面積244820244820平方公里。平方公里。2. 2. 聯(lián)合王國，首都倫敦，位于歐洲大陸西北方向的北大聯(lián)合王國，首都倫敦，位于歐洲大陸西北方向的北大西洋沿岸，總?cè)丝谖餮笱匕叮?/p>

21、總?cè)丝?.611.61億。億。3. 3. 英國冬暖夏涼，年降雨量大。英國冬暖夏涼，年降雨量大。4. 4. 英國歷史悠久，有許多名勝如大本鐘、倫敦塔、格林英國歷史悠久，有許多名勝如大本鐘、倫敦塔、格林威治。威治。5. 5. 英國是世界上高度工業(yè)化的國家之一英國是世界上高度工業(yè)化的國家之一, ,對(duì)人類工業(yè)化對(duì)人類工業(yè)化作出了很大貢獻(xiàn)。作出了很大貢獻(xiàn)。.29二、要點(diǎn)詞匯二、要點(diǎn)詞匯1.俗稱為俗稱為_2.組成組成_ 3.人口人口_ 4.首都首都_5.位于位于_ 6.歐洲大陸西北方向的北大西洋沿岸歐洲大陸西北方向的北大西洋沿岸_7.降雨量降雨量_8.景點(diǎn)景點(diǎn)_ 9.高度工業(yè)化高度工業(yè)化 v_ n._10

22、.貢獻(xiàn)貢獻(xiàn)_ consist ofcapitallie in/be located inpopulationplaces of interesthighly industrializedindustrializationrainfallmake a contribution to doingbe commonly known asthe North Atlantic Ocean off the northwestof mainland Europe.30三、句式結(jié)構(gòu)三、句式結(jié)構(gòu) 大不列顛及北愛爾蘭聯(lián)合王國通常稱作聯(lián)合王國，大不列顛及北愛爾蘭聯(lián)合王國通常稱作聯(lián)合王國，UK 或英國，由英格蘭、蘇格

23、蘭、威爾士和北愛爾蘭組成，或英國，由英格蘭、蘇格蘭、威爾士和北愛爾蘭組成，占地面積占地面積244820平方公里。平方公里。 The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, commonly _ as the United Kingdom, the UK or Britain, _ England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland, _a total area of 244,820 sq km.2. 聯(lián)合王國，首都倫敦，位于歐洲大陸西北方向的北大聯(lián)合王國，首都倫敦，位于歐洲大陸西北方向的

24、北大西洋沿岸，總?cè)丝谖餮笱匕叮側(cè)丝?.61億。億。 The United Kingdom, _ is London, _ the North Atlantic Ocean _ the northwest of mainland Europe, _of 161,110,000.knownconsists ofwithwhose capitallies inoffwith a total population.31三、句式結(jié)構(gòu)三、句式結(jié)構(gòu)3.英國冬暖夏涼，年降雨量大。英國冬暖夏涼，年降雨量大。 Britain enjoys warm winters and cool summers _ a lo

25、t of rainfall throughout the year.4. 英國歷史悠久，有許多名勝如大本鐘、倫敦塔、格英國歷史悠久，有許多名勝如大本鐘、倫敦塔、格 林威治。林威治。 The UK _ with many famous _, such as Big Ben, the Tower of London and Greenwich.5. 英國是世界上高度工業(yè)化的國家之一英國是世界上高度工業(yè)化的國家之一,對(duì)人類工業(yè)化對(duì)人類工業(yè)化作出了很大貢獻(xiàn)。作出了很大貢獻(xiàn)。Britain is among _ countries in the world and has made a great co

26、ntribution to _.has a long historywithplaces of interesthighly industrializedhuman industrialization.32The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, commonly known as the United Kingdom, the UK, or Britain, consists of England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland, with a total area of 2

27、44,820 square kilometers. The United Kingdom, whose capital is London, lies in the North Atlantic Ocean off the northwest of mainland Europe, with a total population of 161,110,000. Britain enjoys warm winters and cool summers with a lot of rainfall throughout the year.The UK has a long history with

28、 many famous places of interest, such as Big Ben, the Tower of London and Greenwich. _, Britain is among highly industrialized countries in the world and has made a great contribution to human industrialization.Besides.33Mistakes in our essays1.As a capital city of Guangdong Province, Guangzhou loca

29、ted in the middle of Guangdong which covers an area of 7434.4 square kilometers with a population of 9.98 million. Guangzhou has a long history where is the birthplace of the “silk road on the sea. “five goats is the symbol of Guangzhou which is be famous for Lingnan Culture2.Because of many instert

30、s places, such as the Eight Scenes of Guangzhou and so on, there always attracts many visitors every year.343.Guangzhou located in the middle of Guangdong Province with a population of 9,980,000 and cover an area of 7,434.4 square kilometers.4. Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong Province , it is located in the middles of the Guangdong Province.35Homework背誦地點(diǎn)寫作范文（下周五前檢查）背誦地點(diǎn)寫作范文（下周五前檢查）金版金版U3U3第第5 5課時(shí)作文（自己寫的）課時(shí)作文（自己寫的）+ +范文，共范文，共2 2篇（周五交）篇（周五交）預(yù)習(xí)預(yù)習(xí)U4U4詞匯詞匯.361.我還是無法相信我還是無法相信我是在我是在接受接受去年獲得的去年獲得的這個(gè)獎(jiǎng)這個(gè)獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)勵(lì).I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize that I won last ye