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1、n一描寫一個人（朋友，父母，老師等）一描寫一個人（朋友，父母，老師等）n1. miss li is our class teacher/my friend. 李老師是我們的班主任/我的朋友。n2. she is about 30 years old. 她大概30歲了。n3. she was born in shanghai in 1989.她1989年出身在上海。n4. she is good at english/basketball / swimming。 我擅長于 英語/籃球/游泳n5. my parents work very hard. 我的父母非常努力工作。n6. they are

2、 friendly to me. 他們對我很友好。n7. we often play together. 我們經(jīng)常一起玩耍。n8. i think she is not only my good teacher, but also my friend. 我認(rèn)為她不僅是我的好老師，也是我的朋友。n9. although he is not clever, he studies very hard. 盡管他不聰明，他學(xué)習(xí)很努力。n10. he is one of the tallest students in our class. 他是我們班最高的學(xué)生之一。n11we often help eac

3、h other and learn from each other. 我們常常互相幫助互相學(xué)習(xí)。n12with the help of teachers and my friends, i have made great progress. 在老師和我朋友的幫助下， 我已經(jīng)取得了很大的進(jìn)步。n13in a word , i like her/him very much. 總而言之，我非常喜歡她/他二描寫個人的興趣，愛好等。二描寫個人的興趣，愛好等。ni like reading different kinds of books. 我喜歡看不同種類的書。ni think books are my

4、 good friends. 我認(rèn)為書是我的好朋友。ni often spend my money on books. 我常?；X買書ni like swimming very much. 我非常喜歡游泳。nwe can learn a lot from it/them。 我們從中能夠?qū)W到很多。nit makes me healthy/happy. 它使我健康/歡樂ni can get not only much knowledge but also a lot of fun from it/them.我不僅能從中得到很多知識而且很多樂趣。 三三 描寫我的愿望或者有關(guān)學(xué)英語的描寫我的愿望或者有

5、關(guān)學(xué)英語的重要性。重要性。n1.my dream is to be a teacher . 我的夢想是成為一個老師n2.i am good at english/basketball / swimming。 我擅長于英語/籃球/游泳n3.english will become more and more important。英語將變得越來越重要n4.it is important to learn english well. 學(xué)好英語是重要的。n5.english is so useful that we must learn it well.英語是如此的重要以至我們必須學(xué)好它n6.we sh

6、ould work hard in order to find a good job in the future. 我們應(yīng)該努力學(xué)習(xí)為了在將來找到一份好工作。n7.i often spend much time reading english every day. 我常?；ㄙM(fèi)很多時間每天讀英語。n8i am sure i will have a bright future if i try my best to study hard. 假如我盡我最大努力認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，我相信我將有燦爛的未來。n9knowledge is power. if a person hasnt much knowledge

7、, it is impossible for him to find a good job. 知識就是力量。 假如一個人沒有很多知識，對他來說找一份好工作是不可能的。n10.i believe that hard work will bring me success. 我相信艱苦的學(xué)習(xí)（勞動）將給我?guī)沓晒?。四描寫我的家鄉(xiāng)上海或介紹上海。四描寫我的家鄉(xiāng)上?；蚪榻B上海。n1.there are a lot of big shops and busy streets in shanghai. 在上海有許多大商店和繁忙的街道。在上海有許多大商店和繁忙的街道。n2.there are many peo

8、ple there. 在那里有很多人。在那里有很多人。n3. as we all know ，shanghai is famous for the bund. 上海上海以外灘而聞名以外灘而聞名n4.we are proud of shanghai/him. 我們以上海我們以上海/他而感到自他而感到自豪豪n5.i think shanghai will become more and more beautiful in the future. 我認(rèn)為上海將變的越來越美麗。我認(rèn)為上海將變的越來越美麗。五描寫物或者景五描寫物或者景n1. there are two classroom buildin

9、gs in our school. 在我們學(xué)校有兩幢教學(xué)樓。n2. its very large and beautiful. 它非常大和美麗。n3. we can see green trees and nice flowers everywhere. 我們能夠到處看到綠樹和鮮花。n4.my school life is full of fun. 我的學(xué)校生活充滿著樂趣。n5. my favorite animals are dogs.我最喜歡的動物是狗我最喜歡的動物是狗n6.they can help us in many ways.它們在許多方面能幫助我們。六六“過去發(fā)生的事情過去發(fā)生的

10、事情”一類作文的一類作文的寫法：或者一次去寫法：或者一次去.的旅行。的旅行。n1it was fine last sunday. 上星期天天氣很好。n2 i went to luxun park with my parents last sunday. 上星期天我去了魯迅公園。n3.we went there by bus. 我們坐車去哪兒n4.there are many interesting places in beijing. 在北京有很多有趣的地方n5.we visited the great wall. 我們參觀了長城。n6.the great wall is very nice.

11、 長城非常好。n7we took a lot of nice pictures. 我們拍了很多好看的照片。n8after that, we bought a lot of interesting books in the shop. 那以后，我們買了很多有趣的書在書店。n9. we held a class meeting/（sports meet） in our classroom last friday.我們上星期五在我們的教室開了一個班會/運(yùn)動會。n10. we sang and danced together. 我們在一起唱歌和跳舞。n11. i entered for the hig

12、h jump. 我報名參加了跳高。n12. we played basketball after school yesterday. 我們昨天放學(xué)后打籃球。n13. i planted a lot of trees last sunday. 上星期天我種植了很多樹. after that, we watered the trees. 那以后我們給樹澆了水.ntrees can make air clan. 樹能夠使空氣干凈.n14. i helped my grandma to clean the house. 我?guī)椭业哪棠檀驋叻孔?n15i had to go over my englis

13、h lessons at home. 我不得不在家里復(fù)習(xí)我的英語功課。n16. i didnt go to bed until i finished my homework last night. 我一直沒有上床睡覺直到我昨天完成我的家庭作業(yè)。n17in a word, we had a good time. 總而言之，我們玩的很愉快。七七“將來發(fā)生的一件事情將來發(fā)生的一件事情” 一一類作文的寫法。類作文的寫法。n1i will go to luxun park with my parents next sunday. 下星期天我要去魯迅公園下星期天我要去魯迅公園。n2. we will go

14、 there by bus. 我們將坐車去哪兒我們將坐車去哪兒.n3we will visit the great wall. 我們將參觀長城。我們將參觀長城。n（把上面過去時態(tài)的句子轉(zhuǎn)換成一般將來時就可以）（把上面過去時態(tài)的句子轉(zhuǎn)換成一般將來時就可以）n八句與句間好的連詞：八句與句間好的連詞：nfirst，（首先） after that ,（那以后） however, (然而) , whats more,（而且） on the other hand.nfinally, at last, in a word, （總而言之）九九 其他其他n1. i want to visit my uncle.

15、 我想要看望我的叔叔。n2. thank you for your letter. 謝謝你的來信n3. it is bad/good /for us. 它對我們有好處（壞處）n4. it is as important as air. 它和空氣一樣重要。n5. it is widely used in our life. 在我們的生活中它被廣泛使用。n6i can know much more about the world, and i can make more friends as well. 我能夠了解更多世界，和交到更多的朋友。n7with the help of computers

16、, we can keep in touch with the world. 在電腦的幫助下，我們能夠和世界保持聯(lián)系。n8i have a lot of homework to do ,so i have no time to play. 我有許多作業(yè)要做，所以我沒有時間玩耍。n9. we should eat more vegetables and less meat in order to keep healthy. 我們應(yīng)該吃更多的蔬菜和更少的肉為了保持健康。 10.nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上無難事只要肯攀登。n11.

17、 if everyone can give his hand, there will be more flowers and sunlight in the world. 假如每個人能伸出一只手，世界上將會有更多的鮮花和陽光。skills of making a passage betterlearning to write beautiful sentences正確構(gòu)建簡單句正確構(gòu)建簡單句 恰當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句恰當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句(三個左右三個左右) 恰當(dāng)使用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)恰當(dāng)使用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)長短句結(jié)合長短句結(jié)合嘗試特殊句型嘗試特殊句型(感嘆句感嘆句,倒裝句等倒裝句等)英語范文英語范文 n一a visit to

18、(yu garden / nan pu bridge /birthday party) （寫過去發(fā)生的事情或活動）（寫過去發(fā)生的事情或活動）n last sunday, my parents and i visited yu garden. it was fine. we went there by bus. it took us one hour to get there. we saw many nice things. there were many people there. we took a lot of nice pictures. yu garden is famous for

19、 its snack so we ate a lot of nice food. (nanpu bridge is very famous in shanghai ). yugarden was so beautiful that we enjoyed it very much.n 二二 a plan of winter holidays（寫（寫將來的事情或計劃）將來的事情或計劃）n winter holidays will come. many students are looking forward to it. i will visit a lot of nice places with

20、 my parents. i will have time to watch cartoons. i will buy many interesting books in the shop. i will eat a lot of nice food. of course, i will have to finish my homework. in a word, i will have a good time during the winter holidays.三三 spring festival （寫節(jié)日的文章）（寫節(jié)日的文章）n spring festival is the most

21、important festival in china. before spring festival, people usually clean their houses .and they go to the supermarket to buy something .during spring festival , parents usually give lucky money to children. people often get together and have a big dineer. some people eat dumplings for dinner.四 poll

22、ution （寫污染一類的文章）n there are three kinds of pollution: air pollution, water pollution and noise pollution. they are all harmful to peoples health. today, pollution is becoming more and more serious. we must do our best to fight it. we can plant more trees to make the air clean. cars should use a new kind of fuel. factories cant let out dirty water. in a word, we must protect our earth and make it more beautiful. 五五sports （寫運(yùn)動或奧運(yùn)會一類（寫運(yùn)動或奧運(yùn)會一類的文章）的文章）n everyone enjoys sports. if we want to keep healthy and happy and live longer, we must take an ac