2021高考英語二輪總復習第二編模塊五書面表達課件

1、模塊五書面表達 英英 語語內(nèi) 容 索 引考情透析 謀對策題型指導 尋技法素材積累 提檔次真題演練 明趨勢考情透析考情透析 謀對策謀對策高考近三年應用文寫作,我們要知道的4個方面命題形式靈活多樣。2020年命題形式除了郵件外,還有新聞報道、參賽短文、介紹采摘活動的短文等。關(guān)注體育運動,引導學生熱愛勞動,倡導健康生活理念。五公里越野賽、農(nóng)場采摘活動、校運會等話題均貼近學生生活。滲透中國元素,弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。中國畫展志愿者;音樂節(jié);做客的風俗等話題,時代特色明顯。體現(xiàn)立德樹人的時代特征,促進德智體美勞全面發(fā)展,強調(diào)關(guān)鍵能力的考查。實現(xiàn)高分小目標,方向和方法都重要顏值與品質(zhì)同等重要。喜歡漂亮的事

2、物是人的天性。因此,要把卷面練到讓閱卷者眼前一亮的程度。16開高考形式的練字紙,每天練習一張,默寫背誦的經(jīng)典句式或者范文,集中訓練34周,養(yǎng)成良好的書寫習慣。字體先摹后臨,用0.5以上的中性筆或者鋼筆書寫。書寫時,適當降低占上中格的輔音字母的高度,這樣寫出來的字母飽滿圓潤,美觀大方。寫錯了的單詞畫一條斜線,切勿涂抹。每天進步一點,成功觸手可及。應用文寫作多為電子郵件,無論是建議信、邀請信,還是通知,都有經(jīng)典句式,背熟這些句式,就是捷徑。每天堅持背誦,并在各種測試中嘗試使用。這樣寫出來的作文符合英語表達習慣,自然得體。不能等風暴過境,才想起筑墻。考場上,多數(shù)考生感覺時間不夠,人在緊張的狀態(tài)下難免

3、出錯。只有背誦積累,才能靈活運用。加強篇章、語段、句式以及銜接詞的背誦仿寫,并在二模、三?？荚囍羞M行測試。對于自己的復習內(nèi)容和思路,發(fā)現(xiàn)問題,及時糾正。請逼自己優(yōu)秀,然后驕傲地生活。用少于考場上的時間進行寫作練習,不同話題,不同體裁,多角度、多方位進行強化訓練。并且養(yǎng)成打草稿、修改、潤色的好習慣。用少的時間把應用文寫好,也為后面的讀后續(xù)寫節(jié)約了寶貴的時間。乾坤未定,你我皆是黑馬。奔涌吧,后浪!題型指導題型指導 尋技法尋技法遵循“兩美”原則,規(guī)范寫作思路保證外觀美1.分段合理:近幾年的高考高分范文,絕大多數(shù)為23段。將時間、空間或其他邏輯關(guān)系方面相關(guān)聯(lián)的內(nèi)容安排在相應的段落內(nèi),使文章主題突出、結(jié)

4、構(gòu)合理、層次分明。2.書寫美觀:卷面美觀就是指字母的大小和字母之間的距離勻稱,無涂改、增補現(xiàn)象。力求內(nèi)在美1.要點齊全:寫作時要列出要點,避免遺漏。根據(jù)評分標準,漏掉內(nèi)容要點的文章要降低得分檔次。2.用詞得體:寫作時需要考慮身份、語氣、風格等因素,也要考慮詞義的褒貶。用詞要講究準確、得體。3.避免錯誤:審題錯誤、詞匯錯誤、語法錯誤和中式英語等都是妨礙考生得高分的絆腳石,應盡力避免。4.過渡自然:銜接詞可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、前后連貫,能很好地起到穿針引線的作用,使邏輯更嚴密。5.詞匯新穎:高級新穎詞匯的使用能使閱卷者眼前一亮,使他們相信考生具有較強的詞匯功底和表達能力,從而給出高分。6.句式多樣:

5、考生要想使所寫的文章凸顯文采,就必須寫出幾個漂亮的句子來,為文章增添色彩。需要注意的是,不是句子越長越好,也不是詞匯越難越好,不要簡單堆砌高難度短語和高難度句式,應突出表達的得體性。7.寫出精彩之筆:一篇作文僅僅具備“要點齊全、內(nèi)容連貫”等因素是不夠的。考生應精心構(gòu)思和設計開頭結(jié)尾,增加短文亮點,達到使閱卷老師為之精神一振的寫作效果。用好“三策略”,寫出高分作文1.用詞策略用詞準確、得體是寫作的前提,在此基礎(chǔ)上使用一些高級詞匯,既可以體現(xiàn)寫作者的語言駕馭能力,又有助于獲得高分。比如,以下兩句前后兩種表達方式均能準確地表達出該句的意義,但前者用詞稍顯平常,而后者在表達上讓讀者耳目一新。new y

6、ears day is coming/drawing near.it is quite/absolutely impossible for him to give up.2.造句策略造句的基本原則是力求句式多變,語法靈活。為文章的多樣性起見,短句、長句、簡單句、并列句和復合句應交錯使用。下列表達前者一般,后者較高級。she walked out of the hall and many fans followed her./followed by many fans,she walked out of the hall.if weather permits,well go outing tom

7、orrow./we will go outing tomorrow,weather permitting.應該注意的是,并非所有的短文都需要復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯,有時簡潔質(zhì)樸也是一種特色。3.流暢策略一篇好的短文要求信息內(nèi)容完整、連貫,這就需要恰當?shù)厥褂勉暯釉~匯,把有關(guān)要點、句子串聯(lián)成文,做到層次清楚、銜接自然,增強整體效果。但文中銜接詞語的使用以需要為原則,切忌為用而用。解題示例解題示例(2019全國)假定你是李華,暑期在倫敦學習,得知當?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者,內(nèi)容包括:1.寫信目的;2.個人優(yōu)勢;3.能做的事情。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),

8、以使行文連貫;3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。_yours,li hua解題流程step 1認真審題,避免格式錯誤或離題現(xiàn)象審題是正確解讀題目的前提。拿到題目后,先審文字信息,確定話題、文體、人稱和時態(tài),也要留意“注意”中的具體要求。如果是圖表或圖畫信息,應抓關(guān)鍵內(nèi)容,展開合理的聯(lián)想,適當增加與主題相符的要點信息。step 2列出要點,適當拓展要點一定要包括題目部分所提示的全部內(nèi)容,做到“寧多勿缺”,因為要點缺失會導致得分檔次的明顯降低?？梢詫σc適當擴展,但必須緊扣要點,適可而止。step 3精心構(gòu)思,首尾照應既要構(gòu)思謀篇,合理分段,也要構(gòu)思內(nèi)容,做到首尾銜接。step 4潤色修改,語言精彩結(jié)合寫作目

9、的、對象和場合,選擇適當?shù)恼Z言。準確使用高級句式和詞匯,合理、恰當?shù)厥褂勉暯釉~匯。step 5工整抄寫,字跡清晰不一定強求自己的書寫多么美觀靚麗,但一定要做到抄寫工整,字跡清晰。step 6回讀復核,避免錯誤復讀一遍,避免低級錯誤,如名詞單、復數(shù)誤用,動詞的單復數(shù)及時態(tài)語態(tài)無變化,句子不完整,標點誤用等。思路詳解該題要求考生給中國畫展的組織者寫一封申請信,申請做一名志愿者。步驟一:審題(1)定體裁。由所給的命題信息可以看出,本文的體裁是書信,屬于應用文。(2)定人稱。根據(jù)題中“假定你是李華,暑期在倫敦學習,得知當?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者”可以確定郵件應使用第一人稱(i)

10、。(3)定時態(tài)。時態(tài)應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主,但介紹“個人優(yōu)勢”時也可以根據(jù)具體需要使用一般過去時和現(xiàn)在完成時。步驟二:構(gòu)思文章結(jié)構(gòu),確定寫作要點可以使用三段式安排寫作內(nèi)容:第一段導語,包括自我介紹、寫信背景和寫信目的;第二段主體段,主要陳述自己已具備的優(yōu)勢和自己能做的事情;最后一段結(jié)尾段,表達自己的希望。步驟三:確定語言風格本文的提示要點簡單清晰,比較容易表達。作為一封申請信,語言應正式、簡潔、樸實,復雜句式不宜過多。但應注意句型靈活多樣,以體現(xiàn)語言的豐富性?？梢允褂脦讉€高級詞匯,提升語言檔次。參考范文dear sir/madame,i am li hua,a student from china

11、,who is studying in london during the summer vacation.learning that an exhibition of chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month,i am writing to apply for the chance to become a volunteer.as for my strengths,i have the following advantages.first of all,i speak english fluently,allowing

12、me to communicate with visitors without difficulty.second,as a chinese painting lover,i know a lot about this art form.if acceptable,i can introduce chinese painting skills to visitors,which can help them know more about chinese culture.i think i am well qualified to be a volunteer.hope i will be of

13、fered this valuable opportunity.yours,li hua范文點評本文要點齊全,行文流暢、自然。圍繞要點的展開也比較合理得當,段與段之間的過渡比較自然,因而層次清晰。從書信內(nèi)容上來看,短文較好地覆蓋了命題所給出的三個要點,尤其短文最后一句與首段寫信目的相照應,使得短文前后呼應。從語言風格來看,作者使用了第一人稱,語言規(guī)范得體,符合申請信的要求。從語言質(zhì)量方面來看,首句使用了同位語(a student from china)和非限制性定語從句(who is studying.);第二段使用省略句式(if acceptable.);第一段和第二段中使用了兩處分詞結(jié)構(gòu)(

14、learning that.作時間狀語;allowing me to communicate.作伴隨狀語);文中詞匯、句式使用規(guī)范、準確,語言平實質(zhì)樸,簡潔明快,有效地提高了交際效果。文中雖然沒有出現(xiàn)較多的高級詞匯,但并不影響其成為一篇優(yōu)秀作文。素材素材積累積累 提檔提檔次次電子郵件1.很高興收到你的來信。im glad to receive your letter.2.一切都好吧?how is everything going?3.好久不見。havent seen you for ages.4.時光飛逝,自從上次見你至今已經(jīng)三個月了。how time flies! its three mon

15、ths since the last time i saw you.5.我寫信邀請/道歉/建議/感謝/通知im writing to make an invitation/make an apology/offer some suggestions/express my thanks/inform you that.6.我寫信是想問你是否能參加周日的聚會。im writing to ask if you can come to the party on sunday.7.我寫信是想告訴你這次會議安排在了周日。im writing to inform you that the meeting i

16、s on sunday.8.如果你能盡快回復,我將不勝感激。i would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.9.如果你能接受邀請,我將不勝感激。i would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.10.如果你能考慮一下我的申請,我將不勝感激。i would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.11.盼望你盡早給我回復。im looking forward to your r

17、eply at your earliest convenience.12.我會非常感激你的早日回復。an early reply is appreciated.13.盼望著見到你。im looking forward to seeing you.建議信1.讀了你的信后,我知道你在中文學習上有困難。i know you have trouble in learning chinese after reading your letter.2.我寫信的目的是給你一些幫助/建議。i am writing to give you some suggestions.3.關(guān)于學漢語,我想建議你從拼音開始。a

18、s for learning chinese/when it comes to learning chinese,i would like to recommend you to start with pinyin.4.我的建議如下。/這有三條有用的建議。my suggestions are as follows./here are three useful suggestions.5.你不妨試一試。you may/might as well have a try.6.首先,從字母開始是一個更好的選擇。first of all,beginning with letters is a bette

19、r choice.7.其次,聽中文歌曲是一個不錯的主意。whats more,listening to chinese songs is a good idea.8.最后,看電視節(jié)目也是很有用的。finally,watching tv programs will help a lot.9.我希望我的建議對你有益。i hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.10.我希望你會考慮我的建議。i hope you will take my advice into consideration.邀請信1.非常榮幸地邀請你參加我的生日聚會。its my h

20、onor to invite you to my birthday party.2.我們將為湯姆舉辦生日晚會。我想知道你是否愿意來參加他的生日聚會。were holding a party for toms birthday.i wonder if you would like to come to his birthday party.3.我們將于6月6日舉行畢業(yè)慶祝會,如果你能來參加就太好了。we are having/planning a graduation celebration on june 6 and we feel it would be a great idea if yo

21、u can join us.4.活動的細節(jié)如下。here are some details about this activity./some details about this activity are as follows.5.如果你能來,我倍感榮幸。i would feel much honored if you could come.6.如果你能盡早在你方便時確認參加,我們將不勝感激。we would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.7.如果你方便的話,我們

22、希望你能接受我們的邀請。we hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.8.我確信你在北京會玩得很開心。im sure youll have a good time in beijing.申請信1.我從你們的網(wǎng)站上/網(wǎng)上得知你們公司要招聘一名秘書。i learned on your website/on the internet that a secretary is wanted in your company.2.看到你登的找英文筆友的廣告,我非常高興。i am extremely glad t

23、o see your advertisement for an english penfriend.3.我寫信申請漢語老師一職。i am writing to apply for the position of the chinese teacher.4.我寫信申請成為志愿者的寶貴機會。im writing to apply for a valuable chance to be a volunteer.5.以下是我的優(yōu)勢。the following are my advantages./my advantages are as follows.6.我確信,我能勝任這個崗位。i am conf

24、ident that im equal to the position/im suitable for the position.7.假期里我做過兼職,有能力照顧好自己,也能幫助別人。ive done part-time jobs during holidays and had ability to take care of myself and help others.8.我想接受更多的挑戰(zhàn),體驗生活。id like to experience more challenges and try to understand the real life.9.我想多交朋友,了解全國各地的風土人情。i

25、 want to make more friends and learn about different customs in our country as well.10.如果你能考慮我的申請,我將不勝感激。i would really appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.感謝信1.非常感謝在倫敦逗留期間您的幫助。i am very grateful to you for your kindness during my stay in london.2.感謝您的貼心陪伴,我愉快地度過了兩周的假期。

26、thanks to your care and company,i had a wonderful time during the two-week holiday.3.美麗的鄉(xiāng)村風光、壯觀的白金漢宮以及友好的人們都給我留下了深刻的印象。the beautiful rural scenery,the splendid buckingham palace and the friendly people all left me a deep impression.4.而且令我高興的是,我的英語口語水平在您的指導下提高很大。and much to my delight,my spoken engli

27、sh has greatly improved under your guidance.5.我永遠也忘不了您對我的幫助,以及我們一起度過的時光。i will never forget the help you gave me and the time we spent together.6.我確實希望您和您的家人以后能來中國。i do hope you and your family will come to china in the future.7.我確信你們也會在這里玩得開心。im sure you will also have a nice time here.通知1.5月5日史密斯先

28、生將要在學校報告廳舉行關(guān)于英國傳統(tǒng)文化的講座。mr.smith will give a lecture on english traditional culture at the school hall on may 5.2.要求所有人按時到。all are requested to come on time.3.每個人都要參加這個活動。every one of you is expected to be part of the event.4.大家快來吧,展示你們自己的時間到了!come on,everybody! its your show time.5.快來積極參加吧,祝你們好運!hav

29、e an active part in it,and wish you good luck!描寫人物1.他叫李華,出生在北京,身高1.78米,體重60千克。his name is li hua,born in beijing,1.78 meters tall and 60 kilos in weight.2.我的朋友李華,今年26歲,四年前從北京大學畢業(yè),剛剛拿到了他的博士學位。my friend li hua,aged 26,graduated from peking university four years ago,and has just received his doctors de

30、gree.3.李華英俊瀟灑,勇敢樂觀,而且樂于助人。li hua is handsome,brave and above all,optimistic.in addition,he is willing/ready to help others.4.由于善良、有耐心并且總是樂于幫助她的學生們,她所有的學生都喜歡她。being kind,patient and always ready to help her students,she is very popular with all her students.5.他愛交朋友,所以他能與同學們和老師們相處融洽。he is good at maki

31、ng friends/he enjoys making friends,so he can get on well with all his classmates and teachers.6.他物理好,曾經(jīng)獲得過中學物理競賽一等獎。he does well in physics,and once won first prize in a physics competition for middle school students.7.他特別喜歡彈吉他,作為學校音樂俱樂部的一員,他經(jīng)常參加音樂表演。he had a strong passion for playing the guitar.a

32、s a member of the music club of the school,he often gives music performances.8.自從5歲開始學游泳,他就對游泳有著強烈的熱愛。he has had a strong passion for swimming since he took it up at the age of five.9.在他們的幫助下,我重獲信心,并且開始取得穩(wěn)步進展。with their help,i regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.10.他致力于科研工作,為國家做

33、出了巨大貢獻。he devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to the country.11.他為科學技術(shù)的發(fā)展做出了巨大貢獻。he made great contributions to the development of science and technology.12.他是這個領(lǐng)域里最重要的人物之一。he is one of the most important people in this field.13.他被認為是世界上最偉大的作家之一,被授予了諾貝爾文學獎。considered

34、to be one of the greatest writers in the world,he was awarded the nobel prize in literature.14.他為我們青少年樹立了好的榜樣,他是我的驕傲。he set a good example to us teenagers,and i am proud of him.敘述事件1.五一期間,我去泰山看日出了。on may day,i went to mount tai to see the sunrise.2.4月12日是難以忘懷的日子,因為那天我們班舉行了一次有意義的活動。april 12th is memo

35、rable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.3.上周,我經(jīng)歷了一件有意義的事情,這給我?guī)砹撕艽髥⑹?。last week,i experienced a meaningful thing,which really gave me a great deal of inspiration.4.上個月我有一次有意義的經(jīng)歷,這使我印象深刻。那段寶貴的記憶至今仍然歷歷在目,仿佛就發(fā)生在昨天一樣。last month,i had a meaningful experience,which left me a deep im

36、pression.the precious memory is still fresh today as if it had occurred only yesterday.5.我將永遠不會忘記上周末發(fā)生的事情。i will never forget the thing that happened last weekend.6.我正在公園散步,突然看到一位老人正吃力地推著輪椅。i was walking in the park when i caught sight of an old man pushing a wheelchair with difficulty.7.走在鄉(xiāng)間小路上,我們沐

37、浴著溫暖的陽光,欣賞著美景。while walking on the country road,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful views.8.我們一到達目的地就開始完成這項工作。hardly had we arrived at the destination when we set out to fulfill the task.9.路上我發(fā)現(xiàn)一個外國人看上去很焦急的樣子。on the way,i found a foreigner looking worried.10.我走上前去,得知這個外國人在這個城市迷路了。i went u

38、pward and knew that the foreigner was lost in the city.11.激動萬分,我迫不及待地在朋友圈分享我的照片。with excitement,i couldnt wait to share my pictures on wechat moments.12.被美景所吸引,我們拍了照,將這珍貴的瞬間永久保存。attracted by the beautiful scenery,we had a photo taken,capturing the precious moment forever.13.這是我曾經(jīng)經(jīng)歷的最激動人心的時刻。it was t

39、he most exciting moment that i have ever experienced.14.這是多么壯觀的景象啊!我將永遠不會忘記這一刻。what a magnificent sight it was! i will never forget the moment.15.盡管我們很累,但是有一種成就感。tired as we were,we had a sense of achievement.16.正是這次活動加深了師生之間的情誼。it was this activity that further deepened the relationship between the

40、 teacher and students.17.在那時我才認識到生活中的小事情也有非凡的意義。我將不遺余力地為需要的人提供幫助。only then did i realize that small things could make a big difference in our life.i will spare no effort to offer my help to those in need.18.正是通過這次活動我才認識到我們有責任繼承我們的文化瑰寶。only through this experience did i realize that its our responsib

41、ility to inherit our cultural treasures.真題演練真題演練 明趨勢明趨勢unit 1 a(2020新高考山東)假定你是李華,上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道,內(nèi)容包括:1.參加人員;2.跑步路線:從校門口到南山腳下;3.活動反響。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。a cross-country running race 【參考范文】a cross-country running racelast sunday,our school held a 5-kilometres cross-coun

42、try running race.all the students and teachers in our school attended the activity.the race started from the school gate and ended at the foot of the south hill,covering five kilometres all together.all the contestants spared no efforts to finish the race.this race gives us a good opportunity to hav

43、e a deeper understanding of great patience as well as building up our bodies in terms of long-distance race.more importantly,we come to know it is our responsibility to challenge ourselves to all kinds of hardships.b(2020全國)你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題,寫一篇短文參賽,內(nèi)容包括:1.人物簡介;2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。注意:詞數(shù)100左右?！緟⒖挤段?/p>

44、】mr.zhang,aged 50,is my favorite english teacher.he is so knowledgeable,humorous and responsible that i respect and love him so much.honestly speaking,his great patience and assistance have a great impact on me.it was mr.zhang who made me perceive the importance of learning english well.had it not b

45、een for his guidance and encouragement,i couldnt have won first prize in the english contest.without his aid,i wouldnt have boosted my integrated skills in english.ill definitely remember his kindness and help forever.mr.zhang is a very respectable teacher indeed! i do thank him for what he did for

46、me.unit 2 a(2020全國)上周末,你和同學參加了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文,介紹這次活動,內(nèi)容包括:1.農(nóng)場情況;2.采摘過程;3.個人感受。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目已為你寫好。my weekend_【參考范文】my weekend last weekend,my classmates and i went to a farm to pick grapes.the grape farm is located at the foot of a hill,where lies a small river.we were stuck by the beauty o

47、f the scenery.grapes grown on this farm were big and sweet.we couldnt help eating grapes while picking them,as we were told the grapes hadnt been treated with pesticides.meanwhile,several girls sang some sweet songs,which made us feel less exhausted.on the way back home,we were worn out.however,we h

48、oped we could have chances to come back again,because physical labor not only exercises our body,but also makes us cherish the fruits of labor.b(2020全國)假定你是李華,你和同學根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教miss evans寫封郵件,請她幫忙指導。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡介;2.指導內(nèi)容;3.商定時間地點。注意:詞數(shù)100左右?！緟⒖挤段摹縟ear miss evans,im writing to ask you to do me a fa

49、vor.as you know,my classmates and i have adapted the short play hamlet written by william shakespeare.its one of the most classical things in our textbook.would you give us some advice about one of the plots? thats about hamlets complex mental mind when his father died and his mother immediately married his uncle.we are in urgent need of your help and guidance.would you be available on sunday afternoon? my classmates and i will be studying in the classroom the