初三二模作文模板匯編

1、2016-2017學(xué)年初三二模寫(xiě)作文體區(qū)縣二模寫(xiě)作話題記敘文長(zhǎng)寧A story about一個(gè)關(guān)于的故事徐匯A party for /to議論文黃浦是好習(xí)慣虹口我的生活樂(lè)趣普陀Our last class meeti ng in junior high school奉賢make me a better pers on崇明I am an independent boy (girl)靜安,a new way of life!松江Something I want to do for my family嘉定I like read ing En glish浦東I enjoy (readi ng, tra

2、veli ng, doing sports.)應(yīng)用文楊浦Things we can do make our city a better place金山I am special閔行假設(shè)你是小明(Xiao Ming )，是美國(guó)中學(xué)生Tony的 筆友，你收到了他的來(lái)信。請(qǐng)給 Tony與一封回信， 回答他的問(wèn)題，介紹上海良好的公共交通服務(wù)。寫(xiě)作一般聯(lián)系學(xué)生生活實(shí)際，由上圖可知，考試作文偏向議論文，因此本文將著重分析 靜安、虹口、黃浦、浦東、奉賢這5個(gè)區(qū)的作文范例，并羅列出學(xué)生寫(xiě)作可以直接用的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾。當(dāng)然，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一兩句即 可，結(jié)尾要點(diǎn)題，有所立意。【靜安區(qū)

3、】94.Write at least 60words about the topic“,a neW請(qǐng)以y of life!，一種嶄新的生活方式”為題，從以下圖片中選擇其中一張圖片，舉例表述你的思考和理由，寫(xiě)一 篇不少于60字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)WeixinMobikePoi nts for refere nee:I. Which way do you choose to write about2. Why do you think it a new way of life?3. Could you give some suggestions in order to make better

4、use of it?【參考范文】As we all know, we are enjoying the convenience of our new ways of life, including mobike. We can easily find a public bike everywhere in Shanghai now and we never worry about where to park it. Riding a bicycle does good to our health and the environment as well. However, We should u

5、se a public bike properly. We cant use it if were younger than 12.We should take good care of it in stead of damag ing it. We should park it in a park ing spot after using it.Public bikes bring us a lot of adva ntages, so we should protect them so that they can serve us Ion ger.【虹口區(qū)】94. Write a pass

6、age of at least 60 words on the topic（以y我的生活n樂(lè)趣”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）生活有艱辛，也有樂(lè)趣，你的生活樂(lè)趣是什么？你為何覺(jué)得這是你的樂(lè)趣所在？你是怎 么想的？怎么做的？【參考范文】There is no doubt that we all have to face difficulties and stress in life, so we should develop a way of joy in our daily life .In my opinion, my joy of life is to liste n

7、to light music. Whenever I am stuck in trouble or feel depressed, I will spare myself some time to listen to light music because it can help me adjust myself and make me calm down again. I think only in this way can I deal with the problems I m faced with better or treat other people more properly.A

8、bove all, that ynyf jliving and I think that you can have a try next time. I hope you will get ben efit from it.【黃浦區(qū)】94. In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic（is a goo以habit是好習(xí)慣”為題，寫(xiě)一篇60-120個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）一個(gè)好的習(xí)慣會(huì)讓我們終身受益。什么是好習(xí)慣？請(qǐng)分享你的一個(gè)好習(xí)慣，說(shuō)說(shuō)你是 怎么養(yǎng)成的？它給你帶來(lái)哪些好處。請(qǐng)結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕捏w驗(yàn)或想法。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校

9、名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）【參考范文】Saving Money Is a Good HabitSpeak ing of good habits, sav ing money is un doubtedly one of them nstead of spe nding tomorrow s money, I prefer to save money. In order to learn to cut down unnecessary cost, I will think twice before spe nding money on those clothes that may not

10、 suit myself, which ben efits me a lot. First of all, the sense of sav ing money helps me arrange my daily life properly. What s more, saving money, to a certain extent, means I can handle emergency quickly.In addition, saving money is not only a traditional virtue but a useful strategy in life. Jus

11、t as the old say ing, a penny saved is a penny earn ed, so sav ing money makes me feel safe about tomorrow.【浦東】94.Write at least 60 words about the topic“I enjoy (readi ng, traveli ng, doing sports.)請(qǐng)以 我喜歡做”為題目，寫(xiě)一篇不少于 60個(gè)詞的短文。要求內(nèi)容貼切，意思連貫。請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}紙上補(bǔ)充完整題目(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分)Use the followi n

12、g as your refere nee: What do you enjoy doing? Why do you enjoy doing it? What can you get/lear n from it?【參考范文】I enjoy play ing basketballHobbies are importa nt for our lives. Some enjoy read ing, others enjoy travell ing, collecti on, and so on.I enjoy playing basketball, a competitive and excitin

13、g ball game. When playing basketball,I n eed to keep running and jump ing, so it con sumes a lot of en ergy, and does good to my heart and lun gs. Besides, I n eed to work well with other team players in order to win the game. In this way I vltearnt how to cooperate with others and how to play by th

14、e rules. In a word, play ing basketball, as an importa nt part of my life, helps me become stron ger both physically and men tally.【奉賢區(qū)】94. Writi ng at least 60 words on the topic“make me a better pers on ”（以“ 就更好的自己”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）【參考范文】Un dersta nding oth

15、er people makes me a better pers onAs is known to all, every one is a special un ity that has his own mind and story. Whe n facing the similar circumsta nces,they may make differe nt choices. Every decisi on we make and every action we do make us be a different person from others. So it is very impo

16、rtant to un dersta nd others especially whe n we get along with other people.There are several reas ons. First, un dersta nding can avoid quarrels among people. If we put ourselves in other people shoes, we can understand others better, which can avoid misunderstandings that may break other people h

17、eart. Second, understanding is also a self-cultivati on. Every one has their own difficulties, which means that we can itnpose our minds on other people.I always rem ind myself of un dersta nding others and from what we have discussed above, I think that un dersta nding other people makes me a bette

18、r pers on.分析：【靜安區(qū)】As we all know, we are enjoying the convenience of our new ways of life, including mobike 分析：這句話點(diǎn)題概括了我們的現(xiàn)狀，弓I出話題Public bikes bring us a lot of adva ntages, so we should protect them so that they can serve us Ion ger.分析：這句話點(diǎn)題總結(jié)了自行車(chē)的好處，比較級(jí)的運(yùn)用恰到好處。比較級(jí)其實(shí)每篇文章 都可以運(yùn)用，去描述現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去的對(duì)比?！竞缈趨^(qū)】Ther

19、e is no doubt that we all have to face difficulties and stress in life, so we should develop a way of joy in our daily life .In my opinion.分析：這句話概括了我們都會(huì)遇到困難，弓I出我的觀點(diǎn)Above all, that s my joy of living and I think that you can have a try next time. I hope you will get ben efit from it.分析：這句話總結(jié)并展望未來(lái)【黃浦區(qū)

20、】Speak ing of good habits, sav ing money is un doubtedly one of them.分析：這句話點(diǎn)題好習(xí)慣，引出觀點(diǎn)Just as the old say ing, a penny saved is a penny earn ed, so sav ing money makes me feel safe about tomorrow.分析：這句話用諺語(yǔ)進(jìn)行總結(jié)【浦東】Hobbies are important for our lives. Some enjoy reading, others enjoy travelling, collection, and so on.分析：這句話點(diǎn)題愛(ài)好的重