《高考基礎(chǔ)寫作》PPT課件.ppt

高考專題 基礎(chǔ)寫作 1 寫作題材貼近考生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活 2 信息點多 但只能用5句話表達(dá) 3 信息呈現(xiàn)方式多為表格 圖表等 4 以翻譯為基礎(chǔ) 注重考察表達(dá)能力 一 題型特點 二 能力要求 1 審題能力2 處理信息的能力 信息組合 排列合理3 表達(dá)能力 語法正確 句式靈活 信息內(nèi)容表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確 完整 語篇連貫 三 表達(dá)能力訓(xùn)練 1 寫好簡單句簡單句的五種基本句型 1 主語 不及物動詞 S V 2 主語 及物動詞 賓語 S V O 3 主語 系動詞 表語 S V P 4 主語 及物動詞 雙賓語 S V O O 5 主語 及物動詞 賓語 賓補(bǔ) S V O C Ex 改正下列病句 MyfavouritesubjectsincludingEnglishandChinese Lastweekweholdadiscussionaboutthistopic Thefuturelifewillbecomemoreandmorebetter Thefiredestroiedtheirhouses 5 HespendstwohourstostudyEnglisheverynight 應(yīng)改為include 應(yīng)改為held 應(yīng)改為betterandbetter 應(yīng)改為destroyed 應(yīng)改為studying 6 Hecosttendollarsforthebook 7 Hefeltconfused hedidn tknowwhattodo 8 HewatchedTVforawhilebeforewenttobed 9 Sheisconfidenceandpatience 10 Inhisopinion getfatisaterriblething 應(yīng)改為paid 應(yīng)改為 He 應(yīng)改為going 應(yīng)改為confidentandpatient 應(yīng)改為gettingfat 2 如何做到句式靈活 1 并列句2 復(fù)合句 定語從句 狀語從句 名詞性從句 3 強(qiáng)調(diào)句型4 非謂語動詞5 倒裝句6 其他句型及結(jié)構(gòu) Ex 按要求改寫下列句子 1 Englishiswidelyusedintheworld MostbusinesslettersarewritteninEnglish 合并為并列句 EnglishiswidelyusedintheworldandmostbusinesslettersarewritteninEnglish 2 Peoplethoughtofsomewaystosolvetheproblem Thesesolutionsdidn twork 合并為并列句 Peoplethoughtofsomewaystosolvetheproblembutthesesolutionsdidn twork 3 IsuggestthatyouvisittheGreatWall Ithasahistoryofmorethantwothousandyears 合并為定語從句 IsuggestthatyouvisittheGreatWall whichhasahistoryofmorethantwothousandyears July11hasbeennamedtheSailingDayinourcountrysince2005 ZhengHebeganhisfamousvoyageonJuly11 合并為定語從句 July11 whenZhengHebeganhisfamousvoyage hasbeennamedtheSailingDayinourcountrysince2005 5 Iwillnotbeabletomeetyouattheairport Ihavesomeexperimentstodothatday 合并為狀語從句 IwillnotbeabletomeetyouattheairportbecauseIhavesomeexperimentstodothatday Theproblemwascomplicated Hesolveditinonlytwohourswithacomputer 合并為狀語從句 Thoughtheproblemwascomplicated hesolveditinonlytwohourswithacomputer 7 Inthepastfiveyears therehavebeenchangesinpeople sdiet Itisafact 合并為名詞性從句 Itisafactthatinthepastfiveyears therehavebeenchangesinpeople sdiet 8 Theweatherwasfine WewenttovisittheZhongShanPark 獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu) Theweatherbeingfine wewenttovisittheZhongShanPark 9 Youshouldnevergiveupwhenyouarefacedwithdifficulties 倒裝句 非謂語 Nevershouldyougiveupwhenfacedwithdifficulties 10 眾所周知 吸煙危害健康 一句多譯 10 眾所周知 吸煙危害健康 一句多譯 a Itisknowntoallthatsmokingdoesharmtopeople shealth b Asisknowntoall smokingharmspeople shealth c Everyoneknowsthatsmokingisharmfultopeople shealth 四 如何使文章連貫 a 并列 and aswellas b 轉(zhuǎn)折 but however c 遞進(jìn) besides apartfrom inaddition what smore worse furthermore moreover tomakethingsworse better d 原因 because becauseof as since forthatreason e 結(jié)果 so therefore thus asaresult f 讓步 though although inspiteof What smore ofcourse asisknowntoall first therefore lastly Whichisbetter newspapersorwebsites newspapersandwebsitesaretwomajornewsmediainthepresentworld Theybothhavetheirstrengthsandweaknesses 1 Asisknowntoall 閱讀短文 選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡性詞匯填空 newspapersbelongtotraditionalnewsmediawhilewebsitesarereallynewmedia Besides manynewspapersareprinteddailyandcanofferthereadersreliableinformation theinformationonthewebsitesisalsofrequentlyupdated butit sapitythatmuchinformationisfalse newspaperscanbeeasilycarriedandreadinanyplaceatanytime 2 3 4 First Ofcourse What smore However withoutacomputerconnectedtotheInternetitisnotconvenientforpeopletogetinformationfromwebsites theirexpressionstylesalsodifferfromeachother Theinformationofnewspapersisexpressedinwordsandpictureswhiletheinformationofwebsitesisexpressedinnotonlywordsandpicturesbutalsoaudiosandvideos 5 Lastly 6 Clearly newspapersandwebsitesbothhavetheiradvantagesanddisadvant ages itisfreeforyoutochooseeitherofthem Therefore 五 基礎(chǔ)寫作的推薦步驟 1 認(rèn)真審題2 歸納 排列信息點3 確定短語和句型 連詞成句4 組句成篇5 檢查修改 某報設(shè)有一個求助信箱 請根據(jù)以下表中列出的信息 以高三學(xué)生李華的名義給Mr Helper寫一封英文短信 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好 不計入五句話 DearMr Helper I masenior3student IamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseIcanhardlystandthegreatpressure Iamlookingforwardtoyouradvice Yourssincerely LiHua 寫作步驟 第1步審題 記敘文 第一人稱 一般現(xiàn)在時 6項 1 2項整合 第2步整合信息 譯成英語 1 每天在校時間約10小時 每天完成作業(yè)時間3 4小時 Everydaywestayatschoolforabouttenhourstohavelessons Wespendatleastthreetofourhoursdoingourhomework 2 每天幾乎沒有時間娛樂 消遣 a Wehardlyhaveanytimeforrelaxation b Hardlycanwefindanytimetodowhatwewant 3 每天睡眠時間不足 不利于健康 a Wedon thaveenoughtimetosleep whichdoesharmtoourhealth b Wesufferfromlackofsleep which inthelongrun isnotgoodforourhealth 4 負(fù)擔(dān)過重的原因是面臨高考 a Themaincauseofourheavyburdenisthepressurefromthecollegeentranceexamination b Thereasonwhywearecarryingsuchaheavyburdenisthatwearefacingthecollegeentranceexamination 5 父母對我們的期望很高 a Ourparentsexpecttoomuchofus b Ourparentshavehighexpectationsofus DearMr Helper I masenior3student IamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseIcanhardlystandthegreatpressure Everydaywestayatschoolforabouttenhourstohavelessons spendatleastthreetofourhoursdoingourhomework hardlycanwefindanytimetodowhatwewant Wesufferfromlackofsleep which inthelongrun isnotgoodforourhealth Thereasonwhywearecarryingsuchaheavyburdenisthatwearegettingthepressurefromthecollegeentranceexamination Ourparentshavehighexpectationsofus Iamlookingforwardtoyouradvice Yourssincerely LiHua 第3步連句成篇 and Asaresult What sworse Inaddition Let stry 假設(shè)你最近參加了由某電視臺舉辦的中學(xué)生英語演講比賽并獲獎 該臺準(zhǔn)備組織獲獎?wù)呷ケ本﹨⒓右淮斡⒄Z夏令營活動 電視臺現(xiàn)就活動時間和活動內(nèi)容征求你的意見 請按照以下要求以書信形式給予答復(fù) 1 選擇適合你的時間并說明理由 2 解釋你只能參加其中的兩項活動 聽英語講座和教外賓學(xué)中文 雖然你認(rèn)為所有的活動都很有意義 3 說明你選擇的理由 聽英語講座了解英美文化的信息 教外賓學(xué)中文因為2008北京奧運(yùn)讓越來越多的外賓想了解中國 I mgladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp 08樣題 DearSirorMadame I mgladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp I vedecidedtogotoBeijingfortheEnglishsummercampduringthetimefromJuly15 22 becauseI llhavetostaywithmyparentsfortherestofthesummervocationinAmerica Iwillchoosetwoactivitiestotakepartinthoughallofthemaremeaningfulandinteresting whicharelisteningtoEnglishlecturesandteachingforeignersChinese IthinkIcanlearnmoreaboutBritishandAmericanliteraturesbyattendingthelecturesandspeeches Andthe2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingsomanyforeignfriendswillcometoChinaatthattime IwanttoletmoreandmoreforeignersknowbetteraboutChina Thankyouverymuch Yourstruly LiPing DearSirorMadam I mgladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp Thankyouverymuchforarrangingsomanyactivities suchasattendingEnglishcorner havingEnglishlectures seeingEnglishfilms learningEnglishsongs actingEnglishplaysandhelpingforeignerslearnChinese Iamsurealltheactivitieswilldoalotofgoodtousstudent