2015徐匯區(qū)英語二模作文收集.doc

2015徐匯區(qū)英語二模作文收集請大家認真看每個檔次的作文，學習高分作文的優(yōu)點，避免低分作文的錯誤。（請自己合理安排，今天不一定都要看完，但需從A檔作文中挑選一篇，摘抄，點評，也可打印所有A檔作文。做好點評）A類文本 20分-18分文本1 18分 8+8+2I want to say to myself “be more confident ” I want to say to myself “be more confident”. Because Im always afraid of talking in front of the class or communicate with strangers. As a result, my voice is low and I only have several friends. So I must improve myself to become a more confident person. Being more confident means a better future for me. As we all know, the person who has big success shouldnt by shy. I will try my best to develop myself and often tell myself “be more confident”. 文本2 18分 8+8+2I want to say to myself “ Cmon, mate, you can do it!” Last year, I went to San Diego, USA for summer camping. The first day, American kids had a welcome party for us. I took a stroll on my own and enjoyed the view. My homestay family noticed that and came to ask me to have fun with them. I told him I was afraid of talking with others. Then he said “Cmon mate, you can do it! Just have a try”. He pushed me to the crowd. I told myself what he said and I made a bunch of friends. And now these words are my motto, they really mean a lot. They always remind me of not being afraid. So i want to say those words again to myself now. 文本3 18分 8+8+2I want to say to myself “ be out-going” I am a shy girl. Im not willing to talk to strangers. In addition, I am too shy to make performance in front of other people. I always focus on how I am in others eyes. Therefore, what I want to say to myself is “be out-going”. I want to be myself. I dont have to care about what other people say any more. I think these words can help me not only when I am afraid of communicating with strangers, but also when I stand on a big stage to perform in front of many people. 文本4 18.5 8+7.5+3I want to say to myself “ Everything is OK”I want to say to myself “Everything is OK.” Firstly, its necessary to remember these words because confidence which is brought to me by them is important for success. In addition, these words keep me from the fear of facing the problems. To me, they are the willing to win. They are so meaningful to me that I always feel full of energy after reminding myself of them. So everything is OK and nothing stop me. 文本5 19分 8+8+3I want to say to myself “ Hold on to your dream” “Hold on to your dream.” I whisper the encouraging sentence to myself from time to time. Im firmly convinced that nothing in the world can take the place of ones dream. As my dream is to become a surgeon, these words can provide me with courage to study harder and energy to fight for it. Thanks to these words, no matter how difficult life is, I never give up hope. “Hold on to your dream” means persistence and determination to me, so I would like to say it to myself again and again. 文本6 19分 8+8+3I want to say to myself “Try to be brave ” Everyone meets some problems from time to time, and I would like to say “Try to be brave” when I am in trouble. I always need something to encourage me because I am a little timid and these words can be the best choice. These words can make me feel relaxed when facing a problem and its just like a friend that can cheer me up. These words can warn me that I should learn to overcome the difficulties I meet instead of giving up. The sentence gives me the courage and this is the reason why I want to say it to myself. B類文本 15分-17.5分文本7 15分 8+7+0I would like to say to myself “Dont give up!”I would like to say to myself “Dont give up!” because if I am in trouble, I shouldnt give up, try it again. Everyone will meet problems in life. Although it is difficult for me to deal with the problems, I still try my best to do it. life is not only difficult but also colorful. This sentence always encourages myself when I am in trouble. How important it is!文本8 15分 7+7+1I want to say to myself “ Nothing is impossible.” In my daily life, I may meet plenty of problems. When I am afraid of them, Id like say “Nothing is impossible” to myself. In order to encourage myself not to give up, I will say these words. As we all know, if we keep on doing something , we may succeed. But if we give up, we will never achieve it. Because of this reason, I think these words are very meaning to me. They mean I shouldnt give up before I try to do it. I believe I will succeed if I dont give up. Lets tell ourselves “Nothing is impossible.”文本9 15 8+6+1I want to say to myself “ You can manage it.” There is no denying that every one met trouble in their daily. Someone may give up. But I want to say to myself “You can manage it!” When I was a child, I always ran with my father. Sometimes I was too tired to keep on running. Its my father that encouraged me. He said, when you grow up, you have to face some serious problems, so dont give up ready for the future. Now I grow up, I never forget what my father told me and when I meet some problems, I will always have an active attitude to face it. 文本10 16分 7+8+1I want to say to myself “ Dont give up”Id like to say to myself “Dont give up” to encourage myself. Last weekend, I went to attend an interview and a test in a high school. As I confidently handed in my paper. I didnt realize that I forgot all the questions in the last page. I was so disappointed when I noticed that because my score wasnt high enough. I cried sadly and finally calmed down. I want to say this sentence to myself because with this sentence, I think nothing can stop me to realize my dream and make my future better. 文本11 17.5分 8+7.5+2I want to say to myself “ Dont give up” I would like to say to myself “Dont give up.” In my daily life, I always meet some difficulties. At that time, Im usually afraid and finally give up trying. The result, of course, are not good. But I want to achieve success. So the words “Dont give up” that I want to say to myself is an encourage and also a warn to me. I think it will make me be braver and overcome the difficulties in the same situation.文本12 16分 8+7+1 I want to say to myself “ Dont give up” As a Junior Three student, i have much more exams and homework than before. I sometimes feel under stress. So Id like to say to myself “Dont give up”. When Im tired of maths problems, these words will give me strength. When I fail in the exam, these words will let me think of my own dream. These words are faith in my mind and will always help me to overcome the difficulties. 文本13 16 8+8+0I want to say to myself “Keep doing some sports ” From my perspective, doing some sports is of great importance. So I want to say to myself “Keep doing some sports. As a junior three student, although I am very busy with my study, I still need to spare some time doing some sports like aerobic exercise such as swimming, jogging and yoga. Aerobic exercise, from my point of view, can strength my muscles, reinforce my physical mobility and in general, is beneficial to my health. This sentence encourages me to keep doing some sports in order to stay healthy. To sum up, this sentence encourages me to exercise regularly and doing some sports can make my life meaningful and colorful.C類文本 12.5分-14.5分文本14 14分 8+6+0I want to say to myself “ Dont give up” I want to say to myself “Dont give up” because when I met some difficult problems, I didnt try my best to solve it. I give up it instead. I think the sentence to me is very important. “Dont give up” means try my best to solve the problem. By this way, I could improve my confidence and impress my stress. In my opinion, I think its very useful to me. 文本15 13分 6+7+0I want to say to myself “keep fighting ” According to me, “keep fighting” is the most useful sentence to cheer me up when I want to give up doing something I dont want to do. Sometimes I can be mad and rude about things I hate, but I have to do it, so I would like to say to myself “keep fighting and keep doing this”. That is very useful and I will keep fighting now and future. 文本16 14分 6+8+0I want to say to myself “Never give up ” I would like to say to myself “Never give up” because I am studying hard now. Every day I should do a lot of homework. Every week I should learn a lot of knowledge and have some lessons. Although I always feel tired, I never give up. I can deal with all of the troubles. I can do it. “Never give up.”文本17 13分 6+7+0I want to say to myself “ learn to relax myself” I would like to say to myself “l(fā)earn to relax myself”. I have studied in Junior Three for about a year. I feel stressful because I have to do more homework than before. It is important for me to learn how to relax myself. First, I should try to find pleasure from learning. Next, I can find something that help to relax myself. For example listen to my favourite music. Learning to relax myself, then I can achieve good study result. D類文本 10分-12分文本18 11分 6+5+0I want to say to myself “ hardworking”As a boy, Im very lazy. I always wants to play and watch TV program. So Im not good at study. But when I grow up, I must face to a big problems. I need pass the exam to the high school. It mean hardworking is important for me. To accomplish my exam, I need pay more time and watch less TV. Its a big choice in my hole life. A right choice can be a big change in the future. So I want say to myself “hardworking”. 文本19 12分 6+6+0I want to say to myself “ Never give up”I want to say to myself “Never give up, you can do it” As we all know we have the biggest exam two months ago. Everyone has the serious look on their faces. We also have many tests at school everyday. Sometimes, I want to say ever. When I said to myself “Never give up”, I could feel the big energy come into my body. I will not give up it. I like these words “Never say never”. 文本20 12分 6+6+0I want to say to myself “ dependent” I would like to say dependent to myself. Because in daily life, I always do no homework and let my mom and dad do some other things. I think “dependent” mean is to do everything myself. For example, I can help my mom do some housework and help my dad go shopping. I will do all the thing myself. Because i am grown up now. 文本21 10分 6+4+0I want to say to myself “You should confident. ” When I was child, I didnt have confident, because I think that I was not beautiful or clever. Until teacher made me to speech in front of the teacher table, I was very worry. I will fail. I want to say to myself “You can do it. You should confident.” I speed my suggestions quickly. Teacher looked kindness at me. I was succeed. So I always want to say to myself “You can do it. You should confident.”文本22 12分 5+7+0I want to say to myself “Try it again ” Id like to say “Try it again” to myself. Because Im a lazy girl and I usually give up something easily. So I want to these words to myself so that I wont give up anything quickly any more. In fact, these words help me a lot. By these words, I become more confident and do the tasks better than before. These words are important for me. They are my keys to the life. So when I have some trouble, I will say “Try it again” to myself. E類文本 5.5分-9.5分文