2017英語(yǔ)高考作文真題解析.doc

2017年高考試題及模擬題分項(xiàng)解析之 專題10書(shū)面表達(dá)1.假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：1. 時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2. 內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；3. 課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【參考范文】Dear Leslie，I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now Ill tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems. Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua2. 假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教Henry一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙(papercutting)藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Henry，Im Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know youre interested in one of Chinese traditional art formspapercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. Itll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like. You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. Looking forward to your early reply.Regards, Li Hua3假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請(qǐng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他加入，內(nèi)容包括：1球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；2報(bào)名方式及截止日期。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【參考范文】Dear Eric，I was informed that our school Pingpong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially pingpong. As you know, playing pingpong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua4.61. 假設(shè)你是李津，與你以前的外籍教師Mrs Green 一直保持聯(lián)系。近日她來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的近況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。1簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；2告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準(zhǔn)備(如深入了解天津等)；3希望她有機(jī)會(huì)重訪天津。注意： 1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；3開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì) the 13th National GamesDear Mrs Green，Im so glad to hear from you. _ _ Yours，Li JinOne possible version: Dear Mrs Green,_Im so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. Im very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well. I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again. Yours，Li Jin5.第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作(滿分15分)假定你是李華，計(jì)劃組織一次郊游，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Chris寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1. 參加者；2. 時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；3. 活動(dòng)：登山、野餐等。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【參考范文】Dear Chris, How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you dont have spare time for this trip, it is fine. Its just up to you. Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua讀后續(xù)寫(xiě) 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedalled (騎行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, thats a big dog！” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追趕)Mac was pedalling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2. 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3. 續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4. 續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1：The car abruptly stopped in front of him._ Paragraph 2：A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived._ _ _【解析】 本文主要講述了Mac在騎自行車前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追趕的故事。時(shí)態(tài)要考慮以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。同時(shí)要兼顧字?jǐn)?shù)的要求，不要過(guò)多，關(guān)鍵詞列出5個(gè)以上，需要均勻分布在兩段中?？忌⒁鈳讉€(gè)關(guān)鍵信息和情節(jié)變化并結(jié)合給出的內(nèi)容提示進(jìn)行合理構(gòu)思?！緟⒖挤段摹縏he car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing on the hand, they didnt dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Macs friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the peoples threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.6.81. 請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面有關(guān)我國(guó)電影票房收入(boxoffice income)的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?Su Hua：Whatever. Weve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the WestEach sounds great! Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.Su Hua: And the hightech！Li Jiang：Perfect！Lets get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.Su Hua：No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.One Day in 2016.At Home.Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother：Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. Its convenient with our new and faster network.Son：But it feels good in a cinema.Mother：And the priceWe have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother：But still we cannot get the moneys worth. Some films are just boring【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】1用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；2我國(guó)電影票房收入變化的原因有哪些，簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕目捶?上述對(duì)話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點(diǎn))；3談?wù)勀銓?duì)我國(guó)電影票房收入走向的看法，并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。【寫(xiě)作要求】1寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】?jī)?nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。在遣詞造句上，應(yīng)當(dāng)注意合理使用連接成分，以提高文章的邏輯性，如在列舉理由時(shí)可以用to begin with, whats more, last but not least等；還應(yīng)盡量使用較復(fù)雜的句型，如在總結(jié)全文大意時(shí)可以用定語(yǔ)從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)；在其他地方可以用主語(yǔ)從句、倒裝句等?！緟⒖挤段摹縏he boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its boxoffice income will probably enjoy a slight increase.7.你的英國(guó)朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來(lái)中國(guó)旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長(zhǎng)江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來(lái)信希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你建議的線路；2. 你的理由；3. 你的祝愿。注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim，_Yours，Li Hua1. I am delighted to learn that2. Of the two routes given by， I strongly recommend that3. immersed in the grandeur and splendour of the landscape4. I promise that the trip, both fruitful and rewarding, will turn out to be a memorable experience for you.【參考范文】Dear Jim，Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many wellknown sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.Yours，Li Hua情景作文 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫(xiě)一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母校”為主題的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過(guò)程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：視頻video_參考詞匯和句型：1. In order to leave some impressive memories for all of us before graduation, our class made a special video to express our appreciation to2. carried out a discussion/various ideas were put forward3. shot some wonderful videos in the school/interviewed our teachers4. Those who are talented in computer contributed to the making of the video.5. edited the video/added our love to6. The show received a warm welcome among our fellow schoolmates.7. Memories of the past flooded into our minds/firm bond to our school內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1. 討論分工2. 收集素材3. 編輯制作4. 放映視頻One possible version：Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.8.【2017四川廣元市二?！吭谀硨W(xué)校門口及附近，上學(xué)和放學(xué)時(shí)候交通常常擁擠甚至堵塞，給師生、家長(zhǎng)及市民帶來(lái)許多不便，很多人為些擔(dān)憂。作為一名該校學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你以李華的名義給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社寫(xiě)信反映該情況，內(nèi)容包括： 1交通擁擠的原因； 2提出至少兩條建議。 注意： 1詞數(shù)100左右； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Editor, Im Li Hua, s student of Senior 3. I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate. _ Yours, Li Hua【答案】沒(méi)有答案9.【2017山東菏澤市一?！坑袥](méi)有想過(guò)給自己寫(xiě)信，尤其是給將來(lái)的自己寫(xiě)信。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給五年后的自己寫(xiě)封信，信的內(nèi)容包括以下三個(gè)方面： 1.寫(xiě)信的目的； 2.給五年后的你一些忠告； 3.如何看待五年后的你。 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear myself, Yours, Me【答案】Dear myself,I have been confused for a long time，neglecting to think about the future. Escaping from the future sounds abnormal.If one can not face the future how can he face the reality? Thus I decide to write this letter to you- myself, five years later.First of all,I want to give some suggestions.Learnings light shall never dim in your life for no one can survive in this fast changing world without learning. And remember:health is wealth.One can not abandon any kind of sport. Also,parents should be your first concern and deserve to be loved forever.BesidesJ would like to remind you of keeping your spirits up, which are the basis of your life.5 years later,wow. Now you are reading this letter in front of Beijing Tian:anmen Square.You will be working in Beijing after graduation,being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.Yours,Me【范文亮點(diǎn)】1. 范文采取了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)（I have been confused for a long time，neglecting to think about the future.）（You will be working in Beijing after graduation,being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.）和非限定性定語(yǔ)從句（BesidesJ would like to remind you of keeping your spirits up, which are the basis of your life.）等句式。2. 文章采用了dim；keep up；basis；fast-changing等高級(jí)單詞或短語(yǔ)。采用了First of all，Besides等過(guò)渡銜接詞。10.【2017山東濰坊市實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)二?！考偃缒闶切氯A中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，在最近舉行的市高中生英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)大賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社邀請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇稿件，介紹你練習(xí)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。稿件內(nèi)容如下：(1) 樹(shù)立自信，克服羞怯心理；(2) 多參加英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)；(3) 多看英語(yǔ)新聞（如CCTV-9）注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫Im Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. _【答案】Im Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. Now Id like to share my experience in practicing oral English. Firstly, Im always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. Finally, some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the progress in my speaking ability. Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation. Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. Our hard work will finally be rewarded.【名師點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容齊全，布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me.形容詞性短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，同時(shí)句中運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句；I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends.此句中it作形式賓語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的賓語(yǔ)，同時(shí)句中where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.句中not onlybut also的部分倒裝堪稱經(jīng)典；Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes.as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和名句完美結(jié)合。11.【2017貴州省黔東南州高考模擬】假如你是李華，今年春節(jié)去美國(guó)旅游度假一周。你的美國(guó)朋友Luke招待了你。 請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封信，表示感謝。要點(diǎn)如下：1玩得很開(kāi)心；2謝謝他的招待；3邀請(qǐng)其來(lái)中國(guó)旅游。注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢?！敬鸢浮緿ear Luke,How are you doing these days? With the deepest gratitude, I am wr