高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)指導(dǎo)訓(xùn)練20（含解析）.doc

2015屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)指導(dǎo)訓(xùn)練20一 、書面表達(dá)（本大題共3小題，共75分）假如你叫王方，乘出租車時(shí)丟了手提箱。在失物招領(lǐng)處，工作人員要求你用英文寫一份書面材料。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1 上午11點(diǎn)鐘到達(dá)機(jī)場(chǎng)，然后帶著5件行李乘一輛黃色出租車到假日酒店（holiday inn）；2 到達(dá)酒店后，發(fā)現(xiàn)由于粗心將手提箱遺失在出租車上。不幸的是，未注意到出租車的車牌號(hào)；3 手提箱是黑色的，由塑料制成，尺寸大約為60cm40cm16cm；4 箱內(nèi)有一臺(tái)攝像機(jī)、兩條長褲、三件襯衫、幾本兒童讀物以及一個(gè)錢包。錢包內(nèi)有一張2,000美元的支票；5 你的聯(lián)系電話是 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 文章的開頭已為你寫好。 my name is wang fang. i arrived at the airport at 11 am. 【答案解析】學(xué)生作品： my name is wang fang. i arrived at the airport at 11 am. then i took a yellow taxi to the holiday inn with five luggages. when i arrived at the holiday inn, i found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. unfortunately, i didnt notice the taxis licence. the suitcase is black and made of plastic. it is about 60 centimetre by 40 centimetre by 16 centimetre. in it, there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three pieces of shirts, several books for children and a purse. in the purse, there is a check of 2,000 dollars. could the finder make relation with me? my telephone number is thank you. wang fang 點(diǎn)評(píng)： 1. 第一段第3句：luggage為不可數(shù)名詞，five luggages表達(dá)不正確，可改為five pieces of luggage。 2. 第一段第5句：licence意為執(zhí)照，不是牌照，故the taxis licence可改為the number of the taxi。 3. 第二段第2句：表示度量單位的centimetre為可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)把三個(gè) centimetre都改為centimetres。 4. 第二段第3句：in it過于簡(jiǎn)短，不必在其后停頓，其后逗號(hào)應(yīng)去掉。 5. 第二段第3句：shirt是可數(shù)名詞， three pieces of shirts表達(dá)不正確，應(yīng)改為three shirts。 6. 第二段第4句：表示價(jià)值時(shí)，通常用介詞for，故of最好改為for。 7第三段第1句：make relation with me表達(dá)不正確。習(xí)作者想表達(dá)與我取得聯(lián)系，可改為get in touch with me或return the suitcase to me。 修改好的文章：my name is wang fang. i arrived at the airport at 11 am. then i took a yellow taxi to the holiday inn with five pieces of luggage. when i arrived at the holiday inn, i found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. unfortunately, i didnt notice the number of the taxi. the suitcase is black and made of plastic. it is about 60 centimetres by 40 centimetres by 16 centimetres. in it there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three shirts, several books for children and a purse. in the purse, there is a check for 2,000 dollars. could the finder get in touch with me? my telephone number is thank you. wang fang請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格中的信息介紹2010年上海世博會(huì)：時(shí)間2010年五月一日十月三十一日地點(diǎn)上海主題城市讓生活更美好宗旨促進(jìn)城市多元化、經(jīng)濟(jì)的繁榮、科技的創(chuàng)新參展者200多個(gè)國家、機(jī)構(gòu)和7000萬人參加，展示各國在工農(nóng)業(yè)、科學(xué)、技術(shù)、文化藝術(shù)方面所取得的成就。注意：不要拘泥于要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)120左右 參考詞匯：促進(jìn)：promote 產(chǎn)品博覽會(huì)：exposition 創(chuàng)新：innovation.【答案解析】【參考范文】the world expo 2010 is going to take place in shanghai ,one of the biggest city in china .it is scheduled to last from may 1 to october 31,2010.the theme of it is better city ,better life, which means it is designed to promote cultural diversity ,economic prosperity and scientific innovation of the city. more than 200 countries have been prepared to take part so as to display their outstanding achievements in industry ,agriculture ,science, technology ,culture and art .about 70, 000, 000 visitors from different parts of the world are expected to attend the event. i hope the world expo 2010 will become one of the most impressive international fairs and expositions in history .we are expecting new friends to come to shanghai.下圖是你校學(xué)生會(huì)在全校同學(xué)中就北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)給你留下最深刻印象是什么這一問題的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請(qǐng)根據(jù)此圖寫一篇短文，客觀描述調(diào)查結(jié)果并發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。注意：1、短文必須包括圖表的所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2、短文開頭已為你寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)；中國運(yùn)動(dòng)員的出色表現(xiàn)60.4%26.1%13.5%恢弘盛大的開幕式成功的組織工作 3、詞數(shù)：100左右。 recently a survey has been done by our school students union to find out_【答案解析】【參考范文】recently, a survey has been done by our school students union to find out what impressed the students most about the beijing olympic games. the results are shown below. more than half of the students, to be exact, 60.4%, are deeply impressed by the excellent performances of chinese athletes. on the other hand, 26.1% of the students cant forget the grand and fantastic opening ceremony, which almost doubles the number of those who think the successful organization of the beijing olympic has impr