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書面表達(dá)學(xué)生觀摩篇【浙江省2014高考英語模擬沖刺卷】書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）假設(shè)你是高中學(xué)生王敏，當(dāng)你聽說當(dāng)?shù)卣蛩惆涯闼诘挠兄倌隁v史的老學(xué)校從市中心遷至郊區(qū)時(shí)，你決定給市長寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：1. 簡述你寫信的目的及你對此事的觀點(diǎn)； 2. 說明你的理由。dear sir, _ wang ming, a student of xxx school 【參考范文】書面表達(dá)a possible versiondear sir,it is said that our local government is going to move our school to the suburb. i am now writing to express my opinion that it is more advisable to keep the school where it is.for one thing, it is more convenient for both students and teachers to get to the present school which is located in the center of the city. if it is moved to the suburb, it surely will bring students, especially their parents, much trouble.for another, as a school with a history of one hundred years, her value mainly lies in the signs left by time. we can put up new buildings and plant new trees, but we cannot rebuild such reminders of memory. therefore, i suggest the school not be moved. wang ming, a student of xxx school【陜西省咸陽市2014高考英語模擬考試】書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以“老人摔倒你會扶嗎？”為主題的班會調(diào)查結(jié)果及你自已的意見給英語周報(bào)寫一篇演講稿，要點(diǎn)如下：注意： 1.總詞數(shù)不少于100；2.開頭部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。ladies and gentlemen,will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street? a recent survey from our class meeting shows that_更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文的亮點(diǎn)在于連接詞的使用，讓整個(gè)文章成為了一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體。如however、why not? first、second、in my opinion 等等；同時(shí)句中還有一些高級的句式，如such a case occurs to us one day when were old中的定語從句when were old。在以后的寫作中一定要注意這些技巧的使用?？键c(diǎn)：考察提綱短文【陜西省咸陽市2014高考英語模擬試題】書面表達(dá)(滿分30分)假定你是李華，當(dāng)你看到公益廣告片鼓勵(lì)人們?；丶铱纯?，向父母表達(dá)“愛”時(shí)，你很有感觸。請以ways to express love to parents為題，寫一篇英語演講稿. 提示:1.在父母生日時(shí)，當(dāng)面向他們說“我愛你們”; 2.經(jīng)常關(guān)心父母的生活和身體健康狀況; 3. 注意:1.總詞數(shù)不少于100;2.開頭部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); 3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 【參考范文】one possible version:ways to express love to parents my dear fellows, today id like to talk about ways to express love to our parents. as everyone knows, recently people have been encouraged by public service advertising on tv to go home to see their parents and express their love to them. as a middle school student, i feel moved every time i see it. as far as i am concerned, there are various ways to express love to our parents. first, it is necessary to remember their birthdays, and expressing our wishes to them is a good way to let them know how we love them. besides, we have the duty to care for the condition of their life and health. most importantly, we should often help our parents as much housework as we can, particularly when they are tired. no matter what we do, remember showing respect for our parents is one of the chinese traditional moral values. thank you!【2014高考英語廣東省梅州市質(zhì)檢試卷】讀寫任務(wù)(共1小題，滿分25分)閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。right after the second world war, germany was in ruins. almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. plenty of people were homeless as well as jobless. worse still, the supply of water and electricity was often cut off in the city. two american journalists interviewed a german family living in the basement. the husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. worse still, there were bills for them to payfour children to care for and food to buy. life was hard for them at that time.after the interview, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.“do you think the germans could rebuild their homeland?”“absolutely.”“but i cant see any hope for the country at all. how can you be so certain about that?”“have you noticed what they put on the table in the basement? there was a vase of flowers. a nation, suffering at such moment, hasnt forgotten about flowers. it shows that hopes are not lost. they are still able to dream. a nation with hope can create miracles. they are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”【寫作內(nèi)容】1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；2. 以約120個(gè)詞就夢想改變命運(yùn)的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕?，?nèi)容包括：(1) 你贊同文中的觀點(diǎn)嗎？(2) 舉例證明你贊同或不贊同的原因；(3) 談?wù)勀銓粝氲目捶?。【寫作要求?. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！驹u分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縪ne possible version:two american journalists interviewed a german family after the war. though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.as is often the case, a man who can dream will try hard to overcome any difficulties in front and make it in turn. therefore，i agree that dreams can change ones life. lisa is my friend and former classmate. she was an energetic girl who always dreamed of becoming an actress. however, at the beginning almost everyone tried to persuade her out of her dream because she was no more than 1.55 meters tall. there is no denying that actresses are usually much taller than her. however, she didnt lose heart. with great determination, she wrote a play by herself and eventually acted as a leading role in it. the show was a success.as far as i am concerned, one who has a dream can see further, work harder, and gain much more. please hold fast to your dreams.讀寫任務(wù)評分說明讀寫任務(wù)是有材料作文：要求考生在閱讀的基礎(chǔ)上寫一篇相關(guān)主題的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和語言表達(dá)能力。在評分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意以下幾方面：1 按照評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，實(shí)行分析綜合法評分；2 概括的要點(diǎn)包括：two american journalists interviewed a german family after the war. though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.二、讀寫任務(wù)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)項(xiàng)目分值評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)概括5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息，沒有增加與原文無關(guān)的信息，沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。4基本按照要求概括了主要信息，沒有增加與原文無關(guān)的信息，沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。3基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相關(guān)的信息，有個(gè)別句子抄自原文。語言結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，行文比較規(guī)范。2不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含較多不相關(guān)的信息，有較多的抄襲。語言結(jié)構(gòu)不夠