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六級(jí)【寫作題目】Statistics of Family Expenses in Shanghai 1980 1990 2000Food & Clothing 68% 45% 20%Recreation 3% 5% 8%Education 6% 16% 22%Health Care 6% 10% 16%Others 17% 24% 35%1.根據(jù)上圖描述該城市家庭支出的變化2.分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因3.說明這些變化對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)產(chǎn)生的影響【參考范文】As is shown in the table above, dramatic changes have taken place in family expenses in the City of Shanghai within two decades (from 1980 to 2000). The most obvious change is in expense on food and clothing, which has dropped by 48%, while those on recreation, education and health care have increased respectively by 5%, l6% and l0%. Expenses on other things keep rising from 17% to 35%.The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but are in fact closely related to one another. The most likely factors accounting for these changes are as follows:Development in economy is the fundamental one. The increased income results in the lowering percentage of food and clothing. That is to say, a small percentage of the total income is enou5h to cover food and clothing expenses.Another factor lies in the development of peoples concept. When people are well fed and well dressed, they begin to interest themselves in recreation and education.These changes should also be attributed to social reforms. In the 1990s, college education was not totally free as it was before, which also accounts for the rising expenses on education. Soon after, the government gradually stopped offering houses to its citizens without charges. People had to save a large proportion of their money for housing. Thats partly why the expenses for others doubled.四級(jí) 【寫作題目】 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Secondhand Goods. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)目前購(gòu)買二手貨的人越來越多2)分析產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因3)二手貨交易可能帶來的問題【思路點(diǎn)撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)勗摤F(xiàn)象可能帶來的問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：描述目前二手貨的交易現(xiàn)狀;說明二手貨交易增加的原因;分析二手貨交易可能帶來的問題?！緟⒖挤段摹縎econdhand GoodsIn recent years, second-hand transactions have become quite common. Nowadays there are more and more secondhand goods in the market, such as secondhand books, furniture, appliances, cars, and so on. Why do so many people like to buy secondhand goods?The following reasons can account for this phenomenon. Above all, secondhand goods are cheaper than new ones. This enables those people who have poor financial abilities to buy the things they want. Moreover, secondhand goods transactions make it possible for people to make good use of the goods which may be useless in their hands. Besides, Internet provides a more convenient and quicker transaction platform for secondhand goods.However, there are also some problems in secondhand goods transactions. For one thing, the quality of secondhand goods can not be promised and you can not enjoy the good after-sale service. For another, secondhand goods market lacks enough supervision and management, and there exist many dishonest business activities. In a word, I think secondhand goods transaction is a good trading way, but it needs further perfection of the rules.六級(jí)Marriage: Is it still a tradition?1 剩男剩女越來越多。2 傳統(tǒng)的成家立業(yè)、結(jié)婚思想是否會(huì)發(fā)生變化？3 未來社會(huì)是否會(huì)有更多的人選擇不結(jié)婚，單身過日子，談?wù)勀愕目捶āarriage, what a holy and inspiring word for human beings is. However, with the passage of time, the concept of marriage changes dramatically, as can be seen from the increasing numbers of single men and women in contemporary society.From my perspective, this interesting phenomenon well reflects the youngs value shift in the aspect of marriage, family and so forth. First, the substantial development of our nations economy greatly changes the way young people treat marriage. They are more financially independent and attempt to seek individual freedom. Second, young people are becoming growingly competitive that they subconsciously raise the standards of their ideal partners, which lead to the fact that many find it hard to find their perfect matches.As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that single life is not the main trend in the long run for both men and women, because marriage can bring a lot happiness to us. Accordingly, the future of marriage will still be promising.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】首句欲抑先揚(yáng)，指出婚姻是holy and inspiring（神圣并振奮人心的）。接著通過轉(zhuǎn)折詞however, 狀語with the passage of time，非限制性定語從句和被動(dòng)語態(tài)as can be seen的使用，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)豐富，并不失連貫性與邏輯性。第二段講述了年輕人婚姻觀發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變的社會(huì)和個(gè)人原因。最后一段表達(dá)自己對(duì)婚姻樂觀積極的觀點(diǎn)。值得一提的是此文中的副詞和狀語。副詞如dramatically, greatly, financially, growingly, subconsciously, strongly等使它們修飾的動(dòng)詞和形容詞更加形象生動(dòng)；另外，中文里的動(dòng)詞在英語中通常可以用副詞和狀語來處理。如第一段中的with the passage of time(隨著時(shí)間的流逝)。Food Safety1 食品安全問題令人擔(dān)憂。2 對(duì)此，你有什么看法（可從蔬菜、水果濫用農(nóng)藥、激素方面分析）？【范文】Currently, many problems concerning the safety of food have popped up. As for me, I believe at least three factors account for this issue.First, I observe that profits drive many food producers to commit illegal things. They aim to gain more money at the expense of consumers health. Second, the overuse of agricultural pesticide has resulted in the degradation of food quality. The excessive pesticide bears enormous health hazard for people. Furthermore, some food producers inject hormones into domestic animals so as to make them grow more quickly and thus they can turn in more profit. As a result, peoples health has been seriously disturbed.All in all, food safety is such a great concern, and we all should do establish laws and implement them effectively to avoid producing toxic foods.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】首句直接點(diǎn)題，詞組pop up指彈起，這里指食品安全突然間成了一大社會(huì)問題。文章第二部分從蔬菜生產(chǎn)商、水果濫用農(nóng)藥及激素方面闡釋了食品安全問題的根源。Observe除了有觀察之意，還可以表示某人的觀點(diǎn)；動(dòng)詞commit后面通常接違法或傷害性的事情，如commit a crime, commit illegal things, commit suicide等等?！耙韵M(fèi)者的健康為代價(jià)”除了使用at the expense of 還可以使用at the cost of 或者ignoring。 另外，在表達(dá)同一意思或相近意思時(shí)，此文避免了一詞多用，而是采用不同的單詞或詞組，如劣質(zhì)食品使用了problems concerning the safety of food, the degradation of food quality和toxic foods。 最后一段再次點(diǎn)題，并提出了萬能解決方案之一，即政府和相關(guān)單位要制定法律法規(guī)。My View on University Ranking1. 現(xiàn)在有很多高校評(píng)級(jí)2. 人們對(duì)此看法各異3.你認(rèn)為My View on University Ranking Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that university ranking has gained increasing popularity - institutions home and abroad are always interested in it; newspapers and magazines are fond of carrying the news. Unfortunately, it has also given rise to some problems never thought of. Confronted with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice? When it comes to this question, peoples views vary from one to another. People who support ranking have their reasons. They are convinced that it can stimulate people, teachers and students alike, to work harder so that they can climb on the ladder or at least maintain their position. In this way, universities can produce more talents and knowledge demanded by our society. Also, supporters of university ranking maintain that it can act as a guide for employers when they decide where to find right employees. But others may not agree. These people would argue that university ranking might force universities t