高三英語開放作文課件.ppt

,現(xiàn)在讓我來談一談如何學(xué)好英語。 我經(jīng)常大聲朗讀，這樣容易記住并形成用 英語思考的習(xí)慣。 我每天收聽英語廣播，用英語和別人交談。 我的聽力和口語進(jìn)步很快。 我堅(jiān)持練習(xí)寫作，我的寫作能力不斷提高。,Now Id like to tell you how I learn English. I often read aloud, which helps me to remember them easily and form a good habit of thinking in English. I listen to English program every day and communicate/talk with others in English. In this way, Ive improved both my hearing and my spoken English. I keep writing English compositions and my written English is becoming better and better.,收到你的信我很高興。 你問我如何提高英語寫作能力。 寫作能力只有通過寫來提高，寫得越多，水 平提高越快。 用你學(xué)過的詞、短語和句子，不要用那些不 熟悉的。 希望你在英語方面取得成功。,Im very glad to receive your letter. You asked how to improve your ability of writing. In my opinion, one can only improve ones writing ability through writing. The more you write, the better you can write. Try to use the words, phrases and sentences you have learned. Dont use those you are not sure of. Wishing you success in your English study.,62. I forgot_ her the book. Ill go back to take it. I forgot _ her the book, so I went back to take it again. A. to return B. returning C. to return back D. return,A,B,63. He had the sick girl_ to the hospital. He had the sick girl _ medicine to the hospital. A. carry B. to carry C. carrying D. carried,D,A,65. We had thought what we did _him. We had thought that we did_him. A. satisfying B. satisfaction C. satisfied D. satisfy,C,D,66. She is considered _ the dance hall. She has considered _the dance hall so far. A. how to buying B. to buy C. to have bought D. buying,B,D,67. _ in the magazine, I made a decision to read it again. _by the magazine, I made a decision to read it. A. Interest B. Interested C. To interest D. Being interested,B,D,開放作文,Sabrina,One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground. They picked it up and found it wounded. Suppose you are Li Hua and Wang Ping please tell us what you did with the bird.,審語境： 審人稱： 審時(shí)態(tài)： 抓關(guān)鍵詞：,一個(gè)星期六的下午，李華和王平在樹林里玩。他們?cè)诘厣习l(fā)現(xiàn)一只受傷的小鳥。 supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping We Please tell us what you did with the bird. 過去時(shí) What you did,解題步驟,認(rèn)真審題,巧妙構(gòu)思,展開細(xì)節(jié),語言表達(dá),One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground. They picked it up and found it wounded.,did,細(xì)節(jié)描寫,巧妙構(gòu)思： Took it home Took it to the hospital Buried it when it was dead 展開細(xì)節(jié) + 恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言表達(dá) 語言應(yīng)地道、規(guī)范、得體。,One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground. They picked it up and found it wounded.,范文 Thinking that it might die without treatment, we took it home. I made a little nest for it and gave it some rice to eat. Some days later, the bird recovered. We took it out and let it return to the woods. I thought we had done so good a thing. We put the bird in my hat and took it to the animal hospital. The doctor said one of its wings was hurt. He gave us some medicine and told us to put it on the wound once a day. We took the bird home and took good care of it. A few days later, the bird could fly again.,3. We tried to save the bird by giving it some water and food. And then we decided to take it to the animal hospital, but it was too late. After a short while, the bird couldnt move at all and it was dead. So we dug a small hole and put the bird into it as a bomb. What a pity.,問題范文 First find the wound of the bird quickly. Second, tidy the wound carefully and softly and remember not to make the bird pain a lot. Then put some medicine on it and tie a hand around the wound. 時(shí)態(tài)問題 2. First we are looking at the bird carefully in order to know where the bird has wounded. Then we treated the bird carefully and decided to take the bird to a hospital, where it could have a better medical care. After that, when the bird is getting better, we let it free.,缺乏細(xì)節(jié),3. One day in the afternoon, Wang Ping and I were playing happily in the woods. We were playing balls and suddenly the ball ran to the other side of the road. I hurried to get it when I saw a bird lying there and I found it was wounded. We quickly took it to the hospital and the doctor gave the bird some medicine and we took it back home then. It was getting better and better and we decided to set it free the next day.,One day in the afternoon, Wang Ping and I were playing happily in the woods. We were playing balls and suddenly the ball ran to the other side of the road.,I hurried to get it when I saw a bird lying there and I found it was wounded,缺乏主次,離題話偏多,重復(fù)原文,4. Wang Ping told me that he was a little hungry and we could eat the bird. I agreed with him and we found some dry wood and put it together. Then we cooked the bird. It was really delicious. What a happy day.,found,put,cooked,思想格調(diào)不高,開放作文的寫作要領(lǐng)： 認(rèn)真審題，即：審情景，人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，抓關(guān)鍵詞 大腦風(fēng)暴：發(fā)散思維，盡可能想出多的思路 緊扣主題，符合要求，首尾呼應(yīng) 注意寫作對(duì)象和語言風(fēng)格，要有讀者意識(shí) 要進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)描寫 要力求內(nèi)容新穎，邏輯合理 要做到思想健康，積極向上 注意語言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性,You and your friend are in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. ( 03 北京高考樣題）,1. 認(rèn)真審題 情景： 時(shí)態(tài)： 人稱： 關(guān)鍵詞：,你所面對(duì)的對(duì)象是你的朋友。他在你的家里。他發(fā)現(xiàn)你家的玻璃碎了，問其原因。 What happened 過去時(shí) 第一人稱 / 其他人稱 不能用第二人稱 in your room, window, broken, what happened,2. 大腦風(fēng)暴 A football broke the window. A thief broke the window. My parents quarreled and threw a vase to the window. A hardcover book was thrown out of the window. An earthquake happened. 選出自己熟悉的，容易發(fā)揮的，新穎的素材 3. 緊扣主題，符合要求，首尾呼應(yīng) 題目要求寫出“玻璃是怎么碎的”，所以全文都要圍繞“碎”來寫,4. 注意寫作對(duì)象和語言風(fēng)格，要有讀者意識(shí) 交流的對(duì)象是你的朋友，交流的內(nèi)容是玻璃碎的原因，所以要用口語化的語言 5. 要進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)描寫 It was I who broke it. I felt very sorry about it. 文章必須要回答how 6.要力求內(nèi)容新穎，邏輯合理 應(yīng)力求避開大眾化的想法，寫出富有創(chuàng)造性的文章。 但不能違背邏輯。 My father and I were doing the paper folding games. We folded a lot of paper planes. When we tested which one could fly higher, one of the paper planes hit the window. And my window was broken.,7.要做到思想健康，積極向上 教育就是要把學(xué)生培養(yǎng)成對(duì)社會(huì)有益的好公民。寫作要遵循的指導(dǎo)思想就是中學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的、應(yīng)該想的一些行為準(zhǔn)則。 8.注意語言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性 基本功,開放作文的寫作要領(lǐng)： 認(rèn)真審題，即：審情景，人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，抓關(guān)鍵詞 大腦風(fēng)暴：發(fā)散思維，盡可能想出多的思路 緊扣主題，符合要求，首尾呼應(yīng) 注意寫作對(duì)象和語言風(fēng)格，要有讀者意識(shí) 要進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)描寫 要力求內(nèi)容新穎，邏輯合理 要做到思想健康，積極向上 注意語言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性,范文 I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and she asked me to get a book from the bookshelf for her. It was a hardcover and a little thick. I got the book and decided to throw it to her. But she missed it, and it broke the window.,Exercise Class is over and the students are going home. At this time, the head teacher comes in and says he has an announcement to make. If you are the head teacher, please make your announcement. May I have your attention, please? With the SARS, we will stay at home from tomorrow. The date of coming back to school will be informed by phone call. Of course, the midterm exam wont be held. Here is your homework. I think it its enough for you now. but more homework will be put on the Internet. Please check it as soon as possible and take care of yourselves. Remember to call your monitor every day since tomorrow.,Attention, please! I have an announcement to make. As the Internet facilities have been introduced in our school, you are expected to make full use of them. All the digital libraries are open at noon and you can download free software, chat, listen to music and send e-mails across the world in a flash. whats more, the Internet is free to use, and there are enough computers, all in good condition. Please remember to bring two photos to school to get a card tomorrow. In this way you could have the right to use all the equipment.,根據(jù)下面提供的情景，寫一段接續(xù)文字。詞數(shù)不少于50。 Last month, I bought a new sweater at a big department store, but it has given me enough troubles When I was in store, I was told that the sweater will never shrink, and if I wash it in cold water, the color wont fade at all. However, the first time I washed it, the color of the water changed into something like grape juice! Worse still, I found that I could hardly put it on any more after it dried. It had become too small for me.,When I got home, I found the sweater was red. But I wanted a white one. So I decided to go back to change it. After I got the right sweater, it was nearly midnight. Unfortunately, when I got back, I found the key was not with me, so I decided to get in from an open window. When I was climbing, w was caught by a policeman as a thief. When I got home at last and tried the sweater on, o found that the assistant gave me a wrong size. When I was on my way home, I found my purse was gone. I was really worried because Id put both my ID card and credit card in the purse. I turned my pocket inside out, but I just couldnt find it. Then I remembered I had left it in the fitting room. I rushed back to the store immediately. Thank goodness. A customer had found my purse and gave it to the salesgirl.,Exercise You and your cousin go climbing in the morning. But you come home alone late in the afternoon. Your mother is very surprised and asks, “ Where is your cousin? Why are you so late?” Please give your explanations. 范文 We were climbing the hill when we saw a monkey lying on the ground, unable to move. She was injured seriously. After a quick examination, we found her left leg broken. S