2018年高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)每日一題第23周短文改錯3含解析.docx

短文改錯（3）高考頻度： 難易程度： (2017新課標(biāo)全國卷II) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。 Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！【參考答案】Mr. and Mrs. Zhang work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are in planting vegetables in their garden, is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up and water the vegetables together. They have also bought some gardening tools. , they often get some useful from the internet. When summer , they will invite their students pick the vegetables！【答案解析】【文章大意】本文主要講了張先生和張?zhí)娜粘９ぷ骱蜕??！緫?yīng)試必備】 短文改錯是考查學(xué)生進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的一個方面。短文改錯主要涉及語法和詞的用法，而且往往是在寫作時容易犯的語法錯誤和用詞錯誤。換句話說，短文改錯考查的是學(xué)生用中文思維學(xué)習(xí)英語時容易犯的語法和用詞錯誤。而且根據(jù)近年來高考中各題難度測試數(shù)據(jù)來看，短文改錯一直是高考全卷中難度較大的一題。短文改錯題的誤區(qū)在短文改錯中，我們除了掌握考點(diǎn)和解題技巧外，以下誤區(qū)也是值得我們注意的，我們只有真正走出誤區(qū)，才能使得我們的改錯能力有所提高。誤區(qū)一：鼠目寸光許多同學(xué)在改錯時，眼中往往只有行而無句子，從而導(dǎo)致沒有顧及句意和結(jié)構(gòu)的完整性而判斷失誤，行是計算錯誤數(shù)的單位而不是判斷錯誤的單位，改錯必須以句子為單位，因?yàn)橐恍胁皇且粋€完整的句子，其語言意義及語法結(jié)構(gòu)也不一定完整。如果機(jī)械的按行來判斷，很可能因斷章取義或錯誤的理解語法結(jié)構(gòu)而判斷失誤。誤區(qū)二：自以為是許多學(xué)生做題時不是逐一的排查，而是認(rèn)為哪處不對則改哪，而所改之處又是模棱兩可無充分把握，從而疏漏了本應(yīng)一目了然、最有把握發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正的錯誤。如：Ithinktheprogramwillbeveryhelpfulwiththeworkweweredoinginclassonthebrain.很多學(xué)生在做該題時就把with改為to，他們只記住behelpfulto這樣的詞組，而把后面非常明顯的時態(tài)錯誤給忽略了，此題應(yīng)該把were改為are才可。誤區(qū)三：先入為主在做改錯題時，學(xué)生會遇到這樣的情況，即找出了行中的錯誤，卻沒有改對。這是他們在確定錯誤后缺乏一種此處可能存在幾種改法的可能性的自覺意識，因此也就不可能思考怎么改才是最恰當(dāng)?shù)囊馑?，所以，往往腦子里先想到怎么改就改了，從而導(dǎo)致知錯改錯。如：Threemenwerefishingwhentheangelappearedintheboatwiththem.該行中定冠詞theangel應(yīng)改為不定冠詞a，結(jié)果還是不能得分。這部分學(xué)生腦海中的一位天使一個就用a，沒有顧及還要an也可表示意義，所以就犯了先入為主的錯誤，此題正確的改法是將其改為an。誤區(qū)四：喧賓奪主所謂喧賓奪主是指學(xué)生在答題時，不注意保持句子或者短文的原意，肆意增詞，減詞或改詞，從而漏過了真正的錯誤，切記短文改錯的前提是確保短文的正確表述，因此只要原文中的用詞沒有語法詞法的錯誤，沒有導(dǎo)致情節(jié)上的不一致，就應(yīng)該保留該詞。誤區(qū)五：粗心大意短文改錯題所設(shè)置的錯誤通常都是中國學(xué)生在使用英語的過程中常犯的錯誤，所以此類題對于相當(dāng)一部分學(xué)生來說存在一定的難度。因此在各個環(huán)節(jié)上都應(yīng)該細(xì)心，尤其要注意的是：最后的書寫過程，千萬不可忽視了大小寫或?qū)卧~拼寫錯誤而導(dǎo)致到手的分?jǐn)?shù)失去。誤區(qū)六：漢語干擾由于大多數(shù)學(xué)生都是在受母語漢語的影響下進(jìn)行語言學(xué)習(xí)的，在做題時難免會受到漢語思維或者表達(dá)法的影響。誤區(qū)七：舍小失大在做改錯題時，有時會遇到兩行無法確定錯誤的情況，此時有些學(xué)生為得一分而在找不出錯誤的行中拼命的找錯，從而導(dǎo)致因耗時過多，使接下來的書面表達(dá)時間不夠，那樣損失就大了。因此，要把握好以下兩個原則：一是限時原則，即不可在某一行或者某幾行耗時太多，務(wù)必要給書面表達(dá)充足的時間；二是寧勾勿勉強(qiáng)原則，實(shí)在無法確定錯誤的兩行，寧可都打上勾，也不勉強(qiáng)無把握的改動。(2017新課標(biāo)全國卷III) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days. When I look at this picture of myself. I realize how fast time flies. I grown not only physically, also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was , I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I