高考英語書面表達專題輔導-基礎(chǔ)寫作[經(jīng)歷感受].ppt

1. have a discussion討論 2. pack sth into the suitcase把某物裝進箱子 3. search the Internet上網(wǎng)查詢 4. see sb off為某人送行 5. a five-day tour為期五天的旅行 6. drop out of school輟學,相關(guān)短語,7.live a.life過著的生活 8.pay the tuition fees支付學費 9.win the first prize獲得一等獎,10. be thought highly of 受到高度贊揚 11. come to a conclusion that. 得出結(jié)論如下 12. take great pains to do sth不遺余力地做某事,13. set a good example to us為我們樹 立了一個好榜樣 14. be impressed by. 對印象深刻; 為所感動 15. devote ones spare time to helping others 利用業(yè)余時間幫助他人,1. Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.我們正在上語文課, 老師突然滑倒了。 2. We were about to set off when it began to rain. 我們正要出發(fā), 這時天下起雨來了。,相關(guān)句式,3. I had just lain down when the telephone rang. 我剛剛躺下, 這時電話鈴響了。 4. Hardly had he finished his speech when the audience started cheering. 他一演講完 觀眾就歡呼起來。(同義句式: no sooner. than. /as soon as.),5. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.一到達, 我們就開始工作。 6. On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could.一聽到鈴聲, 學生都盡快跑進教室。,1. 記敘事件的寫作一般按照事件發(fā)展的順序來寫作。 2. 由于活動往往有很多環(huán)節(jié), 考生可以用一些與時間相關(guān)的副詞如then, later, next, afterwards, soon after that等或一些時間狀語從句After, before.等把要點合理連貫地連接在一起。,3. 若試題要求考生寫自己的感受, 考生不能只是用I am very happy等簡單句, 而是盡量用復合句來充分表達自己的觀點。另外, 記敘文多涉及情感相關(guān)的用詞, 考生平時可以多積累這樣的單詞或短語, 如an unforgettable experience, to my joy/delight, be satisfied/ content with等等。,(2008年深圳一模) 假設(shè)你參加了你校組織的“關(guān)愛生命 攜手艾滋兒童”的活動。 寫作內(nèi)容 請你寫一篇英文日記，敘述活動情況, 內(nèi)容包括：,寫作要求 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。注意: 日記的開頭已寫好。 評分標準 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整, 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 December 1st 2007SaturdayFine,例題導寫 認真審題。因為是日記, 所以用第一人稱; 敘述已發(fā)生的事應該用一般過去時, 感受則用一般過去時或者一般現(xiàn)在時都可以。 信息重組。第一個句子為總起, 描述自己何時何地參加了何種活動。由于是記敘事件, 接下去可以按照時間發(fā)展順序進行信息點的劃分。第二句是出發(fā)時間, 出發(fā)地點和路程?；顒拥膬?nèi)容比較多, 可以用兩句話分別表述。最后一句就是活動的感受。,句1：(1) 組織活動：_ 句2：(2) 志愿者：_ 句3：(3) 紅十字會醫(yī)院： _,詞匯整理 翻譯或完成下列詞匯或短語。,the Red Cross Hospital,organize an activity,volunteer,(4) 同親切交談： _ (5) 牽手跳舞： _ 句4： (6) 贈送禮物： _ (7) 拍照：_,take photos of sb,have close chats with sb.,dance happily together,present gifts,難句翻譯 翻譯下列每組句子并合并成一 句。 句2： (1) 8：30 啟程, 在校門口集中, 開始車程。 (1) We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip. (2) 花了一個半小時自行車車程。 (2) It took us about one hour and a half.,合并: We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half.,參考范文 December 1st 2007 Saturday Fine Today is the World Aids Day, so our school organized an activity called “Take care of our lives, hand in hand with Aids children”. At 8:30 a.m. , we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half.,Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital, where most Aids children are staying, we began to have close chats with them to see how their life is going, and then we danced happily together. Having got to know them so well, we presented our gifts, took lots of photos and ate lunch together before we came back. I feel very great to see the Aids children so happy when they are not ignored and taken good care of.,能力提高 1. 作文填空 請考生將括號中的中文翻譯成英文完成此篇作文。 I (1) _ (參加)a fantastic English talent show in Peoples Park on Dec. 25， 2009. Middle school students from all over Guangzhou (2)_ (表演了各種各樣的節(jié)目), like English songs, English short plays and English stories.,performed all kinds of programs,participated in / took part in / joined in,(3) _ _ (這場表演的目的在于)encourage students to introduce Guangzhou and the 2010 Asian Games in English and to arouse students interest in English as well. I was very excited because I was the leading actor/actress in an English short play at the show. Though I was(4) _(一點點緊張) at the beginning, later on I felt relaxed and the performance was a great success.,a little bit nervous,The purpose / aim of this show is to或This show aims / is aimed to / is meant to / is intended to,2. 翻譯句子 請根據(jù)括號中的提示將下列中文句子翻譯成英文。 (1) 我覺得, 幫助那些急切渴望我們幫助和關(guān)心的小孩, 是我們應有的職責。(feel it+ 名詞+ to do, give a hand to sb., be in need of/desire for/be dying for),(1)I feel it our responsibility to give a hand to those children who are greatly in need of our help and care.,(2) 我覺得這次活動很有意義, 我學會了怎 樣與人溝通, 并意識到幫助他人的重要性和 感受到與之帶來的樂趣。(meaningful, communicate with.),(2) I find the activity meaningful, for I have leant how to communicate with others, realized the importance of helping others and enjoyed the fun brought by my active participation.,假設(shè)你參加了深圳大運會的志愿者活動, 回來以后感觸良多。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 寫一篇英文日記, 敘述活動情況。 寫作內(nèi)容,寫作要求 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。 評分標準 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確, 信息內(nèi)容完整, 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 參考詞匯： 深圳大運會 Shenzhen Universiade 運動村 Village 運動場地 court,參考范文 August 24th 2011 Wednesday Fine I found it a great honor to work as a volunteer in the Shenzhen Universiade from August 12th to 23rd. Shenzhen recruited more than 1.27 million people from home and abroad to provide services, including about 2500 volunteers from universities in Shenzhen who were providing services to the 50, 000 people staying in the Village.,I worked in the equipment department, responsible for moving all the equipment to the court and then carry it back. I was required to work from 6:30 a.m. to 11:00 a.m., but I volunteered to work all the day from 6:30 in the morning to 19:30 in the evening because of the job requirement. It was very tiring and I felt exhausted but it was worth it, because I was proud to have done what I could for this great event.,這是一篇關(guān)于活動感受的日記類寫作。在內(nèi)容方面, 考生在寫作中應該注重情感態(tài)度的表達, 使日記更具有真實感, 如范文中的第一句“I found it a great honor to work.”和最后 “because I was proud to have done what I could for this great event都表達了作者的情感態(tài)度。,精華點評,在詞匯運用方面, 考生可以有意識地使用高中所學到的一些詞匯或短語來代替初中所學的詞匯, 如表達“來自世界各地”, 范文使用了from home and abroad而不是all over the world; 表示疲倦, 范文使用了exhausted而不是用tired。,在句型方面, 考生要熟練地運用非謂語動詞作伴隨狀語和定語從句等復合句,使文章的句式更多樣化, 如范文的第二句就使用了including作伴隨狀語, 以及在伴隨狀語中帶有一個who引導的定語從句。,假設(shè)你們班同學聽說你和家人上周末去了廣州南沙參觀沙雕后都對此很感興趣，邀請你在課堂上介紹這次參觀活動。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容, 寫一篇短文, 向你的同班同學講述此次旅游經(jīng)歷及感受。 寫作內(nèi)容,寫作要求 1. 只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容； 2. 文章開頭已給出, 不計入總句數(shù)。 評分標準 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確, 信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。(注：因篇幅限制, 以下寫作要求、評分標準、例題導寫和能力提高等欄目可能被省略, 但教師課件中仍會保留) Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family.,參考范文 Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. We set out at 9:00 a.m. and arrived at 10 a.m. On arriving, we couldnt wait to enjoy the exhibition of sand statues there, which was hosted by the local government of Nansha. The statues were