開放式作文指導(dǎo)FreeWriting.ppt

Teaching aim: how to help the Ss write such composition Teaching difficulty: how to check over the requirement and give reasonable explanations to support the argument. Teaching methods: a step-by-step approach,Free Writing,Free Writing,Give your writing wings and let it fly away to your ideal destination.,How do we understand “free”?,The word “free” means you are free to express your own opinions. 思維沒有定式，結(jié)論不唯一，但要自圓其說。,開放作文 （15分） 字數(shù)要求：詞數(shù)不少于60 開放作文評分:以內(nèi)容和語言定檔定分 立意明確，邏輯清晰 (立意-細節(jié)描述） 語言達意,Suggested time: 10-12minutes,第四檔（1215）很好地達到總體要求。 有效結(jié)合材料，觀點明確； 內(nèi)容連貫、條理清晰； 語法運用得體，詞匯豐富，幾乎沒有語言錯誤。 第三檔（ 811）基本達到總體要求。 有效結(jié)合材料，觀點基本明確； 內(nèi)容基本連貫，有一定的條理性； 語言運用基本得體，有少量錯誤，但能表達觀點。,第二檔（47）未達到總體要求。 未有效結(jié)合材料； 內(nèi)容松散，條理性較差； 語言運用較差，錯誤較多，但基本能表達觀點。 第一檔（13）未達到總體要求。 未結(jié)合材料； 內(nèi)容混亂，缺乏條理性； 語言運用差，錯誤很多，嚴重影響觀點表達。,用自己的語言對材料進行簡明、清楚敘述,緊承敘述，引出觀點（話題） （力求自然、準確）,列論點，做聯(lián)系實際闡釋 （力求深度、力度）,總結(jié)，升華主旨（ 力求完整、有力）,起,承,議,合,導(dǎo)材料-解材料-議材料-圓材料,本次作文的主要問題,1、審題： 看不懂材料，造成立意錯誤。 游離于材料，造成主次混淆。 2、寫作技巧： 大篇幅復(fù)制原材料，造成入題遲緩。 展開議論時，只見干條款，不見闡釋，造成議論空洞 3、思維能力： 比較簡單，不夠活躍。 4、語言基本功： 單詞，語法，語句錯誤多。 5 書寫潦草,導(dǎo)文1: 評分，尋主要病根,通看兩文，尋近日寫作中的高頻語法和語言錯誤,導(dǎo)文2: 評分，尋主要病根,a good news,and hope,share its beauty to,should gives,wish becomes,with,could become,There are so many people hope to perform ,who hope to,become more goodlook,appealing,hoping,give,導(dǎo)文3: 評分; 加過渡詞，讓全文錦上添花,表導(dǎo)入： according to， in my opinion， as far as I am concerned，as for me 表遞進： besides， whats more， whats worse， furthermore， in addition to,參考過渡詞,表因果: thanks to，as a result of，due to，owing to, therefore，thus 表強調(diào): above all，indeed，surely，certainly，of course，at least，obviously,表轉(zhuǎn)折或?qū)Ρ? however，on the other hand，on the contrary，in spite of, whereas 表列舉: for one thing. and for another ; first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)， finally/ last but not least 表總結(jié): in short，in a word，in conclusion, in brief，generally speaking， to sum up，all in all,表舉例: for example/instance, take. for example, such as, as follows, and so on等,Have a try !,寫作一 (滿分l5分) 請結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫作。 In the 2014 CCTV Spring Festival Gala，two foreign stars，F(xiàn)rench celebrity Sophie Marceau and Korean actor Lee Minho are invited to perform on the stageWhat is your opinion of this practice? 要求： 1應(yīng)緊扣材料，有明確的觀點； 2詞數(shù)不少于60； 3在答題卡上作答。,贊成 be for ( the idea that.) be in favor of approve of cannot agree more with 反對 be against be opposed to (doing) sth oppose object to (doing) sth,實用模版 Para.1 簡述該問題, 陳述自己的觀點 As to the., I personally think Para.2 The reasons can be listed as follows : /There are several reasons accounting for_.First of all,. 理由一和闡釋. Whats more, 理由二和闡釋. Besides,理由三.和闡釋 Para.3 To sum up, 總結(jié)與升華,佳作展示臺,( for ) As far as Im concerned, Im OK with the practice of inviting foreign stars to the Gala. The reasons are as follows. With the globalization of most aspects, it is a natural tendency to see different cultural elements combined together for the sake of diversity and fun, particularly in a grand show like the Spring Festival Gala. Besides, the audience of the Gala are so varied in terms of their tastes and needs. There are even some foreign audience watching the show. Therefore, only by combining some,foreign elements can Gala satisfy the needs of minor audience, who , by no means can be ignored. In a word, it is fully acceptable and advisable to invite foreign celebrities to the Spring Festival Gala .,Homework : 請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于60。 In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.,Describe a picture（描圖）,Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our life （析圖）,Give your own opinions / suggestions/solutions（議圖）,Transition,From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is drawing a line with great effort. The picture is more than what it can show us. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At