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1. have a discussion討論 2. pack sth into the suitcase把某物裝進(jìn)箱子 3. search the Internet上網(wǎng)查詢(xún) 4. see sb off為某人送行 5. a five-day tour為期五天的旅行 6. drop out of school輟學(xué),相關(guān)短語(yǔ),7.live a.life過(guò)著的生活 8.pay the tuition fees支付學(xué)費(fèi) 9.once-in-a-life-time難得的 10.together with sb 同某人一起 11.win the first prize獲得一等獎(jiǎng),12. be thought highly of 受到高度贊揚(yáng) 13. come to a conclusion that. 得出結(jié)論如下 14. take great pains to do sth不遺余力地做某事,15. set a good example for us為我們樹(shù) 立了一個(gè)好榜樣 16. be impressed by. 對(duì)印象深刻; 為所感動(dòng) 17. devote ones spare time to helping others 利用業(yè)余時(shí)間幫助他人,1. Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.我們正在上語(yǔ)文課, 老師突然滑倒了。 2. We were about to set off when it began to rain. 我們正要出發(fā), 這時(shí)天下起雨來(lái)了。,相關(guān)句式,3. I had just lain down when the telephone rang. 我剛剛躺下, 這時(shí)電話鈴響了。 4. Hardly had he finished his speech when the audience started cheering. 他一演講完 觀眾就歡呼起來(lái)。(同義句式: no sooner. than. /as soon as.),5. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.一到達(dá), 我們就開(kāi)始工作。 6. On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could.一聽(tīng)到鈴聲, 學(xué)生都盡快跑進(jìn)教室。,7. Shortly after I let him come in, he cried on his desk.我讓他進(jìn)來(lái)后不久, 他就伏在桌上哭了起來(lái)。 8. After that we had a party. Some of us sang; others danced or told stories in turn. 在那之后, 我們舉行了聚會(huì)。有的人唱歌, 有的人跳舞或輪流講故事。,1. 記敘事件的寫(xiě)作一般按照事件發(fā)展的順序來(lái)寫(xiě)作。 2. 由于活動(dòng)往往有很多環(huán)節(jié), 考生可以用一些與時(shí)間相關(guān)的副詞如then, later, next, afterwards, soon after that等或一些時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句After, before.等把要點(diǎn)合理連貫地連接在一起。,3. 若試題要求考生寫(xiě)自己的感受, 考生不能只是用I am very happy等簡(jiǎn)單句, 而是盡量用復(fù)合句來(lái)充分表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。另外, 記敘文多涉及情感相關(guān)的用詞, 考生平時(shí)可以多積累這樣的單詞或短語(yǔ), 如an unforgettable experience, to my joy/delight, be satisfied/ content with等等。,(2008年深圳一模) 假設(shè)你參加了你校組織的“關(guān)愛(ài)生命 攜手艾滋兒童”的活動(dòng)。 寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英文日記，敘述活動(dòng)情況, 內(nèi)容包括：,寫(xiě)作要求 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。注意: 日記的開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整, 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 December 1st 2007SaturdayFine,例題導(dǎo)寫(xiě) 認(rèn)真審題。因?yàn)槭侨沼? 所以用第一人稱(chēng); 敘述已發(fā)生的事應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí), 感受則用一般過(guò)去時(shí)或者一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)都可以。 信息重組。第一個(gè)句子為總起, 描述自己何時(shí)何地參加了何種活動(dòng)。由于是記敘事件, 接下去可以按照時(shí)間發(fā)展順序進(jìn)行信息點(diǎn)的劃分。第二句是出發(fā)時(shí)間, 出發(fā)地點(diǎn)和路程。活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容比較多, 可以用兩句話分別表述。最后一句就是活動(dòng)的感受。,句1：(1) 組織活動(dòng)：_ 句2：(2) 志愿者：_ 句3：(3) 紅十字會(huì)醫(yī)院： _,詞匯整理 翻譯或完成下列詞匯或短語(yǔ)。,the Red Cross Hospital,organize an activity,volunteer,(4) 同親切交談： _ (5) 牽手跳舞： _ 句4： (6) 贈(zèng)送禮物： _ (7) 拍照：_,take photos,have close chats with sb.,dance happily together,present gifts,難句翻譯 翻譯下列每組句子并合并成一 句。 句2： (1) 8：30 啟程, 在校門(mén)口集中, 開(kāi)始車(chē)程。 (1) We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip. (2) 花了一個(gè)半小時(shí)自行車(chē)車(chē)程。 (2) It took us about one hour and a half.,合并: We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half.,參考范文 December 1st 2007 Saturday Fine Today is the World Aids Day, so our school organized an activity called “Take care of our lives, hand in hand with Aids children”. At 8:30 a.m. , we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half.,Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital, where most Aids children are staying, we began to have close chats with them to see how their life is going, and then we danced happily together. Having got to know them so well, we presented our gifts, took lots of photos and ate lunch together before we came back. I feel very great to see the Aids children so happy when they are not ignored and taken good care of.,能力提高 1. 作文填空 請(qǐng)考生將括號(hào)中的中文翻譯成英文完成此篇作文。 I (1) _ (參加)a fantastic English talent show in Peoples Park on Dec. 25， 2009. Middle school students from all over Guangzhou (2)_ (表演了各種各樣的節(jié)目), like English songs, English short plays and English stories.,performed all kinds of programs,participated in / took part in / joined in,(3) _ _ (這場(chǎng)表演的目的在于)encourage students to introduce Guangzhou and the 2010 Asian Games in English and to arouse students interest in English as well. I was very excited because I was the leading actor/actress in an English short play at the show. Though I was(4) _(一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)緊張) at the beginning, later on I felt relaxed and the performance was a great success.,a little bit nervous,The purpose / aim of this show is to或This show aims / is aimed to / is meant to / is intended to,2. 翻譯句子 請(qǐng)根據(jù)括號(hào)中的提示將下列中文句子翻譯成英文。 (1) 我覺(jué)得, 幫助那些急切渴望我們幫助和關(guān)心的小孩, 是我們應(yīng)有的職責(zé)。(feel it+ 名詞+ to do, give a hand to sb., be in need of/desire for/be dying for),(1)I feel it our responsibility to give a hand to those children who are greatly in need of our help and care.,(2) 我覺(jué)得這次活動(dòng)很有意義, 我學(xué)會(huì)了怎 樣與人溝通, 并意識(shí)到幫助他人的重要性和 感受到與之帶來(lái)的樂(lè)趣。(meaningful, communicate with.),(2) I find the activity meaningful, for I have leant how to communicate with others, realized the importance of helping others and enjoyed the fun brought by my active participation.,假設(shè)你參加了深圳大運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者活動(dòng), 回來(lái)以后感觸良多。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息, 寫(xiě)一篇英文日記, 敘述活動(dòng)情況。 寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)作要求 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確, 信息內(nèi)容完整, 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 參考詞匯： 深圳大運(yùn)會(huì) Shenzhen Universiade 運(yùn)動(dòng)村 Village 運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)地 court,參考范文 August 24th 2011 Wednesday Fine I found it a great honor to work as a volunteer in the Shenzhen Universiade from August 12th to 23rd. Shenzhen recruited more than 1.27 million people from home and abroad to provide services, including about 2500 volunteers from universities in Shenzhen who were providing services to the 50, 000 people staying in the Village.,I worked in the equipment department, responsible for moving all the equipment to the court and then carry it back. I was required to work from 6:30 a.m. to 11:00 a.m., but I volunteered to work all the day from 6:30 in the morning to 19:30 in the evening because of the job requirement. It was very tiring and I felt exhausted but it was worth it, because I was proud to have done what I could for this great event.,這是一篇關(guān)于活動(dòng)感受的日記類(lèi)寫(xiě)作。在內(nèi)容方面, 考生在寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)該注重情感態(tài)度的表達(dá), 使日記更具有真實(shí)感, 如范文中的第一句“I found it a great honor to work.”和最后 “because I was proud to have done what I could for this great event都表達(dá)了作者的情感態(tài)度。,精華點(diǎn)評(píng),在詞匯運(yùn)用方面, 考生可以有意識(shí)地使用高中所學(xué)到的一些詞匯或短語(yǔ)來(lái)代替初中所學(xué)的詞匯, 如表達(dá)“來(lái)自世界各地”, 范文使用了from home and abroad而不是all over the world; 表示疲倦, 范文使用了exhausted而不是用tired。,在句型方面, 考生要熟練地運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句,使文章的句式更多樣化, 如范文的第二句就使用了including作伴隨狀語(yǔ), 以及在伴隨狀語(yǔ)中帶有一個(gè)who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。,假設(shè)你們班同學(xué)聽(tīng)說(shuō)你和家人上周末去了廣州南沙參觀沙雕后都對(duì)此很感興趣，邀請(qǐng)你在課堂上介紹這次參觀活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容, 寫(xiě)一篇短文, 向你的同班同學(xué)講述此次旅游經(jīng)歷及感受。 寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)作要求 1. 只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容； 2. 文章開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確, 信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。(注：因篇幅限制, 以下寫(xiě)作要求、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)、例題導(dǎo)寫(xiě)和能力提高等欄目可能被省略, 但教師課件中仍會(huì)保留) Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family.,參考范文 Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. We set out at 9:00 a.m. and arrived at 10 a.m. On arriving, we couldnt wait to enjoy the exhibition of sand statues there, which was hosted by the local government of