講義-王江濤-英語一高階

1、寫作高階英語（一）寫作高階強(qiáng)化主講：王江濤歡迎使用在線1 / 27寫作高階第一節(jié)大作文一、2003-2012 英語（一）寫作命題規(guī)律 （一）2003 年真題 Directions:Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay about 200 words based on the following1） describe the set of drawings and interpret its meaning2） point out its implications in our life.（二）2004 年真題 Dir

2、ections:Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should 1）describe the set of drawing,2） interpret its meaning, and3） support your view with examples.（三）2005 年真題 Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first de

3、scribe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.2 / 27寫作高階（四）2006 年真題 Directions:Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should1) describe the photos briefly;2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected bythem, and3) give your point of view.圖一

4、：把崇拜寫在臉上。圖二：花 300 元做個(gè)小貝頭。注：Beckham（貝克漢姆）：英國足球明星。 （五）2007 年真題 Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) support your view with an example/examples.3 / 27寫作高階（六）2008 年真

5、題 Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on Answer Sheet 2.（七）2009 年真題 Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based

6、on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.4 / 27寫作高階（八）2010 年真題 Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,

7、2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.文化融合多元文化 文化“火鍋”，既美味又營養(yǎng) 畢昇、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦儒、佛、道、仁、禮 啟蒙、人本、后現(xiàn)代、解構(gòu)京劇、功夫、梁祝、天鵝湖 （十）2012 年真題 Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly.2) explain its inten

8、ded meaning, and3) give you comments.5 / 27寫作高階二、高階強(qiáng)化四大必考話題 （一）人生哲理：03、04、07、08、12（二）社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)： 1、兩代關(guān)系：05（三）教育文化： 1、文化交流：02、102、流行文化：06、09（四）環(huán)境保護(hù)：11三、句子寫作大法：長短結(jié)合、以短句為主 （一）五大句型： 1、主謂：I succeed.2、主謂賓：I love Lin Daiyu. 3、主系表：Old Fish is smart.4、主謂雙賓：Wei Xiaobao gives Ake an English dictionary. 5、主謂賓賓補(bǔ)：Money

9、 makes people selfish.（二）長句寫法： 1、并列句：and, or, not only but also; but, while, whereas2、從句： 1）定語從句：形容詞從句 (1)(2)(3)(4)人+ who, whom, whose物+ which, that時(shí)間+when 地點(diǎn)+where（二）長句寫法： 1、并列句：and, or, not only but also; but, while, whereas2、從句： 1） 定語從句：形容詞從句 (1) 人+ who, whom, whose(2) 物+ which, that6 / 27寫作高階(3)

10、 時(shí)間+when(4) 地 點(diǎn) +where 2）狀語從句：副詞從句 (1)時(shí)間：when, before, after (2)地點(diǎn)：where(3) 條件：if, unless(4) 原因：because=in that; since, as;for(5) 讓步：although=though, no matter what=whatever(6) 方式：just as3)名詞性從句：主語、表語、賓語、同位語從句 （1） 很多老年人受到這個(gè)事實(shí)證明這個(gè)問題很嚴(yán)重。 The fact that a great many senior citizens are mistreated indica

11、tes that this issue is extremely serious.（2） 他們沒能理解的是尊老是中國文化的傳統(tǒng)美德。 What they fail to understand is that respecting the elderly is the traditional virtue of Chinese culture.3、非謂語動(dòng)詞： 1） 動(dòng)名詞：do+ing，相當(dāng)于動(dòng)詞或名詞，充當(dāng)主語或賓語 2） 不定式：to+do，可作任何成分 3） 分詞短語：相當(dāng)于形容詞或副詞，充當(dāng)定語或狀語 （1） 現(xiàn)在分詞短語：do+ing,主動(dòng)分詞 （2） 過去分詞短語：do+ed，被動(dòng)

12、分詞 4）獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)：邏輯主語+邏輯謂語 Time permitting, I will go to Chengdu tomorrow.（四）寫信息量大的句子： Tang Jing, 20, Chongqing,Sichuan Foreign Studies University, English, JPMBorn in Chongqing, Tangjing, a 20-year-old man, who is an outstanding student in Sichuan Foreign Studies University majoring in English, loves JP

13、M.句子結(jié)構(gòu)： 介詞短語/不定式短語/現(xiàn)在分詞短語/過去分詞短語（介不現(xiàn)過），主語+介不現(xiàn)過作定語+謂語+賓語+介不現(xiàn)過作定語，介不現(xiàn)過作狀語。 （五）擴(kuò)充簡單句： 我愛唱歌。 We, students from Beijing New Oriental School, the best training school in Beijing, which is the Capital of China, the greatest country in the world, are singing a pop song named Nideyangzi sung by Luo Dayou, wh

14、o is the favorite singer of Micheal, after we played MJ for the whole night.(51 words)四、大作文高分秘笈：2008 年真題 Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should7 / 27寫作高階1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your

15、 comments.You should write neatly on Answer Sheet 2.圖畫描述： As is subtly portrayed in the drawing, two handicapped young men are heading towards their destination with vigorous strides, leaving all their crutches behind. The hardship of disability being no longer an obstacle on their journey, they sup

16、port each other with firm hands and proceed steadily. The caption indicates that they can travel north and south extensively with combined legs.意 義 闡 釋 ： It is apparent that the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the importance of cooperation in our daily life. Hardly can anyone achieve success in h

17、is career without the assistance of his colleagues and partners. As competition in all lines of work grows increasingly fierce, we must defeat our rivals through powerful teamwork. Take basketball hero Yao Ming for an example, he can slam the dunk smartly because all his teammates contribute more or

18、 less to his outstanding performance. Likewise, the successful launching of Change No.1 lunar probe should be attributed to the Chinese scientists joint efforts instead of individual accomplishment. If we work separately, we will be confined to frail minds and limited resources.建議措施： On the basis of

19、 the analysis above, we may draw a conclusion that cooperation and teamwork really count in this competitive society. Hence, we should associate ourselves harmoniously with our companions in every attempt towards our goals. In addition, it is indispensable to train our kids frequently to interact sm

20、oothly with others in a team. As the proverb goes, unity is strength. (237 words)第二節(jié) 小作文 一、書信格式： 文體/語域： 1、正式文體：大作文、公務(wù)書信、公務(wù)告示、報(bào)告最好不用縮寫、省略或口語表達(dá)；2、半正式文體：私人書信、私人告示、備忘錄最好使用 3-5 次。縮寫：Im, Its, Theyre（完整：I am, It is, They are)省略：Looking forward to your reply.8 / 27寫作高階（完整：I am looking forward to your reply.

21、)口語表達(dá)：By the way, 順便說一句 As you know, 如你所知 Guess what? 你猜怎么著？ （一）稱呼： 1、寫給機(jī)構(gòu)：Dear Sir or Madam,（06、07） Dear Sir/Madam,To Whom It May Concern,（致有關(guān)2、寫給個(gè)人：Dear +人名， ）1）08：Dear Bob,3）11：Dear Neo,2）09：Dear Editors,3、寫給集體：1）12：Dear Friends, 2)13（二）：Dear Fellow Classmates,（二）正文： 3 段，7 句，100-130 詞，3-5 個(gè)關(guān)聯(lián)詞，3-

22、5 個(gè)從句 1、第一段：1-2 句 1）自我介紹：私人書信除外 （1）工作人員： A. 5:I am a staff member of your company.B. 6:I am a staff member of Motorola (China)Electronics Ltd.（2）學(xué)生： A.07：I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Peking University. B.12:I a

23、m the president of the Students Union of Beijing Foreign Studies University. 2）寫作目的：書信中心思想，改寫提綱一 （1）08：I am writing the letter for purpose of expressing my sincere apology to you.（道歉信） （2）09/12：I am writing the letter to give/propose/offer some/several useful/conducive/practical suggestions/proposal

24、s/recommendations to you.（建議信） （3）11：I am writing the letter to recommend my favorite movie to you.（推薦信） 2、第二段：3 句左右，改寫提綱二 1） 主題句：1 句 2） 分論點(diǎn)一：1 句 3） 分論點(diǎn)二：1 句 3、第三段：2 句 1）表示感謝：部分私人書信除外 （1） My thanks for you to your generous help are beyond words.我對(duì)您慷慨幫助的感謝難以言表。 （2） Words fail me when I wish to expres

25、s my sincere gratitude to you.感激之情，溢于言表。 （3）I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you render me.我想借此機(jī)會(huì)對(duì)您的熱心幫助表示衷心的感謝。 2）期待回信 （1）I look forward to hearing from you soon.9 / 27寫作高階盼即賜復(fù)。 （2）I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenie

26、nce.期待您在方便之時(shí)盡快給予我圓滿的答復(fù)。 （3）Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.十分感謝您對(duì)我的詢問給予及時(shí)的關(guān)注。 3）寫作目的 （三）落款： 1、結(jié)尾客套： 1）萬能：Yours sincerely,或 Sincerely yours, 2）私人：Yours faithfully,或 Faithfully yours, 3）公務(wù)：Yours truly,或 Truly yours,2、落款： Li Ming書寫格式：縮進(jìn)式 段與段之間不空行，每段首行縮進(jìn)四個(gè)字母 二、書信類應(yīng)用文： （一）

27、十大必背范文之一：2005 真題：辭職+道歉信 Directions:Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine DesignsFashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.

28、Dear Mr. Wang,第 一 段 ：I am much grateful to be employed by you two months ago as an editor for your magazine Design & Fashions. I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and other colleagues. The experiences will be unforgettable throughout my life.第 二 段 ：However, as a young man who

29、se primary interest is in computer science rather than fashion designing, I find my present job doesnt fall in with my previous training and strength. I therefore decide to quit this job for something else that may conform to my former preparation.第 三 段 ：Please accept my sincere apologies for any in

30、conveniences my leaving may cause. Yours truly,Li Ming尊敬的王先生： 十分感激您兩個(gè)月之前聘用我為雜志設(shè)計(jì)與時(shí)尚的編輯。我非常珍惜這個(gè)和您以及其他同事共事的機(jī)會(huì)。這將是我一生中的難忘經(jīng)歷。 但是，對(duì)于一個(gè)喜歡計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)遠(yuǎn)多于時(shí)尚設(shè)計(jì)的年輕人來說，我認(rèn)識(shí)到目前的工作并不符合我的教育背景與個(gè)人能力。因此，我決定辭職，找一份與我從前教育背景相關(guān)的工作。 我為離開可能造成的不便深表歉意。您真誠的， 李明 （二）十大必背范文之二：2006 真題：請(qǐng)求信 Directions:10 / 27寫作高階You want to contribute to P

31、roject Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Dear Sir or Madam,第一段：Moved by the noble cause of Project H

32、ope and encouraged by what has been achieved so far, I would like to contribute my bit to the project by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area of your province.第 二 段 ：I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a girl who has just started schooling but whose family cannot aff

33、ord her education. My plan is to pay for her tuition on an annual basis till she finishes her secondary education. I would like to remit my donation directly to a bank account opened by her family in her local area.Yours truly,Li Ming尊敬的先生或女士： 希望工程這項(xiàng)高尚的事業(yè)感動(dòng)了我，同時(shí)這項(xiàng)工程迄今所取得的成就也鼓舞了我。因此， 我想通過給貴省偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的一個(gè)孩子

34、提供經(jīng)濟(jì)幫助，來為希望工程貢獻(xiàn)我的微薄之力。 如果您能幫助我找到一個(gè)剛開始上學(xué)但家庭無法為其負(fù)擔(dān)學(xué)費(fèi)的小女孩，我將不勝感激。本人計(jì)劃按年度支付她的學(xué)費(fèi)直至她中學(xué)畢業(yè)。我希望把捐款直接匯給她的家人在當(dāng)?shù)亻_設(shè)的銀行帳戶中。 您真誠的， 李明 （三）十大必背范文之三：2007 真題：建議信 Directions:Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not

35、 sign your name at the end of the letter. Use“Li Ming”instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)Dear Sir/Madam,第一段：I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however, I have some sug

36、gestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.第二段：To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having class, so they cant come to the library. Mor

37、eover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be very pleased.第三段： I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank you for your time and consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Ming尊敬的先生/女士： 我是本校的一名學(xué)生，常來圖書館度

38、過業(yè)余時(shí)間?？偠灾?，您這里提供的服務(wù)相當(dāng)不錯(cuò)，但我有一些建議希望您采納。如果您能好心考慮我的建議，我將非常感謝。 首先，是否可以請(qǐng)您延長閱讀時(shí)間？在白天，大多數(shù)學(xué)生在上課，來不了圖書館。其次， 11 / 27寫作高階書架上有些書已經(jīng)過時(shí)了。如果您能好心提供一些例如最新雜志等的書籍，我們將非常感謝。我確實(shí)希望擁有一個(gè)更加舒適的圖書館。再次感謝您的時(shí)間和關(guān)注。 您真誠的， 李明 （四）十大必背范文之四：08 真題：道歉+建議信 Directions:You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage t

39、hat you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to1） make an apology, and2） suggest a solutionDear Bob,Im writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the “the Beatles” CD to you when I left Canada. I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without

40、checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldnt have made such a stupid mistake.Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the CD enormously. I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price. If you

41、do not mind, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Canada.Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.Faithfully yours,Li Ming參考譯文： 親愛的鮑勃： 我寫此信的目的是為了向你道歉。在離開加拿大時(shí)，我忘了把那盤披頭士樂隊(duì)的 CD 還給你。走的時(shí)候太匆忙了，我把所有東西都塞到行李中，沒有仔細(xì)檢查。當(dāng)時(shí)

42、要是多加注意的話，就不會(huì)犯這種低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤了。 因?yàn)槲抑滥闾貏e珍愛那盤 CD，所以一定要想辦法解決這個(gè)問題。我可以寄快遞包裹給你，也可以按合理的價(jià)格賠償你的損失。如果你不介意的話，我也可以在下次去加拿大的時(shí)候把它給你帶回去。 請(qǐng)?jiān)诜奖愕臅r(shí)候盡快讓我知道你傾向哪一種解決方案。希望你能接受我真誠的道歉。 您真誠的，李明（五）十大必背范文之五： 2009 真題：建議信/致編輯信（=短議論文） Directions:Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “White Pol

43、lution”is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to1) give your opinions briefly, and2) make two or three suggestions.Dear Editors,I have been reading your newspaper for many years with a great enthusiasm and interest. It is my view that limiting the use of disposabl

44、e plastic bags is of utmost significance.To crack this hard nut, I would like to propose several practical recommendations as follows.12 / 27寫作高階First and foremost, it is imperative for us to ban the free use of disposable plastic bags. In addition, we should develop possible alternative forms to re

45、place them, such as paper or clothing bags. Last but not least, plastic bags should beoffered in a much higher price in department stores or supermarkets.I hope you will find the above proposals conducive and I would like to discuss this matter to further details. Your prompt attention to my suggest

46、ions would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely,Li Ming參考譯文 尊敬的編輯： 多年來我一直懷著極大的熱情與興趣閱讀貴報(bào)。我認(rèn)為限制使用一次性塑料袋非常重要。為解決這個(gè)難題，我想提出如下幾個(gè)實(shí)用的建議。首先，我們急需禁止免費(fèi)使用一次性 塑料袋。其次，我們應(yīng)該開發(fā)塑料袋的替代品，如紙袋或布袋。最后，商場或超市應(yīng)以更高的價(jià)格提供塑料袋。 我希望您覺得上述建議有益，同時(shí)希望進(jìn)一步討論這一問題。十分感謝您對(duì)我的建議給予及時(shí)的關(guān)注。 您真誠的李明 （六）十大必背范文之六：2011 真題：推薦信 Directions:Write a letter

47、to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and2) give reasons for your recommendation.Dear Neo,Im so glad to hear from you. How have you been theses days?In your last letter, you talked about movies you love. I agreed with you that Matrix is a great movie. Guess what? If you los

48、e some weight, youll be as cool as “Neo” in the film!Anyway, here is one of my favorite movies that I would like to recommend to you. The title of the movie is The Legend of 1900 and therere some reasons for my recommendation. Firstly, the director is very famous and respected all over the world. It

49、s story is very moving and its hero is a very talented pianist named “1900”. More importantly, the sound track of the movie is extraordinarily beautiful. I know you like music and you are learning to play piano. I hope youll enjoy the movie and learn something about playing piano. I am looking forwa

50、rd to your reply. Take care!Yours,Li Ming利奧： 很高興收到你的來信。近來過得怎么樣？ 在上封信里，你提到了喜愛的電影。我也認(rèn)為著？如果減點(diǎn)肥的話，你會(huì)像電影里的“利奧”一樣酷。 是一部偉大的電影。你猜怎么無論如何，我想給向推薦我最喜愛的一部電影。電影的名字是海上鋼琴師，推薦原因如下。首先，這位導(dǎo)演全球聞名，并且受人敬重。它的故事非常感人，主人公是名叫“1900” 的一位天才鋼琴師。此外，電影的音效尤其優(yōu)美。我知道你喜歡音樂，而且你正在學(xué)習(xí)彈鋼 13 / 27寫作高階琴。希望你喜歡這部電影，并且從中學(xué)習(xí)一些鋼琴技巧。期待著你的回信。保重！李明（七）十大必

51、背范文之七： 2012 真題：歡迎+建議信 Directions:Some international students are coming to your university. Write them an email in the name of the Students Union to1) extend your welcome and2) provide some suggestions for their campus life here.Dear Friends,On behalf of the Students Union of Beijing Foreign Studies

52、 University, I would like to extend our heartfelt welcome to all of the overseas students from all over the world to study in our university.It is my great pleasure to offer you several practical suggestions. In the first place, life in this prestigious university perhaps is not as easy as you have

53、expected. You may be tightly bound by continual classes, abundant homework and exams. Then, be prepared for the hectic life here. In the second place, in spite of all those burdens, various extracurricular activities such as sports meets, speech contests, social gatherings still will provide ample o

54、pportunity to make friends. So, enjoy your life in this esteemed institute!All in all, although there is a lot of pressure, the time you spend on our campus will be worthwhile in your whole life. Hope you like it here!Yours sincerely,Li Ming親愛的朋友們： 我謹(jǐn)代表北京外國語大學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)，向來我校學(xué)習(xí)的留學(xué)生表達(dá)衷心的歡迎。 我很榮幸地向你們提出一些實(shí)用的建議

55、。首先，這所著名學(xué)府的生活也許不像你們所設(shè)想的那么輕松。你們可能會(huì)陷入面臨繁重的課程、大量的作業(yè)和考試。因此，做好準(zhǔn)備迎接這里的繁忙生活吧。其次，盡管有以上負(fù)擔(dān)，運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、演講比賽、聯(lián)誼會(huì)等各種各樣的課外活動(dòng)仍會(huì)提供大量結(jié)交朋友的機(jī)會(huì)。所以，盡情享受這所著名大學(xué)里的生活吧！ 總之，盡管有很多壓力，但你們?cè)谖覀冃@里度過的時(shí)光仍將是你一生中一段有意義的歲月。希望你們喜歡這里！ 您真誠的，李明（八）十大必背范文之八：2004 年 1 月四級(jí)真題：建議信 Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend