2020年中考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)專(zhuān)題突破訓(xùn)練6書(shū)面表達(dá)之熱點(diǎn)話題類(lèi)(一)

1、熱點(diǎn)06 書(shū)面表達(dá)之熱點(diǎn)話題類(lèi)（一）【熱點(diǎn)話題】 話題：祖國(guó)70周年；傳統(tǒng)文化；手機(jī)低頭族；網(wǎng)購(gòu)；科技創(chuàng)新；中國(guó)夢(mèng)【限時(shí)檢測(cè)】（建議用時(shí)：30分鐘）A（2019江蘇省淮安中考）話題：祖國(guó)70周年難度：建議用時(shí)：5分為迎接祖國(guó)母親第70個(gè)生日，學(xué)校開(kāi)展了豐寓多彩的活動(dòng)，如講故事、制作卡片、參觀博物館等；請(qǐng)圍繞該話題寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：1. 你看到或參加過(guò)一次活動(dòng)（包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、經(jīng)過(guò)）；2. 你對(duì)該活動(dòng)的感受以及對(duì)祖國(guó)的熱愛(ài)之情；3. 你今后如何為建設(shè)祖國(guó)貢獻(xiàn)力量。注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名； 2. 詞數(shù)在80100, 已給出的文字不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。To celebra

2、te the 70th birthday of our motherland（祖國(guó)），_【寫(xiě)作思路】為迎接祖國(guó)母親第70個(gè)生日，學(xué)校開(kāi)展了豐寓多彩的活動(dòng)，如講故事、制作卡片、參觀博物館等；請(qǐng)圍繞該話題寫(xiě)一篇短文。考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！緟⒖挤段摹縏o celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colo

3、rful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. Its the greatest museum Ive ever seen. We saw many weapons that used by the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life. There are all k

4、inds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my motherland. Now I want to study hard and make contributions to my motherland in the future.【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，文中用到一些好的句型：Its the greatest museum I

5、ve ever seen. We saw many weapons that used by the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life.這些給文章增色不少。B（北京市燕山區(qū)2019屆九年級(jí)4月畢業(yè)考試）話題：傳統(tǒng)文化難度：建議用時(shí)：5分中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng)，代代相傳。近期各校都在開(kāi)展學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)。某網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化為題征文，請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，介紹你校上周舉辦的講中國(guó)成語(yǔ)故事活動(dòng)并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@與感受。提示詞語(yǔ)： Chinese idioms, story, collect,

6、share, learn from, ancient提示問(wèn)題： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn from the activity? What do you think of it?_【參考范文】The activity of Telling Chinese idioms story was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected

7、lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of prep

8、aration. My reading ability has improved greatly. Whats more, I realized the richness of Chinese ancient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】1.題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來(lái)外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述講成語(yǔ)故事活動(dòng)；因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過(guò)程描寫(xiě)完整且條理

9、清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，Whats more，have a good time。句型：被動(dòng)句型。C（四川省峨眉山市2018屆九年級(jí)第二次調(diào)研）話題：低頭族難度：建議用時(shí)：5分隨著手機(jī)的普及，越來(lái)越多的人癡迷于手機(jī)，紛紛加入低頭族。請(qǐng)你參考下圖反映的現(xiàn)象及內(nèi)容提示，圍繞拒為低頭族（stop phubbing），用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右短文。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 內(nèi)容提示：1.我身邊也有很多低頭族，非常喜歡玩手機(jī)。2.他們不停用手機(jī)發(fā)信息、上網(wǎng)、玩游戲或拍照。3.影響學(xué)

10、習(xí)和生活。上課或工作時(shí)間玩手機(jī)極大浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。4.引發(fā)健康問(wèn)題，長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩手機(jī)引發(fā)眼、背、頸痛。 Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. _【寫(xiě)作思路】考生首

11、先要認(rèn)真閱讀寫(xiě)作提示并認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。在檢查環(huán)節(jié)，考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！緟⒖挤段摹縉owadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all

12、the time, taking no notice of the people around them. There is a lot of phubbing around me. They like playing with mobile phones very much. They cant stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.However, phubbing influences /affects

13、 not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, especially in class or at work, is a big waste of time. Whats more, it can lead to health problems. For example, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.In my opinion,

14、it is time for us to throw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. When we use phones properly we can live a happy life.【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。D（2019年廣東深圳龍嶺學(xué)校九年級(jí)上10月月考）話題：網(wǎng)購(gòu)難度：建議用時(shí)：5分隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)

15、變，購(gòu)物方式也在悄悄的發(fā)生變化。網(wǎng)購(gòu)已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也正加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體當(dāng)中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)1、節(jié)約時(shí)間； 2、價(jià)格通常較便宜； 3、可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多。缺點(diǎn)1、只看到圖片，看不到商品本身；2、容易購(gòu)買(mǎi)大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)。注意：1、文中內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮；2、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和班級(jí)名稱(chēng)等相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分；3、詞數(shù)要求80詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購(gòu) shopping online（n.）；商品goods（n.）；導(dǎo)致cause（v.） 【參考范文】Shopping

16、OnlineWith the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. Yo

17、u can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods

18、different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.Thats a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online. With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】1. 本文文章要求，對(duì)網(wǎng)

19、購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)都做了詳細(xì)描述，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式豐富。有Every coin has two sides. 表達(dá)事物具有兩面性。 On one handOn the other hand表達(dá)不同的的觀點(diǎn)。All in all用來(lái)總結(jié)。E (湖南省長(zhǎng)沙市長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)初三2018年第二次限時(shí)檢測(cè))話題：科技創(chuàng)新難度：建議用時(shí)：5分近年來(lái)，科技的進(jìn)步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。2017年5月，來(lái)自一帶一路沿線的20國(guó)青年評(píng)選出了中國(guó)的新四大發(fā)明：高鐵、支付寶、共享單車(chē)和網(wǎng)購(gòu)。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國(guó)的一名初中生，她對(duì)我們的新四大發(fā)明很感 興趣。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，

20、具體內(nèi)容如下：1.介紹共享單車(chē)和網(wǎng)購(gòu)的基本情況并談?wù)勀愕目捶ê驮u(píng)價(jià) 2. 邀請(qǐng)她下個(gè)月參加你?？萍脊?jié)，將展出學(xué)生制作的各類(lèi)材質(zhì)的小模型。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文流暢。參考詞匯：共享單車(chē): shared bikes Dear Lisa,Im glad to hear that youre so interested in our Four NewInventions_Yours,Li Hua【寫(xiě)作思路】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來(lái)介紹中國(guó)的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文

21、中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫(xiě)作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Lisa,Im glad to hear that youre so interested in our Four New Inventions Let me

22、 tell you about them. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. We travel by high-speed railways. They are very quick. We use electronic payments when we use online shopping. When we want to go somewhere by bike, we use shared bicycles. We use our mobile

23、 phone to unlock the shared bicycle. It is convenient and cheap. There is no pollution and oil cost. We can also keep healthy when we ride it. There will be the Science Festival in our school. It will show all kinds of models that students make. I hope you will come to visit them.Yours,Li HuaF(黑龍江省紅光農(nóng)場(chǎng)學(xué)校2018-2019學(xué)年九年級(jí)3月月考)話題：中國(guó)夢(mèng)難度：建議用時(shí)：5分時(shí)下，全國(guó)上下都在努力實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)，強(qiáng)國(guó)夢(mèng)。作為新時(shí)代的學(xué)生，你有什么樣的想？結(jié)合自己的興趣愛(ài)好或者生活背景，以My dream為題，寫(xiě)一篇80個(gè)詞左右的文，談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想。My dream_【寫(xiě)作思路】這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，要求以my dream為題談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)你