基礎(chǔ)寫作15-對(duì)立觀點(diǎn).ppt

1、基礎(chǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)（十五） 議論文觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立,一、寫作特點(diǎn)： 1、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式議論文是對(duì)事實(shí)進(jìn)行 對(duì)比，然后加以分析，得出結(jié)論。 2、時(shí)態(tài)：較多用現(xiàn)在時(shí)， 3、人稱：常用第三人稱 they，但給 自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，一般用第一人稱 I 。,二、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式的模板： （一）開(kāi)頭：點(diǎn)出社會(huì)現(xiàn)象或討論問(wèn)題。 （二）正文：對(duì)立觀點(diǎn) 1、有人認(rèn)為X 是好事，贊成X， 為什么？ 2、有人認(rèn)為X 是壞事，反對(duì)X， 為什么？ (三)、結(jié)尾：我的看法。,三、常用句型 （一）開(kāi)頭：點(diǎn)出社會(huì)現(xiàn)象或討論問(wèn)題。 1 With the College Entrance Exam coming, there is a heated deba

2、te about whether Senior 3 Students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit. 2 In recent years, there is an increasing tendency for Chinese students to go to foreign countries for study.,3 Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

3、4 The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from child.,5 Opinions are divided on the question. 6 There are different opinions about it. 7 There is a heated debate among people.,(二) 正文：對(duì)立觀點(diǎn) 正面觀點(diǎn) 1. Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X

4、. 2. Some state that it is true that 3.They point out the fact that 4.They also argue that 5.There is no denying the fact that students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures.,反面觀點(diǎn) 1 However, other people stand on a different ground. 2 They consider it harm

5、ful to do X. 3 They firmly point out that 4 But some hold the opinions that 5 However, we cannot ignore the fact that most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience and the costs are high as well.,(三)、結(jié)尾：你的觀點(diǎn) 1 There is some truth in both arguments. But I thin

6、k the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. 2 Personally, I consider the disadvantages before the advantages. It is high time that we thought twice before going studying abroad.,四、經(jīng)典范文 （一）、高三學(xué)習(xí)很緊張、很累，為了增強(qiáng)孩子的體質(zhì)，使他們?cè)诳荚囍锌汲龊贸煽?jī)，家長(zhǎng)經(jīng)常為孩子購(gòu)買大量滋補(bǔ)品。假如你是王明，在最近的一次班會(huì)上，你們班的同學(xué)就高三學(xué)生是否需要吃補(bǔ)品來(lái)保持健康進(jìn)行討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下文提示，談

7、談自己的觀點(diǎn)。,（寫作內(nèi)容） 1 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提示，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)， 文章開(kāi)頭已給出； 2 文章必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，但不 要逐條譯成英語(yǔ)。 3 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 參考詞匯：tonic補(bǔ)品,With the College Entrance Exam coming, there is a heated debate about whether Senior 3 Students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit. There are different opinions about it. Some students think it

8、unnecessary to take tonics, because tonics will make them put on more weight, which does harm to their health. Moreover, the parents will bring more stress to the Senior 3 students if they show too,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,much concern by offering the tonics and the price of tonics is rather high. However, s

9、ome students hold the opinion that it is easy for the Senior 3 students to feel tired because of their work load, so it is good to take some tonics. They are too busy to have sports, so tonics can help refresh them. Personally, I consider doing sports is better than taking tonics.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,

10、_,（二）、三班的同學(xué)進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)有關(guān)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的討論。討論的題目是：學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)要不要從兒童時(shí)期開(kāi)始？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。,注意： 1、文章的起始句已給出； 2、只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 3、參考詞匯： 基礎(chǔ)foundation 漢語(yǔ)拼音Chinese pinyin,The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Some of them think that English learnin

11、g should start from childhood as little boys and girls have a very good memory and they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation,_,_,_,for their future English learning. But some hold the opinions that if they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same

12、time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,五、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練 (一) 假設(shè)你是宋柯，最近國(guó)內(nèi)一家英文報(bào)紙正在討論北京動(dòng)物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級(jí)討論的情況。請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)寫一封

13、信，反映討論結(jié)果。,【寫作內(nèi)容】 1 包含圖表中的所有內(nèi)容； 2 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使 行文連貫。 【寫作要求】 1、必須使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容； 2、信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。 【參考詞匯】 郊區(qū) suburb; 支持 be in favour of 生活條件 living conditions 反對(duì) be against,【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性和復(fù)雜度；信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。 Dear Editor, Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo shou

14、ld be moved out of the city. _Yours truely, Song Ke,審題： 文體： 議論文 人稱： 第三人稱 時(shí)態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 信息組織：,1 贊成遷出。 Some of my class are in favor of the idea. 2 游客多，交通堵塞。 Large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. 3 郊區(qū)環(huán)境好。 Animals will have more space and better living conditions in the subur

15、bs., Some of my class are in favor of the move, because they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.,_,4 反對(duì)遷出。 Other students are against the idea. 5 建于1906年，中外聞名

16、。 Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, is well-known at home and abroad. 6 搬遷易造成動(dòng)物死亡。 Moving may cause the death of the animals., However, other students are against the ideas, saying that Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well- known at home and abroad. Whats more, moving may ca

17、use the death of the animals so that it should remain where it is.,_,_,_,_,_, Some of my class are in favor of the move, because they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in t

18、he suburbs. However, other students are against the ideas, saying that Beijing Zoo,built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well-known at home and abroad. Whats more, moving may cause the death of the animals so that it should remain where it is. To move or not, I think this is a big decisi

19、on which has to be done by people in Beijing.,（二）隨著廣告業(yè)的發(fā)展，廣告已與我們的生活息息相關(guān)。但是廣告是利還是弊？在2007年4月8日，我們班分為兩組，進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面兩組討論的結(jié)果，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。 Group A 虛假?gòu)V告太多，坑害消費(fèi)者； 占用報(bào)刊太多的版面，浪費(fèi)紙張； 占用電視、廣播太多的時(shí)間； 應(yīng)該取締。,Group B 廣告能指導(dǎo)消費(fèi)，使消費(fèi)者了解商品； 廣告也能給人以藝術(shù)享受； 你的觀點(diǎn)： 廣告太多會(huì)使人心煩； 應(yīng)當(dāng)適當(dāng)發(fā)展，提高質(zhì)量。 【寫作內(nèi)容】 合理取舍提示信息； 文章要通順、連貫。,【寫作要求】 必須使用5個(gè)句子表

20、達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容； 短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。 【參考詞匯】 更糟糕的是 whats worse； 能指導(dǎo)消費(fèi) direct our choices of goods 【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性和復(fù)雜度；信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。,April l8th, 2007 Fine Today we had a discussion about advertisements in two groups. With the development of the economy ,advertisements have been closely connected with peoples life. Bu

21、t is it good or bad?,審題： 文體： 議論文 人稱： 第三人稱 時(shí)態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 信息組織：,1 虛假?gòu)V告太多; Advertisements dont tell real things 2 坑害消費(fèi)者； They make the customers buy things that they dont want. 3 占用報(bào)刊太多的版面，Advertisements cover much space. 4 浪費(fèi)紙張； They waste a lot of paper.,5 占用電視、廣播太多的時(shí)間； Advertisements take up too much ti

22、me on TV and radio. 6 應(yīng)該取締。 Some people think advertisements should be stopped., Some people think advertisements should be stopped because they dont tell real things and make the customers buy things that they dont want. Whats worse, advertisements cover much space, which wastes a lot of paper, and

23、 take up too much time on TV and radio.,7 廣告能指導(dǎo)消費(fèi); Advertisements can direct our choices of goods. 8 使消費(fèi)者了解商品; They can tell the latest information about various goods and help people to make a better choice. 9 廣告也能給人以藝術(shù)享受； We can enjoy the some well-done advertisements., Some other people think that advertisements can direct our choices of goods, because they can tell the latest information about various goods and help people to make a better choice. Moreover, we can enjoy the some well-done advertisements.,你的觀點(diǎn)： 10 廣告太多會(huì)使人心煩； Too many advertisements will m