讀后續(xù)寫+城市夜色中的善意傳遞：錢包之約+講義 高三上學(xué)期一?？荚囉⒄Z試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mr.Arthur,whoisanelderlyman,livesaloneinacity.Heisagentlemanwithakindsmileandheisknownforhisloveofbookstoresandhisdailywalksthroughthecity’shistoricdistrict.Oneevening,ashewasreturninghomefromapark,Mr.Arthurrealizedwithastartthathiswalletwasmissing.Hewentbackoverhispath,searchingeverywhereinthepark.Hisheartsankwitheachpassingminute,asthewalletcontainedacherishedphotoofhislatewife,whichhecarriedasatreasure.Thesunbegantoset,castinglongshadowsonthestreets.Mr.Arthurfeltadeepsenseoflossanddespair.Meanwhile,ayoungmannamedJohnwaswalkinghomefromhisfavouritejobatthelocallibrary.AshepassedbythebookstorewhereMr.Arthurhadvisitedthatday,henoticedsomethinglyinginthecornerofthesidewalk.Curious,hepickeditupandfoundittobeawornleatherwallet.Johnopenedthewallet,hopingtofindsomeidentificationtoreturnittoitsowner.Hetookadeepbreathwhenhesawthecashandthepersonalitemsinside.Sensingtheimportanceofwhatheheld,hedecidedtowaitatthespotwherehefoundthewallet,hopingthattheownerwouldcomebacktolookforit.Asdarknessenvelopedthecity,Mr.Arthur,withaheavyheart,madehiswaybacktohisfavouritebookstore,onelasthopeinhiseyes.Hisstepswereslowandtired,buthisdeterminationwasstrong.Asheapproachedthebookstore,hesawafigurestandingunderthestreetlight,holdingsomethinginhishands.“Excuseme,youngman.Iwaswonderingifyouhappenedtoseeanoldwallet?”Mr.Arthuraskedinalowvoice.Theyoungman’sfacelightedupandtendedtohandthewallettotheoldman.However,hewasalittlehesitantbecausehewasn'tsureifthewalletactuallybelongedtotheoldman.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Sensingtheyoungman’sconcern,Mr.Arthurdecidedtoprovehewastheowner.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Johnsmiledandsaid,“Noneed,Mr.Arthur.I’mJohnandI’mjustgladIcouldhelp.”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Mr.Arthur是一位獨(dú)居老人，喜愛書店與在城市歷史街區(qū)散步。一天晚上從公園回家途中，他發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包丟失。錢包里有他已故妻子的珍貴照片，這讓他無比珍視。他在公園焦急尋找，隨著時(shí)間流逝，太陽西沉，他越發(fā)絕望。與此同時(shí)，在當(dāng)?shù)貓D書館工作的John下班路過書店時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了人行道角落的舊錢包。John打開錢包，看到現(xiàn)金和個(gè)人物品后，意識(shí)到錢包的重要性，決定在原地等待失主。天黑后，Mr.Arthur懷著最后一絲希望回到常去的書店，看到路燈下拿著東西的John，便上前詢問是否看到自己的錢包，John雖想歸還但因不確定失主身份而有些猶豫。故事山分析開端：介紹Mr.Arthur的日常習(xí)慣，引出他丟失錢包這一事件，交代錢包對(duì)他的特殊意義。發(fā)展：Mr.Arthur在公園四處尋找錢包無果，心情愈發(fā)沉重；John發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包并決定等待失主，為故事發(fā)展埋下伏筆。高潮：Mr.Arthur與John在書店外相遇，John因不確定Mr.Arthur是否為失主而猶豫，故事在此處達(dá)到緊張點(diǎn)。結(jié)局：通過合理續(xù)寫，展現(xiàn)John確認(rèn)Mr.Arthur身份后歸還錢包，兩人可能會(huì)有進(jìn)一步交流，Mr.Arthur的心情從絕望轉(zhuǎn)為感激，John也收獲助人的快樂，故事圓滿結(jié)束。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆1：Mr.Arthur對(duì)錢包中亡妻照片的珍視。續(xù)寫中，Mr.Arthur可能會(huì)向John描述照片背后的故事，以證明錢包是自己的，同時(shí)也讓John更深刻理解錢包對(duì)Mr.Arthur的重要性。伏筆2：John在圖書館工作。這一背景可能使他更具耐心和細(xì)心，在與Mr.Arthur交流確認(rèn)身份過程中，充分運(yùn)用自己的素養(yǎng)，認(rèn)真核實(shí)信息。伏筆3：Mr.Arthur常去書店。續(xù)寫時(shí)，書店老板可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)，認(rèn)出Mr.Arthur，幫助John確認(rèn)Mr.Arthur的身份，書店也成為故事發(fā)展的重要場(chǎng)景。伏筆4：John看到錢包里的現(xiàn)金和物品后決定等待失主，體現(xiàn)他的善良和正直。在后續(xù)交流中，他會(huì)堅(jiān)守原則，謹(jǐn)慎確認(rèn)失主，直到完全放心歸還錢包。伏筆5：故事發(fā)生在晚上，天黑增加了尋找失主的難度。續(xù)寫中，可能因光線問題，Mr.Arthur和John交流時(shí)會(huì)有一些小波折，比如看不清對(duì)方表情，需要通過語言和其他細(xì)節(jié)來確認(rèn)身份。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段（Sensingtheyoungman’sconcern,Mr.Arthurdecidedtoprovehewastheowner.）：Mr.Arthur可以詳細(xì)描述錢包的外觀特征，如磨損的邊角、特定的顏色和材質(zhì)，還可提及錢包內(nèi)除照片外其他物品的細(xì)節(jié)，如幾張舊發(fā)票、一張寫有電話號(hào)碼的紙條等。通過這些細(xì)節(jié)，逐漸消除John的疑慮。第二段（Johnsmiledandsaid,“Noneed,Mr.Arthur.I’mJohnandI’mjustgladIcouldhelp.”）：John確認(rèn)Mr.Arthur身份后歸還錢包，Mr.Arthur表達(dá)深深的感激之情，可能邀請(qǐng)John到附近咖啡館坐坐，分享照片背后的故事，兩人進(jìn)一步交流，John從Mr.Arthur的經(jīng)歷中獲得啟示，感受到幫助他人帶來的溫暖和意義。情感線起初，Mr.Arthur因丟失錢包，尤其是錢包里亡妻的照片，陷入絕望與焦慮。與John相遇時(shí)，他渴望找回錢包的急切心情與John的謹(jǐn)慎形成對(duì)比。在證明身份過程中，Mr.Arthur緊張地講述細(xì)節(jié)，生怕John不相信。而John從猶豫到逐漸被Mr.Arthur的描述打動(dòng)，確認(rèn)身份后，Mr.Arthur的心情轉(zhuǎn)為喜悅與感激，John則因幫助他人而收獲滿足，兩人情感在交流中產(chǎn)生共鳴，從陌生到熟悉，從懷疑到信任。故事線Mr.Arthur描述錢包特征及內(nèi)部物品細(xì)節(jié)的過程。John傾聽Mr.Arthur描述并核實(shí)信息的反應(yīng)。可能出現(xiàn)的書店老板對(duì)確認(rèn)身份的幫助。John歸還錢包的動(dòng)作和語言。Mr.Arthur表達(dá)感激之情的方式。Mr.Arthur與John后續(xù)交流分享經(jīng)歷的場(chǎng)景。主旨升華句ThisencounterbetweenMr.ArthurandJohnshowsthatinabustlingcity,kindnessandtrustcanstillshinebrightly,bridgingthegapbetweenstrangers.Mr.Arthur與John的這次相遇表明，在繁華都市中，善良與信任依然能閃耀光芒，拉近陌生人之間的距離。ThesimpleactofJohnwaitingfortheownerofthewalletremindsusthatasmallgestureofhonestycanbringgreatcomfortandrelieftoothers.John等待錢包主人這一簡(jiǎn)單行為提醒我們，一個(gè)小小的誠(chéng)實(shí)舉動(dòng)能給他人帶來巨大的安慰和寬慰。Throughthereturnofthewallet,Mr.Arthurnotonlyregainedapreciouspossessionbutalsowitnessedthebeautyofhumannature,restoringhisfaithintheworld.通過錢包的失而復(fù)得，Mr.Arthur不僅找回了珍貴的物品，還見證了人性之美，重拾對(duì)世界的信心。John'sexperienceofhelpingMr.Arthurtaughthimthattherewardsofkindnessarenotmeasuredbymaterialgainbutbythewarmthitbringstopeople'shearts.John幫助Mr.Arthur的經(jīng)歷讓他明白，善良的回報(bào)并非用物質(zhì)衡量，而是在于它給人們心靈帶來的溫暖。Thisstoryservesasareminderthateveryday,wehavetheopportunitytobeapartofsomeoneelse'shappyendingbyshowingalittlekindnessandcompassion.這個(gè)故事提醒我們，每一天，我們都有機(jī)會(huì)通過展現(xiàn)一點(diǎn)善良和同情，成為他人美好結(jié)局的一部分。寫作示范一Sensingtheyoungman’sconcern,Mr.Arthurdecidedtoprovehewastheowner.“Thiswalletisabitwornontheedges.I'vehaditforyears,”hebegan.“Inside,there'sanoldreceiptfromthebookstoreIalwaysvisit,datedlastmonth.Andnexttoit,asmallpieceofpaperwithmyoldhomephonenumber.Butmostimportantly,there'saphotoofmylatewife.HernamewasEmily,andweweremarriedforover40years.”Ashespoke,hisvoicetrembledslightly.Johnlistenedintently,comparingthedetailswithwhathesawinthewallet.Gradually,hisdoubtsmeltedaway.Johnsmiledandsaid,“Noneed,Mr.Arthur.I’mJohnandI’mjustgladIcouldhelp.”HehandedthewallettoMr.Arthur.Mr.Arthur'seyesfilledwithtearsofgratitude.“Thankyou,John.You'venoideahowmuchthismeanstome.Wouldyoumindjoiningmeforacupofcoffee?I'dlovetosharemoreaboutEmily.”Johnreadilyagreed,andthetwowalkedtowardsanearbycafé,chattinglikeoldfriends.寫作示范二Sensingtheyoungman’sconcern,Mr.Arthurdecidedtoprovehewastheowner.“Thewalletisbrownleather,andthere'sasmallscratchonthefrontrightcorner,”Mr.Arthurexplained.“Therearethreebanknotesinit,oneofwhichhasatinytearattheedge.Also,there'salibrarycardwithmynameonit.Ioftenborrowbooksfromthelocallibrary.”Ashecontinued,thebookstoreowner,whorecognizedMr.Arthur,cameout.“Yes,thisisMr.Arthur.Hecomeshereeveryweek.”Johnnodded,convinced.Johnsmiledandsaid,“Noneed,Mr.Arthur.I’mJohnandI’mjustgladIcouldhelp.”HeplacedthewalletinMr.Arthur'shands.Mr.ArthurgraspedJohn'shandtightly.“You'vesavedmyday,John.Please,letmetreatyou.There'ssomuchIwanttotellyouaboutthiswalletandthememoriesitholds.”JohnfollowedMr.Arthur,feelingasenseofwarmthandconnectionthathehadn'texpectedfromthischanceencounter.【答案】Sensingtheyoungman’sconcern,Mr.Arthurdecidedtoprovehewastheowner.“MynameisArthur.Ifyouhappenedtopickupmywallet,youcouldfindaphotoofanelderwoma