讀后續(xù)寫+從超能到人心：超級英雄的蛻變+講義 高三上學(xué)期12月月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onacold,snowyevening,Jackwasatthecornershop,withhissolefocusontheMarvel(漫威)superherofigurines(小雕像).Sincethen,hehaddiligentlywalkedaneighbor’sdogandweededhisneighbors’gardenstoearnmoneyforonefigurine.Finallyhehadenoughmoneyforoneandracedtowardsthecornershop.Lostinexcitement,heaccidentallytrippedoverahomelessoldmanseatedagainstawallinthecold,quicklymurmuringanapologybeforecontinuingonhisway.Insidetheshop,JackglancedattheshelvesdisplayingHulk,Thor,CaptainAmerica,IronMan,andotherbelovedheroes.HisheartracedashereachedfortheSpiderman.“You’reafan,right?”afriendlyvoiceappearedbehindhim.Jackturnedtoseetheshopkeeper,anelderlymanwithawarmsmile.“Yes,they’reamazing!”Jacksaid.“They’restrong,andtheyhelpsomanypeople.Theyhavesuperpower.IwishIcouldbeasuperherotoo.”“Youcanbe,”theshopkeeperencouraged.Surprised,Jackasked,“Buthow?Idon’thaveanysuperpower.”Smilingsoftly,theshopkeeperbentdown,placinghishandsonJack’sarms.“Whywouldyouneedthem?”herepliedkindly.“Seethatwomanoverthere?Sheneedstotakecareofthreechildren.However,shestillactivelyhelpstheelderlyinthecommunity.AnddoyouknowJimmy?Heisafirefighterwhohassavedcountlesslives.Beingaheroisn’taboutsuperpower;it’saboutwhat’sinyourheart.”LockingeyeswithJack,theshopkeepersmiled.“Youdon’tneedsuperpowertobeahero.Itstartswithyourheart.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Hearingwhattheshopkeepersaid,Jackwaslostinthought.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withrelief,Jackfoundthehomelessoldmanstillsittingagainstthewall.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

文章大意：在一個(gè)寒冷飄雪的夜晚，杰克滿心歡喜地拿著自己辛苦遛狗、除草掙來的錢，沖向街角商店，只為購買心儀已久的漫威超級英雄小雕像，尤其是蜘蛛俠那款。進(jìn)店前，他因興奮過度不小心絆倒了一位在寒風(fēng)中靠墻而坐的無家可歸老人，匆忙道歉后便進(jìn)店挑選。店內(nèi)，他與店主交流，表達(dá)對超級英雄的喜愛與向往，店主一番關(guān)于英雄不在于有無超能力，而在于內(nèi)心的話語，讓杰克內(nèi)心深受觸動(dòng)，也為故事后續(xù)發(fā)展埋下伏筆。伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：伏筆：杰克辛苦攢錢買漫威小雕像，對超級英雄極度癡迷?；貞?yīng)：為后文他思想轉(zhuǎn)變，意識到身邊平凡人也是英雄做鋪墊，突出成長蛻變。續(xù)寫中他從單純向往超能力英雄，轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)橐詫?shí)際行動(dòng)成為身邊人的英雄。伏筆：杰克絆倒老人后匆忙道歉離開，未過多在意?；貞?yīng)：使后文他折返幫助老人的情節(jié)更顯可貴，體現(xiàn)愧疚后的彌補(bǔ)。續(xù)寫中他主動(dòng)給老人送食物、找住處，完成自我救贖。伏筆：店主講述社區(qū)中普通卻助人的女人和消防員Jimmy的故事?；貞?yīng)：引導(dǎo)杰克重新定義英雄，啟發(fā)他在生活中發(fā)現(xiàn)平凡英雄，開啟他內(nèi)心轉(zhuǎn)變之門。續(xù)寫中杰克以這些人為榜樣，開啟自己的助人之旅。伏筆：杰克在店內(nèi)與店主交流時(shí)，緊握蜘蛛俠小雕像?；貞?yīng)：象征他初始對超能力英雄的執(zhí)著，與后文放下單純的物質(zhì)追求、踐行英雄行為形成對比。續(xù)寫中雕像雖在手中，但其意義已從渴望超能力變?yōu)榧?lì)自己像英雄一樣行動(dòng)。伏筆：寒冷下雪的夜晚，老人孤獨(dú)坐在墻邊?；貞?yīng)：營造需要幫助的情境，促使杰克展現(xiàn)英雄之舉，強(qiáng)化環(huán)境與人物行為的關(guān)聯(lián)。續(xù)寫中杰克的幫助讓老人在寒夜感受到溫暖，凸顯善良的力量。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段情感線：杰克從進(jìn)店時(shí)對超能力英雄的狂熱，轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槭艿曛鲉l(fā)后的沉思、自省，開始重新審視英雄的定義，內(nèi)心有了觸動(dòng)與成長；故事線：杰克離開商店后，一路回想店主的話，思考身邊那些平凡卻偉大的人，意識到英雄就在身邊，不再局限于超能力者。第二段情感線：杰克帶著溫暖與決心找到老人，從最初的愧疚，到給予幫助時(shí)的真誠、堅(jiān)定，收獲內(nèi)心的滿足；故事線：杰克返回原處，用自己的錢給老人買食物、飲料，陪老人聊天，并設(shè)法幫他找臨時(shí)住所，以實(shí)際行動(dòng)踐行英雄之舉。主旨升華句：Trueheroismliesnotinpossessingextraordinarypowers,butinhavinganextraordinaryhearttocareforothers.（真正的英雄主義不在于擁有非凡的力量，而在于擁有一顆關(guān)愛他人的非凡之心。）Everyordinarypersoncanachieveextraordinarythingswhenkindnessandcouragefilltheirhearts.（當(dāng)善良和勇氣充滿內(nèi)心時(shí)，每個(gè)普通人都能成就非凡之事。）Superheroesmightsavetheworldonthebigscreen,butwecanbeheroesinourownsmallcornersoflifebysimpleactsoflove.（超級英雄或許在大銀幕上拯救世界，但我們可以通過小小的愛心之舉，在生活的小角落里成為英雄。）Thepowertomakeadifferencedoesn'tcomefromsuperhumanabilities,butfromthehumanspiritofgivingandhelping.（改變世界的力量并非來自超人的能力，而是來自給予和幫助的人文精神。）Inthejourneyoflife,weoftendiscoverthatthegreatestheroesarethosewhotouchourliveswiththeirordinaryyetnobledeeds.（在人生旅途中，我們常常發(fā)現(xiàn)，最偉大的英雄是那些用平凡卻高尚的行為觸動(dòng)我們生活的人。）寫作示范一：Hearingwhattheshopkeepersaid,Jackwaslostinthought.Ashesteppedoutofthestore,thecoldwindwhippedathisface,buthismindwasfaraway.TheSpidermanfigurineinhishandseemedtolosesomeofitsallure.Hethoughtabouthisneighbor,Mr.Thompson,whoalwaysvolunteeredtocleanupthepark.Hehadnosuperpowers,yethemadetheneighborhoodabetterplace.Jack'sheartswelledwithanewfoundunderstanding.Herealizedthathehadbeenchasinganunrealisticdreamofbeingaherolikethoseinthemovies.Now,hesawaclearerpath.Withrelief,Jackfoundthehomelessoldmanstillsittingagainstthewall.Hispacequickenedasheapproachedtheman.“Sir,”hesaid,abitshyly,“Ibroughtyousomethingtoeat.It'sfreezingouthere.”Theoldmanlookedup,astonishmentandgratitudeinhiseyes.Jackhandedhimahotcoffeeandasandwichhe'djustbought.Astheysattogether,Jacksharedstoriesofhisday,andtheoldmantoldtalesofhisyouth.Inthatmoment,Jackfeltaconnection,asenseofpurpose.HemightnotswingfromskyscraperslikeSpiderman,buthewasmakingarealdifferenceinsomeone'slife.Andthat,heknew,wasthetruemarkofahero.寫作示范二：Hearingwhattheshopkeepersaid,Jackwaslostinthought.Hewalkedslowlydownthesnowystreet,hisfootstepscrunchingbeneathhim.Theonce-excitingthoughtofowningtheSpidermanfigurinewasnowovershadowedbytheshopkeeper'sprofoundwords.Herememberedhowhisschoollibrarian,Ms.Garcia,wouldstaylatetohelpstudentsfindtheperfectbook,eventhoughitmeantsacrificingherowntime.Itdawnedonhimthatheroismwasallaroundhim.Jackfeltamixtureofshameforhispreviousnarrowviewandexcitementforthepossibilitiesahead.Withrelief,Jackfoundthehomelessoldmanstillsittingagainstthewall.Withouthesitation,hewalkeduptothemanandsaid,“Sir,I'msorryIrushedbyearlier.Letmehelpyou.”Hegavethemanhisscarftokeepwarmandthenrantoanearbydinertobuyahotmeal.Returning,hesatbesidethemanandlistenedattentivelyashespoke.Jack'sheartwasfullasherealizedthatbysimplybeingkindandpresent,hewasembodyingtheheroismtheshopkeeperhadtalkedabout.Hevowedtolookformoreopportunitiestobeaheroinhisdailylife,startingwithhelpingthisoldmanfindawarmplacetosleepthatnight.【答案】Hearingwhattheshopkeepersaid,Jackwaslostinthought.Theshopkeeper’swordsechoedoverandoveragaininhismind.“HowcanIbeasuperherowithoutsuperpower?”hethoughttohimself.