高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：Grace+的困境與成長之路+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習Grace的困境與成長之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續(xù)寫原文Grace’sfather,Mike,couldn’tgetoutofbedforweeksafterhermotherdiedandwhenhefinallydid,hehadlosthisjob.Asthemoneyranout,thedebtcouldn’tbepaid.Itseemedlikesomewildbeasthadjumpedontoherdad’sbackandwaskillinghim.SoMikesoldthehouseandthebeastonhisbackseemedtogowithit.Luckily,MissFay,whowasanrichartist,washappytogiveherabandonedcaravan(大篷車)tothem.Inreturn,MikehadtotidyupFay’sgardenandlookafterherhousewhenshewasaway.Mikehadoncebeenafamousviolinplayer.Hehadwoncompetitionsandbeenontelevisionshows.Gracelovedtowatchhowherfatherplayedtheviolin,whichmadeherheartsing.Sincehermotherhaddied,however,theviolinhadstayedstillandsilentinitscase.Butnow,aftermovingtothecaravan,herfatherplayedtheviolineveryday.HeeventaughtGracetoplay.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,theteacherannouncedthatatalentscout(星探)wouldcometotheschooltolookforsomeonetoplaytheviolininthemusicalMrSpy.Gracekeptquietbecauseshethoughtshewasnotgoodenoughtoplayforanaudience.However,herfriendtoldtheteachershehadaviolinandcouldplayit.“Getpreparedforit,thetalentscoutwillcomenextmonth,”theteachersad.“Andoh,ifyouareselected,thepayisgood!”5續(xù)寫原文Afterschool,Gracekickedatthepebblesangrilyalongtheway.Shehatedbeingthecentreofattention.Therewasnowayshewouldplaytheviolin.Noamountofmoneywouldpersuadeher.AssoonasshearrivedatFay’shouse,Gracesawpoliceofficersoutsidethehouse.Fayandherdadweretalkinginlowvoicesandtheydidn’tlookveryhappy.“Whathappened?”askedGrace.“Break-in,”saidherdad,“allFay’spaintingsandherpaintingtoolshavebeenstolen.”Shelookedverysad.SowasGrace’sfather,hekeptblaminghimselffornotbeingaverygoodguard.6段首句Paragraph1：Gracewasafraidthatthewildbeastwouldbeontoherdad’sbackagain.Paragraph2：Thebigdayeventuallycame，Graceplayedbeyondeveryone’sexpectations.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了Grace的母親去世后，父親Mike陷入消沉，不僅失去工作，還背負債務，無奈賣掉房子。幸運的是，富有的藝術家MissFay提供了廢棄大篷車，交換條件是Mike幫忙打理花園和看家。曾是著名小提琴手的Mike，在搬進大篷車后重拾小提琴，還教Grace彈奏。學校要選拔小提琴手參加音樂劇演出，Grace起初因不自信不想參與，可被朋友“出賣”?；丶液?，她發(fā)現Fay家遭遇盜竊，父親為此自責。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Gracewasafraidthatthewildbeastwouldbeontoherdad’sbackagain.Grace滿心憂慮，害怕那如野獸般的困境再次纏上父親。她深知父親已經在痛苦中掙扎許久，這次Fay家被盜，父親定是自責不已。她徹夜難眠，反復思索著能為父親做些什么。突然，她想到了學校的小提琴選拔。盡管內心充滿恐懼與不自信，但為了父親，她決定勇敢一試。她開始沒日沒夜地練習，每一個音符都傾注著她對父親的愛與擔憂。她不再逃避眾人的目光，而是把這次機會當作拯救父親的希望。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thebigdayeventuallycame，Graceplayedbeyondeveryone’sexpectations.比賽的那天終于來臨，Grace站在舞臺上，深吸一口氣。當她拉起小提琴，仿佛整個世界都安靜了。她沉浸在音樂中，將自己的情感毫無保留地融入每一個旋律。她的演奏如行云流水，超越了所有人的預期。臺下的觀眾被她的表演深深打動，爆發(fā)出雷鳴般的掌聲。星探當即決定讓她參演音樂劇。Grace帶著喜悅與自豪回到家，將這個好消息告訴父親?？吹礁赣H臉上重新綻放出笑容，Grace知道，她成功地驅散了父親心頭的陰霾。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Gracewasfilledwithdreadthatthewild-beast-liketroublewouldonceagainlatchontoherdad'sback.Sheknewalltoowellthatherfatherhadbeenstrugglinginpainforalongtime.TheburglaryatFay'shousehadundoubtedlyplungedhimdeeperintoself-blame.Shetossedandturnedallnight,constantlyponderingwhatshecoulddoforherfather.Suddenly,theschool'sviolinauditioncametohermind.Despiteherinnerfearsandlackofconfidence,forthesakeofherfather,sheresolvedtotakeaboldstep.Shestartedpracticingdayandnight,pouringallherloveandworryforherfatherintoeverynote.Shenolongershiedawayfromthespotlightbutregardedthisopportunityasaglimmerofhopetosaveherfather.14范文呈現Thebigdayfinallyarrived.Standingonthestage,Gracetookadeepbreath.Whenshestartedplayingtheviolin,itwasasifthewholeworldfellsilent.Shewascompletelyimmersedinthemusic,pouringallheremotionsintoeverymelody.Herperformanceflowedlikeagentlestream,surpassingeveryone'sexpectations.Theaudiencewasdeeplymovedbyherplayinganderuptedintothunderousapplause.Thetalentscoutimmediatelydecidedtoselectherforthemusical.Gracereturnedhomewithjoyandprideandsharedthegoodnewswithherfather.Seeingthesmilereappearonherfather'sface,Graceknewthatshehadsuccessfullydispelledthecloudsofgloomhangingoverherfather.15升級版范文呈現Gracewasgrippedbyanoverwhelmingfearthatthemenacing,wild-beast-likeadversitywouldoncemorefastenitselfontoherfather'sback.Havingwitnessedherfather'slong-standingstruggleinthethroesofdespair,shewasacutelyawareoftheprofoundself-reproachhemustbeexperiencingfollowingtheburglaryatFay'sresidence.Unabletofindsolaceinsleep,shespentthenighttossingrestlessly,hermindracingasshedesperatelysoughtawaytoalleviateherfather'sburden.Suddenly,theupcomingschoolviolinauditionflashedacrosshermind.Despitetheparalyzingfearandself-doubtthatgnawedather,herloveforherfathersteeledherresolvetotakealeapoffaith.Fromthatmomenton,shededicatedherselftonon-stoppractice,infusingeverynotewithherunwaveringloveanddeep-seatedconcernforherfather.Nolongerdidshecowerinthefaceofthespotlight;instead,sheembracedthisopportunityasabeaconofhope,achancetorescueherfatherfromtheabyssofdespair.16升級版范文呈現Thelong-awaiteddayfinallydawned.Standingonthestage,bathedinthespotlight,Graceinhaleddeeply,steadyinghernerves.Asthefirstnotesoftheviolinresonatedthroughtheauditorium,itwasasiftimeitselfstoodstillandtheworldaroundhermeltedaway.Completelyentrancedbythemusic,shepouredherheartandsoulintoeachandeverymelody,herperformanceaseamlesssymphonyofrawemotionandtechnicalprowess.Herplaying,assmoothassilkandaspowerfulasatempest,far