高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：改造破舊老屋：從自卑到自信的轉(zhuǎn)變

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)改造破舊老屋：從自卑到自信的轉(zhuǎn)變1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Atthefarendoftown,nexttoadarkforest,satanoldwhitehouse.ItlookedlikeaSpookHousefromastory,whichmightsoundinterestingifitweren’twhereIlivedwithmymomandlittlebrother,Andy.Thehousewasn’tsohorrible,buttheoutsidemightmakeyouthinktwiceaboutentering.Peeling(脫落的)paintrevealedblackimagesunderneaththatlookedlikebats.Andweedsandlonggrasswrappedthehouse.WhenMomrentedit,Ithoughtshewascrazy.“Areyoukidding,Mom?Youreallywanttoliveinthisplace?It’sugly.”Momlookedhurt,andIregrettedmywords.Iknewshewasdoingthebestshecould.Obviously,thishousewouldn’tbeherfirstchoiceifmoneywerenoobject.4續(xù)寫原文Momcleanedeveryroomandpaintedtheinside.Imustadmitthefreshpaintmadeadifference.“CanIpainttheoutside?”Iaskedher.“I’llaskMr.Dudleytopaintit,”Momreplied.Ourlandlord,Mr.Dudleyagreed,buthealwayshadthousandsofexcuses.Momdidn’tseemconcerned.Shewasbusyplanningformygrandmatolivewithus.HavingmygrandmawatchAndywhileMomworkedwouldsaveondaycareexpenses.OnemorningItoldmygrandmathatIwasjoiningahistorystudygroupatJustine’shouseafterschoolandwouldbelategettinghome.“Justbehomebeforedark,”shesaid.5續(xù)寫原文ThatafternoonIwalkedwithagirlandaboytoJustine’shouse—abig,beautifulhousewithcolumns.Theinsidewasfurnishedlikeadecoratormagazine,withelegantfurniture.“Iloveyourhouse,Justine,”Isaid,tryingnottoscream.Shesmiled,“Thanks.You’llhavetocomeoveragain.”IwasdelightedandsurprisedthatJustinewantedmetocomeback.Iwoulddefinitelytakeheruponheroffer.Ijustcouldn’tinvitehertomyhouse.NowaydidIwantanyonetoseemyhouse.6段首句Paragraph1：Whenthesunwasnearsetting,Justine’smomsaidshewoulddriveushome.Paragraph2：Finallytheyunderstoodwhatwemeant.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9“我”和媽媽、弟弟安迪住在鎮(zhèn)邊一座破舊的白房子里，房子外觀破舊，讓“我”感到自卑。媽媽租下后打掃并粉刷了屋內(nèi)，還打算請房東粉刷外墻，但房東一直推脫?！拔摇眳⒓淤Z斯汀家的學(xué)習(xí)小組，她家房子漂亮，“我”很羨慕且不敢邀請她來自己家。一天學(xué)習(xí)結(jié)束，賈斯汀媽媽要開車送大家回家，“我”擔(dān)心房子被看到，后來房子還是被看到，可賈斯汀的話讓“我”稍感欣慰。之后，我們開始粉刷房子。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Whenthesunwasnearsetting,Justine’smomsaidshewoulddriveushome.當太陽快要落山時，賈斯汀的媽媽說要開車送我們回家。我心里頓時“咯噔”一下，慌亂不已。一路上，我絞盡腦汁，想著怎么能不讓大家看到我那破舊的家。車越來越近，我的心跳也越來越快。當車緩緩?fù)Ｔ谖壹议T前時，我恨不得找個地縫鉆進去。賈斯汀和同學(xué)們都望向窗外，我低著頭，不敢看他們的表情。就在這時，賈斯汀突然說道：“哇，你家房子看起來好特別呀，有一種神秘的感覺，就像童話里的房子一樣！”其他同學(xué)也紛紛點頭表示贊同。我抬起頭，驚訝地看著他們，心中的羞愧感也減輕了不少。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thefollowingweek,westartedthepaintjob.接下來的一周，我們開始了刷漆工作。媽媽早早地買好了油漆和工具，弟弟也自告奮勇地要幫忙。周末的時候，賈斯汀和幾個同學(xué)也趕來幫忙。大家分工明確，有的負責(zé)刷墻，有的負責(zé)清理雜草。我站在梯子上，認真地刷著外墻，雖然有些累，但心里卻充滿了期待。在大家的共同努力下，房子漸漸變了模樣。原本剝落的油漆被嶄新的色彩覆蓋，雜草也被清理得干干凈凈?？粗鵁ㄈ灰恍碌姆孔?，我心里別提有多高興了，也開始期待著賈斯汀能再次來我家做客。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Whenthesunwasnearsetting,Justine’smomsaidshewoulddriveushome.Panicimmediatelyfilledmyheart.Alltheway,Irackedmybrains,tryingtofigureouthowtopreventthemfromseeingmyshabbyhome.Asthecargotcloser,myheartwaspoundingfasterandfaster.Whenthecarslowlypulledupinfrontofmyhouse,IwishedIcoulddisappear.Justineandmyclassmatesalllookedoutofthewindow.Iloweredmyhead,tooashamedtolookattheirexpressions.Justthen,Justinesuddenlysaid,"Wow,yourhouselookssospecial!Ithasamysteriousfeeling,justlikeahouseinafairytale!"Theotherclassmatesalsonoddedinagreement.Ilookedup,surprised,andtheshameinmyheartwasreducedalot.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thefollowingweek,westartedthepaintjob.Momboughtthepaintandtoolsearly.Mylittlebrotheralsovolunteeredtohelp.Ontheweekend,Justineandseveralclassmatescametolendahand.Wedividedtheworkclearly.Somewereinchargeofpaintingthewalls,andsomewereresponsibleforclearingtheweeds.Istoodontheladder,paintingtheouterwallcarefully.AlthoughIwasabittired,myheartwasfullofanticipation.Withthejointeffortsofeveryone,thehousegraduallytookonanewlook.Theoriginallypeelingpaintwascoveredwithabrand-newcolor,andtheweedswerecleanedupcompletely.Lookingattherenovatedhouse,IwasextremelyhappyandbegantolookforwardtoJustine'snextvisittomyhome.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Asthesunhoveredonthevergeofsetting,Justine’smomannouncedherintentiontodriveushome.Instantaneously,panicwelledupwithinme.Throughoutthejourney,Istrainedmybrain,desperatelyseekingawaytoshieldthemfromthesightofmydilapidatedabode.Withthecaredgingnearer,myheartthumpedevermoreviolently.Whenthevehiclefinallyrolledtoastopbeforemyhouse,Iyearnedtovanishintothinair.Justineandmyclassmatesalldirectedtheirgazesoutofthewindow.Ihungmyhead,toomortifiedtomeettheireyes.Atthatprecisemoment,Justineexclaimed,"Wow,yourhouseexudessuchuniqueness!Itpossessesanairofmystery,muchlikeadwellingstraightoutofafairytale!"Theotherclassmatesconcurredwithnods.Iliftedmyheadinsurprise,andtheweightofshameinmyheartliftedsomewhat.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Intheensuingweek,weembarkedonthepaintproject.Momprocuredthepaintandtoolsinadvance.Myyoungerbrothereagerlyvolunteeredhisassistance.Ontheweekend,Justineandseveralclassmatesarrivedtooffertheirhelp.Wemeticulouslyassignedtasks;someweretaskedwithpaintingthewalls,whileo