高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：英雄犬與托拉：守護(hù)主人的生命傳奇

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)英雄犬與托拉：守護(hù)主人的生命傳奇1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文DogsnamedHeroandTorasavedtheirowner’slifeinMarch.Theyremainedbyhissidethroughtwocoldnights,foughtcoyotes（土狼）,andwaitedforhelp.Theirstoryhaswontherespectoftheworld.AcharitydonationcampaignwaslaunchedbythevictimandthelocalshelterTaberLostPawsSocietytohelptheinjureddogs.Thestorybeganwithanattack.WhenapasserbynamedCurtisDahlwaswalkinghisdoginafieldofmuddygrassnearthesugarfactoryinthetownofTaber,anareathatisquiteremote,notwell-traveled,andquitecoldinMarch.Suddenly,Herocamerunningupandbithisdogaroundtheneck.DahlclaimedhefoughtwithHerofortenminutes,tryingtogethimoffhisdog,andhisfingerwashurtbytheendofit.Callingpoliceandanimalserviceswithacomplaint,hetoldthemaboutHero’spresence,butwhentheofficersarrivedandsawHerolyingdownthere,badlyhurtandtiredout,theysuddenlyheardacryforhelp.4續(xù)寫原文Arriving,theyfoundamanlyingonhisbackinaditch（溝渠）,tremblingandunabletomove.Hetoldpoliceheis61andlivesaloneandthathewaswalkinghistwodogsHeroandTorawhenhefelldown.He’dbeenstucktherefortwodaysandhisdogsprotectedhim.Themansaidthatwhenhefelldown,ToraandHerostayedwithhimtokeephimsafeandwarmforsometime,andthenToraranoff.“Iknowshewenthometofindsomehelpforme,buteverytimeshecameback,verysad,”saidtheman.Torawentbackandforthfromthesitewhereherownerwasandherhomeseveraltimes.BythetimeDahlwalkedbyandrescuersarrived,Torahadjustgonebackagain.5段首句Paragraph1：ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.Paragraph2：Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8三月，兩只狗狗Hero和Tora拯救了主人的生命。主人獨(dú)自在野外散步時(shí)摔倒，被困兩天。期間，狗狗們不僅為他取暖，還勇敢對抗土狼。路人CurtisDahl起初因Hero攻擊他的狗而報(bào)警，警察到達(dá)后發(fā)現(xiàn)受傷的主人。隨后，發(fā)起了慈善捐款活動(dòng)幫助受傷的狗狗，它們的故事贏得了世人的尊重。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.主人回憶起Hero和Tora是如何保護(hù)他免受土狼傷害的。在那寒冷徹骨的夜晚，荒野中不時(shí)傳來土狼令人膽寒的嚎叫聲。一群土狼被主人的氣息吸引，逐漸靠近。當(dāng)時(shí)主人身體虛弱，毫無抵抗能力。關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻，Hero和Tora挺身而出，它們緊緊守在主人身邊，豎起毛發(fā)，沖著土狼發(fā)出低沉而兇狠的吼聲。土狼們試圖發(fā)起攻擊，Hero和Tora毫不畏懼，一次次勇敢地沖上前去，與土狼展開激烈搏斗。它們身上多處被土狼咬傷，但始終沒有退縮半步，用自己的身體為主人筑起了一道堅(jiān)固的防線，讓主人在這極度危險(xiǎn)的環(huán)境中得以保全性命。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.了解事情的經(jīng)過后，Dahl對Hero沒有了絲毫怨恨。他深刻地被兩只狗狗的忠誠和勇敢所打動(dòng)?；叵肫餒ero當(dāng)時(shí)的攻擊行為，他意識(shí)到那是Hero在急切地保護(hù)受傷的主人。Dahl來到收容所看望Hero和Tora，看著它們身上的傷痕，心中滿是敬佩。他決定為救助這兩只狗狗的慈善活動(dòng)捐款，希望能為它們的治療和康復(fù)盡一份力。Dahl的轉(zhuǎn)變，不僅體現(xiàn)了他對動(dòng)物的理解與關(guān)愛，也讓人們看到了這個(gè)故事所傳遞出的溫暖與正能量，感染著身邊的每一個(gè)人。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.Duringthosefreezingcoldnights,thehowlsofcoyotesechoedthroughthewildernessfromtimetotime.Agroupofcoyoteswereattractedbythesmellofthemanandgraduallyapproached.Atthattime,themanwastooweaktodefendhimself.Atthecriticalmoment,HeroandTorasteppedforwardbravely.Theystoodfirmlybesidetheirowner,theirhairsstandingonend,andgrowledmenacinglyatthecoyotes.Thecoyotestriedtolaunchattacks,butHeroandTorashowednofear.Theyrushedforwardtimeandtimeagain,engaginginfiercebattleswiththecoyotes.Theywerebitteninmanyplacesbythecoyotes,buttheyneverretreatedevenasinglestep.Theyusedtheirbodiestobuildasoliddefenselinefortheirowner,ensuringthatthemanwassafeinthisextremelydangerousenvironment.13范文呈現(xiàn)Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.Hewasdeeplytouchedbytheloyaltyandcourageofthetwodogs.RecallingHero'sattackbehavior,herealizedthatitwasHero'surgentneedtoprotectitsinjuredowner.DahlvisitedthesheltertoseeHeroandTora.Lookingatthescarsontheirbodies,hisheartwasfilledwithadmiration.Hedecidedtodonatetothecharitycampaignforrescuingthesetwodogs,hopingtocontributetotheirtreatmentandrecovery.Dahl'schangenotonlyreflectedhisunderstandingandloveforanimalsbutalsoshowedthewarmthandpositiveenergythatthisstoryconveyed,infectingeveryonearoundhim.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThemanvividlyrecalledtheharrowingmomentswhenHeroandTorashieldedhimfromthemenacingcoyotes.Amidstthosefrigidnights,theeeriehowlsofthecoyotesreverberatedthroughthedesolatewilderness,sendingchillsdownhisspine.Drawnbyhisscent,apackofcoyotesstealthilyclosedin,theireyesglintingwithpredatoryintent.Helplessandweakened,themanwasinnopositiontofendforhimself.However,HeroandTora,withunwaveringresolve,sprangintoaction.Standingguardlikesentinels,theirfurbristled,andtheyemitteddeep,gutturalgrowlsthatechoedthroughthenight.Asthecoyoteslungedforward,thedogsfearlesslycounter-attacked,engaginginaseriesofintenseskirmishes.Despitesustainingmultiplebitesandscratches,theyremainedsteadfast,forminganimpenetrablebarrieraroundtheirmaster,thussafeguardinghislifeinthefaceofgravedanger.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Uponlearningthefullstory,Dahl'sinitialanimositytowardsHerodissipatedcompletely.Instead,hewasovercomewithprofoundadmirationforthedogs'unwaveringloyaltyandextraordinarycourage.ReflectingonHero'searlieraggression,henowunderstoodthatitwasadesperateactofprotectionforitsincapacitatedowner.Eagertoexpresshisnew-foundrespect,Dahlmade