高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：與會說話貝殼的奇妙邂逅與抉擇

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習與會說話貝殼的奇妙邂逅與抉擇1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Caitlynsteppedintothewarmandwetsands.Thewhitewavesracedoverherfeetandupherlegsandthenpulledbackagain.Caitlynwasonvacationwithherfamilyinanearbycoastaltown,andshelovedplayingintheoceanwater.“Ouch!”criedthegirl,asherfootsteppedonsomethinghard.Shelookeddownanditwasalargeshell(貝殼).Caitlynbentdowntopickitup.Itwasaprettypinkshellwithpointsandanopeningthatlookedlikeahorn(號).Sheheldituptoherear,hopingtohearthewhooshingsound(呼嘯聲).Instead,sheheardsomethingquitedifferent.“Heykid!Wanttohearajoke?”Caitlynnearlydroppedtheshell.Holdingitbackuptoherear,shetriedagain.4續(xù)寫原文“Whydon’tfishplaybasketball?”theshellasked.“I...Idon’tknow,”Caitlynwhispered.“Becausetheyareafraidofthenet!Ha,ha!”laughedtheshell.Caitlynlookedaroundtoseeifanyonewaslookingather.Nobodywas.“That’s,uh,funny,”shereplied.Shedidn’treallyknowwhatwasgoingon.“Whydon’toysters(蚌)sharetheirpearls?”Itseemedtobewaitingforareply.“Uh,I’mnotsure.”Caitlynsaid.Wasshedreaming?Theshellanswereditsownjoke.“Becausethey’re‘shellfish’!Ha,ha!”5續(xù)寫原文Thegirllaughed.Onandontheshellwent,beingsillyandmakingjokes.Caitlynsatintheshallowwaterandlistenedforanhour.Whenhermothercalledtoher,sayingitwastimetogo,thegirllaidtheshellgentlyonthesands.Shepromisedtocomebackthenextday.Andshedid.Onthelastdayofhervacation,Caitlyndecidedshecouldn’tleavetheshellbehind.“You’recominghomewithme,”shesaidtotheprettyshell.Shethoughtitwouldbehappy.“Myhomeisintheocean,”itreplied,withoutanylaughterinitsvoice.6段首句Paragraph1：ButCaitlyncouldn’tbeartogohomewithoutit.Paragraph2：Gently,shelowereditbackunderthewater.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9凱特琳在海邊度假，踩到一個貝殼。當她把貝殼湊近耳邊，竟聽到它講笑話。此后幾天，凱特琳都與貝殼愉快交談。度假最后一天，她想把貝殼帶回家，然而貝殼表示自己的家在海洋。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：ButCaitlyncouldn’tbeartogohomewithoutit.但凱特琳實在不忍心不帶它回家。過去幾天，這個會說話的貝殼已經(jīng)成為她在海邊最特別的伙伴。它那些詼諧有趣的笑話，總能在不經(jīng)意間逗得她開懷大笑。她想象著回到家后，沒有貝殼陪伴的日子，生活將會變得多么平淡無趣。于是，她不顧內心隱隱的不安，小心翼翼地把貝殼放進了背包。在回去的路上，她時不時打開包看看貝殼，可貝殼卻始終沉默著。凱特琳心中的愧疚感越來越強烈，她開始反思自己的行為，意識到貝殼離開了海洋，就像自己離開了熟悉的家一樣，會無比痛苦。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Gently,shelowereditbackunderthewater.她輕輕地把貝殼放回水下。當貝殼接觸到海水的那一刻，凱特琳仿佛看到它重新煥發(fā)出了生機。她對著貝殼輕聲說道：“對不起，我差點因為自己的自私，讓你離開心愛的家。希望你在這里能一直快樂?！必悮に坪趼牰怂脑?，在水中輕輕晃動了一下。凱特琳站起身，望著一望無際的大海，心中感到前所未有的平靜。這次經(jīng)歷讓她明白，真正的喜愛不是占有，而是給予自由和尊重。帶著這份感悟，凱特琳踏上了回家的路，而這段與貝殼的奇妙經(jīng)歷，將永遠留在她的記憶深處。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)ButCaitlyncouldn’tbeartogohomewithoutit.Overthepastfewdays,thetalkingshellhadbecomehermostspecialcompanionatthebeach.Itshumorousjokescouldalwaysmakeherburstintolaughter.Sheimaginedthatwithouttheshell’scompanyafterreturninghome,herlifewouldbecomedullanduninteresting.So,regardlessofthefaintuneaseinherheart,shecarefullyputtheshellintoherbackpack.Onthewayback,sheopenedthebagfromtimetotimetocheckontheshell,buttheshellremainedsilentallthetime.ThesenseofguiltinCaitlyn’sheartgrewstrongerandstronger.Shebegantoreflectonherbehaviorandrealizedthatiftheshelllefttheocean,itwouldbeaspainfulasshewouldbeifsheleftherfamiliarhome.14范文呈現(xiàn)Gently,shelowereditbackunderthewater.Themomenttheshelltouchedtheseawater,Caitlynseemedtoseeitcomebacktolife.Shesaidsoftlytotheshell,"I'msorry.Ialmostletyouleaveyourbelovedhomebecauseofmyselfishness.Ihopeyoucanbehappyhereforever."Theshellseemedtounderstandherwordsandswayedgentlyinthewater.Caitlynstoodupandlookedoutattheendlesssea,feelinganunprecedentedsenseofpeaceinherheart.Thisexperiencetaughtherthattrueloveisnotpossession,butgivingfreedomandrespect.Withthisrealization,Caitlynembarkedonherjourneyhome,andthiswonderfulexperiencewiththeshellwouldalwaysremaindeepinhermemory.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)However,thethoughtofleavingwithouttheshellwassimplyunbearableforCaitlyn.Overthespanofthosefewdays,thetalkingshellhadtransformedintoanirreplaceablepartofherbeachescapade.Itshilariousjokeshadbeenthesourceofcountlessheartylaughs,andshefoundherselfenvisioningaratherlacklusterhome-boundlifedevoidoftheirengagingbanter.Thus,despitethenagginguneasetuggingatherconscience,shegingerlyslippedtheshellintoherbackpack.Duringthejourneyback,sherepeatedlyopenedthebag,stealingglancesattheshell,onlytobemetwithaneeriesilence.Astimepassed,theguiltwithinherswelled,gnawingatherheart.Itwasthenthatshebegantointrospect,finallycomingtotherealizationthatwrenchingtheshellawayfromitsoceanicabodewouldbeasagonizingforitasitwouldbeforhertobeuprootedfromherownfamiliarsurroundings.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withutmostcare,shesubmergedtheshellbackbeneaththewater'ssurface.Theinstanttheshellmadecontactwiththebrinydepths,Caitlynfanciedshecouldseeanewfoundvitalitycoursingthroughit.Inasoft,remorsefultone,shemurmured,"I'mtrulysorry.Myselfishnessnearlycondemnedyoutoalifeawayfromyourcherishedhome.Mayyoufindeternalhappinesshere."Asifinresponse,theshellge