高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：街頭溫暖：女士的善意與老乞丐的不解之緣+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)街頭溫暖：女士的善意與老乞丐的不解之緣1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Oneeveningamiddle-agedladywaswalkingdownthestreetwhenshenoticedanoldbeggarsittingonthecorner.Themanwaselderly,unshaven,andragged.Ashesatthere,pedestrianswalkedbyhimgivinghimdirtylooks.Theyclearlywantednothingtodowithhimbecauseofwhohewas-adirty,homelessman.Butwhenshesawhim,thewomanwasmovedtosympathy.Itwasverycoldthatdayandthemanhadhistorncoat-morelikeanoldsuitcoatratherthanawarmcoat-wrappedaroundhim.Shestoppedandlookeddown.“Sir?”sheasked.“Areyouallright?”4續(xù)寫原文Themanslowlylookedup.Thiswasawomanclearlyaccustomedtothefinerthingsoflife.Hercoatwasnew.Shelookedlikethatshehadnevermissedamealinherlife.Hisfirstthoughtwasthatshewantedtomakefunofhim,likesomanyothershaddonebefore.“Leavemealone,”heshouted.Tohisamazement,thewomancontinuedstanding.Shewassmiling-herevenwhiteteethdisplayedinextremelybrightrows.“Areyouhungry?”sheasked.“No,”heansweredironically.“I'vejustcomefromdiningwiththepresident.Nowgoaway.”Thewoman'ssmilebecameevenbroader.Suddenlythemanfeltagentlehandunderhisarm.“Whatareyoudoing,lady?”themanaskedangrily.“Isaidtoleavemealone.”5續(xù)寫原文Justthenapolicemancameup.“Isthereanyproblem,ma'am?”heasked.“Noproblemhere,officer,”thewomananswered.“I'mjusttryingtogetthismantohisfeet.Willyouhelpme?”Theofficerscratchedhishead.“That'soldJack.He'sbeenafixturearoundhereforacoupleofyears.Whatdoyouwantwithhim?”“Seethatcafeteriaoverthere?”sheasked.“I'mgoingtogethimsomethingtoeatandgethimoutofthecoldforawhile.”6段首句Paragraph1:“Areyoucrazy,lady?”thehomelessmanresisted.Paragraph2：Shestaredathimcarefully.“Jack,doyourememberme?”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在一個(gè)傍晚，一位中年女士走在街頭，發(fā)現(xiàn)了一位年邁、未刮胡子且衣衫襤褸的老乞丐坐在街角。行人紛紛對(duì)他投以嫌棄的目光，不愿與他有任何接觸。然而，這位女士卻心生憐憫。當(dāng)時(shí)天氣寒冷，乞丐僅裹著一件破舊不堪的外套。女士停下腳步，關(guān)心地詢問(wèn)他的狀況，可乞丐卻誤以為女士和其他人一樣是來(lái)嘲笑他的，態(tài)度惡劣地讓她離開(kāi)。女士沒(méi)有生氣，依然微笑著詢問(wèn)他是否饑餓，乞丐諷刺地回應(yīng)后再次讓她離開(kāi)。女士不僅沒(méi)有放棄，還試圖扶起乞丐，此時(shí)警察出現(xiàn)詢問(wèn)情況。女士向警察解釋，只是想帶乞丐去吃點(diǎn)東西，讓他能暫時(shí)遠(yuǎn)離寒冷。故事至此留下懸念，女士的堅(jiān)持背后是否另有隱情，乞丐又會(huì)如何回應(yīng)女士的善意，后續(xù)情節(jié)引人期待。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“Areyoucrazy,lady?”thehomelessmanresisted.“你瘋了嗎，女士？”無(wú)家可歸的男人抗拒著。他用力地甩開(kāi)女士的手，身體向后縮了縮，眼神中充滿了警惕和不信任?！拔也恍枰愕膽z憫，你們這些有錢人，不過(guò)是想拿我取樂(lè)罷了！”他大聲叫嚷著，聲音里帶著一絲絕望。女士沒(méi)有因?yàn)樗目咕芏丝s，反而蹲下身來(lái)，與他平視，溫柔地說(shuō)道：“先生，我沒(méi)有惡意，我只是想幫你。你看這天多冷啊，去吃點(diǎn)熱乎的東西，身體也能暖和些。”警察在一旁看著，也開(kāi)口勸道：“老杰克，這位女士是好心，你就別犟了?！笨衫辖芸艘琅f不為所動(dòng)，他把頭扭到一邊，不再看他們。女士并沒(méi)有放棄，她耐心地對(duì)老杰克說(shuō)：“我知道你可能不相信我，但我真的只是想幫你。你就當(dāng)是給我一個(gè)面子，好嗎？”老杰克聽(tīng)了這話，微微有些動(dòng)搖，他偷偷地瞥了女士一眼，看到她真誠(chéng)的眼神，心中的防線開(kāi)始有些松動(dòng)。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Shestaredathimcarefully.“Jack,doyourememberme?”她仔細(xì)地盯著他?！敖芸耍氵€記得我嗎？”老杰克聽(tīng)到這句話，身體猛地一震，他緩緩地轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)頭來(lái)，疑惑地看著女士。女士繼續(xù)說(shuō)道：“二十年前，在一個(gè)下雪的冬天，你在路邊救了一個(gè)迷路的小女孩，還把自己僅有的面包分給了她。那個(gè)小女孩就是我??！”老杰克的眼神中閃過(guò)一絲驚訝，他努力地回憶著，似乎想起了那段塵封已久的往事?！罢娴氖悄悖俊彼穆曇粲行╊澏?。女士微笑著點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭，“沒(méi)錯(cuò)，就是我。這么多年來(lái)，我一直都沒(méi)有忘記你的恩情。今天，終于讓我遇到你了，我想好好報(bào)答你?！崩辖芸说难劭魸駶?rùn)了，他沒(méi)想到自己曾經(jīng)一個(gè)小小的善舉，會(huì)被人銘記這么多年。他不再抗拒，任由女士扶著他站起來(lái)。在去自助餐廳的路上，老杰克的心中充滿了溫暖，他感受到了這個(gè)世界上還有人記得他，關(guān)心他。而女士也因?yàn)槟軌驁?bào)答當(dāng)年的救命恩人而感到無(wú)比欣慰。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)"Areyoucrazy,lady?"thehomelessmanresisted.Heforcefullyshookoffthewoman'shandandshrankback,hiseyesfilledwithvigilanceanddistrust."Idon'tneedyourpity.Yourichpeoplejustwanttomakefunofme!"heshouted,hisvoicetingedwithdespair.Thewomandidn'tbackdownbecauseofhisresistance.Instead,shesquatteddowntobeateyelevelwithhimandsaidgently,"Sir,Imeannoharm.Ijustwanttohelpyou.Lookhowcolditis.Havingsomehotfoodwillwarmyouup."Thepoliceofficer,standingaside,alsochimedin,"OldJack,thisladymeanswell.Don'tbesostubborn."ButOldJackremainedunmoved.Heturnedhisheadtothesideandrefusedtolookatthem.Thewomandidn'tgiveup.ShepatientlysaidtoOldJack,"Iknowyoumaynottrustme,butIreallyjustwanttohelpyou.Justdomeafavor,okay?"Hearingthis,OldJackwasslightlyshaken.Hestoleaglanceatthewomanandsawthesincerityinhereyes.Thedefenseinhisheartbegantoloosenabit.14范文呈現(xiàn)Shestaredathimcarefully."Jack,doyourememberme?"Uponhearingthis,OldJack'sbodytrembledviolently.Heslowlyturnedhisheadandlookedatthewomanwithapuzzledexpression.Thewomancontinued,"Twentyyearsago,onasnowywinterday,yousavedalostlittlegirlontheroadsideandsharedyouronlybreadwithher.Thatlittlegirlwasme!"AlookofsurpriseflashedacrossOldJack'seyes.Hetriedhardtorecall,asifrememberingthatlong-forgottenpast."Isitreallyyou?"hisvoicetrembled.Thewomansmiledandnodded."Yes,it'sme.Overtheyears,I'veneverforgottenyourkindness.Today,Ifinallymetyouagain.Iwanttorepayyou."OldJack'seyeswelledupwithtears.Heneverexpectedthathissmallactofkindnesswouldberememberedforsomanyyears.Henolongerresistedandletthewomanhelphimstandup.Onthewaytothecafeteria,OldJack'sheartwasfilledwithwarmth.Hefeltthattherewasstillsomeoneintheworldwhorememberedhimandcaredabouthim.Andthewomanfeltextremelyrelievedbecauseshecouldfinallyrepayhersavior.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)"Areyoucrazy,lady?"thehomelessmanresisted.Withaforcefulmotion,heshookoffthewoman'shandandshrankback,hiseyesbrimmingwithvigilanceanddeep-seateddistrust."Idon'tneedyourpity.Youwealthyfolksmerelyintendtomakeafoolofme!"heshouted,hisvoicetingedwithapalpablesenseofdespair.Undeterredbyhisresistance,thewomangracefullysquatteddown,positioningherselfateye-levelwithhim,andspokeinagentletone,"Sir,Iharbornoillintentions.Isincerelydesiretoassistyou.Justlookathowfrigiditis.Consumingsomewarmfoodwillsurelywarmyourbody."Thepoliceofficer,standingbytheside,chimedinaswell,"OldJack,thisladyisshowinggenuinekindness.Don'tbesoobstinate."However,OldJackremainedsteadfastinhisrefusal.Heturnedhisheadaside,pointedlyavoidingtheirgazes.Thewoman,undaunted,persistedwithherpatience.ShesaidtoOldJack,"I'mwellawarethatyoumightnotplaceyourtrustinme,butI'mtrulyjusttryingtolendahand.Please,domethisfavor,wouldyou?"Atthesewords,OldJackwasslightlyswayed.Hestoleafurtiveglanceatthewoman,anduponseeingthesincerityinhereyes,thedefensesinhisheartbegantocrumbleeversoslightly.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Shestaredathimintently."Jack,doyourememberme?"ThemomentthosewordsreachedOldJack'sears,hisbodyshudderedviolently.Slowly,heturnedhishead,hiseyesfilledwithpuzzlementashelookedatthewoman.Thewomancarriedon,"Twentyyearsago,onasnowywinter'sday,yourescuedalostlittlegirlontheroadsideandsharedyoursolepieceofbreadwithher.Thatlittlegirlwasnoneotherthanme!"AglimmerofsurpriseflashedacrossOldJack'seyes.Hestrainedhismemory,seeminglydredgingupthatlong-forgottenevent."Isitreallyyou?"hisvoicequ