2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：從+“糞”+事?lián)鷳n到同學(xué)認(rèn)可+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)從“糞”事?lián)鷳n到同學(xué)認(rèn)可1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文IchewedonmypencilasIwalkedbackandforthacrossmybedroom.WhatwasIgoingtodo?ItwasbadenoughthatIwasthenewkid.ButnowIwassuretogetlaughedatbymyclassmates.Howcouldmyfirsthomeworkbesuchadisaster?“MynameisAnna,andthissummerI...”Istopped.HowcouldIstandinfrontofmyclassandsaythatI’dspenttheentiresummerhandlingsomethingthatmostpeopledon’tevenliketotalkabout?Poop(糞便).I’dspentthreemonthsshoveling(鏟),collecting,andanalyzingcowpooponmygrandparents’farm.ItriedtothinkofadifferentadventureIcouldshare.MaybeIcouldsayI’dspentthesummerontheWeatherControlTeampreventingfloods.“Timefordinner,”mymomcalled.Iwalkedslowlydownthestairsandslidintomychair.4續(xù)寫原文“You’vebeeninyourroomsinceyoucamehomefromschool,”Momsaid.“Whatareyouworkingon?”Isighed.“IhavetotelltheclasswhatIdidthissummer.”Myyoungerbrother,Seymour,begantolaughuncontrollably.“Noonewillwanttositnexttoyouaftertheyhearyouwerecoveredincowpoopallsummer!”“OK,that’senough,Seymour,”Dadsaid.“Anna,”saidMom,puttinggreenbeansinabowl,“beproudoftheworkwedidthissummer.Ourplanetwouldbeinsadshapewithoutscientistslikeyourgrandfather.”It’struethatmygrandfatherdoesimportantwork.Hedevelopedaneasywaytousepoopasasourceoffuel.Usingthepoopisnoweasy,economical,andenvironmentallysafe.5續(xù)寫原文“Iknow,Mom,”Isaid,staringatmymeatloaf.“Butit’snotexactlysomethingpeoplewanttohearaboutbeforelunch.”ThatnightIdreamedaboutmoresplendidadventures:cavedivinginMexico,hikingthroughtheAmazonrainforest...Atschoolthenextday,Ibentovermydesk,listeningtoeachkidspeak.Mypalmsweresweaty,andtheknot(結(jié))inmystomachgrewtighter.“AndthatwasmyjourneytoMountEverest,”EmberAdamssaid,finishingherreport.Shebowedandlookherseat.6段首句Paragraph1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.Paragraph2：Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9轉(zhuǎn)校生安娜因要向同學(xué)分享暑假經(jīng)歷而苦惱，她整個暑假都在祖父母農(nóng)場處理牛糞，覺得這會遭同學(xué)嘲笑。吃飯時家人討論此事，弟弟嘲笑，媽媽鼓勵她為爺爺?shù)目蒲泄ぷ髯院馈．?dāng)晚她夢到精彩冒險。第二天在學(xué)校，聽了同學(xué)們的精彩分享后，安娜越發(fā)緊張，此時輪到她發(fā)言。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.“輪到你了，安娜。”老師說道。我感覺心跳陡然加快，雙腿像灌了鉛般沉重，緩緩走向講臺。站定后，我深吸一口氣，鼓起勇氣說道：“我叫安娜，今年夏天我在祖父母的農(nóng)場度過，在那里我一直在處理牛糞?！蓖瑢W(xué)們先是一愣，隨后交頭接耳起來。我趕忙接著講述爺爺研發(fā)的用牛糞作燃料的方法，以及這對環(huán)保的重要意義。講述過程中，我偷偷觀察同學(xué)們的反應(yīng)，發(fā)現(xiàn)他們臉上的驚訝逐漸被好奇取代。當(dāng)我講完，有同學(xué)舉手提問：“那牛糞具體是怎么變成燃料的呢？”這讓我緊張的心情稍有緩解。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.下課后，一些同學(xué)朝我走來。他們眼中滿是欽佩，一個同學(xué)興奮地說：“安娜，你做的事太酷了！沒想到牛糞還能有這么大用處，這對保護(hù)地球很有幫助?。　绷硪粋€同學(xué)也附和道：“是啊，我們都沒想到你暑假經(jīng)歷這么特別又有意義?！卑ber也走過來，笑著說：“你的經(jīng)歷獨一無二，相比之下，我的冒險好像就沒那么有價值了?！甭犞瑢W(xué)們的夸贊，我心里樂開了花，也意識到真實的經(jīng)歷，哪怕看似不那么光鮮，也能贏得他人的尊重和認(rèn)可。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.MyheartracedandmylegsfeltliketheywerefilledwithleadasImademywaytothefrontoftheclass.Standingthere,Itookadeepbreathandsummonedupmycourage.“MynameisAnna,andthissummerIwasatmygrandparents’farm,whereIdealtwithcowpoop,”Isaid.Theclassmateswerestartledatfirstandthenbegantowhisperamongthemselves.Hurriedly,Icontinuedtotellthemaboutmygrandfather'smethodofusingcowpoopasfuelanditssignificanceforenvironmentalprotection.AsIwasspeaking,Isecretlyobservedtheirreactionsandfoundthatthesurpriseontheirfaceswasgraduallyreplacedbycuriosity.WhenIfinished,aclassmateraisedhishandandasked,“So,howexactlydoesthecowpoopturnintofuel?”Thisquestionmademefeelalittlelessnervous.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afterclass,someofmyclassmatescameuptome.Theireyeswerefullofadmiration.“Anna,whatyoudidissocool!”oneclassmateexclaimedexcitedly.“Ineverthoughtcowpoopcouldbesouseful.Itreallyhelpsprotecttheplanet!”Anotherclassmatechimedin,“Yeah,wedidn'texpectyoursummerexperiencetobesospecialandmeaningful.”Emberalsowalkedoverandsaidwithasmile,“Yourexperienceisunique.Comparedwithyours,myadventureseemslessvaluable.”Listeningtomyclassmates'praise,Ifeltextremelyhappyandrealizedthatarealexperience,evenifitdoesn'tseemglamorous,canalsowinothers'respectandrecognition.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteacherannounced.Instantly,myheartstartedpoundingwildly,andmylegs,asifweighteddownbylead,carriedmereluctantlytothefrontoftheclassroom.Standingthere,Itookadeep,steadyingbreathandmusteredupmycourage.“MynameisAnna,andthissummerIspenttimeatmygrandparents’farm,wheremydayswerefilledwithhandlingcowpoop,”Ibegan.Theinitialreactionfrommyclassmateswasoneofshock,followedbyamurmurofwhispers.Hastily,Iwentontoelaborateonmygrandfather'sinnovativemethodoftransformingcowpoopintofuelanditsprofoundsignificanceforenvironmentalconservation.AsIspoke,Istoleglancesattheirexpressions,andtomyrelief,theinitialshockgraduallygavewaytocuriosity.NosoonerhadIfinishedthanaclassmateraisedhishandandinquired,“So,preciselyhowdoesthecowpoopgetconvertedintofuel?”Thisqueryalleviatedsomeofmynervousness.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterclass,severalofmyclassmatesapproachedme.Theireyessparkledwithadmiration.“Anna,whatyouaccomplishedistrulyremarkable!”oneclassmateexclaimedwithexcitement.“NeverdidIimaginethatcowpoopcouldholdsuchgreatu