2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：愛與抉擇：流浪貓的生命旅程+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)愛與抉擇：流浪貓的生命旅程1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Wewerearandombunch,joinedtogetherbysocialmediaandthechancediscoveryofaterriblyweakstraycat(流浪貓).Oncebefore,Iwaspartofagroupthatrallied(集合)foracatthatsurelyhadnochanceofrecovery.Intheearlierinstance,IdiscoveredtheorangecatonamiserablyhotandhumidJulyevening,lyingintherain,cakedinmudandpleadingforhelp.Infectionwasragingintwo-thirdsofitsbody,whichdidnotbodewell.Thedoctortoldusthecat’schancesforsurvivalwereveryslim,butwegaveitourbest.Thecat,whichwaslaternamedLucky,weatheredthestorm,thoughlosingallherteethtoinfection.Andluckily,Luckywaseventuallyadoptedbyalovingfamily.4續(xù)寫原文SowhenmyfriendShuranrecentlypostedawfuldetailsregardinganewly-found(alsoorange)catonherWeChatMoments,alongwithitsphotosbeingcaredforatapethospitalnearherhome,Ishuddered(顫抖).However,sinceshehadplacedthecatinprofessionalhands,Itrustedthatthedoctorknewbest,andItoldShuranthestoryofLuckyandurgedhertoholdontohope.That’swhenshepostedaboutgoingtothemarkettogetafish,whoseskinwouldbeplacedforprotectionoverthelargeareaonthecat’shaunches(腰腿)whereitsownskinwasgoneandthebonesexposed.NowIfearedtheworst.5續(xù)寫原文Meanwhile,Shuransentmeaninvitationtoachatgroup,inwhichIjoinedtheothersrallyingforthecause.Wenowtotaled11—allofusbroughttogetherbyLove,thenamethatShurangavethecat.Inasuddenflurryofmessages,wewereinformedthatLove’sconditionhadworsened.Shuranaskedeveryonetovote:Dowecontinuethetreatmentordoweeuthanize(使安樂死)Love,whowasclearlysuffering?Adeadlinewassetfor2pmthenextday,butwewereinformedshortlyafterwardthatthecat’sbreathinghadgrownveryfaint.6段首句Paragraph1:Sothecircleofnewfriendshuddledagainanddecidedthetimewasrightforamercifulend.Paragraph2：Lovedidnotdiealone,butspentherfinaldayswithusallfeelingfulloflove.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9一群因社交媒體結(jié)識的人，因發(fā)現(xiàn)一只極度虛弱的流浪貓而聚在一起。此前，“我”曾參與救助一只幾乎無法康復(fù)的橘貓，它最終幸運(yùn)存活并被收養(yǎng)。此次，朋友舒然在微信朋友圈發(fā)布新發(fā)現(xiàn)橘貓的慘狀及救治照片，“我”知曉后分享之前橘貓的故事并鼓勵她。后來得知貓病情惡化，舒然發(fā)起投票決定是否繼續(xù)治療，最終大家決定讓它安樂死。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Paragraph1:Sothecircleofnewfriendshuddledagainanddecidedthetimewasrightforamercifulend.于是，這群新朋友們再次聚在一起，決定是時候給予愛貓一個仁慈的結(jié)局了。大家的心情都無比沉重，會議室里彌漫著壓抑的氣氛。每個人都回想起與愛貓相處的點(diǎn)滴，盡管時間短暫，但它的頑強(qiáng)讓大家心生敬意。舒然紅著眼眶，再次向大家確認(rèn)這個艱難的決定。大家默默點(diǎn)頭，淚水在眼眶中打轉(zhuǎn)。隨后，舒然聯(lián)系了獸醫(yī)，告知了大家的決定。獸醫(yī)表示理解，并迅速準(zhǔn)備好相關(guān)事宜。大家圍在愛貓身邊，輕輕撫摸著它，輕聲訴說著不舍與祝福，希望它能在另一個世界不再受苦。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Lovedidnotdiealone,butspentherfinaldayswithusallfeelingfulloflove.愛貓并沒有孤獨(dú)地死去，在它生命的最后時光里，我們所有人都沉浸在滿滿的愛之中。大家輪流陪伴在愛貓身旁，輕聲為它講述溫暖的故事，回憶著那些雖然短暫卻充滿希望的瞬間。當(dāng)獸醫(yī)開始實(shí)施安樂死時，大家手牽著手，給予彼此力量，也希望這份愛能傳遞給愛貓。愛貓的呼吸逐漸平穩(wěn)，它的眼神中似乎少了痛苦，多了一絲安寧。最終，它在大家的愛意環(huán)繞下，平靜地離開了這個世界。雖然心中滿是悲痛，但大家也明白，這是對愛貓最好的告別，它帶著我們的愛，去往了沒有病痛的地方。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Sothecircleofnewfriendshuddledagainanddecidedthetimewasrightforamercifulend.Everyonewasdeeplysaddened,andaheavyatmospherefilledtheroom.EachoneofusrecalledthemomentswespentwithLove.Despitetheshorttime,itstenacityhadwonourrespect.Shuran,withred-rimmedeyes,confirmedthisdifficultdecisionwitheveryoneagain.Wenoddedsilently,tearswellingupinoureyes.Subsequently,Shurancontactedthevetandinformedhimofourdecision.Thevetexpressedunderstandingandquicklymadethenecessarypreparations.WegatheredaroundLove,gentlystrokingitandwhisperingwordsoffarewellandblessings,hopingitwouldnolongersufferintheotherworld.14范文呈現(xiàn)Lovedidnotdiealone,butspentherfinaldayswithusallfeelingfulloflove.WetookturnsstayingbyLove'sside,softlytellingitwarmstoriesandreminiscingaboutthosebriefbuthopefulmoments.Whenthevetstartedtheeuthanasiaprocess,weheldhands,givingeachotherstrengthandhopingthislovecouldbepassedontoLove.Love'sbreathinggraduallybecamesteady,andthereseemedtobelesspainandmorepeaceinitseyes.Eventually,itleftthisworldcalmlysurroundedbyourlove.Althoughourheartswerefilledwithgrief,wealsounderstoodthatthiswasthebestfarewelltoLove.Itwenttoaplacewithoutpain,carryingourlove.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Sothecircleofnewfriendshuddledagainanddecidedthetimewasrightforamercifulend.Aprofoundsenseofsorrowpervadedamongus,castingaheavypalloverthegathering.EverymemberofthegroupwaslostintherecollectionofthepreciousmomentssharedwithLove.Despitethebrevityoftheiracquaintance,Love'sindomitablespirithaddeeplyendearedittoall.Shuran,hereyesred-rimmedwithunshedtears,oncemoresoughtconfirmationfromeveryoneregardingthisheart-wrenchingdecision.Insolemnsilence,weallnodded,theweightofouremotionsalmosttoomuchtobear.Subsequently,Shuranreachedouttothevet,communicatingourchoice.Thevet,demonstratingunderstanding,promptlymadetherequisitepreparations.GatheringaroundLove,wetenderlystrokeditsfur,whisperingwordsoffarewellandwell-wishes,yearningforittofindsolaceintheafterlife,freefromtheclutchesofsuffering.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Lovedidnotdiealone,butspentherfinaldaysenvelopedinthewarmembraceofourcollectivelove.Takingturns,weremainedbyLove'sside,softlyrecountingheartwarmingtalesandfondlyreminiscingaboutthosefleetingyethope-filledmoments.Asth