2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：少年守信傳遞善意與溫暖+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習少年守信，傳遞善意與溫暖1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續(xù)寫原文Ten-year-oldSamEvanswasadie-hardfootballfan,andhe’dbeensavingformonthstobuyhisfavoritefootballkit.However,whenhereachedthestore,hediscoveredthatthekit’spricehadrisen,andthecostwasnowafewmoredollarsthanwhathe’dmanagedtosave.Disappointed,Samalmostburstintotears,butjustthen,heheardavoicefrombehind,HeturnedandsawMr,Barney,hisneighbor,holdingashoppingbag.“Well,youdon'tseemokay,youngman.Tellmeifthere’sanythinglcabdotohelpyou.”Mr.Barneyasked.Samwipedhistearsandapproachedhim,explainingthathehadsavedmoneyforafootballkit,“ButwhenIcametoday,lsawitwasafewdollarsmorethanwhatIhave.”Samcried.4續(xù)寫原文Mr,Barney,withawarmsmile,pattedSamontheheadandgenerouslyofferedtocovertheextracost.However,Samquicklyrefusedtheoffer.Heexplainedthathismotherwasalwaysconcernedabouthimspendingtoomuchtimeplayingfootballandhadrefusedtobuyhimanewkit.Shehadalsotoldhimnevertoborrowmoneyfromanyone,stressingtheimportanceofdependingonhimself.Mr.BarneywasamusedbySam'shonesty.“Well,thenhowaboutpayingmebackrightnow?”Mr.Barneysuggested.“Now?”Samwaspuzzled.Mr.Barneyexplained,“Yes,promisemethatyou'llpayforwardthiskindness.Thatmeansifyouseesomeoneinneed,andyouhavethemoney,you’llhelpthemwithouthesitation,Deal?”“Done,Mr.Barney,”Samansweredjoyfullyandtheywenttopayforhisfootballkit.5段首句Paragraph1：Afterthatday,Samtrieddifferentwaystoearnmoney.Paragraph2：Atthestore,henoticedanoldlady.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8十歲的山姆是個足球迷，攢錢想買心儀的足球裝備，卻發(fā)現錢不夠。鄰居巴尼先生提出幫忙補齊差價，山姆因媽媽的教導拒絕。巴尼先生提議讓山姆承諾日后將善意傳遞出去來“償還”，山姆欣然答應。之后，山姆努力賺錢，不僅想還錢，還想攢錢買新足球。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Afterthatday,Samtrieddifferentwaystoearnmoney.自那天之后，山姆想盡各種辦法去掙錢。他先是挨家挨戶詢問鄰居是否需要幫忙做些雜活。很快，他就接到了不少活兒，像修剪花草、清掃落葉。每到周末，他還會早早起床，在社區(qū)門口擺起舊物售賣攤，將自己不再使用的玩具、書籍整理出來出售。經過長時間的辛苦積攢，他終于湊齊了還給巴尼先生的錢，還額外存了一筆能買新足球的錢。懷著滿心的期待，在一個陽光明媚的周末，山姆興高采烈地前往商店。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Atthestore,henoticedanoldlady.走進商店，山姆徑直朝著足球區(qū)走去。就在他挑選足球時，注意到不遠處有一位老奶奶。老奶奶站在玩具區(qū)前，手中拿著一個玩具，眉頭緊皺，嘴里還小聲嘀咕著什么。山姆心生好奇，便走上前去詢問。老奶奶無奈地說，她想給孫子買這個玩具當生日禮物，可帶的錢不夠。山姆聽后，腦海中立刻浮現出巴尼先生對他的囑托。他毫不猶豫地從口袋里掏出錢，遞給老奶奶，說道：“奶奶，您用這些錢買吧，希望您孫子能喜歡。”老奶奶感動得熱淚盈眶，對山姆連連道謝。山姆看著老奶奶離去的背影，心中充滿了成就感，他知道，自己做到了將善意傳遞下去。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現Afterthatday,Samtrieddifferentwaystoearnmoney.Hebeganbyvisitinghisneighbors,askingiftheyneededanyhelpwithtasksliketrimminghedgesorcleaninggutters.Everyweekend,hesetupasecond-handgoodssaleinhisdriveway,sellingtoysandbookshenolongerneeded.Withpersistentefforts,hefinallymanagedtosaveenoughmoneytopaybackMr.Barneyandevenhadsomeextraforanewfootball.Onasunnyweekend,filledwithexcitement,Sammadehiswaytothestore.13范文呈現Atthestore,henoticedanoldlady.Shewasstandinginthetoysection,lookingatatoycarwithatroubledexpression.Samwalkeduptoherandasked,"Iseverythingokay,ma'am?"Theoldladysighedandsaid,"Iwanttobuythistoyformygrandson'sbirthday,butI'mshortonmoney."RememberinghispromisetoMr.Barney,Samdidn'thesitate.Hetookouthiswalletandhandedsomemoneytotheoldlady,saying,"Pleasetakethis.Ihopeyourgrandsonloveshisgift."TheoldladywasdeeplytouchedandthankedSamrepeatedly.Watchingtheoldladyleave,Samfeltagreatsenseofaccomplishment,knowingthathehadfulfilledhispromisetopayforwardthekindness.14升級版范文呈現Afterthatday,Samresortedtodiversemeanstoearnmoney.Startingwithapproachinghisneighbors,heofferedhisassistanceintaskssuchashedge-trimmingandgutter-cleaning.Onweekends,hetransformedhisdrivewayintoasecond-handgoodssalevenue,wherehesoldtoysandbooksthathadoutlivedtheiruseforhim.ItwasthroughhisunwaveringeffortsthathefinallymanagedtoamasssufficientfundstoreimburseMr.Barneyandevenhadasurplusforanewfootball.Onaradiantweekend,brimmingwithexcitement,Sammadehiswaytothestore.15升級版范文呈現Atthestore,anoldladycaughthisattention.Standinginthetoysection,shewaseyeingatoycarwithafurrowedbrow.Samsteppedforwardandinquired,"Iseverythingallright,ma'am?"Withasigh,theoldladyreplied,"I'meagertopurchasethistoyformygrandson'sbirthday,yetI'mshortoncash."ItwasatthismomentthatSam,mindfulofhispromisetoMr.Barney,didn'thesitateforasecond.Takingouthiswallet,heprofferedsomemoneytotheoldlady,stating,"Pleaseacceptthis.Ihopeyourgrandsonadoreshisgift."Deeplymoved,theoldladyexpressedhergratitudeprofusely.AsSamwatchedtheoldladydepart,a