北京市東城區(qū)2024-2025學年高三上學期英語期末應用文講義

250106東城高三期末英語應用文解析第二節(jié)(20分)假設你是紅星中學學生李華。你所在的“科學社”近期要開展一次跨學科綜合實踐活動。請你用英語給在你校國際部學習的好友Jim寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括1.活動內(nèi)容;2.發(fā)出邀請?zhí)崾驹~:跨學科綜合實踐活動interdisciplinarylearningactivity注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,Yours,LiHua寫作要點：活動內(nèi)容：根據(jù)2025年東城區(qū)期末這個作文屬于介紹活動的具體內(nèi)容。這里選擇“探索生物學與環(huán)境科學的聯(lián)系”，并詳細描述了濕地公園考察的具體活動，例如水質(zhì)檢測和保護生物多樣性討論。確保語言簡潔、層次分明，突出實踐性和學習價值。邀請內(nèi)容：明確活動時間和地點，例如“Saturdaymorningfrom8:00a.m.to12:00p.m.”表達邀請的誠意，例如“Pleaseletmeknowifyou’reinterested”。詞數(shù)控制：注意題目要求在100詞左右。范文中詞數(shù)大約為95，符合要求。語言表達：使用禮貌和熱情的語氣，如“Lookingforwardtoyourreply”。使用準確的詞匯，如“interdisciplinarylearningactivity”和“hands-onexperience”。角色和背景：你是紅星中學學生李華。你所在的“科學社”要開展一次跨學科綜合實踐活動。你的好友Jim在國際部學習。任務要求：用英語給Jim寫一封郵件。郵件內(nèi)容需包括：活動內(nèi)容。發(fā)出邀請。提示詞和注意事項：提示詞：跨學科綜合實踐活動（interdisciplinarylearningactivity）。注意事項：詞數(shù)100左右。開頭（DearJim,）和結(jié)尾（Yours,LiHua）已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。句式多樣化使用復合句：“Wewillhavegroupdiscussions,hands-onexperiments,andcreativepresentations.”

“Wewillhaveaseriesofactivities,includinggroupdiscussionswherewecanexchangeideas,hands-onexperimentswhichenableustoapplytheoreticalknowledge,andcreativepresentationsthroughwhichwecanshowcaseourinnovativethinking.”這里將簡單句改為包含定語從句的復合句，使句子更加豐富。使用非謂語動詞：“Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinus.Itwillbeagreatopportunityforyoutolearnandhavefunwithus.”

“Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinus,providingyouwithagreatopportunitytolearnandhavefun.”這里使用了現(xiàn)在分詞“providing”作狀語，使句子更加緊湊?！癗otonlywillyougainknowledgefromdifferentsubjects,butyouwillalsomakenewfriends.”（你不僅能從不同學科中獲取知識，還能交到新朋友。）這種倒裝句能夠強調(diào)句子中的內(nèi)容，使語氣更加強烈。“Itisthisinterdisciplinarylearningactivitythatwillbroadenyourhorizons.”（正是這次跨學科學習活動將拓寬你的視野。）強調(diào)句可以突出重要信息，引起讀者注意。虛擬語氣：“Ifyouweretoparticipateinthisactivity,youwouldfinditextremelyrewarding.”（如果你參加這次活動，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)它非常有意義。）虛擬語氣可以使語氣更加委婉、客氣，同時也能體現(xiàn)語言的復雜性。原創(chuàng)寫作：DearJim,

Ihopethisletterfindsyouingoodhealth.OurScienceClubisabouttolaunchaninterdisciplinarylearningendeavor.Thiseventwillintegrateknowledgefromvariousfieldssuchasscience,mathematics,andart.Wewillengageinaseriesofactivities,includinggroupdiscussionswherewecanexchangeideas,hands-onexperimentswhichenableustoapplytheoreticalknowledge,andcreativepresentationsthroughwhichwecanshowcaseourinnovativethinking.

Isincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinthisactivity,providingyouwithagreatopportunitytolearnandhavefun.Notonlywillyougainknowledgefromdifferentsubjects,butyouwillalsomakenewfriends.Itisthisinterdisciplinarylearningactivitythatwillbroadenyourhorizons.Yours,LiHua構(gòu)思明確寫作目的：寫作任務是給好友Jim寫信，邀請他參加一個跨學科綜合實踐活動。重點是：活動內(nèi)容：具體說明活動的主題、地點、形式和目標。發(fā)出邀請：表達真誠的邀請，并提供必要的信息（時間、地點、意義等）。確定結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭：寒暄并點明寫信目的。主體：分兩（三/四）段：活動內(nèi)容：介紹活動的主題、亮點和安排。邀請細節(jié)：說明時間、地點，強調(diào)意義，并表達希望對方參加。結(jié)尾：提醒對方盡快回復并表達期待。遣詞造句技巧用詞精準：活動主題：使用專業(yè)術(shù)語和具體表達，如“interdisciplinarylearningactivity”（跨學科學習活動）、“ecosystem”（生態(tài)系統(tǒng)）、“biodiversity”（生物多樣性）。活動意義：強調(diào)價值和體驗，用詞如“gainhands-onexperience”（獲得實踐經(jīng)驗）、“exploreconnections”（探索聯(lián)系）。避免重復：替換簡單詞匯，如用“participate”代替“joinin”，用“anenrichingexperience”代替“agoodactivity”。自然過渡：用銜接詞使邏輯清晰，如“Furthermore,wewill...”（此外，我們還會……）、“It’sagreatopportunityto…”（這是一個絕佳機會……）。高級句式的運用要提升作文檔次，可以適當加入高級句式，包括定語從句、狀語從句、名詞性從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)、倒裝等。以下是具體方法：使用定語從句：原句：Wewillvisitalocalwetlandparktostudyitsecosystem.高級：Wewillvisitalocalwetlandpark,whichiswell-knownforitsrichbiodiversity,tostudyitsecosystem.使用狀語從句：原句：Pleaseletmeknowifyou’reinterestedsoIcanreserveaspotforyou.高級：Pleaseletmeknowassoonaspossible,sothatarrangementscanbemadeinadvance.使用名詞性從句：原句：Theactivitywillfocusonexploringbiologyandenvironmentalscience.高級：Themainfocusoftheactivityishowbiologyisinterconnectedwithenvironmentalscience.分詞結(jié)構(gòu)：原句：Wewillconductwaterqualitytestsanddiscussbiodiversityprotection.高級：Conductingwaterqualitytestsanddiscussingbiodiversityprotection,weaimtogainadeeperunderstandingoftheecosystem.倒裝句式：原句：It’sagreatchancetogainhands-onexperience.高級：Notonlyisitagreatchancetogainhands-onexperience,butitalsoallowsustolearnfromexperts.潤色與表達提升加入情感和個性化表達：原句：Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.提升：Ihopeeverythingisgoingsmoothlyonyourend.原句：Ibelieveitwillbeanunforgettableexperience.提升：Ifirmlybelievethiswillturnouttobeanunforgettableandinspiringexperience.增強說服力：原句：It’sagreatopportunitytolearn.提升：It’sagoldenopportunitytodelvedeeperintothefascinatingconnectionbetweenbiologyandenvironmentalscience,whichwillundoubtedlybroadenyourhorizons.呼應對方興趣：可以提到對方的興趣或優(yōu)勢，如：“Givenyourkeeninterestinenvironmentalissues,Ithinkthisactivitywouldbeaperfectfitforyou.”獨家高級版：DearJim,Ihopeeverythingisgoingsmoothlyonyourend.I’mwritingtosharesomeexcitingnewsandextendawarminvitationtoyou.Ourscienceclubisorganizinganinterdisciplinarylearningactivitynextweek,andIbelieveyou’llfinditfascinating.Theactivityrevolvesaroundexploringtheconnectionbetweenbiologyandenvironmentalscience.We’llvisitalocalwetlandpark,whichisrenownedforitsrichbiodiversity,tostudyitsecosystem.Duringthevisit,we’llconductwaterqualitytests,identifyvariousplantandanimalspecies,anddiscusspracticalwaystoprotectbiodiversity.Notonlywillthisactivityprovidehands-onexperience,butitwillalsobeaneye-openingopportunitytolearnfromfieldexperts.TheeventisscheduledforthisSaturdaymorning,from8:00a.m.to12:00p.m.,andtransportation